Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY7MJ3JN3XHGM5A4T986GMF

Run Details

Duration:
12.5s
Cost:
$0.000522
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign of *The Raven’s Nest* flickered weakly against the rain-slicked pavement, its glow bleeding into the puddles like spilled ink. Inside, the air smelled of aged whiskey and something sharper—leather, maybe, or old paper. The kind of scent that clung to a place long after the people in it had moved on. Rory Carter paused on the threshold, her breath fogging the glass of the door. She’d been walking for hours, the weight of the day pressing down on her shoulders like a wet coat. The last delivery had been a disaster—she’d dropped a tray of dumplings, the owner had screamed, and now she was late for her shift at the restaurant. But the bar had looked familiar, the way it always did in her dreams. She stepped inside. The place was half-empty, the usual hum of conversation replaced by the low crackle of a fireplace and the occasional clink of a glass. The walls were lined with maps and yellowed photographs, the kind of things that made a place feel like it had secrets. Rory’s fingers twitched at her sides. She hadn’t been back here in years. Then she saw him. Silas Blackwood sat in the corner, nursing a glass of something amber and strong. His auburn hair was streaked with grey now, his beard neatly trimmed, but it was the way he held himself that stopped her cold—like a man who had spent too many years carrying things he wasn’t supposed to. His left leg gave a slight hitch as he leaned forward, his silver signet ring catching the firelight. He looked up. Their eyes locked. Rory’s stomach dropped. “Well,” Silas said, his voice rough as gravel. “If it isn’t the girl who used to steal my whiskey.” She should have walked away. Should have turned on her heel and never looked back. But the years had a way of making old habits hard to break. “Silas,” she said, her voice quieter than she meant it to be. “I didn’t know you were still here.” He smirked, just a little. “Neither did I, until I saw you on the doorstep like some kind of ghost.” Rory exhaled sharply, rubbing her temples. “I didn’t mean to—” “You never did,” he cut in, swirling his drink. “That’s what always got you into trouble.” She ignored the jab. “I need a job.” The words hung between them, heavy and unspoken. Silas studied her for a long moment, his hazel eyes sharp. Then he gestured to the stool across from him. “Sit.” She hesitated, then pulled it out and sat, her fingers brushing the worn leather. The stool creaked under her weight. “You look like hell,” Silas said bluntly. Rory laughed, sharp and bitter. “Thanks.” “No, really. You used to have more… *edge* to you.” He tilted his head. “Or was that just the way you carried yourself when you were trying to look tough?” She clenched her jaw. “I’m fine.” “Sure you are.” He took a sip of his drink. “So. What’s a part-timer doing in my bar at midnight?” “Delivery driver,” she said. “For Golden Empress.” Silas raised an eyebrow. “Ah. The restaurant. I remember you working there once. Before you quit.” Rory’s fingers tightened around the edge of the stool. “I didn’t quit.” “No?” He leaned back, his limp more pronounced now. “Then why did you stop coming around?” She swallowed. “Things changed.” “They always do.” He set his glass down with a quiet *thunk*. “You look like you’ve been running from something.” Rory’s breath hitched. She hadn’t told anyone that. Not even Eva. Silas watched her, his expression unreadable. “Or maybe you just don’t know how to stop.” The words hit her like a punch to the gut. She stood abruptly, her stool scraping against the floor. “I need a drink.” Silas didn’t move. “I’ll get it.” She opened her mouth to protest, but he was already pushing himself up, his limp more noticeable now. He moved with the quiet confidence of a man who had spent a lifetime knowing exactly where he was going. Rory watched him weave through the tables, the way his coat brushed against the backs of the chairs, the way his fingers lingered on the bar before he turned back to her. When he returned, he slid a glass of whiskey across the counter. It was neat, no ice, no water—just the way she used to take it. She picked it up, the glass cold against her palm. “You always were a sucker for a challenge,” Silas said, taking his own seat again. Rory took a sip. The burn was familiar, comforting. “I didn’t ask for this.” “No.” He leaned forward. “But you’re here now.” She looked down at her hands, the scar on her wrist catching the light. “I don’t know what I’m doing here.” Silas studied her for a long moment. Then he reached into his coat, pulling out a small, worn photograph. He slid it across the counter. Rory picked it up. It was her—younger, laughing, her hair longer, her eyes bright. She was standing in front of *The Raven’s Nest*, her arm slung around Silas’s shoulder. “That was the last time I saw you happy,” he said quietly. Rory’s throat tightened. She set the photo down without looking at it again. “You left,” she said. “Without a word.” Silas’s expression darkened. “I had my reasons.” “So did I.” He didn’t argue. He didn’t have to. The silence stretched between them, thick and heavy. Rory could feel the weight of all the years they’d missed, all the things they hadn’t said. Then Silas sighed, rubbing his temples. “You look like you’ve been running from something.” Rory’s breath hitched. She hadn’t told anyone that. Not even Eva. Silas watched her, his expression unreadable. “Or maybe you just don’t know how to stop.” The words hit her like a punch to the gut. She stood abruptly, her stool scraping against the floor. “I need a drink.” Silas didn’t move. “I’ll get it.” She opened her mouth to protest, but he was already pushing himself up, his limp more noticeable now. He moved with the quiet confidence of a man who had spent a lifetime knowing exactly where he was going. Rory watched him weave through the tables, the way his coat brushed against the backs of the chairs, the way his fingers lingered on the bar before he turned back to her. When he returned, he slid a glass of whiskey across the counter. It was neat, no ice, no water—just the way she used to take it. She picked it up, the glass cold against her palm. “You always were a sucker for a challenge,” Silas said, taking his own seat again. Rory took a sip. The burn was familiar, comforting. “I didn’t ask for this.” “No.” He leaned forward. “But you’re here now.” She looked down at her hands, the scar on her wrist catching the light. “I don’t know what I’m doing here.” Silas studied her for a long moment. Then he reached into his coat, pulling out a small, worn photograph. He slid it across the counter. Rory picked it up. It was her—younger, laughing, her hair longer, her eyes bright. She was standing in front of *The Raven’s Nest*, her arm slung around Silas’s shoulder. “That was the last time I saw you happy,” he said quietly. Rory’s throat tightened. She set the photo down without looking at it again. “You left,” she said. “Without a word.” Silas’s expression darkened. “I had my reasons.” “So did I.” He didn’t argue. He didn’t have to. The silence stretched between them, thick and heavy. Rory could feel the weight of all the years they’d missed, all the things they hadn’t said. Then the door to the bar creaked open, letting in a gust of cold air. A woman stepped inside, her coat damp from the rain, her hair plastered to her face. She looked around, her eyes landing on Rory and Silas. “Oh,” she said, her voice sharp with recognition. “I didn’t know you had company.” Silas didn’t look up. “Eva.” The name hung in the air between them, heavy and loaded. Rory’s stomach twisted. Eva’s gaze flicked between them, her expression unreadable. Then she turned to Rory, her voice low. “You look like hell.” Rory’s breath hitched. She set her glass down, her fingers trembling. Silas didn’t move. He didn’t look away. Eva’s eyes narrowed. “What the hell are you doing here?” Rory’s throat tightened. She opened her mouth to speak, but the words stuck in her throat. Silas finally looked up, his gaze meeting hers. “She needs a job.” Eva’s eyes flicked to him, then back to Rory. “You’re working for Silas now?” Rory’s fingers tightened around the edge of the counter. “I need a job.” Eva exhaled sharply, her breath fogging in the cold air. “Fine. But you’re not staying here.” Silas didn’t move. He didn’t argue. Eva turned to leave, but paused at the door. “And Rory?” Rory looked up, her heart pounding. Eva’s gaze was steady. “Don’t make me regret this.” Then she was gone, the door swinging shut behind her. Silas watched her go, his expression unreadable. Then he turned back to Rory, his voice low. “She’s not wrong.” Rory’s breath hitched. She looked down at her hands, the scar on her wrist catching the light. Silas reached across the counter, his fingers brushing hers. “You always were good at running.” Rory’s breath caught in her throat. She pulled her hand away, her fingers trembling. Silas didn’t move. He didn’t look away. The silence stretched between them, thick and heavy. Rory could feel the weight of all the years they’d missed, all the things they hadn’t said. Then the door to the hidden room creaked open, letting in a gust of cold air. A man stepped inside, his coat damp from the rain, his hair plastered to his face. He looked around, his eyes landing on Rory and Silas. “Oh,” he said, his voice sharp with recognition. “I didn’t know you had company.” Silas didn’t look up. “Eva.” The name hung in the air between them, heavy and loaded. Rory’s stomach twisted. Eva’s gaze flicked between them, her expression unreadable. Then she turned to Rory, her voice low. “You look like hell.” Rory’s breath hitched. She set her glass down, her fingers trembling. Silas didn’t move. He didn’t look away. Eva’s eyes narrowed. “What the hell are you doing here?” Rory’s fingers tightened around the edge of the counter. “I need a job.” Eva exhaled sharply, her breath fogging in the cold air. “Fine. But you’re not staying here.” Silas didn’t move. He didn’t argue. Eva turned to leave, but paused at the door. “And Rory—”
created_at"2026-02-20T19:15:14.687Z" 2/20/2026, 7:15:14 PM
model"mistralai/ministral-8b-2512"
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
91.89% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags19
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"Silas said bluntly [bluntly]"
1"He leaned back [back]"
2"he said quietly [quietly]"
3"he said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences74
tagDensity0.257
leniency0.514
rawRatio0.211
effectiveRatio0.108
88.92% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1805
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count3
1
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"sharply"
1"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
14.13% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1805
totalAiIsms31
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"weight"
count5
2
word"familiar"
count3
3
word"stomach"
count3
4
word"unspoken"
count1
5
word"eyebrow"
count1
6
word"unreadable"
count5
7
word"comforting"
count2
8
word"silence"
count3
9
word"could feel"
count3
10
word"flicked"
count3
11
word"pounding"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"weight"
2"familiar"
3"stomach"
4"unspoken"
5"eyebrow"
6"unreadable"
7"comforting"
8"silence"
9"could feel"
10"flicked"
11"pounding"
0.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches6
maxInWindow4
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count2
1
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
2
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
3
label"hung in the air"
count2
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"stomach dropped"
2"clenched her jaw"
3"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences167
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences167
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences222
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans5
markdownWords11
totalWords1796
ratio0.006
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest"
1"edge"
2"thunk"
3"The Raven’s Nest"
4"The Raven’s Nest"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions25
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions82
wordCount1438
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity2.43
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity5.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven3
Carter1
Blackwood1
Rory35
Silas30
Eva12
persons
0"Raven"
1"Carter"
2"Blackwood"
3"Rory"
4"Silas"
5"Eva"
places(empty)
globalScore0.283
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences103
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1796
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences222
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs108
mean16.63
std12.91
cv0.776
sampleLengths
055
174
23
359
44
570
63
73
83
919
1028
1119
1220
1310
1416
158
1629
1720
187
196
2030
216
2220
237
2416
2512
2616
274
2820
2911
3015
3123
326
3338
3432
3526
3610
3715
3814
398
4021
4125
4229
4312
4413
457
467
473
487
4925
98.96% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences167
matches
0"were lined"
1"was streaked"
2"was gone"
97.83% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs261
matches
0"was going"
1"was standing"
2"was going"
3"was standing"
52.77% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences222
ratio0.032
matches
0"Inside, the air smelled of aged whiskey and something sharper—leather, maybe, or old paper."
1"The last delivery had been a disaster—she’d dropped a tray of dumplings, the owner had screamed, and now she was late for her shift at the restaurant."
2"His auburn hair was streaked with grey now, his beard neatly trimmed, but it was the way he held himself that stopped her cold—like a man who had spent too many years carrying things he wasn’t supposed to."
3"It was neat, no ice, no water—just the way she used to take it."
4"It was her—younger, laughing, her hair longer, her eyes bright."
5"It was neat, no ice, no water—just the way she used to take it."
6"It was her—younger, laughing, her hair longer, her eyes bright."
97.48% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1446
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount62
adverbRatio0.042876901798063624
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.008990318118948824
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences222
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences222
mean8.09
std5.81
cv0.718
sampleLengths
023
114
218
314
419
527
614
73
824
922
106
117
124
1314
1438
1518
163
173
183
198
2011
215
2210
2313
2412
257
265
2715
286
294
309
317
324
334
348
3511
369
371
3814
396
407
415
421
4314
4416
454
462
4710
4810
494
48.20% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.17567567567567569
totalSentences222
uniqueOpeners39
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount11
totalSentences163
matches
0"Then she saw him."
1"Then he gestured to the"
2"Then he reached into his"
3"Then Silas sighed, rubbing his"
4"Then he reached into his"
5"Then the door to the"
6"Then she turned to Rory,"
7"Then she was gone, the"
8"Then he turned back to"
9"Then the door to the"
10"Then she turned to Rory,"
ratio0.067
67.85% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount62
totalSentences163
matches
0"She’d been walking for hours,"
1"She stepped inside."
2"She hadn’t been back here"
3"His auburn hair was streaked"
4"His left leg gave a"
5"He looked up."
6"Their eyes locked."
7"She should have walked away."
8"she said, her voice quieter"
9"He smirked, just a little."
10"he cut in, swirling his"
11"She ignored the jab."
12"She hesitated, then pulled it"
13"He tilted his head"
14"She clenched her jaw."
15"He took a sip of"
16"He leaned back, his limp"
17"He set his glass down"
18"She hadn’t told anyone that."
19"She stood abruptly, her stool"
ratio0.38
18.28% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount144
totalSentences163
matches
0"The green neon sign of"
1"The kind of scent that"
2"Rory Carter paused on the"
3"She’d been walking for hours,"
4"The last delivery had been"
5"She stepped inside."
6"The place was half-empty, the"
7"The walls were lined with"
8"Rory’s fingers twitched at her"
9"She hadn’t been back here"
10"Silas Blackwood sat in the"
11"His auburn hair was streaked"
12"His left leg gave a"
13"He looked up."
14"Their eyes locked."
15"Rory’s stomach dropped."
16"Silas said, his voice rough"
17"She should have walked away."
18"she said, her voice quieter"
19"He smirked, just a little."
ratio0.883
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences163
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences56
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"His auburn hair was streaked with grey now, his beard neatly trimmed, but it was the way he held himself that stopped her cold—like a man who had spent too many…"
1"He moved with the quiet confidence of a man who had spent a lifetime knowing exactly where he was going."
2"He moved with the quiet confidence of a man who had spent a lifetime knowing exactly where he was going."
19.74% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags19
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"Silas said, his voice rough as gravel"
1"she said, her voice quieter than she meant it to be"
2"she said, her voice sharp with recognition"
3"he said, his voice sharp with recognition"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags12
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences74
tagDensity0.162
leniency0.324
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
76.5349%