Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY7VNG48F6JDNBF4S75KKQ3

Run Details

Duration:
17.0s
Cost:
$0.000157
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air in the abandoned Tube station tasted of damp concrete and something else, something acrid and faintly floral – the scent of burnt rosemary, Detective Harlow Quinn thought, wrinkling her nose. Rain hammered against the vaulted ceiling, a relentless, grey drumbeat that did little to mask the low hum of energy that vibrated beneath her feet. The Veil Market. It always smelled like this. She adjusted the worn leather strap of her watch, the rhythmic tick a small, solid counterpoint to the unsettling stillness of the place. DS Morris would have called it chaotic, a riot of illicit transactions and whispered bargains. Quinn preferred to think of it as a carefully constructed fraud. “Anything?” she asked, her voice clipped and deliberate, as she approached Eva Kowalski, who was meticulously photographing a pile of iridescent scales scattered on a stained concrete slab. Eva, bundled in a too-large raincoat, nervously tucked a stray curl behind her round glasses. “Just… this,” Eva said, her voice barely audible above the rain. “They seem to be from a Duskwing moth, heavily processed. Not natural. And the residue… it’s a Class Three alchemical stimulant. Rare, and extremely expensive. Usually only available to the higher-level merchants.” Quinn knelt, pulling out a small, sterile kit from her satchel. The kit felt reassuringly familiar, a small pocket of order in this swirling vortex of the bizarre. She carefully collected samples of the scales, placing them in evidence bags. “Expensive doesn’t automatically equal criminal, Eva. It could be a collector.” “A collector who’s deliberately contaminating a moth’s exoskeleton? And who’s using a Class Three stimulant as a base for some kind of… ritual?” Eva’s fingers tightened around her camera. “The pattern, Detective, it’s not random. There’s intentionality. And it’s layered.” The victim, a Mr. Silas Blackwood, lay sprawled on his back amongst the scales. He was dressed in an ostentatious velvet smoking jacket, the fabric now stained a sickly purple. A single, perfectly formed rose, crafted entirely from obsidian, rested on his chest. It wasn’t the rose itself that bothered Quinn – these kinds of morbid trinkets were commonplace in the Market – but the way it was placed. It hadn’t simply been placed; it had been forced. There were faint, silvery lines marring the velvet around the base of the rose, almost invisible unless you knew what to look for. “Cause of death?” Quinn asked, her eyes scanning the scene. “Internal bleeding,” Eva replied, consulting her digital notepad. “Sharp force trauma. Likely inflicted with a bladed instrument. The wounds are… inconsistent. Almost like they were deliberately obscured.” Quinn noticed something else. The tracks. Not footprints, exactly. More like… impressions. Faint, shimmering outlines on the damp concrete, too subtle to register without a specific lens. She pulled out a small magnifying glass from her kit. As she focused, the impressions solidified, revealing themselves as the claw marks of a creature that wasn't entirely animal. “There’s something else here,” she said, her voice low. “Something that isn't human.” “You don’t think…” Eva hesitated, her freckled face pale. “A Shade?” Quinn didn’t answer directly. She moved to a side wall, running her gloved hand along the rough concrete. There, almost concealed by a layer of grime, was a faint etching – a stylized depiction of a serpent coiled around a key. The same symbol was etched into the handle of a small, ornate dagger discovered clutched in Blackwood’s hand. “The Serpent’s Key,” Quinn murmured, consulting the mental database she’d cultivated over years of dealing with the Market. “A symbol of access. To what, precisely, remains unclear. But it’s tied to several unresolved cases of disappearances and… unusual deaths. All linked to this Market.” “Blackwood was a collector,” Eva offered, her voice still shaky. “He specialized in rare artifacts, particularly ones with… occult significance.” “He was also a negotiator,” Quinn corrected. “He dealt with the bad actors here. And he was about to expose something.” She held up the Veil Compass, its brass casing gleaming faintly in the dim light. The needle frantically spun, then settled, pointing directly at the rose on Blackwood's chest. “The Compass is reacting to the rose,” Eva said, her eyes widening. “It’s… pulling towards the residual energy. It’s not just a compass, Detective. It’s a tracker of the woven.” “The woven,” Quinn echoed, the phrase tasting like ash in her mouth. It referred to the underlying network of supernatural connections that bound the Veil Market together – the ley lines, the pocket dimensions, the shadowy entities that drifted through the spaces between realities. Suddenly, a voice cut through the rain and the hum of energy. "Impressive, Detective. Truly impressive.” Standing at the entrance to the chamber, bathed in the pale light filtering through a gap in the ceiling, was Inspector Davies. He was a politician's choice, someone who favored bureaucracy over investigation, and a staunch believer in the mundane. He wore a perfectly tailored suit that seemed oddly out of place in the dilapidated station. “I wasn’t aware you were using… esoteric equipment,” Davies said, his tone laced with thinly veiled disapproval. “We’ve already secured the perimeter. Standard procedure. We’re prioritizing a straightforward murder investigation.” “Straightforward?” Quinn raised an eyebrow. “A man murdered with a bladed instrument, his body marked with the sign of the Serpent’s Key, and a sibylline rose placed deliberately on his chest? That’s your definition of straightforward, Davies?” “The Market is a den of iniquity, Quinn. It’s best to treat it as such. Focus on the criminal element, the potential smuggling rings, the gambling debts. Leave the… mythmaking to the specialists.” Quinn ignored him, turning her attention back to the details. “Eva, run a spectral analysis on the rose. I want to know everything about it – its material composition, its energy signature, its history.” She pointed to the shimmering impressions on the floor. “And I want you to enhance those tracks. See if you can identify the creature that left them.” Davies shifted uncomfortably. “Quinn, I don’t have the resources for—” “I’ll requisition them,” Quinn said, her voice hardening. “Someone needs to understand what happened here. Someone needs to find out why a Shade would go to such lengths to mark a dead man.” She looked back at the rose, a prickle of unease crawling across her skin. The Veil Compass continued to spin, relentlessly pulling her deeper into the labyrinthine secrets of the Veil Market. She felt it, a cold thread connecting Blackwood’s death to something ancient, something profoundly dark. And she knew, with a certainty that chilled her to the bone, that Davies was wrong. This wasn't just a murder. This was a summoning.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Eva’s fingers tightened around [around]"
dialogueSentences33
tagDensity0.515
leniency1
rawRatio0.059
effectiveRatio0.059
50.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1100
totalAiIsmAdverbs11
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count2
1
adverb"nervously"
count1
2
adverb"deliberately"
count3
3
adverb"perfectly"
count2
4
adverb"precisely"
count1
5
adverb"suddenly"
count1
6
adverb"truly"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"nervously"
2"deliberately"
3"perfectly"
4"precisely"
5"suddenly"
6"truly"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Blackwood"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
13.64% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1100
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"vibrated"
count1
1
word"rhythmic"
count1
2
word"chaotic"
count1
3
word"constructed"
count1
4
word"processed"
count1
5
word"familiar"
count1
6
word"velvet"
count2
7
word"scanning"
count1
8
word"etching"
count1
9
word"etched"
count1
10
word"database"
count1
11
word"gleaming"
count1
12
word"echoed"
count1
13
word"standard"
count1
14
word"eyebrow"
count1
15
word"potential"
count1
16
word"spectral"
count1
17
word"chilled"
count1
highlights
0"vibrated"
1"rhythmic"
2"chaotic"
3"constructed"
4"processed"
5"familiar"
6"velvet"
7"scanning"
8"etching"
9"etched"
10"database"
11"gleaming"
12"echoed"
13"standard"
14"eyebrow"
15"potential"
16"spectral"
17"chilled"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences61
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences61
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences77
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1104
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
60.96% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions48
wordCount730
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity1.78
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Tube1
Detective1
Harlow1
Quinn13
Veil5
Market5
Morris1
Eva8
Kowalski1
Mr1
Blackwood4
Compass2
Inspector1
Davies4
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Market"
3"Morris"
4"Eva"
5"Kowalski"
6"Mr"
7"Blackwood"
8"Compass"
9"Inspector"
10"Davies"
places(empty)
globalScore0.61
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences44
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1104
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences77
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs27
mean40.89
std20.94
cv0.512
sampleLengths
065
149
243
343
451
540
6101
710
827
956
1013
1111
1259
1344
1420
1550
1630
1744
1816
1956
2030
2137
2233
2361
2410
2533
2672
82.25% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences61
matches
0"was dressed"
1"was placed"
2"been placed"
3"been forced"
4"was etched"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs120
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences77
ratio0.065
matches
0"The air in the abandoned Tube station tasted of damp concrete and something else, something acrid and faintly floral – the scent of burnt rosemary, Detective Harlow Quinn thought, wrinkling her nose."
1"It wasn’t the rose itself that bothered Quinn – these kinds of morbid trinkets were commonplace in the Market – but the way it was placed."
2"It hadn’t simply been placed; it had been forced."
3"There, almost concealed by a layer of grime, was a faint etching – a stylized depiction of a serpent coiled around a key."
4"It referred to the underlying network of supernatural connections that bound the Veil Market together – the ley lines, the pocket dimensions, the shadowy entities that drifted through the spaces between realities."
81.94% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount726
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount35
adverbRatio0.048209366391184574
lyAdverbCount24
lyAdverbRatio0.03305785123966942
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences77
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences77
mean14.34
std8.74
cv0.61
sampleLengths
032
125
23
35
423
515
611
728
815
911
1032
1111
1217
1312
1411
1529
1611
174
1810
1916
2013
2126
229
2323
2410
258
2619
274
282
293
302
311
3215
3310
3419
359
364
379
382
394
4014
4123
4218
4318
4426
4510
4610
477
4829
4914
67.53% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.4675324675324675
totalSentences77
uniqueOpeners36
58.48% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences57
matches
0"Suddenly, a voice cut through"
ratio0.018
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount17
totalSentences57
matches
0"It always smelled like this."
1"She adjusted the worn leather"
2"she asked, her voice clipped"
3"She carefully collected samples of"
4"He was dressed in an"
5"It wasn’t the rose itself"
6"It hadn’t simply been placed;"
7"She pulled out a small"
8"she said, her voice low"
9"She moved to a side"
10"She held up the Veil"
11"It referred to the underlying"
12"He was a politician's choice,"
13"He wore a perfectly tailored"
14"She pointed to the shimmering"
15"She looked back at the"
16"She felt it, a cold"
ratio0.298
30.18% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount49
totalSentences57
matches
0"The air in the abandoned"
1"The Veil Market."
2"It always smelled like this."
3"She adjusted the worn leather"
4"DS Morris would have called"
5"Quinn preferred to think of"
6"she asked, her voice clipped"
7"Eva, bundled in a too-large"
8"Eva said, her voice barely"
9"Quinn knelt, pulling out a"
10"The kit felt reassuringly familiar,"
11"She carefully collected samples of"
12"Eva’s fingers tightened around her"
13"The victim, a Mr."
14"Silas Blackwood, lay sprawled on"
15"He was dressed in an"
16"A single, perfectly formed rose,"
17"It wasn’t the rose itself"
18"It hadn’t simply been placed;"
19"Quinn asked, her eyes scanning"
ratio0.86
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences57
matches(empty)
ratio0
50.69% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences31
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Rain hammered against the vaulted ceiling, a relentless, grey drumbeat that did little to mask the low hum of energy that vibrated beneath her feet."
1"As she focused, the impressions solidified, revealing themselves as the claw marks of a creature that wasn't entirely animal."
2"It referred to the underlying network of supernatural connections that bound the Veil Market together – the ley lines, the pocket dimensions, the shadowy entiti…"
3"He was a politician's choice, someone who favored bureaucracy over investigation, and a staunch believer in the mundane."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount8
matches
0"Eva said, her voice barely audible above the rain"
1"Quinn asked, her eyes scanning the scene"
2"she said, her voice low"
3"Eva hesitated, her freckled face pale"
4"Eva offered, her voice still shaky"
5"She held up, its brass casing gleaming faintly in the dim light"
6"Eva said, her eyes widening"
7"Quinn said, her voice hardening"
89.39% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Quinn murmured (murmur)"
1"Quinn corrected (correct)"
dialogueSentences33
tagDensity0.303
leniency0.606
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.121
75.5019%