| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 4 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 13 | | tagDensity | 0.308 | | leniency | 0.615 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 84.05% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 627 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 36.20% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 627 | | totalAiIsms | 8 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "weight" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "quickened" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "stomach" | | 5 | "whisper" | | 6 | "aftermath" | | 7 | "trembled" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 58 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 58 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 67 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 31 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 9 | | markdownWords | 9 | | totalWords | 619 | | ratio | 0.015 | | matches | | 0 | "breathed" | | 1 | "laughed" | | 2 | "Dymas" | | 3 | "it" | | 4 | "alive" | | 5 | "below" | | 6 | "aftermath" | | 7 | "screamed" | | 8 | "mouth" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 8 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 42.28% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 30 | | wordCount | 557 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 2.15 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Isolde | 8 | | Rory | 12 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Earth | 1 | | Helborn | 1 | | Nyx | 6 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Isolde" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Helborn" | | 3 | "Nyx" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.423 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 18.42% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 38 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "as though bowing to something unseen" | | 1 | "quite branches anymore—some resembled hands, others coiled like serpents" |
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| 38.45% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 1.616 | | wordCount | 619 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 24 | | mean | 25.79 | | std | 18.3 | | cv | 0.71 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 12 | | 1 | 77 | | 2 | 7 | | 3 | 44 | | 4 | 38 | | 5 | 45 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 50 | | 8 | 50 | | 9 | 28 | | 10 | 43 | | 11 | 29 | | 12 | 23 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 12 | | 15 | 21 | | 16 | 30 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 32 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 20 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 6 |
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| 99.21% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 103 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 67 | | ratio | 0.09 | | matches | | 0 | "The wildflowers at her feet didn’t rustle in the wind—they *breathed*, petals expanding and contracting in time with something Rory couldn’t hear." | | 1 | "The pendant around her neck—Heartstone, whatever that meant—pulsed once, warm against her collarbone." | | 2 | "The trees grew taller, their branches twisting into shapes that weren’t quite branches anymore—some resembled hands, others coiled like serpents." | | 3 | "The ground here was smooth, polished to a mirror sheen, reflecting not the sky but a sky that wasn’t theirs—amber and bruised, streaked with colors that didn’t exist on Earth." | | 4 | "The pressure in her ears, the way her skin prickled like static—she’d felt this before, back in that alley when the Helborn had dragged her into the dark." | | 5 | "Not a sound, exactly—more like the air itself had been torn open." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 565 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 22 | | adverbRatio | 0.03893805309734513 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.012389380530973451 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 67 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 67 | | mean | 9.24 | | std | 6.71 | | cv | 0.727 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 12 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 10 | | 4 | 24 | | 5 | 7 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 14 | | 9 | 22 | | 10 | 13 | | 11 | 7 | | 12 | 11 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 21 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 20 | | 22 | 16 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 30 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 16 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 28 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 18 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 2 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 2 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 14 | | 48 | 7 | | 49 | 11 |
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| 55.22% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.3582089552238806 | | totalSentences | 67 | | uniqueOpeners | 24 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, she turned slowly, her" | | 1 | "Somewhere in the distance, something" | | 2 | "Then the earth split." |
| | ratio | 0.056 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 10 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | | 0 | "She paused, fingers brushing the" | | 1 | "She never did, not directly." | | 2 | "They *laughed*, a sound like" | | 3 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 4 | "She didn’t ask why." | | 5 | "They moved deeper." | | 6 | "they said, voice rough" | | 7 | "Her fingers didn’t leave a" | | 8 | "They weren’t just stepping into" | | 9 | "They were stepping into a" |
| | ratio | 0.185 | |
| 24.81% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 47 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | | 0 | "The air smelled wrong the" | | 1 | "Rory’s boots sank into damp" | | 2 | "She paused, fingers brushing the" | | 3 | "The tree leaned slightly, as" | | 4 | "Nyx drifted beside her, form" | | 5 | "Isolde didn’t answer." | | 6 | "She never did, not directly." | | 7 | "The wildflowers at her feet" | | 8 | "Nyx reached out, their shadowed" | | 9 | "The flowers didn’t wilt under" | | 10 | "They *laughed*, a sound like" | | 11 | "Rory’s pulse quickened." | | 12 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 13 | "The pendant around her neck—Heartstone," | | 14 | "She didn’t ask why." | | 15 | "Questions would come later." | | 16 | "They moved deeper." | | 17 | "The trees grew taller, their" | | 18 | "The air thickened, heavy with" | | 19 | "Rory’s scar on her wrist" |
| | ratio | 0.87 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 80.75% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 23 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "The ground here was smooth, polished to a mirror sheen, reflecting not the sky but a sky that wasn’t theirs—amber and bruised, streaked with colors that didn’t …" | | 1 | "Nyx crouched beside her, their shadow stretching unnaturally long, as if the light source wasn’t above but *below*." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 4 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "they said, voice rough" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Rory muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 13 | | tagDensity | 0.308 | | leniency | 0.615 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.308 | |