Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY7NBWNHS682MVYF9VKYGNM

Run Details

Duration:
47.6s
Cost:
$0.000240
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain lashed against the windows of The Raven’s Nest, blurring the neon green sign into a smeared emerald glow. Rory wiped condensation from a pint glass, the chill seeping into her fingertips. Another slow Tuesday. Silas nursed a whiskey at the far end of the bar, a silent sentinel amidst the gloom. His grey-streaked auburn hair seemed a shade darker than she remembered, and the limp in his left leg was more pronounced. Time, she thought, had a way of etching itself onto people. The bell above the door chimed, a jarring sound against the low thrum of jazz music. A figure shook rain from a tailored coat, a flash of crimson against the muted tones of the bar. Rory glanced up, expecting a regular. Instead, she saw Liam. Liam Hayes. Her breath hitched. It couldn't be. Years. A decade, maybe more. He hadn’t changed as much as she’d predicted. Still tall, still broad-shouldered, still with that infuriatingly charming smile playing on his lips. But the boyishness, the carefree spark she’d known, was gone. Replaced by a controlled intensity that felt… foreign. His eyes, once the warm brown of autumn leaves, now held a glacial stillness. He scanned the room, his gaze settling on her. A flicker of something – recognition? Surprise? – crossed his face before settling into a polite, almost impersonal expression. He made his way toward the bar, his movements possessing a quiet confidence she didn’t recall. "Rory?" he asked, his voice a low rumble, deeper than she remembered. She swallowed, setting the pint glass down. "Liam. Wow. I... I didn't think I’d ever see you again.” He chuckled, a short, dry sound. "Small world, isn’t it?" He signaled to Silas who simply nodded without a word before heading to the back. "Whiskey, neat." He turned back to Rory, his eyes assessing. "You look good." That was it. Just "You look good." No "It's been too long," no “How are you?” Just a detached observation. A professional assessment. “You too,” she managed, feeling absurdly flustered. Silas returned with Liam’s drink and set it before him. He shot Rory a look, his hazel eyes betraying a hint of curiosity. Liam ignored him, taking a slow sip of his whiskey. “What are you doing here?” Rory blurted out, the question sharper than she intended. He raised an eyebrow. “Enjoying a drink. Same as you, I presume.” “No, I mean… I haven’t seen you since... Cardiff University.” The memory of late-night study sessions fueled by cheap pizza and endless debates about literature felt like a faded photograph. A lifetime ago. A shadow crossed his face. "A long time," he agreed, his voice carefully neutral. "Life takes you in unexpected directions." “That’s an understatement,” Rory muttered, then instantly regretted it. He didn't react to her remark. "I'm in London on business," he said smoothly. "A conference. Finance. Boring stuff." Finance. Liam, who used to spend his days poring over Shakespeare, now dealt in… finance? The change was unsettling, like witnessing a butterfly emerge as a beetle. “Finance?” she repeated incredulously. “Since when are you a financier?” He swirled the whiskey in his glass. "Since I realized poetry doesn't pay the bills," he replied, a hint of sardonic humor in his tone. Rory laughed, a short, brittle sound. "Remember your grand plans? To be the next Dylan Thomas?" A muscle ticked in his jaw. "Ambition is a luxury for the young," he said, his voice low. "Reality has a way of imposing its own constraints.” "And what reality is that?" Rory challenged, leaning against the bar. She felt a strange compulsion to provoke him, to break through the polished exterior he’d constructed. He met her gaze, his eyes unyielding. “A reality where survival demands adaptability. Where romantic notions give way to pragmatic decisions.” The silence that followed was thick with unspoken words. Rory saw a flicker of something in his eyes – a suppressed sadness, perhaps? Or was it just the reflection of the rain-streaked windows? "So, you're a big shot now?" she asked, forcing a lightness into her voice. "Trading sonnets for spreadsheets?" He didn’t smile. "Something like that." He took another sip of his whiskey. "And you?" he asked, his gaze sweeping over her. "Last I heard you were... avoiding law school." She grimaced. "Yeah, well, life took some unexpected turns for me too." She gestured vaguely around the bar. "Delivery driver by day, resident barfly by night." "A far cry from barrister's daughter,” he observed, his voice tinged with something she couldn't quite decipher. “People change, Liam. Remember?” He finished his drink in a single gulp. "Some more than others, it seems." He placed the empty glass on the bar top, the clink echoing in the sudden quiet. Rory’s cheeks flushed. "What's that supposed to mean?" He shrugged, a gesture that seemed calculated rather than spontaneous. "Just an observation. You still have that fire in your eyes, Rory. A certain… defiance. It's... admirable.” Defiance. It had been a long time since anyone described her that way. Lately, she mostly felt tired. "And you have a carefully constructed facade," she countered, unable to resist. "Hiding what, Liam? What are you hiding?" His expression didn’t change. "Some things are better left buried,” he said, his voice low and final. The chime above the door announced another arrival, a young couple dripping with rain. Liam glanced towards them, a subtle shift in his demeanor. The businessman had returned. “I should go,” he said, straightening his coat. “The conference awaits.” He reached into his pocket and placed a crisp fifty-pound note on the bar. "Keep the change," he said, not looking at her. “Liam,” Rory said, her voice barely a whisper. “What happened to us?” He paused at the door, his hand on the handle. He turned back to her, his face unreadable. “We were young, Rory,” he said softly. “We made mistakes.” And with that, he was gone, swallowed by the rain and the London night. Rory watched him go, the weight of unspoken regrets settling heavy in her chest. Silas cleared his throat. “He's changed,” he observed, his hazel eyes filled with a knowing sadness. Rory nodded, staring at the spot where Liam had stood. "He has," she agreed, the word tasting like ash in her mouth. "He really has.” She picked up a damp cloth and started polishing the bar, the rhythmic motion a futile attempt to erase the ghost of a memory.
created_at"2026-02-20T19:15:41.087Z" 2/20/2026, 7:15:41 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
21.43% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags28
adverbTagCount5
adverbTags
0"He turned back [back]"
1"he said smoothly [smoothly]"
2"she repeated incredulously [incredulously]"
3"She gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
4"he said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences48
tagDensity0.583
leniency1
rawRatio0.179
effectiveRatio0.179
81.40% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1075
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count2
1
adverb"softly"
count1
2
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"softly"
2"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1075
totalAiIsms24
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"sentinel"
count1
2
word"amidst"
count1
3
word"gloom"
count1
4
word"etching"
count1
5
word"intensity"
count1
6
word"scanned"
count1
7
word"flicker"
count2
8
word"eyebrow"
count1
9
word"imposing"
count1
10
word"constructed"
count2
11
word"silence"
count1
12
word"unspoken"
count2
13
word"tinged"
count1
14
word"echoing"
count1
15
word"calculated"
count1
16
word"facade"
count1
17
word"whisper"
count1
18
word"unreadable"
count1
19
word"weight"
count1
20
word"rhythmic"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"sentinel"
2"amidst"
3"gloom"
4"etching"
5"intensity"
6"scanned"
7"flicker"
8"eyebrow"
9"imposing"
10"constructed"
11"silence"
12"unspoken"
13"tinged"
14"echoing"
15"calculated"
16"facade"
17"whisper"
18"unreadable"
19"weight"
20"rhythmic"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences97
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences97
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences116
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1073
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions19
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions31
wordCount808
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.61
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Tuesday1
Liam7
Hayes1
Silas4
Rory13
Finance1
Shakespeare1
London1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Liam"
3"Hayes"
4"Silas"
5"Rory"
6"Shakespeare"
places
0"Finance"
1"London"
globalScore0.696
windowScore0.667
36.36% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences66
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"felt like a faded photograph"
1"quite decipher"
2"seemed calculated rather than spontaneous"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1073
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences116
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs46
mean23.33
std14.88
cv0.638
sampleLengths
084
145
22
365
428
516
612
718
838
923
107
1133
1214
1312
1433
1520
169
1719
1827
1910
2025
2116
2227
2327
2421
2533
2618
2730
2826
2917
304
3130
328
3327
3418
3519
3617
3728
3811
3923
4012
4118
4210
4328
4416
4549
98.03% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences97
matches
0"was gone"
1"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs150
matches(empty)
68.97% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences116
ratio0.026
matches
0"A flicker of something – recognition?"
1"– crossed his face before settling into a polite, almost impersonal expression."
2"Rory saw a flicker of something in his eyes – a suppressed sadness, perhaps?"
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount810
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.0345679012345679
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.016049382716049384
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences116
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences116
mean9.25
std5.58
cv0.603
sampleLengths
019
113
23
317
421
511
616
719
86
94
102
113
123
131
144
158
1614
1710
187
191
2014
219
226
231
2412
2516
2612
277
2811
296
3019
3110
323
333
3417
353
367
3710
3813
3910
4014
414
428
4330
443
455
469
476
489
496
68.97% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.4396551724137931
totalSentences116
uniqueOpeners51
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences89
matches
0"Instead, she saw Liam."
1"Still tall, still broad-shouldered, still"
2"Just No no Just a"
ratio0.034
13.26% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount46
totalSentences89
matches
0"His grey-streaked auburn hair seemed"
1"Her breath hitched."
2"It couldn't be."
3"He hadn’t changed as much"
4"His eyes, once the warm"
5"He scanned the room, his"
6"He made his way toward"
7"he asked, his voice a"
8"She swallowed, setting the pint"
9"He chuckled, a short, dry"
10"He signaled to Silas who"
11"He turned back to Rory,"
12"she managed, feeling absurdly flustered"
13"He shot Rory a look,"
14"He raised an eyebrow."
15"he agreed, his voice carefully"
16"He didn't react to her"
17"he said smoothly"
18"she repeated incredulously"
19"He swirled the whiskey in"
ratio0.517
16.18% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount79
totalSentences89
matches
0"Rain lashed against the windows"
1"Rory wiped condensation from a"
2"Another slow Tuesday."
3"Silas nursed a whiskey at"
4"His grey-streaked auburn hair seemed"
5"The bell above the door"
6"A figure shook rain from"
7"Rory glanced up, expecting a"
8"Her breath hitched."
9"It couldn't be."
10"A decade, maybe more."
11"He hadn’t changed as much"
12"His eyes, once the warm"
13"He scanned the room, his"
14"A flicker of something –"
15"He made his way toward"
16"he asked, his voice a"
17"She swallowed, setting the pint"
18"He chuckled, a short, dry"
19"He signaled to Silas who"
ratio0.888
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences89
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences29
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"He shrugged, a gesture that seemed calculated rather than spontaneous."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags28
uselessAdditionCount11
matches
0"he asked, his voice a low rumble, deeper than she remembered"
1"He turned back, his eyes assessing"
2"he agreed, his voice carefully neutral"
3"he replied, a hint of sardonic humor in his tone"
4"he said, his voice low"
5"he asked, his gaze sweeping over her"
6"He placed, the clink echoing in the sudden quiet"
7"she countered, unable to resist"
8"he said, his voice low and final"
9"he said, not looking at her"
10"Rory said, her voice barely a whisper"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags19
fancyCount8
fancyTags
0"Rory blurted out (blurt out)"
1"he agreed (agree)"
2"Rory muttered (mutter)"
3"she repeated incredulously (repeat)"
4"Rory challenged (challenge)"
5"he observed (observe)"
6"he observed (observe)"
7"she agreed (agree)"
dialogueSentences48
tagDensity0.396
leniency0.792
rawRatio0.421
effectiveRatio0.333
72.3751%