Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY7NVDC6EY1X77Q2DCTRN5V

Run Details

Duration:
11.4s
Cost:
$0.000447
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door creaked open before Rory could fully turn the key, the hinges groaning like an old man’s bones. She froze, her fingers still wrapped around the brass handle, the cold metal biting into her palm. The flat’s dim glow spilled onto the pavement, illuminating the figure standing there—tall, broad-shouldered, his platinum hair catching the streetlamp’s sickly yellow light. Lucien. His cane tapped once against the pavement, the ivory handle gleaming. He didn’t smile. Didn’t move. Just stood there, dressed in that damn tailored charcoal suit like he owned the night, like he hadn’t just ruined her carefully constructed life. Rory exhaled through her nose, sharp and controlled. “What the hell are you doing here?” His amber eye flickered—just for a second—before he tilted his head, the black one catching the light. “I came to see you.” She stepped back, pressing her shoulder against the doorframe. “You’ve got the wrong flat.” “No.” His voice was smooth, like whiskey poured over ice. “This is yours.” Ptolemy chose that moment to slink out from behind the curtain, tail flicking, eyes narrow. He hissed, low and warning, before darting past Rory’s legs and straight for Lucien’s boots. The demon didn’t flinch. Just crouched slightly, letting the cat sniff his cuff before the tabby yowled and bolted back inside. Rory’s fingers twitched. “You’re not welcome.” Lucien’s lips quirked, just once. “I never asked.” She swallowed. The air between them was thick, charged. She could still remember the way he’d tasted—bitter and sweet, like stolen wine and something darker. Something she’d tried to forget. “You left,” she said, voice steadier than she felt. “No warning. No note. Just gone.” His gaze dropped to her wrist, where the scar from her childhood accident peeked out from beneath her sleeve. She pulled her arm back instinctively, as if he could see the past written there. “You always were good at disappearing,” she added, sharper this time. Lucien’s jaw tightened. “You’re the one who walked out.” The words hit like a punch to the gut. She hadn’t meant to say it. Hadn’t meant to let the old anger slip out. “That’s not how it happened,” she snapped. “Isn’t it?” His voice dropped, rougher now. “You left me a message. Said you couldn’t do this anymore. Said I was too much.” Rory’s chest burned. “You were *everything*.” Silence. The kind that hummed. Lucien exhaled, slow and controlled. “And now?” She looked away, at the flickering neon sign of the curry house below, at the way the rain had started to fall in fine, cold sheets. “I don’t know.” His hand shot out, gripping her wrist before she could pull away. His touch was warm, almost too warm, like he could burn her from the inside out. “You always did have a talent for saying the wrong thing at the right moment.” Rory’s breath hitched. She should’ve pulled away. Should’ve told him to get lost. But her fingers curled around his wrist instead, her pulse hammering in her throat. “You’re bleeding,” she murmured, tilting her head to look at the thin red line on his palm. It had come from her—from the way she’d gripped the doorframe when she’d first seen him. Lucien’s thumb brushed over the cut, his touch light. “It’s nothing.” “It’s not nothing.” She yanked her hand back, but not before she saw the way his black eye darkened, just for a second. “You’re always bleeding.” His lips twitched. “And you’re always bleeding too, *ma chérie*.” The nickname hit her like a blade. She’d forgotten how he said it—like it was a secret, like it was just for her. Rory stepped forward, her voice dropping to a whisper. “Don’t call me that.” Lucien’s gaze locked onto hers, unflinching. “Why not?” “Because it’s not true.” A muscle twitched in his jaw. “Isn’t it?” She opened her mouth, then closed it. The words stuck in her throat. Because it *had* been true once. Before everything fell apart. Before *he* fell apart. Lucien’s hand lifted, brushing a strand of hair from her face. His fingers lingered, warm against her skin. “You’re still here,” he murmured. “That’s something.” Rory’s breath hitched. She should’ve pushed him away. Should’ve told him to leave. But her body didn’t listen to her mind. “Why?” she whispered. His thumb traced the line of her jaw, slow and deliberate. “Because you’re the only one who ever made me feel like I wasn’t alone.” The words hung between them, heavy and suffocating. Rory’s heart pounded in her chest, loud enough to drown out everything else. “You’re lying,” she said, but her voice was barely a breath. Lucien’s lips curved, just slightly. “Am I?” She should’ve walked away. Should’ve told him to go to hell. But she didn’t. Instead, she reached up and pressed her palm against his chest, feeling the steady beat of his heart beneath his suit. “Prove it.” His eyes darkened, the amber one burning into hers. “How?” She didn’t answer. Didn’t need to. Lucien’s hand cupped the back of her neck, his thumb brushing over her pulse point. His mouth crashed down onto hers, hard and demanding, like he’d been starving for this for years. Rory melted into him, her fingers tangling in his hair, pulling him closer. The taste of him—smoky and sweet—filled her mouth, her body aching for him in a way she hadn’t let herself remember. When he finally pulled back, his forehead rested against hers, his breath ragged. “You’re still here,” he repeated, his voice rough. Rory’s lips curved against his. “I’m always here.” Lucien’s hand slid down her back, pulling her flush against him. “Good.” The rain fell harder now, but neither of them noticed. Neither of them cared. Rory’s fingers traced the line of his jaw, memorizing the sharp angles, the way his skin felt beneath her touch. “You’re bleeding again.” Lucien’s lips quirked. “I told you. It’s nothing.” She tilted her head, studying the thin line of red on his palm. “It’s not nothing.” His hand lifted, brushing a strand of hair from her face. “It’s just a scratch.” Rory’s gaze locked onto his. “It’s not.” Lucien’s eyes darkened, the amber one burning into hers. “Then what is it?” She didn’t answer. Didn’t need to. Lucien’s hand slid down her back, pulling her closer. His mouth crashed down onto hers, hard and demanding, like he’d been starving for this for years. Rory melted into him, her fingers tangling in his hair, pulling him closer. The taste of him—smoky and sweet—filled her mouth, her body aching for him in a way she hadn’t let herself remember. When he finally pulled back, his forehead rested against hers, his breath ragged. “You’re still here,” he repeated, his voice rough. Rory’s lips curved against his. “I’m always here.” Lucien’s hand slid down her back, pulling her flush against him. “Good.” The rain fell harder now, but neither of them noticed. Neither of them cared. Rory’s fingers traced the line of his jaw, memorizing the sharp angles, the way his skin felt beneath her touch. “You’re bleeding again.” Lucien’s lips quirked. “I told you. It’s nothing.” She tilted her head, studying the thin line of red on his palm. “It’s not nothing.” His hand lifted, brushing a strand of hair from her face. “It’s just a scratch.” Rory’s gaze locked onto his. “It’s not.” Lucien’s eyes darkened, the amber one burning into hers. “Then what is it?” She didn’t answer. Didn’t need to. His mouth crashed down onto hers again, deeper this time, like he was trying to drown in her. Rory wrapped her arms around his neck, pulling him closer, her body arching into his. When he finally pulled back, his forehead rested against hers, his breath hot against her lips. “You’re still here,” he murmured. Rory’s fingers tightened in his hair. “I’m always here.” Lucien’s hand slid down her back, pulling her closer still. “Good.” The door creaked behind them, the sound sharp and jarring. Rory froze, her body going rigid. Lucien’s head snapped up, his gaze locking onto the door. “What the hell—?” A shadow moved in the hallway. A figure stepped into the dim light, silhouetted against the glow of the streetlamp. Rory’s breath caught in her throat. Lucien’s hand tightened around her wrist, his grip bruising. “Rory.” She didn’t look at him. Didn’t move. The figure stepped forward, the light catching the glint of a blade in their hand. Rory’s blood turned to ice.
created_at"2026-02-20T19:15:56.984Z" 2/20/2026, 7:15:56 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences58
tagDensity0.224
leniency0.448
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
89.41% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1416
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count2
highlights
0"carefully"
1"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
57.63% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1416
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"gleaming"
count1
1
word"constructed"
count1
2
word"flickered"
count1
3
word"charged"
count1
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"pulse"
count2
6
word"whisper"
count1
7
word"traced"
count3
8
word"glint"
count1
highlights
0"gleaming"
1"constructed"
2"flickered"
3"charged"
4"silence"
5"pulse"
6"whisper"
7"traced"
8"glint"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"heart pounded in chest"
count1
highlights
0"heart pounded in her chest"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences131
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences131
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
1"started to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences176
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen26
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans4
markdownWords5
totalWords1406
ratio0.004
matches
0"everything"
1"ma chérie"
2"had"
3"he"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions26
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
57.56% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions51
wordCount1190
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity1.85
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory22
Ptolemy1
Lucien20
Didn5
Should3
persons
0"Rory"
1"Ptolemy"
2"Lucien"
3"Should"
places(empty)
globalScore0.576
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences82
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1406
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences176
matches
0"chose that moment"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs84
mean16.74
std11.12
cv0.664
sampleLengths
059
11
240
315
422
514
613
751
86
98
1030
1115
1234
1311
149
1524
167
1723
186
195
207
2129
2243
2327
2433
2511
2626
2710
2823
2913
308
314
328
3323
344
3525
3621
373
3825
3921
4011
417
4214
4323
4410
456
4632
4734
4821
498
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences131
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs233
matches
0"was trying"
29.22% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences176
ratio0.04
matches
0"The flat’s dim glow spilled onto the pavement, illuminating the figure standing there—tall, broad-shouldered, his platinum hair catching the streetlamp’s sickly yellow light."
1"His amber eye flickered—just for a second—before he tilted his head, the black one catching the light."
2"She could still remember the way he’d tasted—bitter and sweet, like stolen wine and something darker."
3"It had come from her—from the way she’d gripped the doorframe when she’d first seen him."
4"She’d forgotten how he said it—like it was a secret, like it was just for her."
5"The taste of him—smoky and sweet—filled her mouth, her body aching for him in a way she hadn’t let herself remember."
6"The taste of him—smoky and sweet—filled her mouth, her body aching for him in a way she hadn’t let herself remember."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1200
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount46
adverbRatio0.03833333333333333
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.008333333333333333
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences176
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences176
mean7.99
std5.73
cv0.718
sampleLengths
019
117
223
31
411
53
62
724
88
97
1017
115
129
135
1410
153
1615
1715
184
1917
203
213
225
233
242
257
2616
275
289
296
3019
3115
3211
333
346
359
366
379
387
397
4016
413
423
431
444
455
462
4726
483
4912
47.73% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.20454545454545456
totalSentences176
uniqueOpeners36
81.97% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences122
matches
0"Just stood there, dressed in"
1"Just crouched slightly, letting the"
2"Instead, she reached up and"
ratio0.025
79.02% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount43
totalSentences122
matches
0"She froze, her fingers still"
1"His cane tapped once against"
2"He didn’t smile."
3"His amber eye flickered—just for"
4"She stepped back, pressing her"
5"His voice was smooth, like"
6"He hissed, low and warning,"
7"She could still remember the"
8"she said, voice steadier than"
9"His gaze dropped to her"
10"She pulled her arm back"
11"she added, sharper this time"
12"She hadn’t meant to say"
13"His voice dropped, rougher now"
14"She looked away, at the"
15"His hand shot out, gripping"
16"His touch was warm, almost"
17"She should’ve pulled away."
18"she murmured, tilting her head"
19"It had come from her—from"
ratio0.352
37.87% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount103
totalSentences122
matches
0"The door creaked open before"
1"She froze, her fingers still"
2"The flat’s dim glow spilled"
3"His cane tapped once against"
4"He didn’t smile."
5"Rory exhaled through her nose,"
6"His amber eye flickered—just for"
7"She stepped back, pressing her"
8"His voice was smooth, like"
9"Ptolemy chose that moment to"
10"He hissed, low and warning,"
11"The demon didn’t flinch."
12"Rory’s fingers twitched."
13"Lucien’s lips quirked, just once."
14"The air between them was"
15"She could still remember the"
16"Something she’d tried to forget."
17"she said, voice steadier than"
18"His gaze dropped to her"
19"She pulled her arm back"
ratio0.844
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences122
matches
0"Because it *had* been true"
1"Before everything fell apart."
2"Before *he* fell apart."
ratio0.025
84.55% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences49
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"She pulled her arm back instinctively, as if he could see the past written there."
1"Rory melted into him, her fingers tangling in his hair, pulling him closer."
2"Rory melted into him, her fingers tangling in his hair, pulling him closer."
3"Rory wrapped her arms around his neck, pulling him closer, her body arching into his."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"she said, voice steadier than she felt"
1"she said, but her voice was barely a breath"
2"he repeated, his voice rough"
3"he repeated, his voice rough"
12.07% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount8
fancyTags
0"she added (add)"
1"she snapped (snap)"
2"she murmured (murmur)"
3"he murmured (murmur)"
4"she whispered (whisper)"
5"he repeated (repeat)"
6"he repeated (repeat)"
7"he murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences58
tagDensity0.172
leniency0.345
rawRatio0.8
effectiveRatio0.276
82.5672%