Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY7MT9YVPSCVQQF3G0CK5AS

Run Details

Duration:
8.3s
Cost:
$0.000328
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door creaked open before she could reach for the handle, the hinges groaning like an old man’s bones. The scent of damp wool and something sharp—like ozone after a storm—spilled into the hallway first, then him. Lucien stood there, his cane tapping once against the linoleum, the ivory handle gleaming under the flickering bulb. His suit coat was unbuttoned just enough to show the crisp white of his shirt cuffs, the platinum blond hair slicked back as always, but his tie was loose, the knot undone. His amber eye flicked to the scar on her wrist before he lifted his gaze to hers. Rory froze, her fingers still curled around the doorknob. "You’re not supposed to be here." "Neither are you," he countered, his voice smooth as whiskey. "But here we both are." She stepped back, letting the door swing shut behind him. The flat smelled of takeaway curry and stale coffee, the kind of scent that clung to the walls like old memories. Ptolemy slinked out from under the sofa, tail flicking, but didn’t meow—just watched them with those golden, unblinking eyes. Lucien didn’t move deeper into the room. "You’ve been avoiding me." "Not avoiding," she said, though her pulse hammered in her throat. "I’ve just got things to do." He tilted his head, the black eye catching the light. "Like what? Delivering food at three in the morning?" She bristled. "It pays the rent." "Mmm." He hummed, low and knowing, like he already knew every excuse she’d ever made. "And the rest of your time?" Rory exhaled through her nose. "None of your business." His lips quirked. "Funny. I thought we’d agreed it was." The air between them thickened, charged. She remembered the last time they’d stood this close—outside the old bookshop in Soho, the rain slicking the pavement, his hands warm against her skin as he’d told her things she hadn’t wanted to hear. She’d walked away then. She wouldn’t make that mistake again. "Get out," she said, voice steadier than she felt. Lucien didn’t budge. "Not until you listen." "To what?" She crossed her arms, though her fingers twitched toward the scar on her wrist. "Your little speech about how I’m being reckless? How I’m running again?" His expression darkened. "You’re not running." "Am I not?" She laughed, sharp and bitter. "Because that’s what I do, isn’t it? Walk away when things get complicated." He stepped forward then, close enough that she could see the faintest dusting of freckles along his jawline. "You didn’t walk away from me before." The words hit her like a punch to the gut. She swallowed hard. "That was different." "Was it?" His voice dropped, rougher now. "Or was it just easier to pretend it wasn’t?" Rory’s breath hitched. She hated when he did this—to make her feel things she’d buried. She hated that he could still do it after all this time. Ptolemy chose that moment to leap onto the back of the sofa, tail lashing, and let out a low, disgruntled *mrrow*. Lucien didn’t even glance at the cat. His gaze locked onto hers, unyielding. "You came back," she said, because it was true. She’d come back to London, to this flat, to the life she’d tried to leave behind. And now he was here, like some kind of bad omen. Lucien’s fingers twitched toward his cane. "I didn’t have a choice." She raised an eyebrow. "Oh, really? And whose choice was that?" His jaw tightened. "Yours and mine, both." She wanted to argue. She wanted to tell him to leave, to go back to wherever he’d come from and never look back. But the way he stood there, so still and sure, made her chest ache. "Fine," she said, voice rough. "You can stay. But only if you tell me why." Lucien exhaled, long and slow. "Because I need your help." The words hung between them, heavy as the silence that followed. Rory’s pulse roared in her ears. "What kind of help?" He didn’t answer right away. Instead, he reached into his coat—slowly, deliberately—and pulled out a small, leather-bound book. The cover was worn, the edges singed. He held it out to her. "Open it," he said. She hesitated, then took it. The moment her fingers brushed the leather, the scent of old parchment and something metallic filled her nose. She flipped it open. Inside, the pages were filled with symbols—some she recognized, others twisted and unfamiliar. And in the center, a name, written in a hand she didn’t know. "Malphora," she breathed. Lucien’s voice was low. "That’s you." The flat seemed to tilt. Her breath came faster. "What is this?" "A warning," he said. "And an invitation." Ptolemy chose that moment to jump down from the sofa, landing with a soft thud at her feet. He rubbed against her leg, purring, as if sensing the tension in the air. Rory’s fingers tightened around the book. "What do you want me to do?" Lucien’s gaze never left hers. "Help me stop it." She looked down at the book again, then back at him. The air between them crackled, charged with something she couldn’t name. "Why me?" "Because," he said, "you’re the only one who can."
created_at"2026-02-20T19:15:23.082Z" 2/20/2026, 7:15:23 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.317
leniency0.634
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
82.88% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount876
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"deliberately"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"slowly"
2"deliberately"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
48.63% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount876
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"gleaming"
count1
1
word"flicked"
count1
2
word"pulse"
count2
3
word"charged"
count2
4
word"eyebrow"
count1
5
word"silence"
count1
6
word"tension"
count1
highlights
0"gleaming"
1"flicked"
2"pulse"
3"charged"
4"eyebrow"
5"silence"
6"tension"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences71
matches(empty)
82.49% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences71
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences99
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords868
ratio0.001
matches
0"mrrow"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
91.09% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions18
wordCount679
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity1.18
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Rory5
Soho1
Lucien8
London1
Ptolemy3
persons
0"Rory"
1"Lucien"
2"Ptolemy"
places
0"Soho"
1"London"
globalScore0.911
windowScore1
94.44% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences45
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if sensing the tension in the air"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount868
matches(empty)
31.99% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount4
totalSentences99
matches
0"make that mistake"
1"hated that he"
2"chose that moment"
3"chose that moment"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs44
mean19.73
std13.82
cv0.7
sampleLengths
037
167
215
315
450
511
617
719
86
921
109
1110
1251
139
147
1528
166
1721
1825
1916
2016
2127
2234
2336
2411
2511
267
2737
2815
2910
3021
3131
324
3327
3426
353
366
3712
387
3932
4013
419
4224
439
95.38% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences71
matches
0"was unbuttoned"
1"were filled"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs137
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences99
ratio0.061
matches
0"The scent of damp wool and something sharp—like ozone after a storm—spilled into the hallway first, then him."
1"Ptolemy slinked out from under the sofa, tail flicking, but didn’t meow—just watched them with those golden, unblinking eyes."
2"She remembered the last time they’d stood this close—outside the old bookshop in Soho, the rain slicking the pavement, his hands warm against her skin as he’d told her things she hadn’t wanted to hear."
3"She hated when he did this—to make her feel things she’d buried."
4"Instead, he reached into his coat—slowly, deliberately—and pulled out a small, leather-bound book."
5"Inside, the pages were filled with symbols—some she recognized, others twisted and unfamiliar."
93.34% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount687
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small, leather-bound book."
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.040756914119359534
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.002911208151382824
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences99
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences99
mean8.77
std6.16
cv0.703
sampleLengths
019
118
218
332
417
59
66
710
85
910
1021
1119
127
134
1411
156
1610
179
182
194
2015
216
225
234
243
257
266
2735
284
296
309
313
324
3316
3412
353
363
378
3813
3918
407
4110
423
433
447
459
463
4712
4812
4921
57.91% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.3838383838383838
totalSentences99
uniqueOpeners38
50.51% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences66
matches
0"Instead, he reached into his"
ratio0.015
7.88% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount35
totalSentences66
matches
0"His suit coat was unbuttoned"
1"His amber eye flicked to"
2"he countered, his voice smooth"
3"She stepped back, letting the"
4"she said, though her pulse"
5"He tilted his head, the"
6"He hummed, low and knowing,"
7"His lips quirked."
8"She remembered the last time"
9"She’d walked away then."
10"She wouldn’t make that mistake"
11"she said, voice steadier than"
12"She crossed her arms, though"
13"His expression darkened."
14"She laughed, sharp and bitter"
15"He stepped forward then, close"
16"She swallowed hard."
17"His voice dropped, rougher now"
18"She hated when he did"
19"She hated that he could"
ratio0.53
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount61
totalSentences66
matches
0"The door creaked open before"
1"The scent of damp wool"
2"Lucien stood there, his cane"
3"His suit coat was unbuttoned"
4"His amber eye flicked to"
5"Rory froze, her fingers still"
6"he countered, his voice smooth"
7"She stepped back, letting the"
8"The flat smelled of takeaway"
9"Ptolemy slinked out from under"
10"Lucien didn’t move deeper into"
11"she said, though her pulse"
12"He tilted his head, the"
13"He hummed, low and knowing,"
14"Rory exhaled through her nose."
15"His lips quirked."
16"The air between them thickened,"
17"She remembered the last time"
18"She’d walked away then."
19"She wouldn’t make that mistake"
ratio0.924
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences66
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences28
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"He rubbed against her leg, purring, as if sensing the tension in the air."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"he countered, his voice smooth as whiskey"
1"she said, though her pulse hammered in her throat"
2"she said, voice steadier than she felt"
3"She crossed, though her fingers twitched toward the scar on her wrist"
4"she said, voice rough"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"She laughed (laugh)"
1"she breathed (breathe)"
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.22
leniency0.439
rawRatio0.222
effectiveRatio0.098
74.5512%