Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY7MDT1VC4QHFP7N69Q7TFB

Run Details

Duration:
51.0s
Cost:
$0.000324
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Raven’s Nest smelled of stale beer and regret, a scent Rory knew well. Polishing glasses behind the bar, she moved with practiced ease, the cloth a blur against the dark wood. Rain lashed against the green neon sign outside, painting streaks across the window. Tuesday nights were slow, blessedly so. She preferred the quiet. It allowed the hum of the building – the creaks of the floorboards, the distant rumble of the Tube – to fill the space, a comforting white noise against the chaos in her head. A bell above the door jangled, announcing a new arrival. Rory glanced up. He filled the doorway, a looming figure against the grey London evening. Wider, for one. His suit, expensive charcoal wool, strained across broadened shoulders. The face, though… that was the shock. Familiar angles, yes, but etched with a hardness she didn’t remember. Evan. Her grip tightened on the glass. Years. Almost five years. She hadn't pictured running into *him* here, of all places. Not ever. He scanned the room, his gaze lingering on her for a beat too long before a slow smile crept across his lips. It didn't reach his eyes. “Rory?” The name tasted foreign on his tongue. She set the glass down with a sharp click. “Fancy seeing you.” He strolled towards the bar, the leather soles of his shoes clicking against the worn floorboards. He settled onto a stool, the one directly in front of her. Close enough to smell his aftershave—something sharp and citrusy, a world away from the cheap cologne he used to wear. “You haven’t changed a bit.” Rory raised an eyebrow. “Liar.” He chuckled, a low sound that didn't feel comforting. “Just saying. Still got that…intensity about you.” “And you’ve apparently discovered tailoring.” She busied herself with wiping down the already clean counter, avoiding his gaze. “What brings you to Soho, Evan? Last I heard you were climbing the corporate ladder in Birmingham.” “Birmingham got…suffocating. Needed a change of scenery.” He flagged her down, his eyes tracking her movements. “Whiskey. Neat.” Rory poured him a generous measure, her hand steady despite the tremor she felt inside. The silence stretched, thick and uncomfortable, broken only by the clinking of ice. “Silas in?” he asked, finally. “Back room. Meeting with someone.” She handed him the glass. He took a sip, savoring it, his eyes never leaving hers. “Old habits.” “Some habits are harder to break.” She met his gaze, refusing to flinch. "So, what *really* brings you here, Evan? Don’t insult my intelligence. You didn’t just wander into The Raven’s Nest on a whim.” He swirled the whiskey in his glass, the amber liquid catching the dim light. “Just…remembered this was your haunt. Thought I’d see if you still worked here.” “Convenient.” “Don’t be cynical, Rory.” He took another drink, then leaned forward slightly, lowering his voice. “I heard…things. About you. Leaving Birmingham. Moving to London.” “People talk.” “They said you were running from something. From someone.” His lip curled slightly. “Leaving a mess behind, as usual.” Rory’s jaw tightened. She forced herself to breathe, to count to ten. He hadn’t changed as much as she’d hoped. The manipulative streak was still very much intact. Years hadn’t lessened his penchant for skewering her with a single, calculated phrase. “I prefer ‘restructuring my life’ to ‘running’.” “Restructuring. Right.” He laughed, a short, mirthless sound. “How very corporate of you. Funny, considering your previous disdain for… ambition.” “People evolve.” “Do they?” He paused, his gaze sweeping over her face, lingering on the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist–a memento she usually concealed beneath a bracelet. “Or do they just trade one set of chains for another?” The question hung in the air, heavy with implication. Rory’s fingers clenched around a bar towel. She knew what he was referencing, the choices she’d made, the escape she’d orchestrated. “I’m happy,” she stated, the word clipped and precise. “Happy polishing glasses in a Soho dive bar?” She slammed the towel onto the counter. “I like my job.” “Do you?” He smiled again, the same cold, calculating expression. “Or are you just…hiding?” “I’m not hiding from you, Evan.” “Aren’t you?” He leaned even closer, invading her personal space. “You haven't asked about my life. Not once. Or is that because you already know everything you need to?” She looked away, focusing on a chipped ceramic mug on the shelf. He was right. She hadn’t asked. Because she didn't want to know. Whatever success he’d achieved, whatever life he’d built, it wouldn’t change the past. It wouldn't erase the memory of his controlling behavior, the constant belittling, the isolating tactics that had chipped away at her self-worth. “What do you want, Evan?” “Just catching up. Old friends, remember?” “We weren’t friends.” The words came out harsher than she intended. His eyes darkened. “We were whatever you wanted us to be, Rory.” She shuddered, pushing the memory away. “Silas is expecting the whisky to be paid for.” He tossed a fifty onto the bar. "Keep the change." He pushed the glass towards her. “Look, I know things ended badly. I…I regret a lot of things.” “Regret doesn’t undo damage.” “I’m trying to—” “Don’t.” She cut him off, her voice low but firm. “Don’t try looking for absolution. It’s too late for that.” He stared at her for a moment, his expression unreadable. Then, he slowly stood up, pushing his chair back with a scrape against the floor. “Alright.” He took a final look around the bar, his gaze sweeping over the faded maps and black-and-white photographs, lingering on Rory. “I guess some things never change.” He turned and walked towards the door, his silhouette a dark block against the rainy night. Rory watched him go, her hand still gripping the bar towel. The bell above the door jangled again as he disappeared into the London gloom. She leaned against the counter, her legs suddenly weak. The Raven's Nest felt colder now, the hum of the building a mournful drone. She started to clear the remaining glasses, the clinking sound echoing in the sudden silence. Silas was going to have questions. And she didn’t have any answers.
created_at"2026-02-20T19:15:10.3Z" 2/20/2026, 7:15:10 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"His lip curled slightly [slightly]"
1"He smiled again [again]"
dialogueSentences48
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.083
66.05% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1031
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count2
2
adverb"very"
count2
3
adverb"slowly"
count1
4
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"slightly"
2"very"
3"slowly"
4"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
17.56% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1031
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"practiced ease"
count1
1
word"comforting"
count2
2
word"looming"
count1
3
word"familiar"
count1
4
word"etched"
count1
5
word"scanned"
count1
6
word"eyebrow"
count1
7
word"intensity"
count1
8
word"silence"
count2
9
word"calculated"
count1
10
word"implication"
count1
11
word"calculating"
count1
12
word"unreadable"
count1
13
word"gloom"
count1
14
word"echoing"
count1
highlights
0"practiced ease"
1"comforting"
2"looming"
3"familiar"
4"etched"
5"scanned"
6"eyebrow"
7"intensity"
8"silence"
9"calculated"
10"implication"
11"calculating"
12"unreadable"
13"gloom"
14"echoing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences77
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences77
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"started to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences109
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords2
totalWords1027
ratio0.002
matches
0"him"
1"really"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
96.16% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions15
wordCount743
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity1.08
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven2
Nest2
Rory8
Tube1
London2
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Rory"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.962
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences59
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1027
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences109
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs51
mean20.14
std16.92
cv0.84
sampleLengths
089
113
243
322
427
51
616
73
848
95
105
1116
1235
1318
1428
155
1621
172
1835
1927
201
2124
222
2319
2441
257
2620
272
2838
2930
309
318
3211
3314
346
3529
3659
375
386
3911
4012
4115
4228
434
443
4520
4625
4728
4816
4934
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences77
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs122
matches
0"was referencing"
64.22% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences109
ratio0.028
matches
0"It allowed the hum of the building – the creaks of the floorboards, the distant rumble of the Tube – to fill the space, a comforting white noise against the chaos in her head."
1"Close enough to smell his aftershave—something sharp and citrusy, a world away from the cheap cologne he used to wear."
2"“Do they?” He paused, his gaze sweeping over her face, lingering on the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist–a memento she usually concealed beneath a bracelet."
93.86% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount747
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount30
adverbRatio0.040160642570281124
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.012048192771084338
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences109
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences109
mean9.42
std5.99
cv0.636
sampleLengths
014
118
213
36
44
534
610
73
812
93
109
113
124
1311
141
156
161
173
1810
192
2022
215
221
237
249
253
2616
2712
2820
295
304
311
329
337
3418
3517
3616
372
3815
3913
405
4110
4211
432
4413
4522
4614
4713
481
4915
77.68% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.47706422018348627
totalSentences109
uniqueOpeners52
90.09% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences74
matches
0"Almost five years."
1"Then, he slowly stood up,"
ratio0.027
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount44
totalSentences74
matches
0"She preferred the quiet."
1"It allowed the hum of"
2"He filled the doorway, a"
3"His suit, expensive charcoal wool,"
4"Her grip tightened on the"
5"She hadn't pictured running into"
6"He scanned the room, his"
7"It didn't reach his eyes."
8"She set the glass down"
9"He strolled towards the bar,"
10"He settled onto a stool,"
11"He chuckled, a low sound"
12"She busied herself with wiping"
13"He flagged her down, his"
14"he asked, finally"
15"She handed him the glass"
16"He took a sip, savoring"
17"She met his gaze, refusing"
18"He swirled the whiskey in"
19"He took another drink, then"
ratio0.595
14.05% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount66
totalSentences74
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest smelled of"
1"Rain lashed against the green"
2"Tuesday nights were slow, blessedly"
3"She preferred the quiet."
4"It allowed the hum of"
5"A bell above the door"
6"Rory glanced up."
7"He filled the doorway, a"
8"His suit, expensive charcoal wool,"
9"The face, though…"
10"that was the shock."
11"Her grip tightened on the"
12"She hadn't pictured running into"
13"He scanned the room, his"
14"It didn't reach his eyes."
15"The name tasted foreign on"
16"She set the glass down"
17"He strolled towards the bar,"
18"He settled onto a stool,"
19"Rory raised an eyebrow."
ratio0.892
67.57% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences74
matches
0"Because she didn't want to"
ratio0.014
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences28
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"It wouldn't erase the memory of his controlling behavior, the constant belittling, the isolating tactics that had chipped away at her self-worth."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"He flagged, his eyes tracking her movements"
1"he asked, finally"
2"she stated, the word clipped and precise"
3"She cut, her voice low but firm"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"He laughed (laugh)"
1"she stated (state)"
dialogueSentences48
tagDensity0.063
leniency0.125
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.083
82.9080%