Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY7K1KY400XGFFT6XCA9FZQ

Run Details

Duration:
17.2s
Cost:
$0.001462
Provider:
xAI

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory twisted the third deadbolt with a click that echoed too loudly in the cramped hallway. The door swung open on protesting hinges, and there he stood, filling the frame like a shadow stitched from expensive wool and unspoken threats. Lucien Moreau, platinum hair slicked back under the dim landing light, his heterochromatic eyes catching the flicker from the curry house sign below. One amber, one black, both fixed on her with that unnerving intensity that always made her pulse stutter. She gripped the doorjamb, knuckles whitening. Ptolemy, Eva's tabby, slunk between her ankles, tail flicking a question at the intruder before vanishing into the flat's chaos of stacked books and scattered scrolls. "Lucien." Her voice came out flat, a deliberate anchor. No welcome. No surprise she couldn't fake. "Rory." He leaned on his ivory-handled cane, the tip tapping once against the worn floorboards. Not a question, just her name, laced with that faint Marseille drawl that turned vowels into invitations. He didn't move to step inside. Not yet. She crossed her arms, the small crescent scar on her wrist pulling tight under the sleeve of her faded jumper. The air between them carried the sharp tang of cumin from the restaurant downstairs, mingling with something earthier on him, like rain-soaked stone and brimstone. "Eva's out. If that's who you're after." A ghost of a smile tugged at his lips, not reaching those mismatched eyes. "Eva's not the reason I'm here." Her stomach twisted, but she held the door half-closed, a barrier of splintered wood. Last time they'd crossed paths, three months back in a fog-choked alley off the Strand, his information had unravelled a nest of shadow-dealers peddling cursed relics. She'd delivered the tip to the right ears, or so she'd thought. But his parting words had burned: *Stay out of my world, Rory. It devours the curious.* Attraction had sparked then, raw and electric, in the stolen glances during stakeouts, his hand brushing hers over a map of ley lines. Hurt followed when he'd ghosted, leaving her to dodge the fallout alone—whispers in the underworld that she'd crossed him. Things left unsaid piled like the research notes cluttering Eva's kitchen table. "Then what?" She kept her tone even, but her free hand clenched at her side. Quick thinking had got her out of Cardiff, out of Evan's grip. It would get her through this too. He tilted his head, studying her as if she were one of his encrypted files. "Complications. From our last... collaboration." The cane shifted, revealing the subtle gleam of the concealed blade within. Not a threat, but a reminder. His world. She scanned the hallway behind him—empty, save for the distant hum of Brick Lane traffic. No tails. Lucien didn't do sloppy. "Our collaboration ended when you vanished. I handled the mess." "Did you?" He stepped forward then, testing the threshold. The amber eye glinted with something almost like regret. "The relic you flagged? It wasn't just cursed. It was a key. To Avaros." Her breath caught. Avaros—the demon realm, his father's domain. She'd pieced that together from Eva's ramblings over late-night tea, scrolls half-unrolled on the threadbare rug. But hearing it from him, in that velvet murmur, made the flat's walls close in. Bookshelves groaned under the weight of occult tomes, their spines cracked like old secrets. "And?" "It's loose." His voice dropped, coiling around the words. He glanced past her into the flat, where Ptolemy's eyes glowed from atop a pile of yellowed maps. "Threads leading back to you. To Golden Empress deliveries that aren't just dim sum." Ice prickled her spine. Yu-Fei's restaurant was her day job, unremarkable runs through Soho and Chinatown. But lately, packages had felt heavier, labels in scripts she couldn't read. She'd chalked it up to overtime paranoia. "You're saying my bike routes are a demonic breadcrumb trail?" "Precisely." He eased inside now, the door clicking shut behind him without her permission. The space shrank with his presence—tailored charcoal suit brushing against a teetering stack of Eva's notes. He didn't sit, just paced the narrow room, cane tapping a rhythm that matched her quickening heart. "Someone's using you as bait. Or worse, as a courier." She followed, blocking his path to the bedroom door where Eva's latest research sprawled across the bed—diagrams of infernal gates, scribbled in her looping script. "Why tell me now? After radio silence? I nearly got knifed last week in Whitechapel, chasing a lead you planted." His black eye darkened, the cane halting mid-tap. He turned, close enough that she caught the faint spice of his cologne, undercut by that otherworldly heat. "I thought distance would protect you. It didn't." Attraction flared unbidden, a heat low in her belly. His hand lifted, hovering near her arm, as if to steady her—or himself. She remembered the alley: his fingers on her pulse during a tense wait, the way his breath had ghosted her neck when they'd evaded a patrol of lesser imps. Hurt surged next, sharp as the scar on her wrist. "Protect me? Or protect your secrets? You left me twisting in the wind, Lucien. Eva had to pull strings to keep Silas from evicting me over the rumours." He withdrew his hand, jaw tightening. "Rumours I quashed. But this..." He pulled a slim envelope from his coat pocket, the paper crisp, sealed with black wax imprinted with a sigil that twisted her vision for a second. "An invitation. To you. From the Court of Whispers." She snatched it, breaking the seal with a thumbnail. Inside, vellum scripted in blood-red ink: *Aurora Carter, bearer of the key's echo. Join us at the Veiled Auction, or watch your threads unravel.* A date. A location—some warehouse in the Docklands. Her mouth went dry. "This is bollocks. I'm no one." "You're connected." He stepped closer again, voice softening to a rumble. "To me. To the relic's path." His gaze dropped to her wrist, tracing the scar without touching. "Evan never saw your strength. But I do." The name hit like a slap—her ex, the bruises hidden under long sleeves back in Cardiff. Lucien knew, somehow. Eva's doing, no doubt. Rory's cheeks burned, but she met his eyes, the amber one pulling her in like a flame. "Don't. You don't get to play hero now." "I'm not." His cane clattered against the wall as he set it aside, freeing his hands. One cupped her elbow, gentle but firm, drawing her nearer. The flat's air thickened, Ptolemy's purring a low counterpoint from the windowsill. "I pushed you away because this life... it consumes. My blood calls it home. But leaving you? That was the real mistake." Her resolve cracked. She leaned in, breath mingling, the hurt twisting into something fiercer. His lips brushed hers—tentative at first, then claiming, a kiss that tasted of smoke and forbidden promises. She kissed back, hands fisting his lapels, pulling him against the book-strewn table. Stacks toppled, pages fluttering like startled birds. His fingers threaded her hair, tilting her head, deepening the heat until the room spun. But she broke it, gasping, forehead against his. "This changes nothing. The auction—" "Changes everything." He nipped her lower lip, eyes blazing. "We face it together. No more ghosts." She shoved him back, not hard, but enough to reclaim space. The envelope crinkpled in her fist. Ptolemy yowled, leaping down as footsteps thumped from the stairs outside—Eva, keys jangling. But before the door could rattle, a shadow shifted wrong in the hallway window. Not Eva's silhouette. Taller. Wrong. Lucien's hand shot to his cane, blade whispering free. "They're here." The glass shattered inward, shards raining like jagged stars. A figure cloaked in night-black silk vaulted through, eyes glowing infernal red, straight for the vellum in her hand.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences31
tagDensity0.387
leniency0.774
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.19% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1313
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"precisely"
count1
highlights
0"precisely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
16.22% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1313
totalAiIsms22
found
0
word"echoed"
count1
1
word"unspoken"
count1
2
word"flicker"
count1
3
word"intensity"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count2
5
word"stomach"
count1
6
word"electric"
count1
7
word"reminder"
count1
8
word"scanned"
count1
9
word"velvet"
count1
10
word"weight"
count1
11
word"silence"
count1
12
word"otherworldly"
count1
13
word"scripted"
count1
14
word"echo"
count1
15
word"unravel"
count1
16
word"tracing"
count1
17
word"resolve"
count1
18
word"footsteps"
count1
19
word"shattered"
count1
20
word"silk"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"unspoken"
2"flicker"
3"intensity"
4"pulse"
5"stomach"
6"electric"
7"reminder"
8"scanned"
9"velvet"
10"weight"
11"silence"
12"otherworldly"
13"scripted"
14"echo"
15"unravel"
16"tracing"
17"resolve"
18"footsteps"
19"shattered"
20"silk"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences90
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences90
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences109
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords28
totalWords1291
ratio0.022
matches
0"Stay out of my world, Rory. It devours the curious."
1"Aurora Carter, bearer of the key's echo. Join us at the Veiled Auction, or watch your threads unravel."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions38
wordCount1065
uniqueNames20
maxNameDensity0.75
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
Eva8
Marseille1
Strand1
Rory3
Attraction2
Quick1
Cardiff2
Evan1
Brick1
Lane1
Ptolemy4
Soho1
Chinatown1
Carter1
Veiled1
Auction1
Docklands1
One2
Lucien4
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Eva"
2"Rory"
3"Attraction"
4"Evan"
5"Ptolemy"
6"Carter"
7"One"
8"Lucien"
places
0"Marseille"
1"Cardiff"
2"Brick"
3"Lane"
4"Soho"
5"Chinatown"
6"Veiled"
7"Docklands"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences75
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
45.08% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.549
wordCount1291
matches
0"Not a threat, but a reminder"
1"not hard, but enough to reclaim space"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences109
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs29
mean44.52
std23.4
cv0.526
sampleLengths
081
132
216
340
452
520
6122
734
840
931
1032
1155
1241
1345
1457
1545
1634
1789
1847
1951
2036
2148
2260
2366
2413
2516
2649
2711
2828
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences90
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs185
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences109
ratio0.092
matches
0"Hurt followed when he'd ghosted, leaving her to dodge the fallout alone—whispers in the underworld that she'd crossed him."
1"She scanned the hallway behind him—empty, save for the distant hum of Brick Lane traffic."
2"Avaros—the demon realm, his father's domain."
3"The space shrank with his presence—tailored charcoal suit brushing against a teetering stack of Eva's notes."
4"She followed, blocking his path to the bedroom door where Eva's latest research sprawled across the bed—diagrams of infernal gates, scribbled in her looping script."
5"His hand lifted, hovering near her arm, as if to steady her—or himself."
6"A location—some warehouse in the Docklands."
7"The name hit like a slap—her ex, the bruises hidden under long sleeves back in Cardiff."
8"His lips brushed hers—tentative at first, then claiming, a kiss that tasted of smoke and forbidden promises."
9"Ptolemy yowled, leaping down as footsteps thumped from the stairs outside—Eva, keys jangling."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1087
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount27
adverbRatio0.02483900643974241
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.0036798528058877645
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences109
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences109
mean11.84
std6.84
cv0.577
sampleLengths
016
124
223
318
46
526
69
72
85
915
1017
116
122
1320
1425
157
1614
176
1814
1926
2012
2112
2227
2319
2412
2515
2612
277
2815
2917
306
312
3215
332
344
3510
369
379
3814
393
406
4116
4215
4314
441
459
4618
4714
484
4912
74.62% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.45871559633027525
totalSentences109
uniqueOpeners50
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences84
matches(empty)
ratio0
34.29% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount39
totalSentences84
matches
0"She gripped the doorjamb, knuckles"
1"Her voice came out flat,"
2"He leaned on his ivory-handled"
3"He didn't move to step"
4"She crossed her arms, the"
5"Her stomach twisted, but she"
6"She'd delivered the tip to"
7"It devours the curious.* Attraction"
8"She kept her tone even,"
9"It would get her through"
10"He tilted his head, studying"
11"She scanned the hallway behind"
12"He stepped forward then, testing"
13"Her breath caught."
14"She'd pieced that together from"
15"His voice dropped, coiling around"
16"He glanced past her into"
17"She'd chalked it up to"
18"He eased inside now, the"
19"He didn't sit, just paced"
ratio0.464
61.19% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount67
totalSentences84
matches
0"Rory twisted the third deadbolt"
1"The door swung open on"
2"Lucien Moreau, platinum hair slicked"
3"She gripped the doorjamb, knuckles"
4"Ptolemy, Eva's tabby, slunk between"
5"Her voice came out flat,"
6"He leaned on his ivory-handled"
7"He didn't move to step"
8"She crossed her arms, the"
9"The air between them carried"
10"A ghost of a smile"
11"Her stomach twisted, but she"
12"She'd delivered the tip to"
13"It devours the curious.* Attraction"
14"Things left unsaid piled like"
15"She kept her tone even,"
16"It would get her through"
17"He tilted his head, studying"
18"The cane shifted, revealing the"
19"She scanned the hallway behind"
ratio0.798
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences84
matches(empty)
ratio0
65.22% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences46
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"He tilted his head, studying her as if she were one of his encrypted files."
1"His hand lifted, hovering near her arm, as if to steady her—or himself."
2"His lips brushed hers—tentative at first, then claiming, a kiss that tasted of smoke and forbidden promises."
3"She kissed back, hands fisting his lapels, pulling him against the book-strewn table."
4"His fingers threaded her hair, tilting her head, deepening the heat until the room spun."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"He leaned, the tip tapping once against the worn floorboards"
1"He eased, the door clicking shut behind him without her permission"
2"He stepped, voice softening to a rumble"
3"He nipped, eyes blazing"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
76.4269%