Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY7VDP2QAS6QZRB5VGFVBGX

Run Details

Duration:
17.1s
Cost:
$0.001641
Provider:
xAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign flickered above the door to The Raven's Nest, casting erratic shadows on the wet Soho pavement. Rain slicked the streets, turning the evening into a blur of umbrellas and hurried footsteps. Aurora Carter pushed through the heavy wooden door, shaking droplets from her black hair. The bar's warmth enveloped her immediately—dim lights hung low over scarred oak tables, and the air carried the sharp tang of whiskey mixed with aged leather from the walls' black-and-white photographs. Old maps curled at the edges, pinned haphazardly, as if someone had tacked up forgotten journeys. She hadn't planned on stopping here tonight. Her shift at Golden Empress had dragged, deliveries through the downpour leaving her soaked and irritable. But her flat upstairs called, and the bar below offered a shortcut, a place to dry off before facing the empty rooms. Rory scanned the room out of habit, her bright blue eyes catching the sparse crowd: a couple in the corner, murmuring over gin; a lone figure nursing a pint at the end of the bar. Then she saw him. Silas Blackwood stood behind the counter, polishing a glass with a rag that had seen better days. His grey-streaked auburn hair caught the light, the neatly trimmed beard framing a face etched deeper than she remembered. He moved with that same deliberate grace, but the slight limp in his left leg betrayed the years. The silver signet ring glinted on his right hand as he set the glass down. He looked up, hazel eyes locking onto hers, and for a split second, the rag froze in his grip. "Rory?" His voice cut through the low hum of the jukebox, low and rough like gravel underfoot. She froze midway to the stairs at the back. The bar's familiar creak seemed to amplify the silence stretching between them. Five years. Maybe six. Last time she'd seen him, she'd been a ghost of herself, fresh from Cardiff, bruises hidden under long sleeves. He'd given her a key to the flat upstairs without a word, just a nod and a spare set of linens. They'd shared stories over late-night pours back then—his tales of shadows in Prague, her rants about law lectures and that bastard Evan. Friends, in the fractured way exiles become friends. Now, he looked... smaller, somehow. The quiet authority still clung to him, but the spark in his eyes had dimmed, replaced by something resigned, like a map folded one too many times. "Silas." She crossed the room, boots leaving wet prints on the floorboards. The counter separated them, a polished barrier scarred from countless elbows. "Didn't expect to find you slinging drinks." He set the rag aside, leaning forward on his elbows. The limp meant he favored his right side, a subtle shift she noticed immediately. "World turns. I own the place now. Full circle." His gaze flicked to her wrist, where the small crescent scar peeked from her sleeve cuff. "You look... steady." Steady. The word hung, loaded. She pulled out a stool, the wood groaning as she sat. "Steady's one word for it. Pour me something strong. It's been a night." He nodded, reaching for a bottle of single malt without asking. The liquid glugged into a tumbler, amber catching the light. He slid it across, his ring tapping the wood. "Delivery run? Yu-Fei's still got you hauling chow mein through monsoons?" She took the glass, the warmth seeping into her palm. "Pays the rent. Beats Pre-Law debates." A sip burned down her throat, sharp and grounding. "What about you? Last I heard, you were untangling knots for the Crown. Not hiding behind a bar rag." Silas poured himself a measure, clinking his glass against hers before drinking. The motion pulled at his beard, silver threads more prominent now. "Knots got too tight. Prague, '09. Knee never healed right." He tapped his left leg under the counter, a faint echo. "Retired. Opened this hole to keep busy. Contacts trickle in, but mostly it's locals drowning regrets." Regrets. The word landed like rain on the windowpane beside them. Rory traced the rim of her glass, watching the condensation bead. Back then, he'd been the Spymaster to her—sharp, unyielding, the man who saw through her fleeing from Evan like it was a mission brief. She'd crashed in the flat for months, listening to his war stories, feeling less like a runaway. But life pulled her away: a string of odd jobs, Eva's calls from Cardiff fading, the city swallowing her whole. She hadn't come down much after the first year, too tangled in her own mess to face his knowing eyes. "You changed the sign?" She nodded toward the wall, where a faded photograph of a raven mid-flight hung crooked. He followed her gaze, a ghost of a smile tugging his lips. "Eva's doing. Said the old one looked like a dive. She's got an eye for that." Eva. The name twisted in her gut. Childhood anchor, the one who'd shoved her toward London. "Still in touch with her?" "Letters. Postcards from wherever she's wandered." He leaned back, crossing his arms. The signet ring caught the light again, engraved with a crest she couldn't quite place. "What brings you back? Flat's been empty six months. Thought you'd ghosted for good." Rory set her glass down harder than intended, the thunk echoing. "Work dried up in the suburbs. Needed a reset. Didn't know you'd still be here, propping up the bar like some relic." "Relic." He chuckled, low and dry, but his eyes sharpened. "That's rich, coming from you. Last time, you were all fire—ranting about injustice, that scar fresh from whatever playground scrap. Now? You walk in like the rain owns you." She met his stare, the blue of her eyes clashing with his hazel. Fire. Yeah, she'd had that once. Cardiff grit, mixed with her da's courtroom bluster and her mum's quiet steel. But Evan had chipped it away, and London finished the job—deliveries in the fog, nights staring at ceilings, wondering if she'd ever outrun the quiet. "Life wears you down, Si. You know that better than most." He poured another round, the bottle glugging slower now. "Prague taught me that. Botched drop—asset turned, bullets flying. Woke up in a safe house with a leg that clicks like a bad lock." His voice dropped, the words spilling like he'd held them too long. "Came back to nothing. No parades, just a pension and echoes. This place? It's my cover now. No more shadows." The jukebox clicked over, a slow jazz number filling the gaps. Rory watched his hands, steady despite the limp, the ring a constant. He'd been her anchor once, the man who'd slipped her a burner phone "just in case." But she'd drifted, letters unanswered, visits forgotten. Regret coiled in her chest, unspoken, like the maps on the wall hiding routes to nowhere. "You ever think about going back?" She swirled her drink, ice clinking. "The game. Not this." Silas's jaw tightened, beard shadowing the line. "Every damn night. But the knee says no. And the mirrors." He gestured vaguely at his reflection in the bottle's curve. "Time carves deeper than knives." She laughed, short and bitter, pushing hair from her face. The scar on her wrist itched, a phantom pull. "Tell me about it. I wanted the bar, the bench—da's dream. Now I'm dodging traffic with takeout bags. Evan's a memory, but the weight sticks." He leaned closer, the counter's edge digging into his arms. "Evan was a fool. You outran him. That's more than most." Outran. The word stung. She'd run from Cardiff, from Eva's worried calls, from Silas's quiet offers of work in his "network." Feared dragging him into her chaos. Now, sitting here, the years gaped like the secret room behind the bookshelf—hidden, full of dust and what-ifs. "Why didn't you call?" His question sliced clean, no preamble. "After you vanished upstairs. I kept the flat for you. Figured you'd circle back." Rory's fingers tightened on the glass. "Called? On what, your ghost line? You were the one who taught me to cut ties clean." She paused, the jazz saxophone wailing softly. "Truth? I was ashamed. Showed up broken, left half-fixed. Didn't want you seeing the rest." Silas's eyes narrowed, the hazel flecked with something raw. "Broken's a state, Rory. Not a sentence. I carried my own from Prague—nights replaying the drop, the blood." He tapped the ring, a rhythmic clink. "Family crest. Reminder of debts unpaid." She glanced at it, the engraving sharp under the light. "Debts. Like the flat rent I never paid?" "Like the stories we traded." He drained his glass, setting it down with finality. "You were the kid with out-of-the-box fire. Law school dropout with a scar and a stare that saw through bullshit. I envied that." Envy. From the Spymaster. She snorted, but it caught in her throat. The bar's door swung open, letting in a gust of rain-scented air, but they ignored it. The newcomer ordered at the far end, voice muffled. "And you?" She countered, voice steadying. "The untouchable agent, limping through pints. What happened to the man who wired London like a web?" He shrugged, but the motion pulled at his shoulder, age showing in the stiffness. "Web frayed. Contacts retired or buried. Now it's this—pouring for souls like ours." His gaze held hers, probing. "But you. London chewed you up?" "Spit me out." She finished her drink, the burn fading to warmth. "Eva writes about Cardiff like it's paradise. Da's cases, Mum's lessons. I read them and feel... adrift." Silence stretched, broken only by the ice melting in their glasses. Silas reached under the counter, pulling out a small tin of matches. He struck one, the flare illuminating the lines on his face—crow's feet from squinting at shadows, perhaps. "Adrift's where the real changes hit. I thought retirement meant peace. Turns out it's just waiting." Waiting. For what? Her to return? Him to reclaim the field? The tension hummed between them, thick as the smoke from the match dying out. Rory stood, stool scraping back. But she didn't move toward the stairs. "One more round. For old times." He nodded, already reaching for the bottle. The pour filled the air with promise and ache, the weight of years settling like dust on the photographs. They clinked glasses again, the sound a bridge over the gap, but the unspoken regrets lingered in the dim light, heavy as the rain outside.
created_at"2026-02-20T19:18:59.536Z" 2/20/2026, 7:18:59 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"He leaned back [back]"
1"He gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
dialogueSentences47
tagDensity0.426
leniency0.851
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.085
97.17% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1767
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
34.92% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1767
totalAiIsms23
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"footsteps"
count1
2
word"warmth"
count3
3
word"scanned"
count1
4
word"etched"
count1
5
word"familiar"
count1
6
word"silence"
count2
7
word"fractured"
count1
8
word"flicked"
count1
9
word"echo"
count1
10
word"traced"
count1
11
word"echoing"
count1
12
word"echoes"
count1
13
word"unspoken"
count2
14
word"weight"
count2
15
word"rhythmic"
count1
16
word"reminder"
count1
17
word"tension"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"footsteps"
2"warmth"
3"scanned"
4"etched"
5"familiar"
6"silence"
7"fractured"
8"flicked"
9"echo"
10"traced"
11"echoing"
12"echoes"
13"unspoken"
14"weight"
15"rhythmic"
16"reminder"
17"tension"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences109
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences109
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences136
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1747
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions40
wordCount1240
uniqueNames21
maxNameDensity0.48
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Soho1
Carter1
Old1
Golden1
Empress1
Blackwood1
Cardiff4
Prague1
Evan3
Steady1
Silas6
Regrets1
Spymaster2
Eva3
London2
Feared1
Rory6
Envy1
Silence1
persons
0"Nest"
1"Carter"
2"Empress"
3"Blackwood"
4"Evan"
5"Silas"
6"Regrets"
7"Eva"
8"Feared"
9"Rory"
10"Silence"
places
0"Raven"
1"Soho"
2"Golden"
3"Cardiff"
4"Prague"
5"Spymaster"
6"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences87
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"quite place"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1747
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences136
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs41
mean42.61
std23.49
cv0.551
sampleLengths
096
180
24
388
417
595
632
730
852
929
1041
1144
1260
13103
1419
1528
1621
1741
1833
1939
2068
2165
2262
2316
2433
2544
2621
2745
2824
2945
3040
3118
3237
3337
3423
3538
3629
3756
3825
3918
4051
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences109
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs222
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences136
ratio0.051
matches
0"The bar's warmth enveloped her immediately—dim lights hung low over scarred oak tables, and the air carried the sharp tang of whiskey mixed with aged leather from the walls' black-and-white photographs."
1"Rory scanned the room out of habit, her bright blue eyes catching the sparse crowd: a couple in the corner, murmuring over gin; a lone figure nursing a pint at the end of the bar."
2"They'd shared stories over late-night pours back then—his tales of shadows in Prague, her rants about law lectures and that bastard Evan."
3"Back then, he'd been the Spymaster to her—sharp, unyielding, the man who saw through her fleeing from Evan like it was a mission brief."
4"But Evan had chipped it away, and London finished the job—deliveries in the fog, nights staring at ceilings, wondering if she'd ever outrun the quiet."
5"Now, sitting here, the years gaped like the secret room behind the bookshelf—hidden, full of dust and what-ifs."
6"He struck one, the flare illuminating the lines on his face—crow's feet from squinting at shadows, perhaps."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount827
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.03385731559854897
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.0048367593712212815
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences136
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences136
mean12.85
std7.43
cv0.578
sampleLengths
020
115
214
331
416
57
616
722
835
94
1017
1119
1218
1315
1419
1517
169
1712
182
192
2019
2121
2222
238
243
252
2627
2712
2811
297
3010
3114
3225
333
341
354
3611
3713
3811
3910
409
4111
4210
4315
4419
4512
4611
4721
4816
491
81.86% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.5
totalSentences136
uniqueOpeners68
34.01% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences98
matches
0"Then she saw him."
ratio0.01
28.16% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount47
totalSentences98
matches
0"She hadn't planned on stopping"
1"Her shift at Golden Empress"
2"His grey-streaked auburn hair caught"
3"He moved with that same"
4"He looked up, hazel eyes"
5"His voice cut through the"
6"She froze midway to the"
7"He'd given her a key"
8"They'd shared stories over late-night"
9"She crossed the room, boots"
10"He set the rag aside,"
11"His gaze flicked to her"
12"She pulled out a stool,"
13"He nodded, reaching for a"
14"He slid it across, his"
15"She took the glass, the"
16"He tapped his left leg"
17"She'd crashed in the flat"
18"She hadn't come down much"
19"She nodded toward the wall,"
ratio0.48
21.22% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount86
totalSentences98
matches
0"The green neon sign flickered"
1"Rain slicked the streets, turning"
2"Aurora Carter pushed through the"
3"The bar's warmth enveloped her"
4"She hadn't planned on stopping"
5"Her shift at Golden Empress"
6"Rory scanned the room out"
7"Silas Blackwood stood behind the"
8"His grey-streaked auburn hair caught"
9"He moved with that same"
10"The silver signet ring glinted"
11"He looked up, hazel eyes"
12"His voice cut through the"
13"She froze midway to the"
14"The bar's familiar creak seemed"
15"He'd given her a key"
16"They'd shared stories over late-night"
17"Friends, in the fractured way"
18"The quiet authority still clung"
19"She crossed the room, boots"
ratio0.878
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences98
matches
0"Now, he looked..."
1"Now, sitting here, the years"
ratio0.02
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences53
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Silas Blackwood stood behind the counter, polishing a glass with a rag that had seen better days."
1"Back then, he'd been the Spymaster to her—sharp, unyielding, the man who saw through her fleeing from Evan like it was a mission brief."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags20
uselessAdditionCount7
matches
0"The bar's warmth enveloped, and the air carried the sharp tang of whiskey mixed with aged leather from the walls' black-and-white photographs"
1"She crossed, boots leaving wet prints on the floorboards"
2"His voice dropped, the words spilling like he'd held them too long"
3"She swirled, ice clinking"
4"She paused, the jazz saxophone wailing softly"
5"She countered, voice steadying"
6"She finished, the burn fading to warmth"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"He chuckled (chuckle)"
dialogueSentences47
tagDensity0.021
leniency0.043
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.043
83.2451%