Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY7SXTYQ6CA1852AF7FY0S1

Run Details

Duration:
6.5s
Cost:
$0.000535
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air smelled wrong the moment they stepped through the standing stones. Rory’s boots sank into damp earth that gave way too easily, as if the ground itself had forgotten how to hold weight. She paused, fingers brushing the rough bark of an oak so ancient its rings had grown in spirals, not straight lines. The tree leaned slightly, as though bowing to something unseen. Nyx drifted beside her, form flickering like a candle flame in a draft, their violet eyes reflecting the unnatural light filtering through the canopy. “This isn’t just a grove,” Rory muttered. Isolde didn’t answer. She never did, not directly. Instead, she turned slowly, her silver hair catching the dappled light like spun mercury. The wildflowers at her feet didn’t rustle in the wind—they *breathed*, petals expanding and contracting in time with something Rory couldn’t hear. Nyx reached out, their shadowed fingers hovering just above a cluster of bluebells. The flowers didn’t wilt under their touch. They *laughed*, a sound like chimes too faint for mortal ears. “It’s hungry,” Nyx murmured. “And it’s watching.” Rory’s pulse quickened. She adjusted the strap of her backpack, her fingers brushing the cold hilt of the Fae-forged blade Isolde had given her. The pendant around her neck—Heartstone, whatever that meant—pulsed once, warm against her collarbone. She didn’t ask why. Questions would come later. They moved deeper. The trees grew taller, their branches twisting into shapes that weren’t quite branches anymore—some resembled hands, others coiled like serpents. The air thickened, heavy with the scent of crushed herbs and something metallic, like old blood. Rory’s scar on her wrist itched, as if the wound had never fully healed. Isolde stopped at the edge of a clearing. The ground here was smooth, polished to a mirror sheen, reflecting not the sky but a sky that wasn’t theirs—amber and bruised, streaked with colors that didn’t exist on Earth. Rory’s breath hitched. That wasn’t the sun up there. That was *Dymas*. Nyx’s form rippled, their edges sharpening into something solid for the first time since they’d entered. “The Veil’s thin here,” they said, voice rough. “Can you feel it?” Rory didn’t need to ask what *it* was. The pressure in her ears, the way her skin prickled like static—she’d felt this before, back in that alley when the Helborn had dragged her into the dark. But this was different. This was *alive*. Isolde knelt, pressing her palm to the ground. Her fingers didn’t leave a mark. “The grove remembers,” she said. “It remembers the last time the Veil split like this.” Nyx crouched beside her, their shadow stretching unnaturally long, as if the light source wasn’t above but *below*. “And what did it remember?” Isolde’s lavender eyes lifted, fixed on Rory. “A feast.” The word hung between them, heavy. Rory swallowed. “What kind of feast?” Isolde stood, brushing dirt from her knees that hadn’t been there a second before. “The kind where the guests don’t leave.” A gust of wind howled through the trees, though none moved. The flowers in the clearing bowed their heads in unison. Rory’s stomach twisted. “We’re not here for a feast.” Nyx’s laugh was a whisper of smoke. “No. But we’re here for the *aftermath*.” Rory’s grip tightened on the blade. The pendant burned against her skin. Somewhere in the distance, something *screamed*. Not a sound, exactly—more like the air itself had been torn open. The ground trembled. Isolde’s lips parted, but no words came. Then the earth split. Not like an earthquake. Like a *mouth*. Darkness yawned beneath them, vast and hungry, and for the first time, Rory understood why Isolde had brought them here. They weren’t just stepping into a grove. They were stepping into a wound.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences13
tagDensity0.308
leniency0.615
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
84.05% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount627
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
36.20% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount627
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count1
2
word"quickened"
count1
3
word"pulsed"
count1
4
word"stomach"
count1
5
word"whisper"
count1
6
word"aftermath"
count1
7
word"trembled"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"pulse"
2"quickened"
3"pulsed"
4"stomach"
5"whisper"
6"aftermath"
7"trembled"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences58
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences58
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences67
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans9
markdownWords9
totalWords619
ratio0.015
matches
0"breathed"
1"laughed"
2"Dymas"
3"it"
4"alive"
5"below"
6"aftermath"
7"screamed"
8"mouth"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
42.28% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions30
wordCount557
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity2.15
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Isolde8
Rory12
Fae-forged1
Heartstone1
Earth1
Helborn1
Nyx6
persons
0"Isolde"
1"Rory"
2"Helborn"
3"Nyx"
places(empty)
globalScore0.423
windowScore0.667
18.42% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences38
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"as though bowing to something unseen"
1"quite branches anymore—some resembled hands, others coiled like serpents"
38.45% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords1.616
wordCount619
matches
0"not the sky but a sky"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences67
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs24
mean25.79
std18.3
cv0.71
sampleLengths
012
177
27
344
438
545
63
750
850
928
1043
1129
1223
139
1412
1521
1630
1714
1812
1932
207
2120
227
236
99.21% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences58
matches
0"been torn"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs103
matches
0"were stepping"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences67
ratio0.09
matches
0"The wildflowers at her feet didn’t rustle in the wind—they *breathed*, petals expanding and contracting in time with something Rory couldn’t hear."
1"The pendant around her neck—Heartstone, whatever that meant—pulsed once, warm against her collarbone."
2"The trees grew taller, their branches twisting into shapes that weren’t quite branches anymore—some resembled hands, others coiled like serpents."
3"The ground here was smooth, polished to a mirror sheen, reflecting not the sky but a sky that wasn’t theirs—amber and bruised, streaked with colors that didn’t exist on Earth."
4"The pressure in her ears, the way her skin prickled like static—she’d felt this before, back in that alley when the Helborn had dragged her into the dark."
5"Not a sound, exactly—more like the air itself had been torn open."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount565
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount22
adverbRatio0.03893805309734513
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.012389380530973451
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences67
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences67
mean9.24
std6.71
cv0.727
sampleLengths
012
122
221
310
424
57
63
75
814
922
1013
117
1211
134
143
153
1621
1713
184
194
203
2120
2216
2314
248
2530
263
276
283
2916
308
314
328
3328
344
353
368
376
385
3910
4018
415
427
432
446
452
464
4714
487
4911
55.22% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.3582089552238806
totalSentences67
uniqueOpeners24
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences54
matches
0"Instead, she turned slowly, her"
1"Somewhere in the distance, something"
2"Then the earth split."
ratio0.056
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount10
totalSentences54
matches
0"She paused, fingers brushing the"
1"She never did, not directly."
2"They *laughed*, a sound like"
3"She adjusted the strap of"
4"She didn’t ask why."
5"They moved deeper."
6"they said, voice rough"
7"Her fingers didn’t leave a"
8"They weren’t just stepping into"
9"They were stepping into a"
ratio0.185
24.81% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount47
totalSentences54
matches
0"The air smelled wrong the"
1"Rory’s boots sank into damp"
2"She paused, fingers brushing the"
3"The tree leaned slightly, as"
4"Nyx drifted beside her, form"
5"Isolde didn’t answer."
6"She never did, not directly."
7"The wildflowers at her feet"
8"Nyx reached out, their shadowed"
9"The flowers didn’t wilt under"
10"They *laughed*, a sound like"
11"Rory’s pulse quickened."
12"She adjusted the strap of"
13"The pendant around her neck—Heartstone,"
14"She didn’t ask why."
15"Questions would come later."
16"They moved deeper."
17"The trees grew taller, their"
18"The air thickened, heavy with"
19"Rory’s scar on her wrist"
ratio0.87
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences54
matches(empty)
ratio0
80.75% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences23
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The ground here was smooth, polished to a mirror sheen, reflecting not the sky but a sky that wasn’t theirs—amber and bruised, streaked with colors that didn’t …"
1"Nyx crouched beside her, their shadow stretching unnaturally long, as if the light source wasn’t above but *below*."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"they said, voice rough"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Rory muttered (mutter)"
1"Nyx murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences13
tagDensity0.308
leniency0.615
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.308
72.6468%