| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 6 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 14 | | tagDensity | 0.429 | | leniency | 0.857 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 89.82% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 982 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 982 | | totalAiIsms | 31 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | | | 24 | | | 25 | | | 26 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "chill" | | 2 | "familiar" | | 3 | "comfortable" | | 4 | "throb" | | 5 | "perfect" | | 6 | "resonance" | | 7 | "scanned" | | 8 | "mosaic" | | 9 | "oppressive" | | 10 | "silence" | | 11 | "dance" | | 12 | "gloom" | | 13 | "flicker" | | 14 | "fleeting" | | 15 | "trembled" | | 16 | "vibrated" | | 17 | "pulsed" | | 18 | "warmth" | | 19 | "searing" | | 20 | "shimmered" | | 21 | "palpable" | | 22 | "unwavering" | | 23 | "resolve" | | 24 | "resolving" | | 25 | "echoed" | | 26 | "echoes" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 106 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 21.56% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 9 | | narrationSentences | 106 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "tended to" | | 1 | "seemed to" | | 2 | "began to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 114 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 24 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.32% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 7 | | markdownWords | 57 | | totalWords | 977 | | ratio | 0.058 | | matches | | 0 | "“The resonance is growing stronger. You need to check the nexus. Please, Rory. Before it’s too late.”" | | 1 | "“Lost, little mortal?”" | | 2 | "“Seeking something you shouldn’t?”" | | 3 | "“We want…balance,”" | | 4 | "“The veil weakens. The echoes grow loud. And you, little mortal, are the disruption.”" | | 5 | "“The resonance…it calls to us.”" | | 6 | "“Give us the stone. And perhaps… we will let you walk away.”" |
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| 93.75% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 8 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Just a rabbit, she told herself." |
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| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 27 | | wordCount | 901 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 1.33 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | October | 1 | | Park | 2 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Fae | 2 | | Grove | 1 | | Eva | 2 | | Earth | 1 | | Welsh | 1 | | Rory | 12 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Park" | | 1 | "Golden" | | 2 | "Fae" | | 3 | "Grove" | | 4 | "Earth" | | 5 | "Welsh" |
| | globalScore | 0.834 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 73 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "thrum that seemed to crawl into her bones" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 977 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 114 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 38 | | mean | 25.71 | | std | 13.09 | | cv | 0.509 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 62 | | 1 | 47 | | 2 | 46 | | 3 | 44 | | 4 | 29 | | 5 | 42 | | 6 | 43 | | 7 | 41 | | 8 | 35 | | 9 | 17 | | 10 | 16 | | 11 | 39 | | 12 | 26 | | 13 | 17 | | 14 | 17 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 30 | | 17 | 30 | | 18 | 18 | | 19 | 18 | | 20 | 29 | | 21 | 22 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 31 | | 24 | 35 | | 25 | 30 | | 26 | 21 | | 27 | 14 | | 28 | 18 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 33 | | 32 | 26 | | 33 | 13 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 16 | | 36 | 12 | | 37 | 12 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 106 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 158 | | matches | | |
| 42.61% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 114 | | ratio | 0.035 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory’s hand instinctively went to the small pocketknife she carried—a habit ingrained from a childhood spent exploring the Welsh mountains with her father." | | 1 | "A distinct smell now—cloying and sickly sweet, like overripe fruit left to rot." | | 2 | "She couldn't decipher the words, but she understood the tone—a cold, mocking amusement." | | 3 | "Rory could now make out a semblance of a face—or what passed for a face." |
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| 97.33% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 906 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 39 | | adverbRatio | 0.04304635761589404 | | lyAdverbCount | 17 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.018763796909492272 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 114 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 114 | | mean | 8.57 | | std | 5.01 | | cv | 0.584 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 12 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 22 | | 3 | 2 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 13 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 8 | | 12 | 19 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 1 | | 20 | 18 | | 21 | 17 | | 22 | 1 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 13 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 16 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 1 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 7 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 18 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 23 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 14 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 12 |
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| 50.00% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.34210526315789475 | | totalSentences | 114 | | uniqueOpeners | 39 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | 0 | "Always confirmed she was in" | | 1 | "Only that unsettling sweetness." | | 2 | "Just a rabbit, she told" | | 3 | "Only the rustling answered." | | 4 | "Just the swaying wildflowers." | | 5 | "Just a glimpse, a fleeting" |
| | ratio | 0.063 | |
| 99.17% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 29 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | 0 | "She stopped before the standing" | | 1 | "It always did here." | | 2 | "It was beautiful, unsettlingly so." | | 3 | "She hadn't intended to come" | | 4 | "It was here, somewhere within" | | 5 | "She scanned the perimeter of" | | 6 | "It wasn’t much, but it" | | 7 | "she called out, her voice" | | 8 | "It circled her now, a" | | 9 | "She activated the flashlight on" | | 10 | "she muttered, the words a" | | 11 | "It was humanoid in shape," | | 12 | "It shouldn't have been possible." | | 13 | "Her breath hitched in her" | | 14 | "Her heart hammered against her" | | 15 | "She backed away slowly, keeping" | | 16 | "she whispered, her voice barely" | | 17 | "They swirled around her, unintelligible" | | 18 | "She couldn't decipher the words," | | 19 | "It was tall, impossibly so," |
| | ratio | 0.302 | |
| 38.13% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 81 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | 0 | "The ancient oaks loomed, their" | | 1 | "Rory pulled her threadbare jacket" | | 2 | "Richmond Park at night held" | | 3 | "this wasn’t right." | | 4 | "This wasn't the park she" | | 5 | "She stopped before the standing" | | 6 | "The Heartstone pendant warmed against" | | 7 | "It always did here." | | 8 | "The clearing beyond the stones" | | 9 | "A perfect circle of wildflowers" | | 10 | "It was beautiful, unsettlingly so." | | 11 | "The Fae Grove." | | 12 | "Isolde’s grove, some called it." | | 13 | "Rory called it a necessary" | | 14 | "She hadn't intended to come" | | 15 | "That’s what Eva called the" | | 16 | "It was here, somewhere within" | | 17 | "Rory took a tentative step" | | 18 | "The air thickened, tasting like" | | 19 | "something metallic and faintly rotten." |
| | ratio | 0.844 | |
| 52.08% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | 0 | "Or, at least, the place" |
| | ratio | 0.01 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 37 | | technicalSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "The wildflowers seemed to recoil from the light, their petals curling inward as if in pain." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 6 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "she called out, her voice sounding thin and reedy in the oppressive silence" | | 1 | "she whispered, her voice barely audible" | | 2 | "she demanded, her voice surprisingly steady" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 5 | | fancyCount | 5 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she called out (call out)" | | 1 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 2 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 3 | "the whispers seemed (seem)" | | 4 | "she demanded (demand)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 14 | | tagDensity | 0.357 | | leniency | 0.714 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.714 | |