Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY7VPW5C0A1AX99R4555D91

Run Details

Duration:
41.4s
Cost:
$0.000289
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Heartstone warmed against Aurora’s skin, a reassuring thrum against the sudden chill. It pulsed faster now, a frantic beat mirroring the nervous flutter in her chest. Nyx shifted beside her, a ripple of shadow solidifying into a taller, vaguely humanoid form. “This… is unexpected,” Nyx murmured, their voice a low whisper that seemed to steal the heat from the air. Isolde, impossibly, hadn’t left footprints in the damp earth. She simply *was*, a silver-haired presence amongst the twisted, luminous flora. They’d followed the pull of the Heartstone, a desperate gamble after Isolde’s cryptic warning about a “breach blooming in the amber lands.” The stone had led them through Richmond Park, past the familiar deer and weekend ramblers, until the world warped. The ancient oaks guarding the Fae Grove had vanished, replaced by trees unlike any Aurora had ever seen—their bark a shimmering jade, their leaves a cascade of sapphire and ruby. The air tasted of spice and something else… something ancient. Like crushed gemstones and forgotten rituals. Aurora reached out, hesitant, and touched a nearby tree. A pulse of warmth flowed through her fingertips, followed by a dizzying rush of images—vines heavy with unfamiliar fruit, swirling feasts of unimaginable extravagance, faces blurred with pleasure and… something darker. A silent, insatiable hunger. "Dymas," Isolde breathed, her pale lavender eyes wide. "The Gluttony.” A path, paved with smooth, obsidian stones, wound between the trees. It sloped gently downwards, disappearing into a landscape bathed in a perpetual, warm amber glow. The light didn't come from a sun, but seemed to emanate from the very ground itself. “Well,” Aurora said, adjusting the strap of her messenger bag. “That’s new for a Thursday.” Nyx moved forward, their form flickering slightly as they navigated the unfamiliar energies. "The Veil... it’s thinner here. Almost nonexistent.” They extended a hand, and their fingers passed clean through the trunk of a sapphire-leaved tree, causing it to ripple like water. They began to descend, the air growing richer, heavier. The scent of spices intensified, mingling with the sickly-sweet aroma of overripe fruit. Sounds drifted up from below—the murmur of conversation, the clinking of glasses, music that was both vibrant and unsettlingly melancholic. The path opened into a vast valley. It was impossible. It shouldn’t exist. Imagine a vineyard, but not of vines. Instead, sprawling orchards stretched as far as the eye could see, laden with fruit the colors of jewels—amethyst plums, golden mangoes, scarlet pomegranates. The trees were immense, their branches heavy with produce, twisting towards the amber sky in a riot of vibrant hues. And beyond the orchards... a city. Not a city built of stone and mortar, but of flowing, organic forms. Buildings pulsed with a faint inner light, their walls crafted from living vines and shimmering, crystalline structures. Waterfalls cascaded down tiered gardens, feeding into intricate networks of canals that crisscrossed the valley. Tables groaned under the weight of impossible delicacies—roast birds with plumage crafted from spun gold, pies filled with glowing, iridescent berries, stacks of pastries taller than Aurora’s head. It was a feast laid bare for eternity. "Remarkable," Nyx murmured, their violet eyes scanning the scene. "The scale... the excess..." Isolde remained silent, her gaze fixed on a distant structure—a towering palace crafted from polished amber, its spires crowned with clusters of ruby-red fruit. "It smells like... cinnamon," Aurora observed, wrinkling her nose. Beneath the exotic scent, a faint, metallic tang lingered in the air. They walked further, drawn towards the city. The music grew louder, resolving into a strange, jazzy tune played on instruments Aurora couldn’t identify—a flute carved from horn, a drum made of stretched hide that shimmered with an oily sheen. Figures began to materialize from the shadows—Helbound souls, she realized, their faces pale and drawn, their eyes filled with a vacant, almost blissful expression. They moved with a languid grace, dressed in opulent silks and velvet robes. Some lounged at tables, consuming vast quantities of food and drink. Others strolled through the gardens, their laughter hollow and tinged with sadness. One woman, draped in emerald silk, caught Aurora’s eye. She was gorging herself on a tower of candied plums, her fingers sticky with juice. As Aurora met her gaze, the woman’s smile faltered for a fraction of a second, revealing a flicker of something disturbingly empty behind her eyes. “They don’t look happy,” Aurora commented, voicing the unease crawling up her spine. "Happiness is a fleeting sensation," Nyx replied, their voice a sigh. "Here, contentment reigns. A dull, unending contentment." A group of souls passed them, carrying platters laden with roasted peacock—its feathers still shimmering, its eyes vacant. A young man brushed past Aurora, spilling a cascade of ruby-red wine onto her trousers. He didn't apologize. He simply stared through her with an unsettling lack of focus. "Excuse me!" Aurora blurted out, instinctively wiping at her jeans. The man didn't react. He continued to drift along, a vacant smile plastered on his face. Isolde finally spoke, her voice low and measured. "Observe. Do not interfere. We are merely witnesses." They came to a clearing where a culinary competition was underway. Three chefs, each surrounded by a throng of eager spectators, were vying for the title of “Master of Dymas.” They wielded gleaming knives and strange, arcane tools, crafting dishes that defied description. One chef was carving a swan from a single block of ice, while another was weaving a tapestry out of spun sugar. The air crackled with tension, but it was a bizarre, almost playful tension. The chefs weren't angry or competitive, but rather consumed by a feverish desire to create, to indulge. “Look at the ingredients,” Nyx whispered, their voice laced with a strange fascination. “These aren’t earthly. They’re… transmuted. Twisted.” Aurora followed Nyx’s gaze. One chef was pouring a viscous, silver liquid into a bubbling cauldron. The liquid seemed to shift and shimmer as it poured, resolving into fleeting images of… landscapes not of this world. Frozen forests, burning deserts, skies filled with impossible constellations. A waiter approached them, a gaunt figure in a crimson livery. He bowed deeply. “Welcome, travelers,” he said, his voice devoid of emotion. “Prince Belphegor extends his warmest greetings. Would you care for refreshments? Perhaps a taste of the Ambrosial Pear? Or a sampling of the Dragon’s Breath Sorbet?” Aurora felt a primal urge to flee. To turn around and run back through the gateway before this place consumed her. "We're... just passing through," Aurora said, forcing a smile. "Admiring the view." The waiter’s smile didn’t waver. “A pity. Such delicacies await.” He gestured towards a table laden with glistening pastries. “Please, partake. It would please the Prince.” Isolde stepped forward. “We seek an audience with Prince Belphegor,” she stated, her voice resonating with an unexpected authority. The waiter’s eyes narrowed, a flicker of something akin to annoyance crossing his face. “The Prince is… occupied. But I shall inform him of your request.” He bowed again, and then melted back into the crowd, leaving Aurora feeling strangely exposed. The Heartstone pulsed violently against her chest. The amber glow of Dymas seemed to deepen, to press in on them. And she felt, with a chilling certainty, that they were not welcome guests.
created_at"2026-02-20T19:19:08.955Z" 2/20/2026, 7:19:08 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"He bowed again [again]"
dialogueSentences26
tagDensity0.654
leniency1
rawRatio0.059
effectiveRatio0.059
87.63% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1213
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"gently"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"gently"
1"very"
2"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1213
totalAiIsms33
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"pulsed"
count3
2
word"whisper"
count1
3
word"familiar"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count1
5
word"warmth"
count1
6
word"navigated"
count1
7
word"crystalline"
count1
8
word"intricate"
count1
9
word"weight"
count1
10
word"remarkable"
count1
11
word"scanning"
count1
12
word"structure"
count1
13
word"resolving"
count2
14
word"shimmered"
count1
15
word"velvet"
count1
16
word"tinged"
count1
17
word"silk"
count1
18
word"flicker"
count2
19
word"fleeting"
count2
20
word"measured"
count1
21
word"gleaming"
count1
22
word"tapestry"
count1
23
word"tension"
count2
24
word"desire"
count1
25
word"glistening"
count1
26
word"chilling"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"pulsed"
2"whisper"
3"familiar"
4"pulse"
5"warmth"
6"navigated"
7"crystalline"
8"intricate"
9"weight"
10"remarkable"
11"scanning"
12"structure"
13"resolving"
14"shimmered"
15"velvet"
16"tinged"
17"silk"
18"flicker"
19"fleeting"
20"measured"
21"gleaming"
22"tapestry"
23"tension"
24"desire"
25"glistening"
26"chilling"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences87
matches
0"d with sadness"
44.33% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount6
narrationSentences87
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences96
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen41
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1199
ratio0.001
matches
0"was"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions41
wordCount1060
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.51
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Heartstone3
Aurora16
Isolde6
Richmond1
Park1
Fae1
Grove1
Nyx7
Helbound1
Dymas1
One3
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Aurora"
2"Isolde"
3"Nyx"
4"Dymas"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Fae"
3"Grove"
globalScore0.745
windowScore0.667
79.58% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences71
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"whisper that seemed to steal the heat from the air"
1"something akin to annoyance crossing his face"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.834
wordCount1199
matches
0"Not a city built of stone and mortar, but of flowing, organic forms"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences96
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs40
mean29.98
std17.94
cv0.599
sampleLengths
042
119
220
371
416
544
610
742
815
942
1042
1113
1250
136
1473
158
1613
1724
1821
1939
2060
2149
2213
2318
2447
2510
2616
2716
2865
2930
3019
3145
3214
3335
3421
3512
3626
3719
3841
3933
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences87
matches(empty)
24.56% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs190
matches
0"was gorging"
1"were vying"
2"was carving was weaving"
3"was pouring"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences96
ratio0.094
matches
0"The ancient oaks guarding the Fae Grove had vanished, replaced by trees unlike any Aurora had ever seen—their bark a shimmering jade, their leaves a cascade of sapphire and ruby."
1"A pulse of warmth flowed through her fingertips, followed by a dizzying rush of images—vines heavy with unfamiliar fruit, swirling feasts of unimaginable extravagance, faces blurred with pleasure and…"
2"Sounds drifted up from below—the murmur of conversation, the clinking of glasses, music that was both vibrant and unsettlingly melancholic."
3"Instead, sprawling orchards stretched as far as the eye could see, laden with fruit the colors of jewels—amethyst plums, golden mangoes, scarlet pomegranates."
4"Tables groaned under the weight of impossible delicacies—roast birds with plumage crafted from spun gold, pies filled with glowing, iridescent berries, stacks of pastries taller than Aurora’s head."
5"Isolde remained silent, her gaze fixed on a distant structure—a towering palace crafted from polished amber, its spires crowned with clusters of ruby-red fruit."
6"The music grew louder, resolving into a strange, jazzy tune played on instruments Aurora couldn’t identify—a flute carved from horn, a drum made of stretched hide that shimmered with an oily sheen."
7"Figures began to materialize from the shadows—Helbound souls, she realized, their faces pale and drawn, their eyes filled with a vacant, almost blissful expression."
8"A group of souls passed them, carrying platters laden with roasted peacock—its feathers still shimmering, its eyes vacant."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1074
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.024208566108007448
lyAdverbCount15
lyAdverbRatio0.013966480446927373
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences96
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences96
mean12.49
std7.92
cv0.634
sampleLengths
013
114
215
319
49
511
641
730
88
92
106
119
1229
132
144
158
162
1711
1815
1916
2010
215
2213
2329
249
2513
2620
277
283
293
307
3123
3220
334
342
3513
3617
3715
3828
398
409
414
4224
439
4412
457
4632
4724
4813
4911
69.79% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.46875
totalSentences96
uniqueOpeners45
39.68% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences84
matches
0"Instead, sprawling orchards stretched as"
ratio0.012
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences84
matches
0"It pulsed faster now, a"
1"She simply *was*, a silver-haired"
2"They’d followed the pull of"
3"It sloped gently downwards, disappearing"
4"They extended a hand, and"
5"They began to descend, the"
6"It was impossible."
7"It shouldn’t exist."
8"It was a feast laid"
9"They walked further, drawn towards"
10"They moved with a languid"
11"She was gorging herself on"
12"He didn't apologize."
13"He simply stared through her"
14"He continued to drift along,"
15"They came to a clearing"
16"He bowed deeply."
17"he said, his voice devoid"
18"He gestured towards a table"
19"she stated, her voice resonating"
ratio0.25
43.33% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount70
totalSentences84
matches
0"The Heartstone warmed against Aurora’s"
1"It pulsed faster now, a"
2"Nyx shifted beside her, a"
3"Nyx murmured, their voice a"
4"Isolde, impossibly, hadn’t left footprints"
5"She simply *was*, a silver-haired"
6"They’d followed the pull of"
7"The ancient oaks guarding the"
8"The air tasted of spice"
9"Aurora reached out, hesitant, and"
10"A pulse of warmth flowed"
11"A silent, insatiable hunger."
12"Isolde breathed, her pale lavender"
13"A path, paved with smooth,"
14"It sloped gently downwards, disappearing"
15"The light didn't come from"
16"Aurora said, adjusting the strap"
17"Nyx moved forward, their form"
18"They extended a hand, and"
19"They began to descend, the"
ratio0.833
59.52% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences84
matches
0"To turn around and run"
ratio0.012
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences42
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Sounds drifted up from below—the murmur of conversation, the clinking of glasses, music that was both vibrant and unsettlingly melancholic."
1"Waterfalls cascaded down tiered gardens, feeding into intricate networks of canals that crisscrossed the valley."
7.35% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"Nyx murmured, their violet eyes scanning the scene"
1"Nyx replied, their voice a sigh"
2"he said, his voice devoid of emotion"
3"she stated, her voice resonating with an unexpected authority"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags12
fancyCount8
fancyTags
0"Nyx murmured (murmur)"
1"Isolde breathed (breathe)"
2"Nyx murmured (murmur)"
3"Aurora observed (observe)"
4"Aurora commented (comment)"
5"Aurora blurted out (blurt out)"
6"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
7"she stated (state)"
dialogueSentences26
tagDensity0.462
leniency0.923
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.615
74.0820%