Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY7KBGDJKNBHWW4WT8PDV43

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Duration:
56.8s
Cost:
$0.000429
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DeepInfra

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System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
“You’re a bloody sight early.” The words ripped from my throat before I could filter them, a reflex born of surprise and a lingering, unwelcome heat. The man leaning against the doorframe of my flat – my doorway, really, Silas’ doorway, but I paid a portion of the rent – was undeniably Lucien Moreau. Impeccably dressed, as always, in a charcoal suit that somehow managed to look both severe and effortlessly stylish, platinum blond hair slicked back from a high forehead. And those eyes… One amber, one black, a constant reminder of the forces that swam beneath his polished surface. He didn’t flinch at my tone, merely raised a perfectly sculpted eyebrow. “Early for what, precisely, Miss Carter? I simply arrived when I said I would.” “And you said ‘sometime tomorrow’,” I retorted, gripping the edge of the doorframe. “Not ‘three PM on a Tuesday’.” The scent of his cologne – something sharp and expensive – invaded my small space, triggering a cascade of memories I'd spent considerable effort burying. Expensive suits, late nights, whispered promises and broken trust. He pushed off the doorframe, his movements fluid and graceful. “Time, as you are no doubt aware, is a rather fluid concept.” He stepped inside without invitation, his gaze sweeping over the cluttered space with a practiced detachment. Bookshelves crammed with dog-eared paperbacks and ancient tomes lined the walls. A pile of delivery boxes overflowed near the small kitchen area. A tabby cat, Ptolemy, watched him with wary green eyes from atop a stack of research notes. "A charming… bohemian aesthetic." “It’s called living,” I snapped, stepping aside to allow him passage. “And it’s my living space, so if you’re here to critique my décor, you can leave now.” Lucien ignored the jab, his eyes fixed on a half-empty cup of tea on the coffee table. "Leftover Earl Grey. Bold choice." I resisted the urge to throw a cushion at him. Why was he even here? After everything? “What do you want, Lucien?” He turned then, his mismatched eyes locking onto mine. The amber one seemed to flicker with an emotion I couldn’t decipher, the black one cold and assessing as always. "A favour, Laila. A rather… delicate one.” Laila. He still called me Laila. It was the name I’d used during our… brief entanglement. A persona I’d carefully constructed to navigate the murky waters of his world. A world I’d desperately tried to escape. “I don’t do favours for you,” I said, the words tasting like ashes in my mouth. “Oh, but you do,” he countered, a faint smile playing on his lips. “You just don't realize it yet.” Ptolemy chose that moment to launch himself from the bookshelf, landing squarely on Lucien’s polished shoe. He didn't react, merely let the cat knead his leather with an air of amused resignation. "Such grace," I commented dryly, reaching down to scoop up Ptolemy before he could inflict further damage. “A distraction,” Lucien murmured, his gaze never leaving mine. “A rather charming one, but a distraction nonetheless." He offered a small bow towards the cat, then straightened, fixing me with a look of intense focus. "A mutual acquaintance is in a… predicament. One that requires a particular set of skills.” “And those skills are…?” “Your knack for untangling webs,” he said smoothly. “You have a gift for seeing patterns where others see only chaos, Miss Carter. A gift that is… valuable.” My fingers tightened on Ptolemy's fur. “Don’t patronize me.” “I'm merely stating a fact.” He paused, his expression softening slightly. “This concerns someone you know.” That snagged my attention. “Who?” He hesitated, a flicker of something unreadable crossing his features. “Eva.” My breath hitched. Eva, my lifeline, the woman who’d pulled me from the wreckage of my last disastrous relationship and given me a place to start over. The thought of her being in trouble – especially trouble involving Lucien Moreau – sent a jolt of panic through me. “What about her?” “She’s… gone missing.” His voice was carefully neutral, but I detected a tremor beneath the surface. Lucien didn't do emotions. Not genuine ones, anyway. "Missing? Since when?" “Three days. The authorities are… less than helpful.” He said it with a disdain that suggested he considered Interpol less competent than Ptolemy at catching mice. “They dismiss it as a voluntary disappearance. A fanciful notion, given Eva’s… dedication to her research.” I knew what he meant. Eva’s obsession with the occult bordered on the dangerous. Texts and runes covered her flat, translating to grisly rituals and blood magic. But she was brilliant, fiercely independent, and wouldn't just vanish. "What happened?" “She was last seen at a meeting. A symposium on ancient languages.” He paused, a sliver of something that might have been regret crossing his face. “She was researching a particular dialect. One with… unsettling implications.” “Unsettling how?” I pressed. “It’s linked to Avaros,” he said, the name hanging in the air like a curse. Avaros was a realm of shadow and chaos, a place of demons and dark magic. A place I’d sworn to leave far behind. My blood ran cold. “You’re telling me she was researching demonology?” “Not precisely. The dialect is… a key. A gateway, potentially.” He moved towards the window, gazing out at the bustling street below as if the grime and noise could somehow shield him from the weight of his words. "Someone else was interested in it as well.” “Who?” He turned back to me, his expression unreadable. "A collector. A rather… discerning one. Known only as Silas Blackwood." Silas. My landlord. The man who owned the bar beneath my flat. The man who was always watching, always knowing. “You’re implying Silas kidnapped Eva?” “I am implying that you should find her. Before Blackwood gets what he wants.” He paused, holding my gaze. "And before whatever she found finds its way out." The implication hung heavy between us. This wasn’t just about rescuing Eva. It was about containing something dark, something dangerous. Something that had everything to do with the world I’d been trying so desperately to escape. “Why me?” I challenged. “Why can’t you handle this?” A muscle twitched in his jaw. He didn’t answer directly. Instead, he walked over to the coffee table and picked up the discarded tea bag, examining it with a critical eye. "You possess a certain… resilience, Laila. A capacity for dealing with unpleasant truths. It’s a rare quality.” "Don't call me that," I snapped. He ignored me. "The dialect is complex, layered with symbolism. It requires a delicate touch. Someone who understands the nuances of language, the power of words." He dropped the tea bag back onto the table. "You were always a gifted linguist." It was a reminder of a life I'd abandoned, of a career I'd walked away from. A life where I’d analyzed archaic texts and decoded forgotten languages, a life that had led me inexorably towards Lucien's world. "And what do you get out of this, Lucien?" I asked, my voice low and dangerous. “What’s in it for you?” He met my gaze, a wry smile curving his lips. "The satisfaction of knowing you're safe, Laila. And perhaps... a chance to rectify a few past failings." Rectify. As if he could simply erase the hurt, the betrayal, the shattered trust. As if our history could be reduced to a mere accounting error. "I don't believe you." "Then don’t. But the offer stands. Find Eva. Before it's too late.” He reached into his jacket pocket and produced a slim, leather-bound notebook. He tossed it onto the table. "Contains everything she’d uncovered on the dialect. Useful starting point. Contact information for key figures. Relevant rituals.” He began to turn towards the door. "Wait," I said, my voice suddenly brittle. "What am I supposed to do if I can't find her? What if Blackwood…?" He stopped at the door, his hand on the knob. He didn’t turn around. “Then you’ll face the consequences, Laila. For both of you.” And with that, he was gone, leaving me standing in the cluttered space, the scent of his cologne lingering in the air, Ptolemy glaring at the empty doorway, and a chilling certainty settling in my bones. I was back in his world. Whether I liked it or not.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags24
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"I commented dryly [dryly]"
1"he said smoothly [smoothly]"
dialogueSentences59
tagDensity0.407
leniency0.814
rawRatio0.083
effectiveRatio0.068
67.30% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1376
totalAiIsmAdverbs9
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
1
adverb"perfectly"
count1
2
adverb"precisely"
count2
3
adverb"carefully"
count2
4
adverb"slightly"
count1
5
adverb"inexorably"
count1
6
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"perfectly"
2"precisely"
3"carefully"
4"slightly"
5"inexorably"
6"suddenly"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Blackwood"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
45.49% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1376
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"reminder"
count2
1
word"eyebrow"
count1
2
word"flicker"
count2
3
word"constructed"
count1
4
word"navigate"
count1
5
word"unreadable"
count2
6
word"weight"
count1
7
word"implication"
count1
8
word"complex"
count1
9
word"analyzed"
count1
10
word"shattered"
count1
11
word"chilling"
count1
highlights
0"reminder"
1"eyebrow"
2"flicker"
3"constructed"
4"navigate"
5"unreadable"
6"weight"
7"implication"
8"complex"
9"analyzed"
10"shattered"
11"chilling"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"blood ran cold"
count1
1
label"weight of words/silence"
count1
highlights
0"blood ran cold"
1"the weight of his words"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences90
matches
0"a jolt of panic"
79.37% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences90
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"managed to"
1"seemed to"
2"tried to"
3"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences125
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1379
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions19
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions24
wordCount921
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.65
worstName"Ptolemy"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Ptolemy"
discoveredNames
Impeccably1
One1
Expensive1
Bookshelves1
Ptolemy6
Lucien6
Laila2
Moreau1
Interpol1
Avaros1
Eva3
persons
0"Impeccably"
1"One"
2"Expensive"
3"Bookshelves"
4"Ptolemy"
5"Lucien"
6"Laila"
7"Moreau"
8"Eva"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences67
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1379
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences125
matches
0"chose that moment"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs54
mean25.54
std19.07
cv0.747
sampleLengths
05
195
226
353
481
528
622
722
836
936
1016
1119
1232
1317
1450
154
1627
179
1816
195
2011
2148
223
2324
243
2542
2637
272
2836
294
3038
3111
3246
331
3419
3520
365
3728
3836
399
4031
4117
426
4341
4437
4521
4627
4726
484
4947
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences90
matches
0"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs159
matches(empty)
74.29% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences125
ratio0.024
matches
0"The man leaning against the doorframe of my flat – my doorway, really, Silas’ doorway, but I paid a portion of the rent – was undeniably Lucien Moreau."
1"“Not ‘three PM on a Tuesday’.” The scent of his cologne – something sharp and expensive – invaded my small space, triggering a cascade of memories I'd spent considerable effort burying."
2"The thought of her being in trouble – especially trouble involving Lucien Moreau – sent a jolt of panic through me."
91.57% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount875
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"slim, leather-bound notebook."
adverbCount36
adverbRatio0.04114285714285714
lyAdverbCount19
lyAdverbRatio0.021714285714285714
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences125
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences125
mean11.03
std7.92
cv0.718
sampleLengths
05
121
228
327
43
516
612
714
813
931
109
1110
1228
1311
1411
1517
164
1711
1817
1917
205
2110
225
232
245
259
2620
277
281
295
308
312
3213
337
3416
3513
366
3716
3816
3917
409
4126
4215
434
448
4519
466
473
4811
495
56.53% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.392
totalSentences125
uniqueOpeners49
82.30% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences81
matches
0"Impeccably dressed, as always, in"
1"Instead, he walked over to"
ratio0.025
12.59% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount42
totalSentences81
matches
0"He didn’t flinch at my"
1"I retorted, gripping the edge"
2"He pushed off the doorframe,"
3"He stepped inside without invitation,"
4"I snapped, stepping aside to"
5"I resisted the urge to"
6"He turned then, his mismatched"
7"He still called me Laila."
8"It was the name I’d"
9"I said, the words tasting"
10"he countered, a faint smile"
11"He didn't react, merely let"
12"I commented dryly, reaching down"
13"He offered a small bow"
14"he said smoothly"
15"My fingers tightened on Ptolemy's"
16"He paused, his expression softening"
17"He hesitated, a flicker of"
18"My breath hitched."
19"His voice was carefully neutral,"
ratio0.519
34.07% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount69
totalSentences81
matches
0"The words ripped from my"
1"The man leaning against the"
2"He didn’t flinch at my"
3"I retorted, gripping the edge"
4"The scent of his cologne"
5"He pushed off the doorframe,"
6"He stepped inside without invitation,"
7"Bookshelves crammed with dog-eared paperbacks"
8"A pile of delivery boxes"
9"A tabby cat, Ptolemy, watched"
10"I snapped, stepping aside to"
11"Lucien ignored the jab, his"
12"I resisted the urge to"
13"He turned then, his mismatched"
14"The amber one seemed to"
15"He still called me Laila."
16"It was the name I’d"
17"A persona I’d carefully constructed"
18"A world I’d desperately tried"
19"I said, the words tasting"
ratio0.852
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences81
matches
0"As if he could simply"
1"As if our history could"
2"Whether I liked it or"
ratio0.037
19.70% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences29
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"One amber, one black, a constant reminder of the forces that swam beneath his polished surface."
1"Eva, my lifeline, the woman who’d pulled me from the wreckage of my last disastrous relationship and given me a place to start over."
2"Something that had everything to do with the world I’d been trying so desperately to escape."
3"A life where I’d analyzed archaic texts and decoded forgotten languages, a life that had led me inexorably towards Lucien's world."
4"And with that, he was gone, leaving me standing in the cluttered space, the scent of his cologne lingering in the air, Ptolemy glaring at the empty doorway, and…"
20.83% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags24
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"he countered, a faint smile playing on his lips"
1"He paused, his expression softening slightly"
2"he said, the name hanging in the air like a curse"
3"I asked, my voice low and dangerous"
4"I said, my voice suddenly brittle"
31.36% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags13
fancyCount7
fancyTags
0"I retorted (retort)"
1"I snapped (snap)"
2"I commented dryly (comment)"
3"Lucien murmured (murmur)"
4"I pressed (press)"
5"I challenged (challenge)"
6"I snapped (snap)"
dialogueSentences59
tagDensity0.22
leniency0.441
rawRatio0.538
effectiveRatio0.237
78.7359%