"*A pocket between Earth and the other realm.* She’d Googled the Grove—no results, just a few blurry photos from 2012, captioned *“abandoned grove, don’t go.”*"
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"Aurora paused, hand drifting to the utility knife in her bag—Evan’s birthday present, now a relic—and gripped it."
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"Wildflowers bloomed in neon hues—purple, gold, a blue that wasn’t sky—but they didn’t move, not even when a breeze (there *should* be no breeze) rippled them."
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"The flowers were closer now—she could see their petals, soft as silk, but the scent hit her first, cloying."
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"She fumbled with her phone, turned the screen on—no signal, of course, but the light revealed something odd: her reflection in the glass wasn’t hers."
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"Last week, I heard a fox—*"
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"She couldn’t see the path, couldn’t distinguish left from right, but she knew the stones were behind her—she could feel them, a pressure in her chest, like a hand closing around her heart."
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"A stone altar rose at its center, smooth and weathered, carved with runes she couldn’t read but recognized—*old magic*, the codex had said, *dangerous magic*."
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"The voice was beside her now, inches away, and she could feel its breath—cold, like a corpse’s."
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"Her eyes were bright blue—*so* bright, like the Icelandic glaciers."
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"“You ran from Evan. From Cardiff. From yourself. But the Grove… it doesn’t let you run. It *remembers* every lie, every fear. And it *hungers* for the parts you think you’ve buried.” She raised a hand, and the portal on the altar flared, blackness spilling out—* voices*, indistinct, wailing."
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"“It’s time to stop hiding, Rory,” the woman said, and her voice was no longer a voice—it was a chorus, a thousand voices screaming in her head."
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"The pendant burned, but it didn’t hurt anymore—just *urged* her forward."
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"Aurora stared at it, at the crimson gemstone, and saw a flash—*Evan, laughing, the pipe in his hand*, *Eva, screaming, the portal behind her*, *the woman with her wrist, the scar*, *the Grove, pulsing, hungry*."
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"Just the *thump* of her boots on gravel and the distant hoot of a lost owl, which cut off mid-call."
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"Through the gap between two trunks, she spied the Grove: a clearing, its air shimmering, as if the grass and ferns were underwater."
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"She was tall, taller than Aurora, with straight black hair that reached her hips."
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"The woman stepped closer, her scar oozing more blood, and Aurora saw her fingers stretching, growing longer, nails turning to claws."
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"She could hear the van, its engine sputtering to life, and she ran toward it, the stones fading behind her, the voice fading, too, into a low, distant hum."