"She’d expected Hel to be a place of fire and screaming, not this—this *opulence*."
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"The grove’s time was different here—an hour outside could be days inside, Isolde had warned."
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"She reached out, her fingers hovering just above a flaky, buttery tart—"
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"The air around them rippled, like heat off pavement, and for a heartbeat, she saw *them*—the figures in the distance, their forms blurred and indistinct, their mouths moving in silent screams."
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"Inside, nestled on velvet, was a gemstone—deep crimson, pulsing with the same faint warmth as Aurora’s pendant."
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"The first course appeared before them—a platter of roasted peaches, their flesh glistening, their scent intoxicating."
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"She was too busy focusing on the next course—a towering loaf of bread, its crust golden and crisp, its interior soft and buttery."
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"She took another bite, and another, her body craving more, more, more—"
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"Aurora Carter stepped forward, her boots sinking slightly into the plush, golden carpet of moss that stretched beneath her."
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"Towering fruit trees bent under the weight of grapes the size of melons, their skins shimmering like polished amber."
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"The air was thick with the scent of roasted meats, spiced wines, and something sweeter, something that made her stomach clench with hunger despite the unease co…"
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"The Half-Fae turned, her lips curling into something that wasn’t quite a smile."
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"Aurora glanced back at Nyx, who tilted their head, the faintest shadow of a smirk playing across their features."
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"His eyes gleamed like polished obsidian, his lips curled in a smile that didn’t reach his eyes."
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"She looked at Isolde, who met her gaze with quiet understanding."
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"The souls in the distance were moving now, their forms coalescing, their hunger making them bolder."
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"Dozens of souls had gathered around him, their forms shifting, their hunger making them more solid, more *real*."
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"They reached for her, their fingers brushing against her skin, their whispers filling her ears."
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"Aurora moved on instinct, the Fae blade flashing as she cut through the first attacker, its form dissolving into smoke."
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"The souls were relentless, their hunger driving them, their forms flickering between solid and shadow."
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"Nyx fought beside her, their shadow shifting, their form flickering like a flame in the wind."
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"The feast was still there, the food still abundant, but the souls were thinning, their forms fading like smoke in the wind."
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"She looked at Isolde, who met her gaze with quiet understanding."
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"The feast faded behind them, the souls thinning, their forms dissolving into the shadows."