| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 24 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "I commented dryly [dryly]" | | 1 | "he said smoothly [smoothly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 59 | | tagDensity | 0.407 | | leniency | 0.814 | | rawRatio | 0.083 | | effectiveRatio | 0.068 | |
| 67.30% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1376 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 9 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "really" | | 1 | "perfectly" | | 2 | "precisely" | | 3 | "carefully" | | 4 | "slightly" | | 5 | "inexorably" | | 6 | "suddenly" |
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| 80.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 45.49% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1376 | | totalAiIsms | 15 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "reminder" | | 1 | "eyebrow" | | 2 | "flicker" | | 3 | "constructed" | | 4 | "navigate" | | 5 | "unreadable" | | 6 | "weight" | | 7 | "implication" | | 8 | "complex" | | 9 | "analyzed" | | 10 | "shattered" | | 11 | "chilling" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "blood ran cold" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "weight of words/silence" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "blood ran cold" | | 1 | "the weight of his words" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 90 | | matches | | |
| 79.37% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 90 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "managed to" | | 1 | "seemed to" | | 2 | "tried to" | | 3 | "began to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 125 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 38 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1379 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 19 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 24 | | wordCount | 921 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 0.65 | | worstName | "Ptolemy" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Ptolemy" | | discoveredNames | | Impeccably | 1 | | One | 1 | | Expensive | 1 | | Bookshelves | 1 | | Ptolemy | 6 | | Lucien | 6 | | Laila | 2 | | Moreau | 1 | | Interpol | 1 | | Avaros | 1 | | Eva | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Impeccably" | | 1 | "One" | | 2 | "Expensive" | | 3 | "Bookshelves" | | 4 | "Ptolemy" | | 5 | "Lucien" | | 6 | "Laila" | | 7 | "Moreau" | | 8 | "Eva" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 67 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1379 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 125 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 54 | | mean | 25.54 | | std | 19.07 | | cv | 0.747 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 5 | | 1 | 95 | | 2 | 26 | | 3 | 53 | | 4 | 81 | | 5 | 28 | | 6 | 22 | | 7 | 22 | | 8 | 36 | | 9 | 36 | | 10 | 16 | | 11 | 19 | | 12 | 32 | | 13 | 17 | | 14 | 50 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 27 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 16 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 48 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 24 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 42 | | 26 | 37 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 36 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 38 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 46 | | 33 | 1 | | 34 | 19 | | 35 | 20 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 28 | | 38 | 36 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 31 | | 41 | 17 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 41 | | 44 | 37 | | 45 | 21 | | 46 | 27 | | 47 | 26 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 47 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 159 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 74.29% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 5 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 125 | | ratio | 0.024 | | matches | | 0 | "The man leaning against the doorframe of my flat – my doorway, really, Silas’ doorway, but I paid a portion of the rent – was undeniably Lucien Moreau." | | 1 | "“Not ‘three PM on a Tuesday’.” The scent of his cologne – something sharp and expensive – invaded my small space, triggering a cascade of memories I'd spent considerable effort burying." | | 2 | "The thought of her being in trouble – especially trouble involving Lucien Moreau – sent a jolt of panic through me." |
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| 91.57% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 875 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "slim, leather-bound notebook." |
| | adverbCount | 36 | | adverbRatio | 0.04114285714285714 | | lyAdverbCount | 19 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.021714285714285714 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 125 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 125 | | mean | 11.03 | | std | 7.92 | | cv | 0.718 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 5 | | 1 | 21 | | 2 | 28 | | 3 | 27 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 16 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 14 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 31 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 28 | | 13 | 11 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 17 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 17 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 9 | | 26 | 20 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 1 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 16 | | 35 | 13 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 16 | | 38 | 16 | | 39 | 17 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 26 | | 42 | 15 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 19 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 11 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 56.53% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 11 | | diversityRatio | 0.392 | | totalSentences | 125 | | uniqueOpeners | 49 | |
| 82.30% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | | 0 | "Impeccably dressed, as always, in" | | 1 | "Instead, he walked over to" |
| | ratio | 0.025 | |
| 12.59% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 42 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | | 0 | "He didn’t flinch at my" | | 1 | "I retorted, gripping the edge" | | 2 | "He pushed off the doorframe," | | 3 | "He stepped inside without invitation," | | 4 | "I snapped, stepping aside to" | | 5 | "I resisted the urge to" | | 6 | "He turned then, his mismatched" | | 7 | "He still called me Laila." | | 8 | "It was the name I’d" | | 9 | "I said, the words tasting" | | 10 | "he countered, a faint smile" | | 11 | "He didn't react, merely let" | | 12 | "I commented dryly, reaching down" | | 13 | "He offered a small bow" | | 14 | "he said smoothly" | | 15 | "My fingers tightened on Ptolemy's" | | 16 | "He paused, his expression softening" | | 17 | "He hesitated, a flicker of" | | 18 | "My breath hitched." | | 19 | "His voice was carefully neutral," |
| | ratio | 0.519 | |
| 34.07% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 69 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | | 0 | "The words ripped from my" | | 1 | "The man leaning against the" | | 2 | "He didn’t flinch at my" | | 3 | "I retorted, gripping the edge" | | 4 | "The scent of his cologne" | | 5 | "He pushed off the doorframe," | | 6 | "He stepped inside without invitation," | | 7 | "Bookshelves crammed with dog-eared paperbacks" | | 8 | "A pile of delivery boxes" | | 9 | "A tabby cat, Ptolemy, watched" | | 10 | "I snapped, stepping aside to" | | 11 | "Lucien ignored the jab, his" | | 12 | "I resisted the urge to" | | 13 | "He turned then, his mismatched" | | 14 | "The amber one seemed to" | | 15 | "He still called me Laila." | | 16 | "It was the name I’d" | | 17 | "A persona I’d carefully constructed" | | 18 | "A world I’d desperately tried" | | 19 | "I said, the words tasting" |
| | ratio | 0.852 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | | 0 | "As if he could simply" | | 1 | "As if our history could" | | 2 | "Whether I liked it or" |
| | ratio | 0.037 | |
| 19.70% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 29 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "One amber, one black, a constant reminder of the forces that swam beneath his polished surface." | | 1 | "Eva, my lifeline, the woman who’d pulled me from the wreckage of my last disastrous relationship and given me a place to start over." | | 2 | "Something that had everything to do with the world I’d been trying so desperately to escape." | | 3 | "A life where I’d analyzed archaic texts and decoded forgotten languages, a life that had led me inexorably towards Lucien's world." | | 4 | "And with that, he was gone, leaving me standing in the cluttered space, the scent of his cologne lingering in the air, Ptolemy glaring at the empty doorway, and…" |
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| 20.83% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 24 | | uselessAdditionCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "he countered, a faint smile playing on his lips" | | 1 | "He paused, his expression softening slightly" | | 2 | "he said, the name hanging in the air like a curse" | | 3 | "I asked, my voice low and dangerous" | | 4 | "I said, my voice suddenly brittle" |
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| 31.36% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 13 | | fancyCount | 7 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "I retorted (retort)" | | 1 | "I snapped (snap)" | | 2 | "I commented dryly (comment)" | | 3 | "Lucien murmured (murmur)" | | 4 | "I pressed (press)" | | 5 | "I challenged (challenge)" | | 6 | "I snapped (snap)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 59 | | tagDensity | 0.22 | | leniency | 0.441 | | rawRatio | 0.538 | | effectiveRatio | 0.237 | |