Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY7K3DPBXDYWR070CT0SSM7

Run Details

Duration:
53.9s
Cost:
$0.001656
Provider:
xAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory shoved open the door to The Raven's Nest, the green neon sign buzzing overhead like a trapped wasp. Soho's evening chill clung to her jacket, the scent of rain and fried batter from her delivery shift trailing behind. Dim light spilled across scarred wooden tables, old maps peeling at the edges on the walls. A handful of patrons hunched over pints, their murmurs blending with the low crackle of a jukebox spinning some forgotten blues track. She slid onto a stool at the bar, black hair falling across her face as she dug out a crumpled tenner. The bartender turned, rag slung over his shoulder, and poured a Guinness without asking. Steam rose from the tap, catching the amber glow of hanging lamps. "Rough night?" His voice cut through the haze, gravelly, laced with a faint Irish lilt she hadn't heard in over a decade. Rory froze, pint halfway to her lips. Hazel eyes locked on hers, framed by grey-streaked auburn hair. That silver signet ring glinted on his right hand as he wiped the counter. The slight hitch in his stance when he shifted weight—left leg stiff, like it remembered Prague's cobblestones too well. "Silas." The name slipped out, sharp as the crescent scar on her wrist. She set the glass down, foam sloshing. "Christ, it's you." He leaned forward, elbows on the bar, beard trimmed neat but eyes carrying shadows no razor touched. "Aurora Carter. Last I saw you, braces and a schoolbag. Cardiff Uni patching you up for big things." She traced the pint's rim with her thumb. "Rory now. And you—running a dive in Soho. The Spymaster slings pints?" A chuckle rumbled from him, low, but his gaze sharpened. "Spymaster's retired. Knee says so every morning." He tapped his left leg, the limp evident as he grabbed a stool and eased onto it across from her. "What brings you to my corner of hell? Brendan still arguing cases in Cardiff?" "Dad's fine. Mum too." She sipped, bitter foam grounding her. Ten years blurred—her at fifteen, Silas dropping by the house after some "consulting" gig for her father's firm. Stories of shadows in Berlin, coded messages on napkins. He sparked her law dreams, showed her files blurred just enough to tease the thrill. Then he vanished into ops, and she buried herself in books until Evan twisted everything sour. Silas nodded at her wrist, the scar catching light. "Still got that from the treehouse tumble? Jennifer stitched it herself." "Stings in the cold." Rory flexed her hand. "You look... settled. No more ghosts chasing you?" He poured himself a whiskey, neat, glass clinking against oak. "Ghosts own the place now. Bought this after Prague. Botched drop—bullet grazed a knee cap. MI6 pension doesn't stretch far." His fingers drummed the ring. "You? Pre-Law star, top of your class. What dragged you east?" She shrugged, jacket zipper biting her palm. "Life. Evan happened. Charming till he wasn't. Bruises heal, but Cardiff choked me." Lies edged truth—she bolted after Eva's call, flat above this very bar waiting like a lifeline Silas arranged through old channels. But he didn't know that yet. "Deliveries for Golden Empress. Pays rent." Silas's eyes narrowed, scanning her like a dossier. "Evan. Sounds like a prick. Brendan mention him?" "Didn't tell them. Too proud." She drained half the pint, warmth spreading. "You disappeared after that last visit. Promised to show me London codes. Left me with textbooks instead." He swirled his whiskey, ice clinking protest. "Ops pulled me. Prague was the end. Mate died covering my exit. Carved this limp as souvenir." His voice dropped, bar noise fading. "Regret that night most. Could've pulled him out." Rory leaned in, elbows mirroring his. "You taught me regret young. Dad's cases—innocents twisted by suits like yours. Thought you'd fix it." "Fixed nothing." He glanced at the bookshelf in the corner, innocent shelves hiding the back room's latch. "Opened this to watch strings still. Contacts filter in. You living rough?" "Flat upstairs. Silas, you set it up?" The pieces clicked—Eva's vague "friend in London" with a spare key. He tapped the bar once. "Eva called. Said you needed out. Childhood debt." His beard hid a tight jaw. "You're not the girl who decoded my puzzles on napkins. Eyes harder now." "Young Rory chased spies. This one's dodging bills." She laughed, brittle, and signaled for another pint. Foam crested again as he poured. "Missed the Nest's sign on deliveries. Figured I'd claim a drink." Silas slid the glass over, fingers brushing hers—callused, steady. "Nest collects strays. Walls hold stories." He nodded at a black-and-white photo behind bottles: him younger, auburn hair full, arm around a man in shadows. "That was Prague partner. Laughed like thunder." She studied it, faces blurred by time and smoke. "He'd hate this place?" "Love it. Pints over parachutes." Silas downed his whiskey, throat working. "You regret law? Brendan's proud as hell in letters." "Letters?" Rory arched a brow. "Keeps tabs." He grinned faint. "You bailed mid-term. Evan the shove?" She nodded, scar itching under sleeve. "Punched first, apologised with flowers. I packed while he slept. Eva smuggled me here." Silence stretched, jukebox flipping to a slow sax wail. "You changed too. Limp suits you—slows the bullshit." "Age does that." He stood, fetched a bowl of nuts, limped back with purpose. "Ran shadows once. Now shadows run to me. Girl I knew dreamed bigger than takeaways." "Dreams bruise." Rory cracked a nut, shell splintering. "Saw your ring tonight first. Dad's stories—silver fox with secrets." "Secrets bury people." His hazel eyes held hers, unflinching. "Prague taught me. Hesitated on a call. Mate paid." She popped the nut, salt sharp. "Hesitated with Evan too. Stayed six months past the first slap." Silas poured another whiskey, slower this time. "Time carves channels. You here now—channel or dead end?" "Channel." She clinked her pint to his glass. "Nest feels right. Maps on walls? Your ops?" "Bits. Safe houses marked vague." He pointed to a faded Prague corner. "That bend—where it went wrong." Rory traced the line with her finger. "Decode it for me now. Old times." He leaned close, breath whiskey-warm. "River runs east, bridge shadows west. Drop point mid-span. I signalled late." "River betrayed you." She pulled back, blue eyes steady. "Like Evan. Flowed sweet till it drowned." Silence again, patrons' laughter puncturing it. A drunk stumbled out, bell jangling. Silas rubbed his knee absently. "Brendan called last month. Worried. Said you vanished quality." "Quality?" Rory snorted. "Delivery vest's no gown." "You're Rory Carter. Quick mind slices bullshit." His voice roughened. "Don't rot here." She finished the pint, glass thunking empty. "Rot's for spies with limps. I'm rebuilding." He signalled the empty—another round materialised. "Rebuild wrong, regrets stack. Mine fill this bar." "Yours?" She sipped fresh foam. "Spill one." "Left you puzzles half-done. Promised London, delivered silence." His ring tapped rhythm. "Kid looked at me like I held keys." "You did." Rory's voice softened edges. "Evan stole mine. Fists on walls first, then skin." Silas's jaw clenched, beard twitching. "Should've vetted him." "Dad's barrister blind spot." She cracked more nuts, shells piling. "You vetted worse in Berlin tales." "Worse pays." He glanced at the door, habit. "Time weighs. See you now—scarred but sharp. Proud." "Proud?" Heat rose in her chest. "Twenty-five, slinging chow mein." "Alive." He raised his glass. "Evan's regret, not yours." She clinked hard, foam spilling. "Prague yours?" "Every limp step." Laughter barked from a corner table, but they held the bubble. Rory wiped her mouth. "Decode more maps. Stay tonight?" Silas nodded at the bookshelf. "Back room. Real stories." She slid off the stool, pint in hand. Tension hummed—who they were: puzzle kid and shadow man. Now: survivor and barkeep, regrets unspoken but heavy as the neon hum. He limped ahead, hand on the shelf latch. "Follow." Door clicked open to shadows beyond, maps' secrets waiting. Rory stepped through, blue eyes catching his hazel in the threshold light. Time's weight pressed, but conversation carved paths forward. (Word count: 1247)
created_at"2026-02-20T19:14:26.883Z" 2/20/2026, 7:14:26 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags35
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"She pulled back [back]"
dialogueSentences82
tagDensity0.427
leniency0.854
rawRatio0.029
effectiveRatio0.024
96.32% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1357
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
44.73% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1357
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"lilt"
count1
2
word"weight"
count2
3
word"traced"
count2
4
word"coded"
count1
5
word"scanning"
count1
6
word"warmth"
count1
7
word"silence"
count3
8
word"jaw clenched"
count1
9
word"tension"
count1
10
word"unspoken"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"lilt"
2"weight"
3"traced"
4"coded"
5"scanning"
6"warmth"
7"silence"
8"jaw clenched"
9"tension"
10"unspoken"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"jaw clenched"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences86
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences86
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences133
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1334
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions36
wordCount768
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity1.43
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Guinness1
Irish1
Rory11
Prague2
Ten1
Silas10
Berlin1
Evan1
Eva2
Foam1
Silence2
Heat1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Silas"
2"Evan"
3"Eva"
4"Foam"
5"Silence"
places
0"Raven"
1"Prague"
2"Berlin"
globalScore0.784
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences66
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1334
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences133
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs59
mean22.61
std15.33
cv0.678
sampleLengths
077
147
222
350
423
535
620
751
868
920
1016
1146
1253
1316
1429
1538
1622
1729
1818
1932
2033
2141
2213
2320
245
2511
2637
2729
2818
2918
3017
3116
3216
3317
3414
3517
3616
3712
3814
397
4013
4114
4214
437
4420
4515
468
4716
4816
4910
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences86
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs156
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences133
ratio0.053
matches
0"The slight hitch in his stance when he shifted weight—left leg stiff, like it remembered Prague's cobblestones too well."
1"Ten years blurred—her at fifteen, Silas dropping by the house after some \"consulting\" gig for her father's firm."
2"\"Life. Evan happened. Charming till he wasn't. Bruises heal, but Cardiff choked me.\" Lies edged truth—she bolted after Eva's call, flat above this very bar waiting like a lifeline Silas arranged through old channels."
3"\"Flat upstairs. Silas, you set it up?\" The pieces clicked—Eva's vague \"friend in London\" with a spare key."
4"Silas slid the glass over, fingers brushing hers—callused, steady."
5"He signalled the empty—another round materialised."
6"Tension hummed—who they were: puzzle kid and shadow man."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount690
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount14
adverbRatio0.020289855072463767
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0014492753623188406
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences133
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences133
mean10.03
std5.73
cv0.571
sampleLengths
019
120
216
322
421
514
612
722
87
910
1014
1119
1213
137
143
1517
1618
178
1812
1910
2027
2114
2210
2318
249
2515
2616
279
2811
298
308
3110
3225
3311
347
3534
366
376
388
398
4012
4117
427
4323
448
456
4616
4717
4812
4918
98.25% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.5939849624060151
totalSentences133
uniqueOpeners79
39.68% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences84
matches
0"Then he vanished into ops,"
ratio0.012
29.52% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount40
totalSentences84
matches
0"She slid onto a stool"
1"His voice cut through the"
2"She set the glass down,"
3"He leaned forward, elbows on"
4"She traced the pint's rim"
5"He tapped his left leg,"
6"She sipped, bitter foam grounding"
7"He sparked her law dreams,"
8"He poured himself a whiskey,"
9"His fingers drummed the ring"
10"She shrugged, jacket zipper biting"
11"She drained half the pint,"
12"He swirled his whiskey, ice"
13"His voice dropped, bar noise"
14"He glanced at the bookshelf"
15"He tapped the bar once."
16"His beard hid a tight"
17"She laughed, brittle, and signaled"
18"He nodded at a black-and-white"
19"She studied it, faces blurred"
ratio0.476
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount79
totalSentences84
matches
0"Rory shoved open the door"
1"Soho's evening chill clung to"
2"A handful of patrons hunched"
3"She slid onto a stool"
4"The bartender turned, rag slung"
5"Steam rose from the tap,"
6"His voice cut through the"
7"Rory froze, pint halfway to"
8"Hazel eyes locked on hers,"
9"That silver signet ring glinted"
10"The slight hitch in his"
11"The name slipped out, sharp"
12"She set the glass down,"
13"He leaned forward, elbows on"
14"She traced the pint's rim"
15"A chuckle rumbled from him,"
16"He tapped his left leg,"
17"She sipped, bitter foam grounding"
18"Stories of shadows in Berlin,"
19"He sparked her law dreams,"
ratio0.94
59.52% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences84
matches
0"Now: survivor and barkeep, regrets"
ratio0.012
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences19
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"A handful of patrons hunched over pints, their murmurs blending with the low crackle of a jukebox spinning some forgotten blues track."
53.57% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags35
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"years blurred, Silas dropping by the house after some"
1"She drained, warmth spreading"
2"Silence stretched, jukebox flipping to a slow sax wail"
3"Rory cracked, shell splintering"
4"She cracked, shells piling"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"She laughed (laugh)"
1"Laughter barked (bark)"
dialogueSentences82
tagDensity0.024
leniency0.049
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.049
81.8309%