| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 14 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 29 | | tagDensity | 0.483 | | leniency | 0.966 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 90.98% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1109 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 80.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1109 | | totalAiIsms | 26 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "familiar" | | 1 | "sense of" | | 2 | "crystalline" | | 3 | "kaleidoscope" | | 4 | "weight" | | 5 | "echoing" | | 6 | "scanning" | | 7 | "echoed" | | 8 | "resolving" | | 9 | "rhythmic" | | 10 | "pulse" | | 11 | "shimmered" | | 12 | "fleeting" | | 13 | "repository" | | 14 | "whisper" | | 15 | "churn" | | 16 | "chaotic" | | 17 | "depths" | | 18 | "looming" | | 19 | "chilling" | | 20 | "pulsed" | | 21 | "sanctuary" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 84 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 9 | | narrationSentences | 84 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "appeared to" | | 1 | "began to" | | 2 | "seemed to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 98 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 26 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 2 | | markdownWords | 2 | | totalWords | 1113 | | ratio | 0.002 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 9 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 32 | | wordCount | 931 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 1.4 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | Silas | 6 | | Aurora | 13 | | Eva | 6 | | Further | 1 | | Shade | 1 | | Fae | 2 | | Suddenly | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.802 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 44.37% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 71 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like walking on packed starlight," | | 1 | "seemed taken aback" | | 2 | "limbs that seemed to stretch and distort in the shifting light" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.898 | | wordCount | 1113 | | matches | | 0 | "not reflections, but projections" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 75.18% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 38 | | mean | 29.29 | | std | 12.1 | | cv | 0.413 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 34 | | 1 | 37 | | 2 | 41 | | 3 | 58 | | 4 | 54 | | 5 | 28 | | 6 | 36 | | 7 | 25 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 14 | | 10 | 32 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 46 | | 13 | 34 | | 14 | 37 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 25 | | 17 | 20 | | 18 | 19 | | 19 | 41 | | 20 | 33 | | 21 | 46 | | 22 | 21 | | 23 | 17 | | 24 | 32 | | 25 | 26 | | 26 | 34 | | 27 | 23 | | 28 | 35 | | 29 | 46 | | 30 | 27 | | 31 | 14 | | 32 | 33 | | 33 | 23 | | 34 | 14 | | 35 | 13 | | 36 | 41 | | 37 | 20 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 171 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 8 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 98 | | ratio | 0.092 | | matches | | 0 | "Above, the cavern roof disappeared into a swirling nebula of violet and gold, dotted with what appeared to be constellations – but not any she'd ever seen." | | 1 | "The scent was overwhelming – a heady mix of blooming nightflowers, ozone, and something else…" | | 2 | "It wasn't unpleasant – more like a beckoning song, pulling at something deep within Aurora’s psyche." | | 3 | "As her fingers brushed against its surface, a jolt of images flooded her mind – fleeting glimpses of alien landscapes, celestial battles, and beings of pure energy." | | 4 | "Upon the dais stood a single object - a large pool of liquid reflection." | | 5 | "As they approached, the surface began to coalesce, forming images – not reflections, but projections." | | 6 | "A figure began to emerge from the depths – a shifting, indistinct silhouette of shadow, coalescing into a vaguely humanoid form." | | 7 | "The memories flooded back – the escalating arguments, the controlling behaviour, the chilling threats." | | 8 | "A powerful, Fae maiden shook her head; anger filled her eyes." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 927 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 29 | | adverbRatio | 0.03128371089536138 | | lyAdverbCount | 12 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.012944983818770227 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 98 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 98 | | mean | 11.36 | | std | 5.37 | | cv | 0.473 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 23 | | 1 | 5 | | 2 | 6 | | 3 | 16 | | 4 | 21 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 13 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 13 | | 11 | 20 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 21 | | 14 | 27 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 15 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 15 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 16 | | 28 | 16 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 18 | | 34 | 18 | | 35 | 16 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 27 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 13 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 13 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 14 | | 47 | 13 | | 48 | 14 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 61.90% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 11 | | diversityRatio | 0.4387755102040816 | | totalSentences | 98 | | uniqueOpeners | 43 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead of fruit, the branches" | | 1 | "Further on, they came to" | | 2 | "Suddenly, the cavern began to" |
| | ratio | 0.037 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 19 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | | 0 | "It felt warm, almost feverish." | | 1 | "Its coldness seeped through her" | | 2 | "It wasn’t the size that" | | 3 | "It felt like walking on" | | 4 | "He ran a calloused hand" | | 5 | "It filled Aurora’s lungs, triggering" | | 6 | "It wasn't unpleasant – more" | | 7 | "They passed a grove of" | | 8 | "She recoiled, breathless." | | 9 | "It rippled like oil, catching" | | 10 | "They saw themselves, but not" | | 11 | "They saw Aurora as a" | | 12 | "she said, her voice barely" | | 13 | "They showed her, trapped in" | | 14 | "she breathed, the name a" | | 15 | "it whispered, its voice a" | | 16 | "He stumbled, grabbing Eva's arm" | | 17 | "he barked, his voice strained" | | 18 | "It was tall and gaunt," |
| | ratio | 0.235 | |
| 52.59% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 66 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora adjusted the pendant at" | | 1 | "It felt warm, almost feverish." | | 2 | "Silas grunted, shoving aside a" | | 3 | "Eva muttered, tightening her grip" | | 4 | "Its coldness seeped through her" | | 5 | "The air hummed, a low," | | 6 | "It wasn’t the size that" | | 7 | "Walls curved and folded back" | | 8 | "The floor wasn't stone, wasn’t" | | 9 | "It felt like walking on" | | 10 | "He ran a calloused hand" | | 11 | "The scent was overwhelming –" | | 12 | "something utterly alien, like the" | | 13 | "It filled Aurora’s lungs, triggering" | | 14 | "Aurora cautioned, her voice echoing" | | 15 | "Eva nodded, her eyes constantly" | | 16 | "A low, melodic chime echoed" | | 17 | "It wasn't unpleasant – more" | | 18 | "Silas asked, cocking his head" | | 19 | "The chime intensified, resolving into" |
| | ratio | 0.815 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | | 0 | "Even Silas, typically stoic, seemed" | | 1 | "As if in response, the" | | 2 | "Now she saw herself, standing" |
| | ratio | 0.037 | |
| 79.37% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 45 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Silas grunted, shoving aside a curtain of luminous moss that dripped with an oily, silver sheen." | | 1 | "It wasn’t the size that was the most disorienting, but the impossible geometry." | | 2 | "It felt like walking on packed starlight, a yielding, almost ethereal surface that responded to their weight with a subtle pulsing." | | 3 | "The shadow figure tilted its head, a gesture that hinted at mocking amusement." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 14 | | uselessAdditionCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora adjusted, the crimson gemstone pulsing a frantic rhythm against her skin" | | 1 | "Aurora cautioned, her voice echoing strangely in the vast space" | | 2 | "she said, her voice barely a whisper" | | 3 | "Aurora asked, but the name felt hollow, inadequate" | | 4 | "it whispered, its voice a chorus of echoing whispers" | | 5 | "he barked, his voice strained" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 12 | | fancyCount | 8 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Eva muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "Eva demanded (demand)" | | 2 | "Aurora gasped (gasp)" | | 3 | "Silas observed (observe)" | | 4 | "Eva whispered (whisper)" | | 5 | "she breathed (breathe)" | | 6 | "it whispered (whisper)" | | 7 | "he barked (bark)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 29 | | tagDensity | 0.414 | | leniency | 0.828 | | rawRatio | 0.667 | | effectiveRatio | 0.552 | |