Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY7VW1GABT2C150GADBKQAX

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Duration:
45.3s
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$0.002319
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xAI

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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory twisted the final deadbolt free. The heavy door groaned inward on rusty hinges. Lucien filled the frame, his charcoal suit cutting sharp lines against the dim hallway light. Platinum hair gleamed slicked back. That ivory-handled cane tapped once against the scuffed floorboards. One amber eye caught the flicker from Ptolemy's tail-lamp; the black one swallowed it whole. "Rory Carter." His voice rolled low, laced with that Marseille silk. "Hiding behind three locks now? Charming." She gripped the door edge, nails biting into peeling paint. The tabby cat slunk between her ankles, hackles twitching. Copper tang from the curry house below seeped up the stairs, mixing with his cologne – sandalwood and brimstone. "Eva's place. Not mine." Rory stepped back, blocking the threshold. "And you weren't invited." He leaned on the cane. The blade inside hummed faint, or maybe that was her pulse. "Eva's scrolls led me here. Or perhaps your scent." A half-smile ghosted his lips. Heterochromia made it devilish. "May I?" Ptolemy hissed. Rory's scar itched under her sleeve – that old crescent moon from the swing-set fall. She slammed the door shut? No. Her arm wouldn't move. Heat crawled up her neck from the memory of his hands, last time, in that shadowed Soho alley. Lips crashing. His fangs grazing her throat before he vanished. Two weeks silent. Then Evan's texts started – her ex, sniffing too close. "Fine." She swung the door wide. "But touch anything, and the cat shreds your suit." Lucien glided past, cane whispering over the threshold. Books teetered on every surface: Eva's chaos of occult grimoires, yellowed scrolls pinned under pint glasses, research notes curling at edges like dead leaves. He sidestepped a stack threatening to topple, amber eye scanning titles. *Demon pacts. Avaros bindings.* His father's realm. "Cosy." He perched on the arm of the sagging sofa, suit trousers creasing perfect. "Eva's out?" "Research run to the British Library." Rory crossed arms, leaning against the kitchenette counter. Grease stains dotted the lino from last night's curry splatter. "You track her habits too?" "You." Cane tapped rhythm. "Always you." He unbuttoned his jacket, revealing a crisp white shirt stretched over chest. "Evan's circling. Whispers in the underworld. Your ex-boyfriend fancies himself a player now." Her stomach knotted. Evan – fists like hammers, apologies like syrup. She'd fled Cardiff for this. "I handle my own messes." Lucien rose fluid, closing the gap in two strides. Ptolemy bolted under the table. Heat radiated off him, unnatural. Half-demon furnace. "You did. Splendidly." His fingers brushed her wrist, tracing the scar without touching. "Until he bought a summoning circle from Silas's backroom dealers. Amateur sigils. But potent enough to call *something*." Rory jerked back. The counter dug into her spine. "Silas's bar? My flat's above it. You saying–" "Your ex wants leverage." Lucien's black eye bored in. "On you. On me." He cupped her jaw, thumb rough against her pulse. "We left things... unfinished." Unfinished. That word scorched. Alley heat flooded back: his mouth claiming hers, body pinning her to brick. Promise in his growl. Then nothing. Her deliveries dodging shadows, wondering if demons ghosted lovers same as mortals. "You vanished." She shoved his chest. Muscle yielded then held. "Mid-kiss. Demon priorities?" Amber eye flared. "Avaros pulled." His grip tightened, pulling her flush. Sandalwood flooded her lungs. "Father's games. You think I chose?" Ptolemy yowled from under the table, claws scrabbling wood. She twisted free, breath ragged. Heart hammered. Attraction coiled tight, venom-laced. "Chose silence. Two weeks. I packed for Eva's. Locked every bolt." Lucien exhaled sharp, raking fingers through platinum strands. They sprang back perfect. "Silence kept you breathing." He paced the cramped room, cane carving arcs past book piles. A scroll toppled; he caught it mid-fall, glanced, returned it. "Evan's deal brokers half-bloods like me. Traffics them to circles. I severed lines. Quietly." Her laugh barked dry. "Quietly. Like dumping a girl after tasting her?" He spun. Black eye pinned her. "Tasting? Mon dieu, Rory." Voice dropped octave. "You branded me." Fingers yanked his collar aside. Faint mark – her teeth, jawline. "Humans don't mark demons." Silence stretched, thick as the curry steam clinging walls. Ptolemy slunk out, rubbing her calf. Rory's fingers twitched to trace that mark. Instead, she snatched a glass from the drainer, filled it from the tap. Water sloshed cold over knuckles. "You show now." Glass clinked sink. "Because?" "Evan knocks tonight." Lucien stepped close again, breath ghosting her ear. "Three goons. Silas tipped me. Your flat's compromised." Rage flared. "My home. You knew?" "Protected it." His hand settled low on her back, possessive. "Wards. Silent." She whirled, shoving glass aside. Water sprayed. "My life. Not your chessboard." "Isn't it?" Challenge lit amber. "You sought me first. Delivery drop at my club. Eyes locked across the bar. You stayed." Heat bloomed cheeks. Truth stung. Golden Empress shift ended early. Curiosity dragged her to *Le Noire*. Lucien's domain. One glance – heterochromia snaring – and she'd lingered. Talked law loopholes over absinthe. His laugh, rare, unlocked something feral. "You played me." Voice cracked. Hurt bled through cool. Lucien cupped her face both hands now, thumbs stroking cheekbones. "Never." Forehead pressed hers. Demon warmth seeped skin-deep. "Fell." Word hung. Ptolemy leaped to windowsill, tail lashing at Brick Lane traffic hum below. Rory's hands fisted his shirt. Silk ripped faint. "Prove it." His mouth crashed down. Claimed. Tongue invaded, tasting smoke and secrets. She bit lip, drew copper. He groaned, fangs pricking her tongue. Hands roamed – her waist, hips, bunching tee. Pinned her counter-edge. Glass shattered floor. Pull back? No. She yanked platinum strands, arching into him. Legs parted instinctive. His thigh wedged, grinding friction sparking nerves. Hurt twisted pleasure – his abandonment, Evan's bruises – all fuel. Lucien broke kiss, breath heaving. "Rory–" "Shut." Fingers clawed his belt. Buckle clattered. He lifted her seamless onto counter. Scrolls scattered. Books thudded. His mouth trailed jaw, throat. Fangs grazed pulse. "Mine." "Yours?" She hiked legs round waist, heels digging. "Earned that?" Amber eye locked blue. "Every scar." Hand slid under tee, palm branding ribs. "Every bruise Evan left." Mention iced lust. She froze. "How–" "Watched." Confession rough. "After alley. Guarded. Silent." Stalker. Protector. Demon. Pieces slotted. Rage surged anew. She kneed thigh. He grunted, grip iron. "Trust?" Voice velvet menace. Ptolemy streaked past, fur brushing ankles. Footsteps pounded stairwell outside. Three deadbolts rattled – no, the door. Fists hammered wood. Muffled shouts: "Carter! Open up!" Evan's voice, slurred venom. "Know you're in!" Lucien's cane snapped free blade-thin steel. Black eye gleamed feral. "Time." Rory slid down, snatched carving knife from drainer. Heart thundered. Attraction simmered, battle-forged. More pounding. Doorframe splintered. Lucien positioned flank, blade low. "Together?" She nodded, scar throbbing. Ptolemy vanished under sofa. Wood cracked. Hinges screamed. The door burst inward. Three shadows spilled curry-stinking haze, eyes wild, knives glinting. Evan front, face twisted hate. "You." He jabbed finger Rory. "And the Frenchman freak." Lucien lunged first. Blade flashed. First goon crumpled, gurgling. Chaos erupted. Rory dodged swing, knife slicing air. Evan charged her, fist cocked. She parried. Metal rang. Pain lanced wrist – old scar split afresh. Blood slicked grip. Lucien downed second man, cane-blade dripping. Spun to third. Evan grabbed her throat. "Bitch. Mine." World tunnelled. She stomped instep. Knee groin. He buckled. She drove knife home – shoulder. Scream rent air. Lucien hauled Evan off, slamming wall. Plaster dust rained. "Touch her again–" Sirens wailed distant, Brick Lane stirring. Evan spat blood. "Demon scum. Circle's coming." Lucien's amber flared hellfire. Blade pressed throat. "Let them." Rory panted, blood dripping wrist. Ptolemy hissed corner. Eva's key scraped hall. Door hung crooked. Footsteps. Eva burst in, eyes wide at carnage. "Rory? What fresh hell–" Evan lunged wild. Knife arced Rory. Lucien shoved. Blade plunged his side. Grunt. Blood soaked shirt. "No!" Rory stabbed true – Evan's gut. He dropped. Lucien staggered, hand clamping wound. Black eye dimmed. "Rory..." Eva slammed door remnants shut, barricading chair. "Ambulance. Now." Sirens screamed closer. Ptolemy yowled frantic. Rory tore Lucien's shirt, pressing wound. Crimson hot fingers. "Stay." His hand covered hers. Weak squeeze. "Always." Shadows shifted hall – more footsteps? Heavy. Not police.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags27
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Rory stepped back [back]"
1"Lucien stepped close [close]"
dialogueSentences74
tagDensity0.365
leniency0.73
rawRatio0.074
effectiveRatio0.054
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1358
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
11.63% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1358
totalAiIsms24
found
0
word"flicker"
count1
1
word"silk"
count2
2
word"pulse"
count3
3
word"scanning"
count1
4
word"perfect"
count2
5
word"stomach"
count1
6
word"tracing"
count1
7
word"silence"
count3
8
word"warmth"
count1
9
word"shattered"
count1
10
word"velvet"
count1
11
word"footsteps"
count3
12
word"thundered"
count1
13
word"pounding"
count1
14
word"glinting"
count1
15
word"charged"
count1
highlights
0"flicker"
1"silk"
2"pulse"
3"scanning"
4"perfect"
5"stomach"
6"tracing"
7"silence"
8"warmth"
9"shattered"
10"velvet"
11"footsteps"
12"thundered"
13"pounding"
14"glinting"
15"charged"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
highlights
0"stomach knotted"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences211
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences211
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences255
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen24
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords7
totalWords1358
ratio0.005
matches
0"Demon pacts. Avaros bindings."
1"something"
2"Le Noire"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions97
wordCount1078
uniqueNames29
maxNameDensity1.67
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Evan"
discoveredNames
Ptolemy10
Marseille1
Heterochromia1
Soho1
Evan11
Lucien18
Eva4
Rory14
Grease1
Cardiff1
Unfinished1
Muscle1
Sandalwood1
Fingers2
Faint1
Rage2
Heat3
Empress1
Hurt2
Demon3
Brick2
Lane2
Buckle1
Amber2
Mention1
Stalker1
Black3
Voice3
Blade3
persons
0"Ptolemy"
1"Heterochromia"
2"Evan"
3"Lucien"
4"Eva"
5"Rory"
6"Grease"
7"Muscle"
8"Sandalwood"
9"Fingers"
10"Faint"
11"Rage"
12"Heat"
13"Hurt"
14"Buckle"
15"Amber"
16"Mention"
17"Voice"
18"Blade"
places
0"Marseille"
1"Soho"
2"Cardiff"
3"Brick"
4"Lane"
globalScore0.665
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences71
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1358
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences255
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs79
mean17.19
std13.1
cv0.762
sampleLengths
014
144
217
338
414
536
668
715
850
916
1029
1131
1221
1352
1417
1526
1635
1713
1821
199
2022
2151
2212
2331
2440
257
2619
276
2812
2912
3021
3138
329
3319
3414
3510
3636
3731
386
397
4019
4110
4217
436
447
4515
464
476
4819
497
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences211
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs258
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount15
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences15
totalSentences255
ratio0.059
matches
0"One amber eye caught the flicker from Ptolemy's tail-lamp; the black one swallowed it whole."
1"Copper tang from the curry house below seeped up the stairs, mixing with his cologne – sandalwood and brimstone."
2"Rory's scar itched under her sleeve – that old crescent moon from the swing-set fall."
3"Then Evan's texts started – her ex, sniffing too close."
4"Evan – fists like hammers, apologies like syrup."
5"A scroll toppled; he caught it mid-fall, glanced, returned it."
6"Faint mark – her teeth, jawline."
7"One glance – heterochromia snaring – and she'd lingered."
8"Hands roamed – her waist, hips, bunching tee."
9"Hurt twisted pleasure – his abandonment, Evan's bruises – all fuel."
10"Three deadbolts rattled – no, the door."
11"Pain lanced wrist – old scar split afresh."
12"She drove knife home – shoulder."
13"\"No!\" Rory stabbed true – Evan's gut."
14"Shadows shifted hall – more footsteps?"
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1076
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"free blade-thin steel."
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.019516728624535316
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0009293680297397769
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences255
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences255
mean5.33
std3.87
cv0.728
sampleLengths
06
18
215
35
49
515
611
76
810
99
1019
1110
124
135
1411
1514
164
172
182
1915
205
211
224
2318
242
258
263
2710
286
299
308
3124
3211
332
345
3514
362
3714
3810
395
404
4114
4213
433
448
455
465
479
485
495
88.10% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.5333333333333333
totalSentences255
uniqueOpeners136
40.65% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences164
matches
0"Then Evan's texts started –"
1"Instead, she snatched a glass"
ratio0.012
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount39
totalSentences164
matches
0"His voice rolled low, laced"
1"She gripped the door edge,"
2"He leaned on the cane."
3"She slammed the door shut?"
4"Her arm wouldn't move."
5"His fangs grazing her throat"
6"She swung the door wide"
7"He sidestepped a stack threatening"
8"He perched on the arm"
9"He unbuttoned his jacket, revealing"
10"Her stomach knotted."
11"She'd fled Cardiff for this."
12"His fingers brushed her wrist,"
13"He cupped her jaw, thumb"
14"Her deliveries dodging shadows, wondering"
15"She shoved his chest"
16"His grip tightened, pulling her"
17"She twisted free, breath ragged."
18"They sprang back perfect."
19"He paced the cramped room,"
ratio0.238
27.07% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount142
totalSentences164
matches
0"Rory twisted the final deadbolt"
1"The heavy door groaned inward"
2"Lucien filled the frame, his"
3"Platinum hair gleamed slicked back."
4"That ivory-handled cane tapped once"
5"His voice rolled low, laced"
6"She gripped the door edge,"
7"The tabby cat slunk between"
8"Copper tang from the curry"
9"Rory stepped back, blocking the"
10"He leaned on the cane."
11"The blade inside hummed faint,"
12"A half-smile ghosted his lips"
13"Heterochromia made it devilish."
14"Rory's scar itched under her"
15"She slammed the door shut?"
16"Her arm wouldn't move."
17"Heat crawled up her neck"
18"His fangs grazing her throat"
19"She swung the door wide"
ratio0.866
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences164
matches(empty)
ratio0
63.49% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences18
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Alley heat flooded back: his mouth claiming hers, body pinning her to brick."
1"Her deliveries dodging shadows, wondering if demons ghosted lovers same as mortals."
69.44% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags27
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Lucien stepped close, breath ghosting her ear"
1"His hand settled, possessive"
2"She hiked, heels digging"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Forehead pressed (press)"
dialogueSentences74
tagDensity0.014
leniency0.027
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.027
81.4800%