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Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY7V88H3YRG6F8H5KV1360P
Run Details
Model:
Gemma 3 12B
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Thriller: chase through city streets
Duration:
44.1s
Cost:
$0.000275
Provider:
DeepInfra
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
80.56%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
33.90%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
100.00%
Cliché density
(details)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
100.00%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
83.33%
Name drop frequency
(details)
88.27%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
99.51%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
82.92%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
(details)
54.08%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
58.48%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
79.65%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
21.40%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Technical jargon density
(details)
0.00%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
81.03%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
82.1047%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>
Model response
Messages
Meta
AI
Rain slicked the pavement, reflecting
the neon glow of shop signs in distorted smears.
Harlow Quinn cursed, the spray
stinging her face as she pushed through the throng of late-night revelers spilling out of a pub. Ahead, the silhouette of her suspect – a known fence for arcane artifacts – vanished into a narrow alleyway.
She risked a glance over
her shoulder. No backup in sight, the radio crackling static.
Just the relentless drumming of
rain and the
pulse
of the city.
She tightened her grip on
the worn leather strap of her holster. Eighteen years on the force, chasing shadows. This felt like another one.
The alley opened into a
wider street, the suspect sprinting across, dodging a black cab.
Harlow surged after him, adrenaline
tightening her muscles.
He ducked beneath a wrought
iron gate, disappearing into a courtyard. The Raven’s Nest. Silas’ bar. Not exactly a surprise.
The man had a fondness
for strong drink and stronger secrets. Harlow’s
jaw clenched
.
It was a location frequented
by the clique, the group she’d been circling for months, convinced of their involvement in something far darker than petty theft. She burst through the gate, the scent of stale beer and damp wool hitting her.
The bar’s distinctive green neon
sign hummed above, a malevolent eye in the
gloom
. Inside, the air hung thick with smoke and the murmur of hushed conversations. The suspect wasn’t here. Not visible, at least. "Looking for someone, Detective?"
Silas, the bar owner, leaned
against the counter, polishing a glass with a practiced air. His eyes, dark and knowing, met hers. A shark’s gaze.
He was built like a
heavyweight boxer, every movement slow and deliberate. Harlow ignored the pointed question. "He came in here. Tall, scar on his left arm." Silas feigned a thoughtful expression. "Many gentlemen frequent my establishment with scars, Detective. A city like this breeds them."
He placed the glass down
with a soft thud. Harlow
scanned
the room, assessing the patrons. A motley crew – occultists, collectors, the occasionally desperate soul.
She spotted the glint of
a Saint Christopher medallion around a man’s neck. Tomás Herrera. The paramedic who moonlighted as a healer for the clique’s more… unusual ailments. “Herrera,”
she said, her voice low
. “He with you?” Silas’ smile didn’t reach his eyes. “Tommy’s out on an errand. Important one.” Harlow didn’t buy it. “What kind of errand requires disappearing in a hurry?”
His smile widened, a flash
of white teeth in the dim light. “Detective, you wound me. I run a respectable establishment.”
He gestured towards a bookshelf
lining one wall. "Perhaps a drink to soothe your… frustrations?" Harlow ignored him, her gaze fixed on the bookshelf.
It felt wrong, too perfectly
aligned
, too… solid. A hunch, a
whisper
in the back of her mind.
She ran her hand along
the spines, searching for something, anything.
Her fingers brushed against a
seam, a subtle shift in the wood. A barely perceptible click. The bookshelf swung inward, revealing a narrow passage descending into darkness. A stale, earthy smell wafted out, overlaid with something else… something indefinable, ancient. “Well, now,”
Silas drawled, his voice losing its jovial facade
. "It seems you’ve discovered my little secret." Harlow didn’t respond, already peering into the passage.
It led downwards, carved from
what
looked like stone
. At the bottom, she could just make out a faint, flickering light.
She could hear voices, muffled
but distinct. “Don’t go down there, Detective,”
Silas cautioned, a hint of steel creeping into his tone
. "You wouldn't like what you find." She ignored him. She had to know. The fence, Silas’ evasiveness, the hidden passage…
it all pointed to something
bigger, something she’d been chasing for months. She drew her weapon, the cold metal a reassuring
weight
in her hand. "Tell me, Silas. What is this?" Silas shrugged, his expression
unreadable
. “A shortcut. Some of my patrons prefer the… discreet route.” Discreet? This was more than discreet. This
felt like a descent into another world
. She started down the passage, the stone steps slick with moisture. The air grew colder with each step, the earthy smell intensifying. The voices grew louder, clearer now. A
cacophony
of bartering, laughter, and something else… something unsettlingly alien. The passage opened into a vast cavern, lit by hundreds of flickering lanterns hanging from the ceiling. The sight that met her eyes stole her breath away. A market. An underground market unlike anything she’d ever seen. Stalls lined the cavern walls, overflowing with strange and wondrous objects. Cages held bizarre creatures – winged reptiles, shimmering insects, things she couldn’t even
begin to
identify. Vendors hawked their wares with a frenetic energy, their voices a blend of languages she didn’t recognize. This was The Veil Market. She'd heard whispers, rumors among the occult underground. A black market for the supernatural, moving locations with the lunar cycle. The abandoned Tube station beneath Camden, the rumors stated. She hadn’t believed them. There,
amidst
the chaos, she saw him. The fence, weaving through the crowd, disappearing behind a stall laden with vials filled with bubbling, iridescent liquids. He
was heading
deeper into the market. Into the unknown. Harlow
scanned
the crowd, searching for an exit, a way out of this subterranean labyrinth. Every face was a stranger, every shadow a
potential
threat. She was alone, outgunned, and
completely
out of her element. But she was a detective. And she didn’t back down. She took a step forward, then another, pushing her way through the throng. The market
pulsed
with an eerie energy, a vibration that she
could feel
in her bones. A woman with eyes like polished obsidian offered her a vial of shimmering dust. A man with scaled skin whispered an invitation to a private auction. Harlow ignored them, her focus solely on the fence. He
was getting
further away, disappearing into a maze of stalls. She reached a crossroads, three paths leading into the darkness. A sign, written in a language she didn’t understand, hung above. A voice startled her. “Lost, Detective?” She turned to see Tomás Herrera standing nearby, his face pale, his Saint Christopher medallion
gleaming
in the lantern light. A dark stain marred his forearm. “Herrera,”
she said, her voice tight
. “What is this place?” He hesitated, his eyes darting around
nervously
. "This is… a place where things are traded. Things that shouldn't be." “Like arcane artifacts?” she pressed. He nodded
slowly
. “And much more. You shouldn't be here, Detective. It’s dangerous.” “I’m investigating a crime,”
she said, her hand resting on her holster
. “And that man, the fence… he’s my lead.” Herrera shook his head. “You don’t understand. He’s just a small fish. There are forces at work here… forces you can’t comprehend.” Harlow frowned. “What forces?” He glanced over his shoulder, as if afraid of
being overheard
. "The market caters to powerful patrons. People who can make your life
very
… unpleasant.” She considered his words. Part of her wanted to turn back, to report what she'd found and let someone else deal with it. But she'd come too far. This market, this obsession of hers, this was her mission. “Which way did he go?”
she asked, her voice resolute
. Herrera pointed down the right-hand path. “That way. Towards the Crimson Quarter. But I urge you, Detective. Turn back. This is not a place for you.” Harlow took a deep breath, the heavy air filling her lungs. She looked back at the entrance, a dark passage leading back to the world she knew.
Then she turned and started
down the right-hand path. “Tell Silas I said hello,” she called over her shoulder. Herrera didn’t respond. The Crimson Quarter. She had a feeling it was going to be a long night.
created_at
"2026-02-20T19:18:53.979Z"
2/20/2026, 7:18:53 PM
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182717
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536
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generation_time
43974
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1164
tokens_completion
2109
native_tokens_prompt
1049
native_tokens_completion
1789
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(null)
native_tokens_reasoning
0
native_tokens_cached
0
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(null)
num_input_audio_prompt
(null)
num_media_completion
0
num_search_results
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false
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"stop"
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"stop"
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provider_responses
0
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36
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"google/gemma-3-12b-it"
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"Crusoe"
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429
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false
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51
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"google/gemma-3-12b-it"
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"DeepInfra"
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200
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
10
adverbTagCount
0
adverbTags
(empty)
dialogueSentences
29
tagDensity
0.345
leniency
0.69
rawRatio
0
effectiveRatio
0
80.56%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
1286
totalAiIsmAdverbs
5
found
0
adverb
"perfectly"
count
1
1
adverb
"completely"
count
1
2
adverb
"nervously"
count
1
3
adverb
"slowly"
count
1
4
adverb
"very"
count
1
highlights
0
"perfectly"
1
"completely"
2
"nervously"
3
"slowly"
4
"very"
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
33.90%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
1286
totalAiIsms
17
found
0
word
"pulse"
count
1
1
word
"jaw clenched"
count
1
2
word
"gloom"
count
1
3
word
"scanned"
count
2
4
word
"glint"
count
1
5
word
"aligned"
count
1
6
word
"whisper"
count
1
7
word
"facade"
count
1
8
word
"weight"
count
1
9
word
"unreadable"
count
1
10
word
"cacophony"
count
1
11
word
"amidst"
count
1
12
word
"potential"
count
1
13
word
"pulsed"
count
1
14
word
"could feel"
count
1
15
word
"gleaming"
count
1
highlights
0
"pulse"
1
"jaw clenched"
2
"gloom"
3
"scanned"
4
"glint"
5
"aligned"
6
"whisper"
7
"facade"
8
"weight"
9
"unreadable"
10
"cacophony"
11
"amidst"
12
"potential"
13
"pulsed"
14
"could feel"
15
"gleaming"
100.00%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
1
maxInWindow
1
found
0
label
"jaw/fists clenched"
count
1
highlights
0
"jaw clenched"
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
122
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
1
narrationSentences
122
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
0
"begin to"
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
143
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
26
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
0
markdownWords
0
totalWords
1287
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
12
unquotedAttributions
0
matches
(empty)
83.33%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
37
wordCount
1066
uniqueNames
15
maxNameDensity
1.13
worstName
"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity
2.5
worstWindowName
"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Quinn
1
Raven
1
Nest
1
Harlow
12
Saint
2
Christopher
2
Herrera
5
Veil
1
Market
1
Tube
1
Camden
1
Tomás
2
Crimson
1
Quarter
1
Silas
5
persons
0
"Quinn"
1
"Raven"
2
"Harlow"
3
"Saint"
4
"Christopher"
5
"Herrera"
6
"Tomás"
7
"Silas"
places
0
"Market"
globalScore
0.937
windowScore
0.833
88.27%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
81
glossingSentenceCount
2
matches
0
"looked like stone"
1
"felt like a descent into another world"
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
0
per1kWords
0
wordCount
1287
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
143
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
50
mean
25.74
std
15.17
cv
0.589
sampleLengths
0
55
1
51
2
34
3
49
4
50
5
4
6
37
7
15
8
28
9
45
10
9
11
13
12
13
13
36
14
54
15
24
16
17
17
36
18
21
19
26
20
19
21
15
22
36
23
17
24
27
25
54
26
38
27
25
28
10
29
45
30
55
31
20
32
21
33
6
34
26
35
10
36
19
37
5
38
13
39
20
40
22
41
4
42
25
43
38
44
10
45
26
46
36
47
10
48
3
49
15
99.51%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
2
totalSentences
122
matches
0
"was built"
1
"being overheard"
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
2
totalVerbs
176
matches
0
"was heading"
1
"was getting"
82.92%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
4
semicolonCount
0
flaggedSentences
3
totalSentences
143
ratio
0.021
matches
0
"Ahead, the silhouette of her suspect – a known fence for arcane artifacts – vanished into a narrow alleyway."
1
"A motley crew – occultists, collectors, the occasionally desperate soul."
2
"Cages held bizarre creatures – winged reptiles, shimmering insects, things she couldn’t even begin to identify."
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
294
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
5
adverbRatio
0.017006802721088437
lyAdverbCount
0
lyAdverbRatio
0
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
143
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
143
mean
9
std
5
cv
0.555
sampleLengths
0
14
1
22
2
19
3
7
4
8
5
12
6
12
7
7
8
5
9
15
10
8
11
11
12
3
13
2
14
4
15
11
16
3
17
26
18
15
19
14
20
13
21
4
22
4
23
4
24
15
25
7
26
3
27
12
28
5
29
10
30
5
31
23
32
7
33
10
34
13
35
2
36
11
37
2
38
6
39
3
40
6
41
7
42
4
43
9
44
12
45
17
46
7
47
9
48
7
49
1
54.08%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
6
diversityRatio
0.34965034965034963
totalSentences
143
uniqueOpeners
50
58.48%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
2
totalSentences
114
matches
0
"Just the relentless drumming of"
1
"Then she turned and started"
ratio
0.018
79.65%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
40
totalSentences
114
matches
0
"She risked a glance over"
1
"She tightened her grip on"
2
"He ducked beneath a wrought"
3
"It was a location frequented"
4
"She burst through the gate,"
5
"His eyes, dark and knowing,"
6
"He was built like a"
7
"He placed the glass down"
8
"She spotted the glint of"
9
"she said, her voice low"
10
"His smile widened, a flash"
11
"He gestured towards a bookshelf"
12
"It felt wrong, too perfectly"
13
"She ran her hand along"
14
"Her fingers brushed against a"
15
"It led downwards, carved from"
16
"She could hear voices, muffled"
17
"She ignored him."
18
"She had to know."
19
"it all pointed to something"
ratio
0.351
21.40%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
100
totalSentences
114
matches
0
"Rain slicked the pavement, reflecting"
1
"Harlow Quinn cursed, the spray"
2
"She risked a glance over"
3
"She tightened her grip on"
4
"This felt like another one."
5
"The alley opened into a"
6
"Harlow surged after him, adrenaline"
7
"He ducked beneath a wrought"
8
"The Raven’s Nest."
9
"The man had a fondness"
10
"Harlow’s jaw clenched."
11
"It was a location frequented"
12
"She burst through the gate,"
13
"The bar’s distinctive green neon"
14
"The suspect wasn’t here."
15
"Silas, the bar owner, leaned"
16
"His eyes, dark and knowing,"
17
"A shark’s gaze."
18
"He was built like a"
19
"Harlow ignored the pointed question."
ratio
0.877
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
0
totalSentences
114
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
100.00%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
52
technicalSentenceCount
1
matches
0
"The sight that met her eyes stole her breath away."
0.00%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
10
uselessAdditionCount
6
matches
0
"she said, her voice low"
1
"Silas drawled, his voice losing its jovial facade"
2
"Silas cautioned, a hint of steel creeping into his tone"
3
"she said, her voice tight"
4
"she said, her hand resting on her holster"
5
"she asked, her voice resolute"
81.03%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
7
fancyCount
2
fancyTags
0
"Silas drawled (drawl)"
1
"she pressed (press)"
dialogueSentences
29
tagDensity
0.241
leniency
0.483
rawRatio
0.286
effectiveRatio
0.138
82.1047%