Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY7Q97JGF7AV39M4PAHX0H5

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Duration:
34.8s
Cost:
$0.000978
Provider:
Nebius

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The chipped porcelain felt cold against my knuckles. I hadn’t even registered making tea. Steam curled, blurring the already smeared cityscape beyond the kitchen window. A persistent rapping echoed from the front door, insistent enough to pull me from the grey static in my head. Not expecting anyone, I ignored it. It came again, harder this time. “Rory? I know you’re in there.” That voice. A smooth rasp, laced with a French accent I’d once found intoxicating, now just felt like a tightening in my chest. Lucien. My grip tightened on the mug. Ptolemy, Eva’s absurdly fluffy tabby, wound himself around my ankles, sensing my shift in mood. I hadn’t seen Lucien since… well, since I’d walked away. Since I’d decided clean breaks were preferable to beautiful disasters. “Go away, Lucien.” I called, hoping he’d take the hint. “Don't be dramatic, *chérie*. I’m not here to rehash old grievances. Just open the door.” Old grievances. He made it sound like a minor disagreement, instead of the implosion of everything I’d foolishly believed in. I considered feigning deafness, barricading myself in the bathroom, adopting a new identity and moving to Iceland. Iceland sounded good. The rapping started again, evolving into a steady, determined pounding. “Aurora, I haven’t got all day.” Fine. Playing coy wasn’t working. With a sigh that felt like the weight of weeks, I set the mug down – carefully, determined not to shatter it – and walked toward the door. Ptolemy followed, tail twitching with curiosity. Three deadbolts. Eva’s paranoid masterpiece. I undid them slowly, each click a small act of defiance. I pulled the door open. He hadn’t changed. Still impeccably tailored – charcoal suit, crisp white shirt, a subtle silver tie clip. His platinum blond hair was slicked back, revealing the stark contrast of his eyes: one amber, the other a bottomless black. That was always the first thing people noticed. The eyes. I forced myself to meet his gaze, refusing to flinch. “Lucien,” I said, my voice deliberately flat. “Rory.” He didn’t offer a smile, just a careful assessment. His gaze flicked over me, lingering for a beat too long. I hated when he did that. Made me feel… dissected. “What do you want?” I stepped back, creating a small buffer zone. Ptolemy, emboldened by my presence, rubbed against Lucien’s perfectly polished shoes. Lucien didn’t acknowledge the cat. “I need a favour.” “That’s a first.” Sarcasm felt like a shield. A fragile one, but a shield nonetheless. “Don’t be obtuse. You know I only ask when absolutely necessary.” He scanned the flat, his eyes pausing on the stacks of books that threatened to topple over in the living room. “Still living amongst the literary ruins, I see.” “It’s called research,” I snapped. “And it’s none of your concern.” “Everything is my concern when it involves you, apparently.” He took a step closer, invading my space. The scent of his cologne – sandalwood and something darker, something expensive – filled my senses. I hadn’t realised how much I remembered. “That’s not true.” The words came out weaker than I intended. “Isn’t it? You vanished, Rory. No explanation. No goodbye. Just… gone.” The black eye narrowed slightly. “I deserved better than that.” “Oh, I'm sorry, were you expecting a sonnet?” I rounded on him, adrenaline beginning to pump. “I was escaping a situation, Lucien. A situation that involved you.” His jaw tightened. “A situation you created.” “I created?” I nearly laughed. “You were involved with half the underworld, trading favours and secrets like they were playing cards! I asked you to choose, and you chose… them.” “I chose what was necessary.” His voice was low, dangerous. “Necessary for whom? Certainly not for us.” I turned away, needing a moment to compose myself. Ptolemy nudged my hand, a furry weight against my leg. I bent down and scratched him behind the ears, fighting to keep my voice steady. “Look, I don’t want to do this. I don’t want to dredge up the past. Just tell me what you need and I’ll see if I can help.” He didn’t respond immediately, just stood there, observing me. The silence stretched, thick and uncomfortable. Finally, he exhaled, a puff of air that barely disturbed the stillness. “There’s been a… complication.” “Complication involving?” “A shipment. Antiquities. Went missing.” “Stolen?” “Let’s say… misplaced. By someone who shouldn’t have had access to it.” He paused, his gaze locking with mine again. “The client is… particular. And they have a habit of escalating things.” “And you want me to find it.” It wasn't a question. “I need someone who can move discreetly. Someone who knows the city. Someone who isn't… connected to my usual circles.” "So you've come to the woman you pushed away?" He didn't flinch. "I've come to the best person for the job." I studied his face, searching for a sign of sincerity, a flicker of remorse. There was nothing. Just that cool, calculating gaze. He was using me. Again. “What exactly was stolen?” I asked, resigned. “A small statuette. Egyptian. Relatively insignificant, aesthetically. Its value lies in its… history.” He offered a small, enigmatic smile. “Let’s just say it belonged to a rather powerful pharaoh. And a rather unhappy god.” “Great.” My voice dripped with sarcasm. “Just what I needed. A divine quest.” “Don’t mock the old gods, Rory. They have a long memory.” “And you don't?” He ignored the dig. “The statuette was last seen in the possession of a man named Silas Blackwood.” My blood ran cold. Silas. The owner of the bar downstairs. A man with a reputation as murky as the Thames on a foggy night. “Silas?” I echoed, my voice barely a whisper. “He’s a collector. Of sorts. And a man who enjoys playing games.” Lucien's lips curved into a cold smile. “A game you’re particularly good at, I believe.” “You knew he had it?” “I suspected.” “Suspected? And you didn’t think to mention this before sending me on a wild goose chase?” I ran a hand through my hair, frustration building. “Patience, *chérie*. The fun is in the chase.” I wanted to scream. To throw a book at his head. To tell him to get out and never come back. But I knew, deep down, that I was already involved. I always got drawn back in. “And if Silas doesn’t have it?” Lucien’s smile vanished. “Then we have a much bigger problem.” He reached inside his coat and produced a slim, silver envelope. "This is everything I know. Names, locations, possible contacts. And a generous retainer.” He handed it to me. I took the envelope, my fingers brushing against his. A jolt of electricity – unwanted, unwelcome – shot up my arm. I quickly withdrew my hand. “I’ll look into it.” “I expect results, Rory.” He turned to leave, then paused at the door. “And try not to get yourself killed. I’d hate for Ptolemy to mourn a second owner.” With that, he was gone. The front door clicked shut, leaving me standing in the sudden silence, the silver envelope heavy in my hand. Ptolemy wound himself around my legs again, purring. I looked down at the cat, then at the envelope, then back at the closed door. This was a disaster. A beautiful, complicated, terrifying disaster. And I had a feeling it was just beginning.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
57.14% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags22
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"I stepped back [back]"
1"Sarcasm felt like [like]"
2"The black eye narrowed slightly [slightly]"
3"I turned away [away]"
dialogueSentences56
tagDensity0.393
leniency0.786
rawRatio0.182
effectiveRatio0.143
75.29% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1214
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"deliberately"
count1
3
adverb"perfectly"
count1
4
adverb"slightly"
count1
5
adverb"quickly"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"slowly"
2"deliberately"
3"perfectly"
4"slightly"
5"quickly"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Blackwood"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
25.86% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1214
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"porcelain"
count1
1
word"echoed"
count2
2
word"determined"
count2
3
word"pounding"
count1
4
word"weight"
count2
5
word"stark"
count1
6
word"flicked"
count1
7
word"absolutely"
count1
8
word"scanned"
count1
9
word"silence"
count2
10
word"flicker"
count1
11
word"calculating"
count1
12
word"enigmatic"
count1
13
word"whisper"
count1
highlights
0"porcelain"
1"echoed"
2"determined"
3"pounding"
4"weight"
5"stark"
6"flicked"
7"absolutely"
8"scanned"
9"silence"
10"flicker"
11"calculating"
12"enigmatic"
13"whisper"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"blood ran cold"
count1
highlights
0"blood ran cold"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences100
matches
0"a flicker of remorse"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences100
filterMatches
0"feel…"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences131
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords2
totalWords1221
ratio0.002
matches
0"chérie"
1"chérie"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions18
wordCount781
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.77
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
French1
Eva2
Lucien6
Old1
Iceland2
Ptolemy5
Thames1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Lucien"
2"Ptolemy"
places
0"Iceland"
1"Thames"
globalScore1
windowScore1
66.67% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences60
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"felt like a tightening in my chest"
1"felt like the weight of weeks, I set th"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1221
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences131
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs59
mean20.69
std15.96
cv0.771
sampleLengths
057
16
224
341
410
515
640
716
855
95
1058
117
1231
1323
149
1515
1640
1711
1840
1911
2021
2127
227
2330
2410
2569
2627
274
282
295
301
3132
3211
3320
349
3512
3627
377
3834
3913
4011
413
4218
4325
448
4527
465
472
4825
498
94.74% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences100
matches
0"was slicked"
1"got drawn"
2"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs154
matches
0"wasn’t working"
1"was using"
55.62% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences131
ratio0.031
matches
0"With a sigh that felt like the weight of weeks, I set the mug down – carefully, determined not to shatter it – and walked toward the door."
1"Still impeccably tailored – charcoal suit, crisp white shirt, a subtle silver tie clip."
2"The scent of his cologne – sandalwood and something darker, something expensive – filled my senses."
3"A jolt of electricity – unwanted, unwelcome – shot up my arm."
80.39% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount774
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"beautiful, complicated, terrifying disaster."
adverbCount43
adverbRatio0.05555555555555555
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.01808785529715762
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences131
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences131
mean9.32
std6.37
cv0.684
sampleLengths
08
16
211
320
46
56
66
72
821
91
106
1115
125
135
1410
1510
1615
172
1818
1917
203
2110
226
231
244
2528
266
272
283
2911
305
313
3214
3321
348
352
3610
377
3810
3911
406
413
421
4312
4411
455
464
478
487
4932
62.34% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.3969465648854962
totalSentences131
uniqueOpeners52
74.07% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences90
matches
0"Finally, he exhaled, a puff"
1"Just that cool, calculating gaze."
ratio0.022
11.11% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount47
totalSentences90
matches
0"I hadn’t even registered making"
1"It came again, harder this"
2"My grip tightened on the"
3"I hadn’t seen Lucien since…"
4"I called, hoping he’d take"
5"He made it sound like"
6"I considered feigning deafness, barricading"
7"I undid them slowly, each"
8"I pulled the door open."
9"He hadn’t changed."
10"His platinum blond hair was"
11"I forced myself to meet"
12"I said, my voice deliberately"
13"He didn’t offer a smile,"
14"His gaze flicked over me,"
15"I hated when he did"
16"I stepped back, creating a"
17"He scanned the flat, his"
18"He took a step closer,"
19"I hadn’t realised how much"
ratio0.522
43.33% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount75
totalSentences90
matches
0"The chipped porcelain felt cold"
1"I hadn’t even registered making"
2"Steam curled, blurring the already"
3"A persistent rapping echoed from"
4"It came again, harder this"
5"A smooth rasp, laced with"
6"My grip tightened on the"
7"Ptolemy, Eva’s absurdly fluffy tabby,"
8"I hadn’t seen Lucien since…"
9"I called, hoping he’d take"
10"He made it sound like"
11"I considered feigning deafness, barricading"
12"Iceland sounded good."
13"The rapping started again, evolving"
14"Ptolemy followed, tail twitching with"
15"Eva’s paranoid masterpiece."
16"I undid them slowly, each"
17"I pulled the door open."
18"He hadn’t changed."
19"His platinum blond hair was"
ratio0.833
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences90
matches
0"To throw a book at"
1"To tell him to get"
ratio0.022
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences26
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
56.82% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags22
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"I said, my voice deliberately flat"
1"He paused, his gaze locking with mine again"
2"I echoed, my voice barely a whisper"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"I snapped (snap)"
dialogueSentences56
tagDensity0.071
leniency0.143
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.036
82.7794%