| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 7 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Isolde said suddenly [suddenly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 28 | | tagDensity | 0.25 | | leniency | 0.5 | | rawRatio | 0.143 | | effectiveRatio | 0.071 | |
| 89.19% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1387 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 49.53% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1387 | | totalAiIsms | 14 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "weight" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "silence" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "loomed" | | 5 | "stomach" | | 6 | "echoes" | | 7 | "whisper" | | 8 | "depths" | | 9 | "dance" | | 10 | "velvet" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 131 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 131 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "tried to" | | 2 | "began to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 152 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 31 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 32 | | markdownWords | 32 | | totalWords | 1370 | | ratio | 0.023 | | matches | | 0 | "place" | | 1 | "leaned" | | 2 | "her" | | 3 | "moved" | | 4 | "moved" | | 5 | "are" | | 6 | "pulse" | | 7 | "rippled" | | 8 | "People." | | 9 | "changed" | | 10 | "shouldn’t" | | 11 | "screamed" | | 12 | "shifted" | | 13 | "pulled" | | 14 | "closed" | | 15 | "hungry" | | 16 | "felt" | | 17 | "stone" | | 18 | "pulsed" | | 19 | "moved" | | 20 | "Moved" | | 21 | "full" | | 22 | "Sounds" | | 23 | "shifted" | | 24 | "alive" | | 25 | "burned" | | 26 | "slaves" | | 27 | "moved" | | 28 | "noticed" | | 29 | "hungry" | | 30 | "wrong" | | 31 | "smiled" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 11 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 79.47% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 48 | | wordCount | 1276 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 1.41 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Isolde" | | discoveredNames | | Isolde | 10 | | Veil | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Rory | 18 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Belphegor | 2 | | Nyx | 11 | | One | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Isolde" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Belphegor" | | 3 | "Nyx" | | 4 | "One" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.795 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 88.27% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 81 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like hands reaching for something" | | 1 | "looked like glass" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1370 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 152 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 70 | | mean | 19.57 | | std | 19.92 | | cv | 1.018 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 12 | | 1 | 63 | | 2 | 12 | | 3 | 54 | | 4 | 14 | | 5 | 55 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 26 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 48 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 47 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 46 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 69 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 49 | | 23 | 1 | | 24 | 57 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 12 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 13 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 45 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 51 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 44 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 14 | | 40 | 61 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 41 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 25 | | 49 | 13 |
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| 94.55% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 131 | | matches | | 0 | "was fixed" | | 1 | "being pulled" | | 2 | "being torn" | | 3 | "being forced" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 233 | | matches | | 0 | "was pulling" | | 1 | "was breathing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 19 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 17 | | totalSentences | 152 | | ratio | 0.112 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, she turned her head—slow, deliberate—and her lavender eyes caught the dappled light filtering through the canopy." | | 1 | "The trees here weren’t just tall; they *leaned*, their branches twisting into shapes that almost looked like hands reaching for something just out of sight." | | 2 | "She hissed, jerking her hand back—but the blood had already stopped." | | 3 | "One moment, the path was a narrow dirt trail winding between ferns and wildflowers that bloomed in impossible colors—purple like bruises, blue like frozen fire." | | 4 | "The moment she’d drawn it, the air had grown heavier, the scent of damp earth and something metallic—like old coins—filling her lungs." | | 5 | "But the surface wasn’t flat—it *rippled*, though nothing touched it." | | 6 | "One reached out a hand toward the surface, fingers brushing the water—but the moment they did, the ripple distorted, and the figure *changed*." | | 7 | "One lunged upward—" | | 8 | "—and the grove *screamed*." | | 9 | "Water sprayed upward in a geyser, and from its depths rose a shape—tall, skeletal, its limbs too long, its fingers ending in claws." | | 10 | "She turned—and the grove *closed* behind them." | | 11 | "The ground beneath her feet was no longer earth—it was *stone*, cold and unyielding, carved with the same spirals as the standing stones." | | 12 | "Beyond them, darkness yawned—a void that wasn’t empty, but *full*, pressing against the edges of Rory’s vision." | | 13 | "Her foot crossed the threshold—and the world *shifted*." | | 14 | "She staggered, her vision swimming as the ground beneath her feet changed from stone to something softer, something *alive*—vines, petals, the press of too many bodies in too small a space." | | 15 | "Servants—no, *slaves*—moved between the tables, their faces hollow, their movements jerky, as if they were being pulled by strings." | | 16 | "The whispers became words—hushed, greedy, *hungry*." |
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| 99.13% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1293 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 53 | | adverbRatio | 0.040989945862335654 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006187161639597835 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 152 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 152 | | mean | 9.01 | | std | 6.93 | | cv | 0.768 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 12 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 21 | | 4 | 9 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 9 | | 8 | 17 | | 9 | 25 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 8 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 12 | | 15 | 17 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 1 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 21 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 25 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 16 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 13 | | 41 | 22 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 2 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 22 |
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| 43.20% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 16 | | diversityRatio | 0.3223684210526316 | | totalSentences | 152 | | uniqueOpeners | 49 | |
| 58.48% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 114 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, she turned her head—slow," | | 1 | "Instead, it *moved*, creeping up" |
| | ratio | 0.018 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 23 | | totalSentences | 114 | | matches | | 0 | "She paused, fingers brushing the" | | 1 | "She never did, not in" | | 2 | "She’d read about the Veil" | | 3 | "It prickled against her skin" | | 4 | "She reached for the Heartstone" | | 5 | "It pulsed once, faintly, as" | | 6 | "She hadn’t even noticed the" | | 7 | "She hissed, jerking her hand" | | 8 | "They pressed deeper into the" | | 9 | "Their breath hitched." | | 10 | "Their form stretched, warped, then" | | 11 | "She fumbled for the dagger," | | 12 | "Its face was a void," | | 13 | "It had no eyes, but" | | 14 | "She turned—and the grove *closed*" | | 15 | "She pressed her palm against" | | 16 | "She didn’t listen." | | 17 | "Her foot crossed the threshold—and" | | 18 | "She staggered, her vision swimming" | | 19 | "His skin was the color" |
| | ratio | 0.202 | |
| 43.33% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 95 | | totalSentences | 114 | | matches | | 0 | "The air smelled wrong the" | | 1 | "Rory’s boots sank into damp" | | 2 | "She paused, fingers brushing the" | | 3 | "Nyx moved ahead, their shadow" | | 4 | "Rory muttered, voice low" | | 5 | "Isolde didn’t answer." | | 6 | "She never did, not in" | | 7 | "The trees here weren’t just" | | 8 | "Nyx’s fingers twitched at their" | | 9 | "Rory’s pulse jumped." | | 10 | "She’d read about the Veil" | | 11 | "It prickled against her skin" | | 12 | "She reached for the Heartstone" | | 13 | "It pulsed once, faintly, as" | | 14 | "Isolde said suddenly" | | 15 | "A thin line of dark" | | 16 | "She hadn’t even noticed the" | | 17 | "Isolde’s gaze was fixed on" | | 18 | "Nyx’s shadow deepened, pooling at" | | 19 | "Rory ignored them, pressing her" |
| | ratio | 0.833 | |
| 43.86% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 114 | | matches | | 0 | "—and the grove *screamed*." |
| | ratio | 0.009 | |
| 7.39% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 58 | | technicalSentenceCount | 11 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx moved ahead, their shadow stretching unnaturally long across the moss, as if the light here bent to some unseen rule." | | 1 | "The trees here weren’t just tall; they *leaned*, their branches twisting into shapes that almost looked like hands reaching for something just out of sight." | | 2 | "Instead, it *moved*, creeping up her arm in a slow, deliberate trail, as if something was pulling it toward her elbow." | | 3 | "One moment, the path was a narrow dirt trail winding between ferns and wildflowers that bloomed in impossible colors—purple like bruises, blue like frozen fire." | | 4 | "Petals unfurled toward them, stems bending in unnatural arcs, as if the grove itself was breathing." | | 5 | "The trees groaned, their branches twisting into a barrier, leaves forming a thicket that blocked the way back." | | 6 | "She pressed her palm against it, and the stone *pulsed* beneath her touch, as if it had a heartbeat." | | 7 | "Beyond them, darkness yawned—a void that wasn’t empty, but *full*, pressing against the edges of Rory’s vision." | | 8 | "Tables groaned under the weight of platters piled high with fruits she didn’t recognize, meats that steamed in their own juices, desserts that glistened with sy…" | | 9 | "Servants—no, *slaves*—moved between the tables, their faces hollow, their movements jerky, as if they were being pulled by strings." | | 10 | "The slaves began to dance, their movements stiff, unnatural, as if they were being forced to perform." |
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| 53.57% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 7 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory muttered, voice low" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 7 | | fancyCount | 5 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Rory muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "Isolde murmured (murmur)" | | 2 | "Nyx hissed (hiss)" | | 3 | "she demanded (demand)" | | 4 | "Nyx warned (warn)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 28 | | tagDensity | 0.25 | | leniency | 0.5 | | rawRatio | 0.714 | | effectiveRatio | 0.357 | |