Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY7T9PG6T1Y0Q988MWWVAXF

Run Details

Duration:
1m 5s
Cost:
$0.000890
Provider:
Novita

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The chipped porcelain felt cold against my fingertips, the Earl Grey doing little to ward off the chill licking at the back of my neck. Rain lashed against the windowpanes of Silas’ bar, blurring the neon glow of the Golden Empress’ sign across the street. I’d nearly finished my second cup, attempting, and failing, to decipher Cheung’s latest cryptic crossword when the buzzer tore through the relative quiet. Silas was behind the bar, polishing glasses with a practiced ease. He glanced at the door, a question in his eyes. “You expecting anyone, Rory?” “Just Eva, maybe.” She’d mentioned swinging by with some research on… something to do with historical grimoires and a particularly nasty poltergeist in Hampstead. The thought barely registered. I hadn’t seen *him* in nearly six months. Six months of meticulously constructed routine, of avoiding Brick Lane, of pointedly not answering calls from blocked numbers. I set the mug down with a soft clink, trying to ignore the unwelcome flutter in my chest. “Probably just a wrong number.” Silas raised an eyebrow, unconvinced. “Don’t sound so sure.” Before I could offer a retort, the buzzer sounded again, longer this time, insistent. Silas, with a shrug that said *you deal with it*, gestured towards the stairs. My flat was directly above the bar, a convenience that had felt blissful until now. Each step creaked under my weight, the familiar sound muted by a growing dread. I hesitated at the door, hand hovering over the first of three deadbolts. Why bother? It wouldn’t keep *him* out if he truly wanted to be inside. I unlocked the door and pulled it open. He hadn’t changed. Still impossibly tall, still dressed in a charcoal suit that looked tailored by angels. The platinum blond hair was slicked back, revealing the sharp angles of his face, the high cheekbones, and the devastating symmetry of his mismatched eyes. One amber, burning with a quiet intensity, the other a fathomless black. Lucien Moreau. Rain plastered the front of his coat to his form, dark rivulets tracing a path down the impeccable fabric. He didn’t offer a greeting, didn’t bother with polite pleasantries. Just stared. It was a look he’d perfected over the years, a careful assessment that stripped you bare, revealing every insecurity, every hidden desire. "Rory," he finally said, his voice a low, gravelly rumble that sent a shiver down my spine. “You look… well.” “Luc,” the name felt foreign on my tongue, a ghost of past intimacy. “What are you doing here?” He didn’t immediately respond, instead taking in the small space, his gaze sweeping over the worn furniture, the overflowing bookshelves, the general chaos that was my life. Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby, materialized from the shadows, arching his back and hissing at Lucien’s polished shoes. “Charming,” Lucien said, a flicker of amusement crossing his face. “Your decorator has a certain… bohemian flair.” “Get to the point, Luc.” I pressed, forcing a firmness into my voice I didn’t entirely feel. The old, familiar pull, the magnetic force that had always existed between us, throbbed beneath the surface. I braced myself. “A favor.” He said it like it was a casual request, a simple transaction. “From you? That’s a new one.” I leaned against the doorframe, attempting a casual pose, though my knuckles were white from gripping the wood. “Don’t play coy, Rory. You know I don’t do ‘favors’ without expecting something in return.” “And what exactly do you want?” He stepped inside, ignoring the warning growl from Ptolemy, who retreated under the sofa. He moved with an unsettling grace, a predator entering a confined space. The scent of rain and something else – a subtle, intoxicating blend of sandalwood and something feral – filled the air. “Information.” “Vague.” “Necessarily so. A client… requires assistance. A retrieval, shall we say. Delicate work. Your particular skill set is… desirable.” “My skill set?” I scoffed. “You mean delivering noodles and avoiding awkward conversations?” “You underestimate yourself. You have a knack for finding things, Rory. For seeing patterns others miss. And a… disregard for rules.” His amber eye locked onto mine, holding my gaze with unnerving intensity. “I’m flattered, truly. But I’m busy.” I busied myself with straightening a stack of magazines on a nearby table, an absurd attempt to appear composed. “Busy with what? Avoiding me? Because you’re doing a remarkably poor job of it.” The barb hit its mark. I ignored it, straightening another magazine, then another. “Look, Luc, I’m trying to build a normal life. I have a job, friends, a semblance of stability. I don’t need to be dragged into your world of… whatever it is you do.” He let out a short, humorless laugh. “Normal? You, Rory Carter, and ‘normal’ are mutually exclusive concepts.” "That's rich, coming from you." He didn’t flinch. “I’m merely stating a fact.” He pulled his ivory-handled cane from under his arm, running a thumb along the smooth surface. The cane, I knew, concealed a thin, wickedly sharp blade. A subtle reminder of the danger that always lurked beneath his polished veneer. “This isn’t a request, Rory. It’s an inevitability. You’re the only one who can help.” “And what happens when I do?” “You receive a substantial sum of money.” “Always about the money with you.” “It’s a practical incentive. I find people are far more motivated by rewards than altruism.” "Is that what you believe?" I prodded, the question hanging between us. “Let’s not delve into my philosophical musings, darling. I’m here for a transaction, not a therapy session.” He paused, his gaze softening, just for a moment. A dangerous moment. “This is about more than just money, Rory. This concerns someone you know.” My breath hitched. “Who?” He didn’t answer immediately, letting the question hang in the air. "Eva." The floor seemed to tilt beneath my feet. "What about Eva?" “She’s… involved. Unknowingly, I suspect. But involved nonetheless. Someone is looking for a particular book she recently acquired. A rather dangerous book.” “She didn’t say anything.” “She wouldn’t. She wouldn’t want to worry you.” His black eye scanned my face, assessing my reaction. “What kind of book? What kind of danger?” “Let’s just say it’s a text that attracts… unwanted attention. Avarosan in origin. And the people who want it back are not the type you want to cross.” He leaned closer, his voice dropping to a whisper. The sandalwood scent was overwhelming, suffocating. “And you want me to find out who’s after it?” “I want you to find the book. Before they do. And ensure Eva’s safety.” The amber eye glinted with a chilling light. “You’re good at protecting people, Rory. Despite your protestations to the contrary.” I stared at him, my mind reeling. Eva, in danger. Dragged into Lucien’s shadowy world. And me, caught in the middle, once again. The logical part of my brain screamed at me to refuse, to walk away, to sever all ties. But the stubborn, reckless part – the part that had always been drawn to the darkness that surrounded Lucien – whispered a different response. “Tell me everything.” I said, the words feeling like a surrender. His lips curved into a slow, predatory smile. “Excellent.” He raised a hand, and at that exact moment a loud crash came from downstairs. Silas bellowed something unintelligible. "What was that?" I asked, my voice tight with apprehension. Lucien didn't answer. He simply turned his mismatched gaze towards the stairwell, a chillingly calm expression on his face. "Seems we have company."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"he finally said [finally]"
dialogueSentences50
tagDensity0.4
leniency0.8
rawRatio0.05
effectiveRatio0.04
87.94% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1244
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"truly"
count2
1
adverb"wickedly"
count1
highlights
0"truly"
1"wickedly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
3.54% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1244
totalAiIsms24
found
0
word"porcelain"
count1
1
word"chill"
count1
2
word"practiced ease"
count1
3
word"constructed"
count1
4
word"eyebrow"
count1
5
word"weight"
count1
6
word"familiar"
count2
7
word"intensity"
count2
8
word"tracing"
count1
9
word"desire"
count1
10
word"down my spine"
count1
11
word"flicker"
count1
12
word"magnetic"
count1
13
word"throbbed"
count1
14
word"predator"
count1
15
word"reminder"
count1
16
word"delve"
count1
17
word"scanned"
count1
18
word"whisper"
count1
19
word"ensure"
count1
20
word"chilling"
count1
21
word"apprehension"
count1
highlights
0"porcelain"
1"chill"
2"practiced ease"
3"constructed"
4"eyebrow"
5"weight"
6"familiar"
7"intensity"
8"tracing"
9"desire"
10"down my spine"
11"flicker"
12"magnetic"
13"throbbed"
14"predator"
15"reminder"
16"delve"
17"scanned"
18"whisper"
19"ensure"
20"chilling"
21"apprehension"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
1
label"flicker of emotion"
count1
highlights
0"sent a shiver down"
1"a flicker of amusement"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences75
matches
0"t with apprehension"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences75
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences106
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords6
totalWords1247
ratio0.005
matches
0"him"
1"you deal with it"
2"him"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions21
wordCount833
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.72
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Earl1
Grey1
Cheung1
Hampstead1
Brick1
Lane1
Moreau1
Eva2
Lucien6
Ptolemy2
Silas4
persons
0"Earl"
1"Grey"
2"Cheung"
3"Moreau"
4"Eva"
5"Lucien"
6"Silas"
places
0"Hampstead"
1"Brick"
2"Lane"
3"Ptolemy"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences59
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1247
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences106
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs55
mean22.67
std16.07
cv0.709
sampleLengths
068
125
228
326
423
59
643
741
88
956
1053
1120
1218
1343
1417
1537
1614
1724
1815
196
2047
211
221
2319
2413
2533
2625
2714
2813
2933
3017
315
3262
336
347
356
3615
3712
3842
394
4012
4111
4222
434
4417
458
4643
4710
4834
4941
95.91% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences75
matches
0"was slicked"
1"been drawn"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs142
matches(empty)
88.95% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences106
ratio0.019
matches
0"The scent of rain and something else – a subtle, intoxicating blend of sandalwood and something feral – filled the air."
1"But the stubborn, reckless part – the part that had always been drawn to the darkness that surrounded Lucien – whispered a different response."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount401
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount12
adverbRatio0.029925187032418952
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.00997506234413965
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences106
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences106
mean11.76
std7.79
cv0.662
sampleLengths
025
120
223
311
410
54
611
713
84
98
1018
1118
125
135
144
1514
1614
1715
1814
1913
202
2112
228
233
2414
2525
2612
272
2819
2910
302
3122
3217
333
3413
355
3627
3716
3810
397
4017
4117
423
4314
4424
4515
466
4714
4812
4921
73.27% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.46226415094339623
totalSentences106
uniqueOpeners49
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences71
matches(empty)
ratio0
5.92% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount38
totalSentences71
matches
0"I’d nearly finished my second"
1"He glanced at the door,"
2"She’d mentioned swinging by with"
3"I hadn’t seen *him* in"
4"I set the mug down"
5"My flat was directly above"
6"I hesitated at the door,"
7"It wouldn’t keep *him* out"
8"I unlocked the door and"
9"He hadn’t changed."
10"He didn’t offer a greeting,"
11"It was a look he’d"
12"he finally said, his voice"
13"He didn’t immediately respond, instead"
14"I pressed, forcing a firmness"
15"I braced myself."
16"He said it like it"
17"I leaned against the doorframe,"
18"He stepped inside, ignoring the"
19"He moved with an unsettling"
ratio0.535
9.30% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount64
totalSentences71
matches
0"The chipped porcelain felt cold"
1"Rain lashed against the windowpanes"
2"I’d nearly finished my second"
3"Silas was behind the bar,"
4"He glanced at the door,"
5"She’d mentioned swinging by with"
6"something to do with historical"
7"The thought barely registered."
8"I hadn’t seen *him* in"
9"I set the mug down"
10"Silas raised an eyebrow, unconvinced."
11"Silas, with a shrug that"
12"My flat was directly above"
13"Each step creaked under my"
14"I hesitated at the door,"
15"It wouldn’t keep *him* out"
16"I unlocked the door and"
17"He hadn’t changed."
18"The platinum blond hair was"
19"Rain plastered the front of"
ratio0.901
70.42% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences71
matches
0"Before I could offer a"
ratio0.014
27.65% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences31
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"My flat was directly above the bar, a convenience that had felt blissful until now."
1"He didn’t immediately respond, instead taking in the small space, his gaze sweeping over the worn furniture, the overflowing bookshelves, the general chaos that…"
2"The old, familiar pull, the magnetic force that had always existed between us, throbbed beneath the surface."
3"He stepped inside, ignoring the warning growl from Ptolemy, who retreated under the sofa."
4"But the stubborn, reckless part – the part that had always been drawn to the darkness that surrounded Lucien – whispered a different response."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags20
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"the name felt, a ghost of past intimacy"
1"Lucien said, a flicker of amusement crossing his face"
2"I prodded, the question hanging between us"
3"He paused, his gaze softening, just for a moment"
4"He leaned, his voice dropping to a whisper"
5"I asked, my voice tight with apprehension"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"I pressed (press)"
dialogueSentences50
tagDensity0.12
leniency0.24
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.04
77.6518%