Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY7MHVBREDX1YHYVZ2KNY9T

Run Details

Duration:
32.7s
Cost:
$0.000215
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The ancient oaks loomed, their branches clawing at the bruised twilight sky. Rory pulled her threadbare jacket tighter around her, the chill seeping deeper than the October air warranted. Richmond Park at night held a familiar quiet, a comfortable darkness she often sought after a brutal shift at the Golden Empress. But this… this wasn’t right. This wasn't the park she knew. She stopped before the standing stones, their moss-slick surfaces radiating a damp coolness. The Heartstone pendant warmed against her skin, a subtle throb against her collarbone. It always did here. Always confirmed she was in the right place. Or, at least, the place she needed to be. The clearing beyond the stones shouldn't have existed. A perfect circle of wildflowers bloomed in defiance of the season, their vibrant colors jarring against the monochrome landscape. It was beautiful, unsettlingly so. The Fae Grove. Isolde’s grove, some called it. Rory called it a necessary evil. She hadn't intended to come back. Not after… everything. But Eva’s cryptic message, delivered via a burner phone and a trembling voice, had left her little choice. *“The resonance is growing stronger. You need to check the nexus. Please, Rory. Before it’s too late.”* Nexus. That’s what Eva called the point where the Fae realm bled most heavily into Earth. It was here, somewhere within this pocket of impossible flora and manipulated time. Rory took a tentative step into the clearing. The air thickened, tasting like honey and something else… something metallic and faintly rotten. A breeze stirred, whispering through the wildflowers, but it carried no scent of leaves or earth. Only that unsettling sweetness. A rustling sound caught her attention. She froze. Just a rabbit, she told herself. Or a squirrel. Richmond Park was teeming with them. But the sound wasn’t the skittering of small paws on leaves. It was… smoother. Like fabric being dragged across stone. She scanned the perimeter of the clearing. Shadows danced in the periphery, playing tricks on her eyes. The moonlight, filtered through the dense canopy, painted the ground in a shifting mosaic of light and darkness. Everything seemed to warp and breathe. Another rustle, closer this time. Rory’s hand instinctively went to the small pocketknife she carried—a habit ingrained from a childhood spent exploring the Welsh mountains with her father. It wasn’t much, but it was something. “Hello?” she called out, her voice sounding thin and reedy in the oppressive silence. “Is anyone there?” Only the rustling answered. It circled her now, a slow, deliberate dance just beyond her vision. She activated the flashlight on her phone, a narrow beam cutting through the gloom. The wildflowers seemed to recoil from the light, their petals curling inward as if in pain. The shadows intensified, deepening into pools of impenetrable black. Something shifted in the corner of her eye. A flicker of movement. Rory spun around, aiming the flashlight beam, but found nothing. Just the swaying wildflowers. “Stop it,” she muttered, the words a fragile defiance against the rising tide of unease. “Just… stop.” The air grew colder. A distinct smell now—cloying and sickly sweet, like overripe fruit left to rot. A twig snapped behind her. Rory whirled around again, flashlight sweeping the area. This time, she saw it. Just a glimpse, a fleeting impression of something tall and slender, disappearing behind one of the oaks. It was humanoid in shape, she thought. But impossibly elongated, its limbs too long, its movements too fluid. And it moved with a disconcerting silence. It shouldn't have been possible. Her breath hitched in her throat. Her heart hammered against her ribs, a frantic drumbeat against the silence. She backed away slowly, keeping her eyes fixed on the oak. The flashlight beam trembled in her hand. A low hum vibrated through the ground, a resonant thrum that seemed to crawl into her bones. The wildflowers began to glow, their petals radiating an eerie, phosphorescent light. The Heartstone pendant pulsed violently against her skin, its warmth transforming into a searing heat. Rory gasped, instinctively clutching at the chain. “Eva…” she whispered, her voice barely audible. “What have I gotten myself into?” The rustling sound intensified, coalescing into a chorus of whispers. They swirled around her, unintelligible yet somehow menacing. She couldn't decipher the words, but she understood the tone—a cold, mocking amusement. A shape began to emerge from the shadows, coalescing from the darkness behind the ancient oak. It was tall, impossibly so, its form shifting and indistinct. Rory struggled to focus on it, her mind reeling. It wasn't solid. Not entirely. Parts of it shimmered, like heat rising from asphalt on a summer day. Other parts were… wrong. Twisted and elongated, with angles that defied geometry. She could sense it now, a presence radiating palpable malevolence. It wasn’t an animal. It wasn’t human. It was something… else. The whispers grew louder, closer. They seemed to be coming from the thing itself. *“Lost, little mortal?”* the whispers seemed to say, weaving together into a single voice. *“Seeking something you shouldn’t?”* Rory raised her phone, the flashlight beam unwavering. Her hand trembled, but her resolve didn’t. “What do you want?” she demanded, her voice surprisingly steady. The form shifted, resolving itself slightly. Rory could now make out a semblance of a face—or what passed for a face. It was gaunt and elongated, with eyes that gleamed like polished obsidian. *“We want…balance,”* the voice echoed in her mind, not through her ears. *“The veil weakens. The echoes grow loud. And you, little mortal, are the disruption.”* A long, skeletal finger extended from the being’s hand, pointing directly at Rory. *“The resonance…it calls to us.”* The Heartstone pendant flared with an intense crimson light, almost blinding. Rory cried out, stumbling backward. The creature seemed to lean forward, its obsidian eyes fixed on her. *“Give us the stone. And perhaps… we will let you walk away.”*
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences14
tagDensity0.429
leniency0.857
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
89.82% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount982
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount982
totalAiIsms31
found
0
word"loomed"
count1
1
word"chill"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count1
3
word"comfortable"
count1
4
word"throb"
count1
5
word"perfect"
count1
6
word"resonance"
count2
7
word"scanned"
count1
8
word"mosaic"
count1
9
word"oppressive"
count1
10
word"silence"
count3
11
word"dance"
count1
12
word"gloom"
count1
13
word"flicker"
count1
14
word"fleeting"
count1
15
word"trembled"
count2
16
word"vibrated"
count1
17
word"pulsed"
count1
18
word"warmth"
count1
19
word"searing"
count1
20
word"shimmered"
count1
21
word"palpable"
count1
22
word"unwavering"
count1
23
word"resolve"
count1
24
word"resolving"
count1
25
word"echoed"
count1
26
word"echoes"
count1
highlights
0"loomed"
1"chill"
2"familiar"
3"comfortable"
4"throb"
5"perfect"
6"resonance"
7"scanned"
8"mosaic"
9"oppressive"
10"silence"
11"dance"
12"gloom"
13"flicker"
14"fleeting"
15"trembled"
16"vibrated"
17"pulsed"
18"warmth"
19"searing"
20"shimmered"
21"palpable"
22"unwavering"
23"resolve"
24"resolving"
25"echoed"
26"echoes"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences106
matches(empty)
21.56% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount9
narrationSentences106
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tended to"
1"seemed to"
2"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences114
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen24
ratio0
matches(empty)
83.32% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans7
markdownWords57
totalWords977
ratio0.058
matches
0"“The resonance is growing stronger. You need to check the nexus. Please, Rory. Before it’s too late.”"
1"“Lost, little mortal?”"
2"“Seeking something you shouldn’t?”"
3"“We want…balance,”"
4"“The veil weakens. The echoes grow loud. And you, little mortal, are the disruption.”"
5"“The resonance…it calls to us.”"
6"“Give us the stone. And perhaps… we will let you walk away.”"
93.75% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"Just a rabbit, she told herself."
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions27
wordCount901
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.33
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
October1
Park2
Golden1
Empress1
Heartstone3
Fae2
Grove1
Eva2
Earth1
Welsh1
Rory12
persons
0"Eva"
1"Rory"
places
0"Park"
1"Golden"
2"Fae"
3"Grove"
4"Earth"
5"Welsh"
globalScore0.834
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences73
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"thrum that seemed to crawl into her bones"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount977
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences114
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs38
mean25.71
std13.09
cv0.509
sampleLengths
062
147
246
344
429
542
643
741
835
917
1016
1139
1226
1317
1417
155
1630
1730
1818
1918
2029
2122
2213
2331
2435
2530
2621
2714
2818
2915
3010
3133
3226
3313
345
3516
3612
3712
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences106
matches
0"being dragged"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs158
matches
0"was teeming"
42.61% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences114
ratio0.035
matches
0"Rory’s hand instinctively went to the small pocketknife she carried—a habit ingrained from a childhood spent exploring the Welsh mountains with her father."
1"A distinct smell now—cloying and sickly sweet, like overripe fruit left to rot."
2"She couldn't decipher the words, but she understood the tone—a cold, mocking amusement."
3"Rory could now make out a semblance of a face—or what passed for a face."
97.33% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount906
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount39
adverbRatio0.04304635761589404
lyAdverbCount17
lyAdverbRatio0.018763796909492272
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences114
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences114
mean8.57
std5.01
cv0.584
sampleLengths
012
117
222
32
43
56
613
713
84
98
109
118
1219
135
143
155
166
176
182
191
2018
2117
221
2315
2413
258
269
275
2816
294
306
312
326
333
346
3511
362
371
386
397
4010
4118
426
435
4423
457
4614
473
484
4912
50.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.34210526315789475
totalSentences114
uniqueOpeners39
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount6
totalSentences96
matches
0"Always confirmed she was in"
1"Only that unsettling sweetness."
2"Just a rabbit, she told"
3"Only the rustling answered."
4"Just the swaying wildflowers."
5"Just a glimpse, a fleeting"
ratio0.063
99.17% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount29
totalSentences96
matches
0"She stopped before the standing"
1"It always did here."
2"It was beautiful, unsettlingly so."
3"She hadn't intended to come"
4"It was here, somewhere within"
5"She scanned the perimeter of"
6"It wasn’t much, but it"
7"she called out, her voice"
8"It circled her now, a"
9"She activated the flashlight on"
10"she muttered, the words a"
11"It was humanoid in shape,"
12"It shouldn't have been possible."
13"Her breath hitched in her"
14"Her heart hammered against her"
15"She backed away slowly, keeping"
16"she whispered, her voice barely"
17"They swirled around her, unintelligible"
18"She couldn't decipher the words,"
19"It was tall, impossibly so,"
ratio0.302
38.13% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount81
totalSentences96
matches
0"The ancient oaks loomed, their"
1"Rory pulled her threadbare jacket"
2"Richmond Park at night held"
3"this wasn’t right."
4"This wasn't the park she"
5"She stopped before the standing"
6"The Heartstone pendant warmed against"
7"It always did here."
8"The clearing beyond the stones"
9"A perfect circle of wildflowers"
10"It was beautiful, unsettlingly so."
11"The Fae Grove."
12"Isolde’s grove, some called it."
13"Rory called it a necessary"
14"She hadn't intended to come"
15"That’s what Eva called the"
16"It was here, somewhere within"
17"Rory took a tentative step"
18"The air thickened, tasting like"
19"something metallic and faintly rotten."
ratio0.844
52.08% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences96
matches
0"Or, at least, the place"
ratio0.01
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences37
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The wildflowers seemed to recoil from the light, their petals curling inward as if in pain."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"she called out, her voice sounding thin and reedy in the oppressive silence"
1"she whispered, her voice barely audible"
2"she demanded, her voice surprisingly steady"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"she called out (call out)"
1"she muttered (mutter)"
2"she whispered (whisper)"
3"the whispers seemed (seem)"
4"she demanded (demand)"
dialogueSentences14
tagDensity0.357
leniency0.714
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.714
78.3699%