Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY7VX63GX4EMV9SVZ2DSFR5

Run Details

Duration:
1m 3s
Cost:
$0.000353
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon of The Raven’s Nest bled onto the slick pavement. Rain lashed sideways, turning Soho into a smear of colour and sound. Rory wrestled a stack of menus inside, the damp cardboard threatening to disintegrate in her grip. Yu-Fei would have her hide if these got ruined. Silas polished glasses behind the bar, his movements economical, a lifetime of habit smoothing each gesture. The bar was mostly empty for a Tuesday. A couple huddled in a booth, their voices muted against the jazz spilling from the speakers. “Rough night out there,” Silas observed, not looking up. “You have no idea.” Rory dumped the menus on a small table near the door. “Feels like someone’s trying to dismantle London, piece by piece.” “Just the usual autumn weather, love. Dramatic, but harmless.” He finally glanced up, his hazel eyes assessing her. “You’re soaked. Go on, get yourself a hot drink. On the house.” “I should probably get back to deliveries.” “Yu-Fei won’t mind a few minutes. Besides,” Silas’ gaze flickered to the door, “it’s not every day a face from the past wanders in.” Rory followed his line of sight. A man stood just inside the doorway, shaking the rain from a dark coat. Tall. Broad shoulders. She hadn’t seen him in… eight years? Nine? The years blurred when you actively tried to forget someone. Evan. He hadn’t aged well. Not in the way time typically changed people. This wasn't weathering; it was… erosion. The jawline she remembered was slack, softened. The easy confidence in his eyes had curdled into something sharp, desperate. He scanned the room, and his eyes locked on hers. A flicker of recognition, followed by something unreadable. “Well, look what the storm blew in,” he said, his voice gravelly. He moved toward the bar, weaving through the few patrons. Silas subtly positioned himself between them, a silent guardian. Rory hadn't realised how much she’d missed the scent of old wood, sharp liquor, and Silas' vetiver cologne. It was a comfort, a solid anchor in a suddenly unsteady world. “Fancy seeing you here.” Rory kept her tone flat, carefully neutral. Managed to meet his stare—a small victory. “Rory.” He said her name like he was testing it, tasting the remnants of something lost. “It’s been a while.” “It has.” He perched on a stool two seats away, maintaining a careful distance. “Heard you were working around here.” “I deliver for Yu-Fei. Golden Empress. You wouldn’t know it.” “Chinese takeout? You, Rory Carter, future barrister, now delivering dumplings?” A smirk twisted his lips. A cheap shot. “People change, Evan.” She folded her arms, knuckles white. “Do they?” He turned to Silas, a dismissive wave of his hand. “Si. Still keeping this… charming establishment afloat?” “Someone has to keep the lights on.” Silas’ voice was dry. He didn’t offer Evan a drink. He simply continued polishing a glass, his movements precise, ignoring the charged energy tightening the small space. “I’m… between things.” Evan shrugged, attempting a nonchalant air that didn't quite land. “Went abroad for a bit. Prague. Briefly.” Rory felt her breath hitch. Prague. The city Silas rarely spoke of. The city that had ruined him. She glanced at Silas, but his face remained impassive. “How was Prague?” she asked, the question carefully devoid of emotion. “Cold.” He paused, and for a split second, the mask slipped. She saw a ghost of the man she’d once known—the one who’d written poetry on napkins and dreamt of changing the world. Then it was gone, replaced by the hollowed-out version before her. “Complicated.” “I imagine.” Rory took a sip of the hot tea Silas had slid her way. It scalded her tongue, but she barely noticed. “So, you’re… happy?” Evan asked, his voice surprisingly soft. He finally looked directly at her, and she saw the flicker of something that might have been remorse. Or maybe it was just desperation. “I’m okay.” “Okay? That’s it? You were supposed to be brilliant, Rory. Top of your class. You had… fire.” “Fire burns out, Evan.” She forced herself to meet his gaze. “Sometimes it’s better that way.” “Is it?” He laughed, a short, bitter sound. “Look at me. I’m a spectacular failure. Should have listened to you, I suppose.” “You had a choice.” Rory’s voice was low, dangerous. "We both did." He flinched. “Don’t.” “Don’t what? Don't remind you of the things you did? The choices you made?” She was losing control. Silas’ hand tightened around the glass he was polishing. “I said don’t.” Evan leaned forward, his voice a low growl. “You don’t know the half of it.” “Oh, I think I do.” Rory stood up, her chair scraping against the floor. The crescent-shaped scar on her wrist pulsed, a faint reminder of all that had been. “I know enough.” “Rory…” He reached for her, his hand hovering in the air before falling back to his side. “Don’t touch me.” She stepped back, bumping into Silas. He offered a silent, reassuring presence. “I… I messed up.” Evan’s voice was barely a whisper. “You systematically dismantled my life, Evan. ‘Messing up’ feels like a bit of an understatement, don't you think?” Rory struggled to keep her voice even. She hadn’t spoken about it, not really, in years. It was too painful. Too raw. “I was young. Stupid. I thought…” He trailed off. “You thought what? That you could control everything? That your ambition justified hurting people?” He didn’t answer. He couldn’t. He looked away, staring into the murky depths of his drink. A long silence descended, broken only by the drumming of the rain and the mournful wail of the jazz saxophone. “I heard you ended up in legal trouble.” Rory surprised herself by saying it. She hadn’t intended to ask. “Small-time stuff.” He waved his hand dismissively. “Nothing like what you’d expect.” “Right.” She raised an eyebrow. “Because you always had a knack for avoiding consequences.” The air crackled with unspoken accusations and regret. The weight of years settled between them, a heavy, suffocating blanket. “I should get back to work,” Rory said finally, her voice brittle. “Right.” Evan’s gaze followed her as she turned to leave. He opened his mouth to say something, then closed it again. At the door, Rory paused, glancing back at him. He was still sitting at the bar, staring into his drink, a broken man. She felt a pang of something—not sympathy, not exactly. More like… a weary acknowledgement of the wreckage they both were. Silas placed a hand on her arm. “You alright?” “I will be.” She breathed, tasting ash in her throat. "Just… a bad memory resurfacing.” “Some memories cling tighter than others.” He said, his gaze fixed on Evan. Rory didn’t reply. She stepped out into the rain, the neon glow of The Raven’s Nest fading behind her. The menus felt lighter now, somehow. As if, perhaps, a small part of the weight she'd been carrying had finally been left behind.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags31
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"She stepped back [back]"
1"Rory said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences57
tagDensity0.544
leniency1
rawRatio0.065
effectiveRatio0.065
82.83% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1165
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"carefully"
count2
2
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"carefully"
2"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
31.33% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1165
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"scanned"
count1
2
word"flicker"
count2
3
word"unreadable"
count1
4
word"charged"
count1
5
word"pulsed"
count1
6
word"reminder"
count1
7
word"whisper"
count1
8
word"depths"
count1
9
word"silence"
count1
10
word"eyebrow"
count1
11
word"unspoken"
count1
12
word"weight"
count2
13
word"pang"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"scanned"
2"flicker"
3"unreadable"
4"charged"
5"pulsed"
6"reminder"
7"whisper"
8"depths"
9"silence"
10"eyebrow"
11"unspoken"
12"weight"
13"pang"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"flicker of emotion"
count1
highlights
0"A flicker of recognition"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences100
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences100
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
1"managed to"
2"tended to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences125
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen25
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1158
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
64.63% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions38
wordCount820
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.71
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven2
Nest2
Soho1
Tuesday1
Rory14
Managed1
Silas9
Evan8
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Rory"
3"Silas"
4"Evan"
places
0"Soho"
globalScore0.646
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences72
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"quite land"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1158
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences125
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs55
mean21.05
std12.56
cv0.596
sampleLengths
049
140
29
325
430
57
624
741
81
955
1022
1139
1218
1320
142
1518
1610
1718
189
1919
2034
2120
2227
2311
2445
2523
2633
272
2817
2916
3022
3112
323
3327
3418
3532
3617
3715
3810
3940
409
4114
4216
4320
4419
4512
4614
4719
4812
4921
94.74% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences100
matches
0"got ruined"
1"was gone"
2"been left"
65.77% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs149
matches
0"wasn't weathering"
1"was testing"
2"was losing"
51.43% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences125
ratio0.032
matches
0"This wasn't weathering; it was…"
1"Managed to meet his stare—a small victory."
2"She saw a ghost of the man she’d once known—the one who’d written poetry on napkins and dreamt of changing the world."
3"She felt a pang of something—not sympathy, not exactly."
95.08% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount472
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.04449152542372881
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.0211864406779661
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences125
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences125
mean9.26
std5.23
cv0.565
sampleLengths
012
112
216
39
416
58
616
79
815
910
1018
1112
127
1324
146
1514
161
172
185
192
201
2110
221
234
248
255
261
277
2812
2910
308
3112
3210
339
3418
3512
3611
377
3816
394
402
4112
426
4310
4415
453
469
4712
487
4911
68.27% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.448
totalSentences125
uniqueOpeners56
37.45% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences89
matches
0"Then it was gone, replaced"
ratio0.011
44.72% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount39
totalSentences89
matches
0"He finally glanced up, his"
1"She hadn’t seen him in…"
2"He hadn’t aged well."
3"He scanned the room, and"
4"he said, his voice gravelly"
5"He moved toward the bar,"
6"It was a comfort, a"
7"He said her name like"
8"He perched on a stool"
9"She folded her arms, knuckles"
10"He turned to Silas, a"
11"He didn’t offer Evan a"
12"He simply continued polishing a"
13"She glanced at Silas, but"
14"she asked, the question carefully"
15"He paused, and for a"
16"She saw a ghost of"
17"It scalded her tongue, but"
18"He finally looked directly at"
19"She forced herself to meet"
ratio0.438
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount82
totalSentences89
matches
0"The green neon of The"
1"Rain lashed sideways, turning Soho"
2"Rory wrestled a stack of"
3"Yu-Fei would have her hide"
4"Silas polished glasses behind the"
5"The bar was mostly empty"
6"A couple huddled in a"
7"Silas observed, not looking up"
8"Rory dumped the menus on"
9"He finally glanced up, his"
10"Rory followed his line of"
11"A man stood just inside"
12"She hadn’t seen him in…"
13"The years blurred when you"
14"He hadn’t aged well."
15"This wasn't weathering; it was…"
16"The jawline she remembered was"
17"The easy confidence in his"
18"He scanned the room, and"
19"A flicker of recognition, followed"
ratio0.921
56.18% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences89
matches
0"As if, perhaps, a small"
ratio0.011
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences26
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
28.23% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags31
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"Silas observed, not looking up"
1"he said, his voice gravelly"
2"she asked, the question carefully devoid of emotion"
3"Evan asked, his voice surprisingly soft"
4"Evan leaned, his voice a low growl"
5"Rory stood up, her chair scraping against the floor"
97.37% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Silas observed (observe)"
1"He laughed (laugh)"
2"She breathed (breathe)"
dialogueSentences57
tagDensity0.158
leniency0.316
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.105
80.6010%