Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY7NJHA7FFXRXZ1SEFXEP6M

Run Details

Duration:
2m 34s
Cost:
$0.013952
Provider:
Seed

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain lashed Harlow Quinn’s closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair as she bounded over a discarded kebab cart, its tattered awning flapping like a wounded bird in the gale. Her worn leather watch glinted under a flickering streetlamp, its steady ticking drowned out by the slap of her boots on slick tarmac and the gurgle of rainwater pouring into storm drains. The suspect—a lanky figure in a tattered trench coat, his hood pulled so low it obscured his eyes—ducked into a narrow alley off Camden High Street, his steps kicking up sprays of murky water that soaked the cuffs of Quinn’s uniform trousers. Quinn skidded to a halt at the alley mouth, her sharp jaw set in a line that hadn’t relaxed since she’d spotted the man leaving the Raven’s Nest’s hidden back room three days prior. She’d staked out the dimly lit Soho bar for weeks, its distinctive green neon sign burning into her memory, watching as cloaked figures slipped through its bookshelf-accessible secret room with satchels bulging with what she suspected were banned alchemical substances or enchanted goods lifted from the Veil Market. Her partner’s unsolved death hummed at the back of her throat, a quiet fury that sharpened her focus until every detail—the way the suspect’s coat snagged on a rusted fire escape, the faint jingle of a charm in his pocket—etched itself into her mind. “Think you can keep up, copper?” The words carried over the rain, muffled but sharp, as the suspect popped his head out from the alley’s midpoint. Quinn’s hand curled around the butt of her service weapon, but she didn’t draw—too many bystanders still lingered at this hour, their shadows huddling under shop awnings to avoid the downpour, their murmured conversations mixing with the distant wail of a police siren. She pushed off the alley wall, her military precision cutting through the chaos of the downpour, and followed the suspect’s deep footprints into the gloom, her boots squelching in puddles that reeked of rotting garbage and stagnant water. The alley narrowed to a crack between two brick buildings, where the rain pooled in fetid hollows that glinted with discarded bottle shards. Quinn’s uniform clung to her skin, her hair plastered to her forehead, but she didn’t slow. She rounded a corner and skidded to a stop: the suspect stood at a rusted metal door half-buried under a pile of rotting cardboard, its paint peeling to reveal a faint engraving of a raven—another tie to the Nest, she noted, filing the detail away. He tore off his hood, revealing a gaunt face crisscrossed with faint scarring that looked like it had been inflicted by claws, not a knife, and pulled a small, yellowed bone from his coat pocket. He pressed it into a recess in the door’s frame, and a low click echoed through the alley, loud enough to cut through the rain. Quinn flattened herself against a brick wall, her breath shallow, her eyes locked on the suspect. She’d heard whispers of the Veil Market for months—an underground supernatural black market that sold enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information, hidden in abandoned Tube stations and moving every full moon. The rain dripped off her chin onto her collar, and she glanced at her watch: midnight, the full moon peeking through the cloud cover for a split second, casting a silver streak over the door before vanishing again. That explained the market’s location—Camden’s abandoned Tube station, just as the rumors had said. A figure stepped out of the door, his short curly dark brown hair plastered to his olive skin by the rain. He ran a hand over his left forearm, where a scar snaked from wrist to elbow—a knife attack, Quinn noted, the scar’s jagged edge suggesting a desperate struggle. A Saint Christopher medallion glinted at his throat as he leaned against the doorframe, his warm brown eyes scanning the alley for threats. She recognized him from her files: Tomás Herrera, a former NHS paramedic who’d lost his license for administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients, now providing off-the-books care for the clique. “Your delay’s put us all at risk,” the figure said. Quinn tensed, her fingers tightening around her weapon. She’d tracked Herrera for weeks, linking him to the Raven’s Nest’s hidden back room, but she’d never caught him in the act of aiding the clique—until now. “Copper on my tail,” the suspect said, jerking a thumb toward the alley where Quinn hid. “She’s been on me since the Nest. Followed me through three blocks of rain, didn’t let up. Moves like a soldier—no slack in her steps.” Herrera’s warm brown eyes narrowed. He pushed off the doorframe, his boots squelching in the puddles, and glanced toward Quinn’s hiding spot. She held her breath, her military training keeping her still despite the rain seeping into her uniform’s collar and making her shiver. “Then you should’ve lost her,” Herrera said, his voice sharp. “The market can’t afford a copper sniffing around—not with the alchemical vials you’re carrying. Silas will have your head for this. He’s already on edge about the last shipment being seized by the Met.” Quinn’s ears pricked at Silas’s name—she’d linked him to the Raven’s Nest for months, suspecting he ran the clique’s clandestine operations, but she’d never had direct proof. She shifted her weight, her boots sinking into a puddle, and prayed the sound was drowned out by the rain. The suspect shoved the satchel into Herrera’s hands, the bag’s zip snagging on Herrera’s medallion. “Take these to the back stall—Mara’s waiting for them. She needs the vials for the werewolf pack’s moon ritual. I’ll lead her away, if I can. But she’s got a bead on me—can’t shake her.” Herrera hesitated, then nodded. He ran a hand over the satchel’s fabric, his fingers brushing the cool glass of the vials inside, and glanced toward Quinn’s hiding spot again. “You have a spare bone token?” The suspect tossed him a second small bone, its surface carved with faint runes Quinn didn’t recognize. “Only one. Don’t waste it. If you need to get out fast, use the emergency tunnel to the Camden High Street Tube—no guards there after midnight.” Herrera caught it, tucking it into his coat pocket, his fingers brushing the scar on his forearm. He disappeared into the door, which clicked shut behind him. The suspect adjusted his hood and started back down the alley, his steps loud and deliberate—too loud, Quinn realized, a deliberate ploy to draw her away from the door. Quinn waited until the suspect was ten feet away, then stepped out from behind the wall, her service weapon drawn, its barrel glinting under the faint streetlamp light. “Halt,” she said. The suspect froze, then spun around, his hands raised. “I didn’t do anything. Just taking a shortcut home.” Quinn stepped closer, her sharp jaw tight, her boots squelching in the puddles. “You left the Raven’s Nest with a satchel of contraband. I saw you. Where’d you take it?” The suspect laughed, a harsh, guttural sound that echoed through the alley. “You’ll never find it. Not unless you’re stupid enough to go into the market. You think a copper like you stands a chance against the things that sell there? Enchanted blades that can cut through steel, alchemical potions that can turn your blood to sludge—you’d be dead before you took three steps inside.” Quinn’s gaze flicked to the rusted door. Her partner’s death lingered in her mind, the unexplained circumstances that had haunted her for three years—DS Morris had vanished while investigating a similar black market, his body found three days later with no visible wounds, his service weapon still holstered. This market could hold the clues she’d been searching for. “Tell me about the market,” she said. The suspect shook his head. “You need a bone token to get in. No token, no entry. And even if you had one, the guards would tear you apart before you could ask a single question. They don’t like coppers. Not after the last one tried to raid the place.” Quinn’s eyes darted to the alley floor. A small, yellowed bone lay half-buried in a puddle—she’d missed it earlier, probably dropped by the suspect when he tossed the spare to Herrera. She knelt, her knees sinking into the wet concrete, and picked it up. The bone was smooth, carved with the same faint runes she’d seen on the suspect’s token, and it hummed faintly in her hand—a sensation she’d never felt before, a quiet vibration that made her skin prickle. The suspect’s face paled. “You didn’t—” Quinn stood, tucking the bone into her pocket, her fingers curling around it. She lowered her weapon, but kept her hand on it, her military precision keeping her posture rigid. “Where’s the market?” “It’s an abandoned Tube station beneath Camden,” the suspect said, his voice shaking. “Moves every full moon. You’ll be walking into a trap. The guards are waiting for anyone who doesn’t belong.” Quinn ignored him. She turned toward the rusted door, her steps steady, her mind racing. She’d spent three years searching for answers about her partner’s death, and this was her chance. But the market was unfamiliar, dangerous—she had no backup, no idea what awaited her inside. She paused at the doorframe, running her fingers over the recess where the suspect had pressed the bone, the metal cold under her wet skin. The suspect yelled, his voice desperate. “Don’t do it! They’ll tear you apart! You’ll end up like your partner—dead, with no one to explain why!” Quinn froze. The mention of her partner sent a jolt of fury through her, her sharp jaw tightening further. She glanced back at the suspect, then at the door. The rain continued to lash at her, and her worn leather watch ticked steadily, a reminder of the time she’d wasted searching for answers. She pulled out the bone token and held it against the recess. The suspect lunged at her, but she side-stepped, her military training kicking in, and slammed her elbow into his stomach. He crumpled to the ground, gasping for air. Quinn pressed the bone into the recess. A low click echoed through the alley. The door swung open, revealing a narrow stone staircase leading down into darkness. The faint scent of burnt herbs and iron drifted up from the depths, mixing with the rain’s dampness. She heard a voice from the depths—Herrera’s voice, sharp and urgent. “Who’s there?” Quinn paused, her hand hovering over her weapon. She stared at the staircase, the darkness swallowing its bottom step. She had to decide: step down into the Veil Market, into a world of supernatural danger she didn’t fully understand, or turn back and lose the best lead she’d had in years.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences21
tagDensity0.286
leniency0.571
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1826
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
56.19% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1826
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"charm"
count1
1
word"etched"
count1
2
word"gloom"
count1
3
word"echoed"
count3
4
word"scanning"
count1
5
word"clandestine"
count1
6
word"weight"
count1
7
word"glinting"
count1
8
word"flicked"
count1
9
word"racing"
count1
10
word"reminder"
count1
11
word"stomach"
count1
12
word"depths"
count2
highlights
0"charm"
1"etched"
2"gloom"
3"echoed"
4"scanning"
5"clandestine"
6"weight"
7"glinting"
8"flicked"
9"racing"
10"reminder"
11"stomach"
12"depths"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences78
matches
0"a jolt of fury"
87.91% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences78
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences93
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen54
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1794
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions59
wordCount1464
uniqueNames17
maxNameDensity1.57
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Herrera"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn23
Camden2
High1
Street1
Raven3
Nest4
Soho1
Veil3
Market3
Tube2
Saint1
Christopher1
Tomás1
Herrera10
Silas1
Morris1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Nest"
3"Market"
4"Saint"
5"Christopher"
6"Tomás"
7"Herrera"
8"Silas"
9"Morris"
places
0"Camden"
1"High"
2"Street"
3"Soho"
4"Veil"
globalScore0.714
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences68
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like it had been inflicted by claw"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1794
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences93
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs37
mean48.49
std34.65
cv0.715
sampleLengths
0102
1126
26
3101
4144
5100
6102
710
835
941
1044
1144
1247
1350
1435
1543
1656
1728
183
1918
2030
2165
2258
237
2450
2580
266
2733
2832
2971
3025
3165
3228
3314
3442
352
3651
91.77% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences78
matches
0"were banned"
1"been inflicted"
2"was drowned"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs255
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount17
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences15
totalSentences93
ratio0.161
matches
0"The suspect—a lanky figure in a tattered trench coat, his hood pulled so low it obscured his eyes—ducked into a narrow alley off Camden High Street, his steps kicking up sprays of murky water that soaked the cuffs of Quinn’s uniform trousers."
1"Her partner’s unsolved death hummed at the back of her throat, a quiet fury that sharpened her focus until every detail—the way the suspect’s coat snagged on a rusted fire escape, the faint jingle of a charm in his pocket—etched itself into her mind."
2"Quinn’s hand curled around the butt of her service weapon, but she didn’t draw—too many bystanders still lingered at this hour, their shadows huddling under shop awnings to avoid the downpour, their murmured conversations mixing with the distant wail of a police siren."
3"She rounded a corner and skidded to a stop: the suspect stood at a rusted metal door half-buried under a pile of rotting cardboard, its paint peeling to reveal a faint engraving of a raven—another tie to the Nest, she noted, filing the detail away."
4"She’d heard whispers of the Veil Market for months—an underground supernatural black market that sold enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information, hidden in abandoned Tube stations and moving every full moon."
5"That explained the market’s location—Camden’s abandoned Tube station, just as the rumors had said."
6"He ran a hand over his left forearm, where a scar snaked from wrist to elbow—a knife attack, Quinn noted, the scar’s jagged edge suggesting a desperate struggle."
7"She’d tracked Herrera for weeks, linking him to the Raven’s Nest’s hidden back room, but she’d never caught him in the act of aiding the clique—until now."
8"Quinn’s ears pricked at Silas’s name—she’d linked him to the Raven’s Nest for months, suspecting he ran the clique’s clandestine operations, but she’d never had direct proof."
9"The suspect adjusted his hood and started back down the alley, his steps loud and deliberate—too loud, Quinn realized, a deliberate ploy to draw her away from the door."
10"Her partner’s death lingered in her mind, the unexplained circumstances that had haunted her for three years—DS Morris had vanished while investigating a similar black market, his body found three days later with no visible wounds, his service weapon still holstered."
11"A small, yellowed bone lay half-buried in a puddle—she’d missed it earlier, probably dropped by the suspect when he tossed the spare to Herrera."
12"The bone was smooth, carved with the same faint runes she’d seen on the suspect’s token, and it hummed faintly in her hand—a sensation she’d never felt before, a quiet vibration that made her skin prickle."
13"But the market was unfamiliar, dangerous—she had no backup, no idea what awaited her inside."
14"She heard a voice from the depths—Herrera’s voice, sharp and urgent."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1489
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"bookshelf-accessible secret room"
1"underground supernatural black market"
adverbCount32
adverbRatio0.021490933512424447
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.0047011417058428475
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences93
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences93
mean19.29
std12.34
cv0.64
sampleLengths
028
132
242
334
448
544
66
720
843
938
1023
1116
1245
1335
1425
1516
1632
1738
1814
1921
2028
2123
2230
2310
248
2527
2616
2725
285
2917
3022
3110
3234
3327
3420
3515
3635
374
3825
396
4017
4126
4217
4310
4429
4528
463
479
489
4913
44.62% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.26881720430107525
totalSentences93
uniqueOpeners25
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences75
matches(empty)
ratio0
70.67% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount28
totalSentences75
matches
0"Her worn leather watch glinted"
1"She’d staked out the dimly"
2"Her partner’s unsolved death hummed"
3"She pushed off the alley"
4"She rounded a corner and"
5"He tore off his hood,"
6"He pressed it into a"
7"She’d heard whispers of the"
8"He ran a hand over"
9"She recognized him from her"
10"She’d tracked Herrera for weeks,"
11"He pushed off the doorframe,"
12"She held her breath, her"
13"She shifted her weight, her"
14"He ran a hand over"
15"He disappeared into the door,"
16"Her partner’s death lingered in"
17"She knelt, her knees sinking"
18"She lowered her weapon, but"
19"She turned toward the rusted"
ratio0.373
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount74
totalSentences75
matches
0"The rain lashed Harlow Quinn’s"
1"Her worn leather watch glinted"
2"The suspect—a lanky figure in"
3"Quinn skidded to a halt"
4"She’d staked out the dimly"
5"Her partner’s unsolved death hummed"
6"The words carried over the"
7"Quinn’s hand curled around the"
8"She pushed off the alley"
9"The alley narrowed to a"
10"Quinn’s uniform clung to her"
11"She rounded a corner and"
12"He tore off his hood,"
13"He pressed it into a"
14"Quinn flattened herself against a"
15"She’d heard whispers of the"
16"The rain dripped off her"
17"That explained the market’s location—Camden’s"
18"A figure stepped out of"
19"He ran a hand over"
ratio0.987
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences75
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences57
technicalSentenceCount13
matches
0"The suspect—a lanky figure in a tattered trench coat, his hood pulled so low it obscured his eyes—ducked into a narrow alley off Camden High Street, his steps k…"
1"She’d staked out the dimly lit Soho bar for weeks, its distinctive green neon sign burning into her memory, watching as cloaked figures slipped through its book…"
2"Her partner’s unsolved death hummed at the back of her throat, a quiet fury that sharpened her focus until every detail—the way the suspect’s coat snagged on a …"
3"Quinn’s hand curled around the butt of her service weapon, but she didn’t draw—too many bystanders still lingered at this hour, their shadows huddling under sho…"
4"She pushed off the alley wall, her military precision cutting through the chaos of the downpour, and followed the suspect’s deep footprints into the gloom, her …"
5"She rounded a corner and skidded to a stop: the suspect stood at a rusted metal door half-buried under a pile of rotting cardboard, its paint peeling to reveal …"
6"He tore off his hood, revealing a gaunt face crisscrossed with faint scarring that looked like it had been inflicted by claws, not a knife, and pulled a small, …"
7"She’d heard whispers of the Veil Market for months—an underground supernatural black market that sold enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and informa…"
8"He pushed off the doorframe, his boots squelching in the puddles, and glanced toward Quinn’s hiding spot."
9"He ran a hand over the satchel’s fabric, his fingers brushing the cool glass of the vials inside, and glanced toward Quinn’s hiding spot again."
10"Herrera caught it, tucking it into his coat pocket, his fingers brushing the scar on his forearm."
11"Her partner’s death lingered in her mind, the unexplained circumstances that had haunted her for three years—DS Morris had vanished while investigating a simila…"
12"The bone was smooth, carved with the same faint runes she’d seen on the suspect’s token, and it hummed faintly in her hand—a sensation she’d never felt before, …"
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Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
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uselessAdditionCount2
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0"Herrera said, his voice sharp"
1"the suspect said, his voice shaking"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
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fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences21
tagDensity0.286
leniency0.571
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72.9720%