Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY7NKVD1KN3XBR3GJE0NE0D

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Duration:
19.9s
Cost:
$0.000180
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain hammered the corrugated iron roof of the abandoned Tube station, a relentless percussion against the damp concrete. Steam snaked from leaky pipes, painting ghostly patterns on the walls. Detective Harlow Quinn adjusted her worn leather watch, the rhythmic tick a small anchor in the unsettling quiet. The air smelled of mildew, ozone, and something acrid – burnt sugar, maybe, or something far older. “Grim place,” Eva Kowalski muttered, adjusting her round glasses as she scanned the scene. Her red curls, usually a riot of color, were plastered to her forehead. She held a leather satchel close, its contents – stacks of aged parchment and a scattering of colored pencils – offering little warmth. The victim lay sprawled on a patch of stained velvet, illuminated by the sickly green glow of a single, flickering gas lamp. A man in his late fifties, impeccably dressed in a charcoal grey suit that looked absurdly out of place, had been meticulously arranged – a grotesque tableau. His fingers were splayed, a single, obsidian shard clutched in his hand. “Cause of death?” Quinn asked, her voice flat, devoid of inflection. “Internal hemorrhaging,” Sergeant Davies replied, his face pale in the lamplight. “Looks like a puncture wound, but the shard… it’s not a weapon. It’s… resonant.” He hesitated, clearly uncomfortable. “The coroner’s running tests, but initial readings suggest a localized temporal distortion.” Quinn knelt, ignoring Davies’s raised eyebrows. She examined the velvet, the way it pooled around the body, the faint shimmer in the air above it. “Temporal distortion? Davies, we’re dealing with a black market for enchanted trinkets, not a physics experiment.” “I’m just relaying the preliminary report, Detective,” Davies said, shifting his weight. “The Veil Market isn’t exactly known for its conventional methods.” The Veil Market. A place whispered about in hushed tones amongst certain circles of the Metropolitan Police – a subterranean bazaar dealing in the impossible. It moved locations every full moon, requiring a bone token as entry and fiercely guarded by entities best left undisturbed. Quinn had investigated it once, three years ago, after DS Morris vanished. The case had ended with nothing but a lingering sense of dread and a firm instruction to leave the supernatural alone. “The arrangement is too precise,” she said, carefully pulling a small, tarnished brass compass from her coat pocket. It was a Veil Compass, a tool she’d acquired during her last visit. The needle, a slender sliver of blackened silver, spun wildly, finally settling with a hesitant click, pointing directly at the shard in the dead man’s hand. “The killer took care to stage this, didn’t he? He wanted us to think it was a random murder, a robbery gone wrong.” Eva stepped closer, her freckled face etched with concern. “The sigils on the compass… they’re ancient. Pre-Roman. They’re designed to detect fluctuations in reality, specifically, the echoes of alternate timelines.” “Echoes,” Quinn repeated, her brown eyes narrowed. “So, the killer wasn’t just killing someone; he was manipulating time, or at least leaving a trace of it.” Davies swallowed hard. “You think… he brought him here?” Quinn stood, her military precision evident in the way she surveyed the room. The station was a labyrinth of tunnels and forgotten platforms, choked with debris and the ghosts of hurried commuters. "Not 'here'. Somewhere *else*. The shard isn't just a murder weapon, it's a key." She pulled out a small notebook, its pages filled with cramped handwriting and sketches, a testament to her relentless pursuit of the bizarre. "The victim’s name is Alistair Finch. Antiquarian. Specializes in rare maps and… temporal anomalies. He was obsessed with the Veil Market, documenting its movements, its clientele." “And he was killed for that knowledge,” Eva finished, her voice barely a whisper. "He discovered something the Market didn’t want revealed." Quinn ignored her, her gaze fixed on a faint discoloration on the wall behind the body. It resembled dried blood, but the texture was subtly wrong – smoother, almost gelatinous. "This isn’t conventional blood,” she stated, reaching for a small vial of luminol. The chemical reaction revealed a network of shimmering, iridescent lines spreading across the wall. “Chronal residue. The killer used a temporal displacement field to move Finch, to trap him here. Brief, precise, lethal.” “A Shade artisan,” Eva supplied, her fingers automatically sketching in her satchel. “They’re the primary craftspeople of the Veil Market. Highly skilled, incredibly dangerous.” “Right,” Quinn said, her voice sharpening. “Shadows. They deal in the fracturing of reality.” She turned to face Davies, her expression unyielding. “Sergeant, I need you to secure the perimeter. Keep an eye out for anything that shouldn't be here – unusual energy signatures, temporal distortions, or, frankly, anything that looks like it's trying to fold in on itself.” He nodded, visibly relieved to have a concrete order. “Yes, Detective.” Quinn turned back to the wall, examining the chronal residue more closely. The patterns resembled a complex map, a fractured reflection of a timeline. “This isn’t random. This is a route.” She carefully traced the shimmering lines with her finger, her mind racing. “The Veil Compass… it’s pointing to a convergence point. A place where timelines overlap.” Eva joined her, studying the complex pattern. “It’s like… a bookmark. A place where a moment in time is caught, preserved.” “And someone wanted to retrieve it,” Quinn said grimly. "Finch was researching a specific event—a known disruption in 1888 London. The Jack the Ripper murders. The Veil Market caters to collectors of temporal anomalies.” She paused, her gaze hardening. “Someone wants to rewrite history.” A sudden tremor ran through the station, rattling the pipes and sending dust raining down from the ceiling. The gas lamp flickered violently, casting long, dancing shadows. The Veil Compass spun wildly again, the needle now vibrating with frenetic energy, pulling towards another point on the wall. “The market is shifting,” Eva said, her voice laced with fear. “It’s reacting to our presence.” Quinn ignored her, focusing on the newly revealed pattern – a faint outline of a location, almost invisible against the damp concrete. “This… this is a maintenance shaft. Not one used in the original construction. Something’s been added.” She pulled out a small, silver scalpel from her belt and carefully sliced a line into the chronal residue. A ripple spread outwards, revealing a section of the wall beneath – a meticulously crafted doorway, masked by a clever illusion. Beyond the doorway, a narrow passage descended into darkness, the air within noticeably colder, charged with an almost palpable energy. “The Veil shifts its routes,” Eva said, pulling her satchel tighter. “It doesn’t want to be found.” Quinn didn't reply. She moved towards the doorway, her hand instinctively reaching for her watch. She adjusted the strap, a subtle reminder of her partner, DS Morris, and the case that had haunted her for three years. A case that had taught her to trust her instincts, to see beyond the surface, and to confront the darkness lurking beneath the veneer of reality. “Davies,” she called, her voice echoing slightly in the confined space. “Secure the area. I’m going in.” Before Davies could respond, Quinn stepped through the doorway and into the darkness, the rain outside momentarily forgotten as she descended into the heart of the Veil Market’s temporal secrets. The needle on her Veil Compass continued its frantic spin, a desperate plea towards a fractured past and a potentially catastrophic future. The air grew thick with the scent of ozone and something darker – the metallic tang of blood, not from the present, but from countless lifetimes.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
97.44% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"He hesitated clearly [clearly]"
1"Quinn said grimly [grimly]"
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.462
leniency0.923
rawRatio0.111
effectiveRatio0.103
83.99% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1249
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count3
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
3.92% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1249
totalAiIsms24
found
0
word"rhythmic"
count1
1
word"scanned"
count1
2
word"warmth"
count1
3
word"velvet"
count2
4
word"weight"
count1
5
word"sense of"
count1
6
word"etched"
count1
7
word"echoes"
count2
8
word"testament"
count1
9
word"whisper"
count1
10
word"complex"
count2
11
word"fractured"
count2
12
word"traced"
count1
13
word"racing"
count1
14
word"flickered"
count1
15
word"dancing"
count1
16
word"charged"
count1
17
word"palpable"
count1
18
word"reminder"
count1
19
word"echoing"
count1
highlights
0"rhythmic"
1"scanned"
2"warmth"
3"velvet"
4"weight"
5"sense of"
6"etched"
7"echoes"
8"testament"
9"whisper"
10"complex"
11"fractured"
12"traced"
13"racing"
14"flickered"
15"dancing"
16"charged"
17"palpable"
18"reminder"
19"echoing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences62
matches
0"d with fear"
96.77% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences62
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences83
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1258
ratio0.001
matches
0"else"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions44
wordCount862
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity1.51
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Tube1
Harlow1
Quinn13
Kowalski1
Sergeant1
Davies6
Veil5
Market2
Metropolitan1
Police1
Morris2
Compass3
Eva7
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Kowalski"
3"Sergeant"
4"Davies"
5"Market"
6"Morris"
7"Compass"
8"Eva"
places(empty)
globalScore0.746
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences54
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"He nodded, visibly relieved to have a"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.795
wordCount1258
matches
0"not from the present, but from countless lifetimes"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences83
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs32
mean39.31
std20.45
cv0.52
sampleLengths
064
150
261
311
441
541
622
778
880
930
1026
119
1246
1349
1422
1576
1624
1759
1811
1957
2021
2144
2247
2316
2438
2540
2620
2717
2863
2917
3052
3126
93.94% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences62
matches
0"were plastered"
1"were splayed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs135
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences83
ratio0.108
matches
0"The air smelled of mildew, ozone, and something acrid – burnt sugar, maybe, or something far older."
1"She held a leather satchel close, its contents – stacks of aged parchment and a scattering of colored pencils – offering little warmth."
2"A man in his late fifties, impeccably dressed in a charcoal grey suit that looked absurdly out of place, had been meticulously arranged – a grotesque tableau."
3"A place whispered about in hushed tones amongst certain circles of the Metropolitan Police – a subterranean bazaar dealing in the impossible."
4"“So, the killer wasn’t just killing someone; he was manipulating time, or at least leaving a trace of it.”"
5"It resembled dried blood, but the texture was subtly wrong – smoother, almost gelatinous."
6"Quinn ignored her, focusing on the newly revealed pattern – a faint outline of a location, almost invisible against the damp concrete."
7"A ripple spread outwards, revealing a section of the wall beneath – a meticulously crafted doorway, masked by a clever illusion."
8"The air grew thick with the scent of ozone and something darker – the metallic tang of blood, not from the present, but from countless lifetimes."
82.35% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount853
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount39
adverbRatio0.04572098475967175
lyAdverbCount30
lyAdverbRatio0.035169988276670575
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences83
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences83
mean15.16
std7.01
cv0.463
sampleLengths
018
111
218
317
414
513
623
722
827
912
1011
1111
1218
1312
146
1519
1616
1712
1810
193
2022
2120
2212
2321
2418
2513
2626
2723
289
2921
307
3119
323
336
3413
3519
3614
3723
3826
3914
408
4116
4214
4313
4414
4519
4612
4712
486
4916
63.86% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.43373493975903615
totalSentences83
uniqueOpeners36
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences62
matches(empty)
ratio0
97.42% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount19
totalSentences62
matches
0"Her red curls, usually a"
1"She held a leather satchel"
2"His fingers were splayed, a"
3"He hesitated, clearly uncomfortable"
4"She examined the velvet, the"
5"It moved locations every full"
6"she said, carefully pulling a"
7"It was a Veil Compass,"
8"She pulled out a small"
9"It resembled dried blood, but"
10"she stated, reaching for a"
11"She turned to face Davies,"
12"He nodded, visibly relieved to"
13"She carefully traced the shimmering"
14"She paused, her gaze hardening"
15"She pulled out a small,"
16"She moved towards the doorway,"
17"She adjusted the strap, a"
18"she called, her voice echoing"
ratio0.306
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount59
totalSentences62
matches
0"Steam snaked from leaky pipes,"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn adjusted her"
2"The air smelled of mildew,"
3"Eva Kowalski muttered, adjusting her"
4"Her red curls, usually a"
5"She held a leather satchel"
6"The victim lay sprawled on"
7"A man in his late"
8"His fingers were splayed, a"
9"Quinn asked, her voice flat,"
10"Sergeant Davies replied, his face"
11"He hesitated, clearly uncomfortable"
12"Quinn knelt, ignoring Davies’s raised"
13"She examined the velvet, the"
14"Davies said, shifting his weight"
15"The Veil Market."
16"A place whispered about in"
17"It moved locations every full"
18"Quinn had investigated it once,"
19"The case had ended with"
ratio0.952
80.65% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences62
matches
0"Before Davies could respond, Quinn"
ratio0.016
83.33% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences36
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"A man in his late fifties, impeccably dressed in a charcoal grey suit that looked absurdly out of place, had been meticulously arranged – a grotesque tableau."
1"She adjusted the strap, a subtle reminder of her partner, DS Morris, and the case that had haunted her for three years."
2"A case that had taught her to trust her instincts, to see beyond the surface, and to confront the darkness lurking beneath the veneer of reality."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount8
matches
0"Quinn asked, her voice flat, devoid of inflection"
1"Sergeant Davies replied, his face pale in the lamplight"
2"Eva finished, her voice barely a whisper"
3"Eva supplied, her fingers automatically sketching in her satchel"
4"Quinn said, her voice sharpening"
5"She turned, her expression unyielding"
6"She paused, her gaze hardening"
7"she called, her voice echoing slightly in the confined space"
73.08% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags12
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Eva Kowalski muttered (mutter)"
1"Quinn repeated (repeat)"
2"she stated (state)"
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.308
leniency0.615
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.154
77.4471%