| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 17 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "A large man built like [like]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 29 | | tagDensity | 0.586 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.059 | | effectiveRatio | 0.059 | |
| 77.60% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1116 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "nervously" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "slightly" | | 3 | "suddenly" | | 4 | "quickly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 41.76% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1116 | | totalAiIsms | 13 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "maw" | | 1 | "reminder" | | 2 | "clandestine" | | 3 | "sanctuary" | | 4 | "warmth" | | 5 | "vibrated" | | 6 | "tension" | | 7 | "flicker" | | 8 | "velvet" | | 9 | "sense of" | | 10 | "amidst" | | 11 | "disrupting" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 78 | | matches | | |
| 69.60% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 78 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 91 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 42 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 1 | | totalWords | 1120 | | ratio | 0.001 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 10 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 67.49% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 40 | | wordCount | 909 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 1.65 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Harlow | 1 | | Quinn | 15 | | Soho | 1 | | Tomás | 1 | | Herrera | 10 | | Veil | 3 | | Market | 3 | | Morris | 1 | | Raven | 1 | | Nest | 1 | | Saint | 1 | | Christopher | 1 | | Suddenly | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Tomás" | | 3 | "Herrera" | | 4 | "Market" | | 5 | "Morris" | | 6 | "Raven" | | 7 | "Saint" | | 8 | "Christopher" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.675 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 62 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like stepping into the heart of th" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.893 | | wordCount | 1120 | | matches | | 0 | "Not dramatically, but subtly, like a photograph developing in the dark" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 93.13% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 28 | | mean | 40 | | std | 19.04 | | cv | 0.476 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 66 | | 1 | 43 | | 2 | 91 | | 3 | 47 | | 4 | 71 | | 5 | 9 | | 6 | 26 | | 7 | 48 | | 8 | 46 | | 9 | 50 | | 10 | 50 | | 11 | 39 | | 12 | 33 | | 13 | 16 | | 14 | 20 | | 15 | 34 | | 16 | 48 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 58 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 47 | | 21 | 37 | | 22 | 46 | | 23 | 28 | | 24 | 35 | | 25 | 38 | | 26 | 58 | | 27 | 12 |
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| 96.27% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "were brokered" | | 1 | "were traded" | | 2 | "was gone" |
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| 59.15% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 142 | | matches | | 0 | "wasn’t running" | | 1 | "was running" | | 2 | "was beckoning" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 91 | | ratio | 0.077 | | matches | | 0 | "She wasn’t interested in a foot pursuit; she wanted the source." | | 1 | "The encrypted comms chatter had pointed to this man, this medic with a past, as the key to a series of increasingly bizarre disappearances – artists, musicians, academics – all with a shared connection to a clandestine art collective known only as ‘The Clique’." | | 2 | "Ahead, a flickering green sign – distinctive neon – promised refuge, a sanctuary of cheap whiskey and forgotten secrets." | | 3 | "Rough-looking men in dark suits nursed pints, while a lone figure – a wiry man with a predatory gaze – dealt cards at a tucked-away table." | | 4 | "Herrera finally turned, his brown eyes flashing with a mixture of defiance and something else – fear." | | 5 | "Quinn felt it first – a prickling sensation on the back of her neck, a sense of being watched." | | 6 | "A brief, brutal struggle ensued – a clash of fists and leather, punctuated by the shattering of bottles." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 350 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 12 | | adverbRatio | 0.03428571428571429 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.017142857142857144 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 91 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 91 | | mean | 12.31 | | std | 7.46 | | cv | 0.606 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 12 | | 1 | 14 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 8 | | 4 | 15 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 31 | | 7 | 19 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 11 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 44 | | 12 | 11 | | 13 | 19 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 26 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 14 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 29 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 17 | | 29 | 17 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 15 | | 33 | 26 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 22 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 8 | | 41 | 15 | | 42 | 16 | | 43 | 17 | | 44 | 9 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 10 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 7 | | 49 | 13 |
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| 46.89% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.34065934065934067 | | totalSentences | 91 | | uniqueOpeners | 31 | |
| 86.58% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "Suddenly, the room shifted." | | 1 | "Then she saw it." |
| | ratio | 0.026 | |
| 90.13% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 25 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "He wasn’t running from the" | | 1 | "He was running *towards* them," | | 2 | "she muttered, adjusting the worn" | | 3 | "She wasn’t interested in a" | | 4 | "she announced, her voice cutting" | | 5 | "He didn’t flinch, didn’t turn." | | 6 | "He simply continued his argument," | | 7 | "She gestured towards the rearview" | | 8 | "He glanced nervously around the" | | 9 | "he said, his voice strained" | | 10 | "She indicated a section of" | | 11 | "He hesitated, weighing his options." | | 12 | "She took a step closer" | | 13 | "he said, his voice rising" | | 14 | "he growled, his hand resting" | | 15 | "It was a known nexus" | | 16 | "She considered the man behind" | | 17 | "she asked, her voice tight" | | 18 | "He raised his hand, revealing" | | 19 | "It was a fragment, bleached" |
| | ratio | 0.325 | |
| 24.94% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 67 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "Detective Harlow Quinn’s leather boots" | | 1 | "He wasn’t running from the" | | 2 | "He was running *towards* them," | | 3 | "she muttered, adjusting the worn" | | 4 | "The movement sent a tiny" | | 5 | "Herrera disappeared into a narrow" | | 6 | "Quinn followed, her movements precise," | | 7 | "Years of chasing shadows had" | | 8 | "She wasn’t interested in a" | | 9 | "The encrypted comms chatter had" | | 10 | "The alley opened onto a" | | 11 | "The Raven’s Nest." | | 12 | "Quinn pushed through the door," | | 13 | "The bar was thick with" | | 14 | "The air vibrated with a" | | 15 | "Quinn spotted Herrera near the" | | 16 | "The predatory man’s response was" | | 17 | "she announced, her voice cutting" | | 18 | "He didn’t flinch, didn’t turn." | | 19 | "He simply continued his argument," |
| | ratio | 0.87 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 40 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Quinn spotted Herrera near the bar, arguing with the man, his hands gesturing emphatically." | | 1 | "She adjusted her watch, the cold metal a sharp reminder of her lost partner, of the mysteries that clung to her like the damp evening air." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 17 | | uselessAdditionCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "she announced, her voice cutting through the din" | | 1 | "he said, his voice strained" | | 2 | "Quinn countered, her hand instinctively moving towards her sidearm" | | 3 | "he said, his voice rising slightly" | | 4 | "Quinn pressed, her eyes narrowed" | | 5 | "he growled, his hand resting on the handle of a heavy bottle" | | 6 | "she asked, her voice tight" | | 7 | "he said, his voice smooth and unsettling" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 10 | | fancyCount | 5 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "she announced (announce)" | | 2 | "Quinn pressed (press)" | | 3 | "he growled (growl)" | | 4 | "Herrera whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 29 | | tagDensity | 0.345 | | leniency | 0.69 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.345 | |