| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 20 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "he finally said [finally]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 50 | | tagDensity | 0.4 | | leniency | 0.8 | | rawRatio | 0.05 | | effectiveRatio | 0.04 | |
| 87.94% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1244 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 3.54% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1244 | | totalAiIsms | 24 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | word | "practiced ease" | | count | 1 |
| | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | word | "down my spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "porcelain" | | 1 | "chill" | | 2 | "practiced ease" | | 3 | "constructed" | | 4 | "eyebrow" | | 5 | "weight" | | 6 | "familiar" | | 7 | "intensity" | | 8 | "tracing" | | 9 | "desire" | | 10 | "down my spine" | | 11 | "flicker" | | 12 | "magnetic" | | 13 | "throbbed" | | 14 | "predator" | | 15 | "reminder" | | 16 | "delve" | | 17 | "scanned" | | 18 | "whisper" | | 19 | "ensure" | | 20 | "chilling" | | 21 | "apprehension" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "sent a shiver through" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "flicker of emotion" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "sent a shiver down" | | 1 | "a flicker of amusement" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 75 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 75 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 106 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 37 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 3 | | markdownWords | 6 | | totalWords | 1247 | | ratio | 0.005 | | matches | | 0 | "him" | | 1 | "you deal with it" | | 2 | "him" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 16 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 21 | | wordCount | 833 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 0.72 | | worstName | "Lucien" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Lucien" | | discoveredNames | | Earl | 1 | | Grey | 1 | | Cheung | 1 | | Hampstead | 1 | | Brick | 1 | | Lane | 1 | | Moreau | 1 | | Eva | 2 | | Lucien | 6 | | Ptolemy | 2 | | Silas | 4 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Earl" | | 1 | "Grey" | | 2 | "Cheung" | | 3 | "Moreau" | | 4 | "Eva" | | 5 | "Lucien" | | 6 | "Silas" |
| | places | | 0 | "Hampstead" | | 1 | "Brick" | | 2 | "Lane" | | 3 | "Ptolemy" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 59 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1247 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 106 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 55 | | mean | 22.67 | | std | 16.07 | | cv | 0.709 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 68 | | 1 | 25 | | 2 | 28 | | 3 | 26 | | 4 | 23 | | 5 | 9 | | 6 | 43 | | 7 | 41 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 56 | | 10 | 53 | | 11 | 20 | | 12 | 18 | | 13 | 43 | | 14 | 17 | | 15 | 37 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 24 | | 18 | 15 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 47 | | 21 | 1 | | 22 | 1 | | 23 | 19 | | 24 | 13 | | 25 | 33 | | 26 | 25 | | 27 | 14 | | 28 | 13 | | 29 | 33 | | 30 | 17 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 62 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 15 | | 37 | 12 | | 38 | 42 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 11 | | 42 | 22 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 17 | | 45 | 8 | | 46 | 43 | | 47 | 10 | | 48 | 34 | | 49 | 41 |
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| 95.91% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "was slicked" | | 1 | "been drawn" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 142 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 88.95% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 106 | | ratio | 0.019 | | matches | | 0 | "The scent of rain and something else – a subtle, intoxicating blend of sandalwood and something feral – filled the air." | | 1 | "But the stubborn, reckless part – the part that had always been drawn to the darkness that surrounded Lucien – whispered a different response." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 401 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 12 | | adverbRatio | 0.029925187032418952 | | lyAdverbCount | 4 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.00997506234413965 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 106 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 106 | | mean | 11.76 | | std | 7.79 | | cv | 0.662 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 25 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 23 | | 3 | 11 | | 4 | 10 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 11 | | 7 | 13 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 18 | | 11 | 18 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 15 | | 18 | 14 | | 19 | 13 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 12 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 14 | | 25 | 25 | | 26 | 12 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 19 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 22 | | 32 | 17 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 27 | | 37 | 16 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 7 | | 40 | 17 | | 41 | 17 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 14 | | 44 | 24 | | 45 | 15 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 14 | | 48 | 12 | | 49 | 21 |
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| 73.27% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.46226415094339623 | | totalSentences | 106 | | uniqueOpeners | 49 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 5.92% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 38 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "I’d nearly finished my second" | | 1 | "He glanced at the door," | | 2 | "She’d mentioned swinging by with" | | 3 | "I hadn’t seen *him* in" | | 4 | "I set the mug down" | | 5 | "My flat was directly above" | | 6 | "I hesitated at the door," | | 7 | "It wouldn’t keep *him* out" | | 8 | "I unlocked the door and" | | 9 | "He hadn’t changed." | | 10 | "He didn’t offer a greeting," | | 11 | "It was a look he’d" | | 12 | "he finally said, his voice" | | 13 | "He didn’t immediately respond, instead" | | 14 | "I pressed, forcing a firmness" | | 15 | "I braced myself." | | 16 | "He said it like it" | | 17 | "I leaned against the doorframe," | | 18 | "He stepped inside, ignoring the" | | 19 | "He moved with an unsettling" |
| | ratio | 0.535 | |
| 9.30% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 64 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "The chipped porcelain felt cold" | | 1 | "Rain lashed against the windowpanes" | | 2 | "I’d nearly finished my second" | | 3 | "Silas was behind the bar," | | 4 | "He glanced at the door," | | 5 | "She’d mentioned swinging by with" | | 6 | "something to do with historical" | | 7 | "The thought barely registered." | | 8 | "I hadn’t seen *him* in" | | 9 | "I set the mug down" | | 10 | "Silas raised an eyebrow, unconvinced." | | 11 | "Silas, with a shrug that" | | 12 | "My flat was directly above" | | 13 | "Each step creaked under my" | | 14 | "I hesitated at the door," | | 15 | "It wouldn’t keep *him* out" | | 16 | "I unlocked the door and" | | 17 | "He hadn’t changed." | | 18 | "The platinum blond hair was" | | 19 | "Rain plastered the front of" |
| | ratio | 0.901 | |
| 70.42% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "Before I could offer a" |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 27.65% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 31 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "My flat was directly above the bar, a convenience that had felt blissful until now." | | 1 | "He didn’t immediately respond, instead taking in the small space, his gaze sweeping over the worn furniture, the overflowing bookshelves, the general chaos that…" | | 2 | "The old, familiar pull, the magnetic force that had always existed between us, throbbed beneath the surface." | | 3 | "He stepped inside, ignoring the warning growl from Ptolemy, who retreated under the sofa." | | 4 | "But the stubborn, reckless part – the part that had always been drawn to the darkness that surrounded Lucien – whispered a different response." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 20 | | uselessAdditionCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "the name felt, a ghost of past intimacy" | | 1 | "Lucien said, a flicker of amusement crossing his face" | | 2 | "I prodded, the question hanging between us" | | 3 | "He paused, his gaze softening, just for a moment" | | 4 | "He leaned, his voice dropping to a whisper" | | 5 | "I asked, my voice tight with apprehension" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 6 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 50 | | tagDensity | 0.12 | | leniency | 0.24 | | rawRatio | 0.167 | | effectiveRatio | 0.04 | |