"But the time—11:47 p.m.—hadn't shifted since she entered the treeline."
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"Panic solved nothing; it only invited mistakes."
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"The sweetness in the air thickened, now undercut by something sharper—moss and wet stone, the scent of a cave mouth after rain."
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"Not animal eyes—too deliberate, too patient."
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"Its warmth spread, comforting yet alarming, as if warning her to flee—or stay."
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"Rory had lost enough—family expectations, a toxic love, now her oldest friend."
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"The boundary oaks sharpened as she approached, but the flicker returned—multiple now, darting at the periphery."
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"Time warped; her phone, checked again, still read 11:47, but exhaustion tugged at her limbs as if hours had slipped away."
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"From the flowers to her right, a form emerged—ethereal, translucent, a woman's outline woven from mist and petal."
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"The murmurs swelled into a chorus, names woven in: Aurora, Laila, Malphora—aliases from her past, twisted into mockery."
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"One solidified ahead, blocking her path to the park's edge—a figure cloaked in shadow, face obscured, hand extended with fingers that ended in thorns."
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"Wildflowers carpeted the ground in defiant bursts of colour, petals unfurling as if mocking the encroaching dark."
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"The standing stones encircled the space, their bark-twisted forms etched with runes that caught faint moonlight, twisting into shapes her mind couldn't quite ho…"
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"Her fingers grazed the silver chain, the gem pulsing in rhythm with her heartbeat, urging her deeper."
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"It felt alive, warm and yielding, as if the wood breathed beneath her touch."
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"Rory followed, each step sinking deeper into loamy soil that moulded to her boots as if reluctant to release her."
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"She rose, backing toward the centre stone, her hand clenching around the pendant."
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"Its warmth spread, comforting yet alarming, as if warning her to flee—or stay."
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"One brushed her sleeve, a cool whisper of air that raised gooseflesh, carrying the tang of iron and earth."
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"It reached, fingers elongating into tendrils that grazed the air inches from Rory's arm."
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"But the tendril retracted slowly, deliberately, as if savouring her retreat."
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"More shapes stirred now, encircling the clearing's edge: hunched figures with eyes like glowing coals, limbs twisting in ways that defied anatomy."
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"She vaulted a low stone, thorns tearing at her jeans, drawing thin lines of blood that welled warm."
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"The pendant screamed heat, and the air split with a cry that wasn't human."