Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY7VZ6ME2W3XFGW7566PXYF

Run Details

Duration:
8.9s
Cost:
$0.000362
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door creaked open before Aurora had even reached the handle. The air inside Eva’s flat smelled of old paper and something faintly metallic—like the scent of a wound that hadn’t quite healed. Aurora froze. The scar on her wrist twitched. Lucien stood there, his cane tapping against the floor with deliberate precision, his amber and black eyes locked onto hers. The suit he wore was immaculate, but his posture was relaxed, almost too easy. She remembered the way he’d always been—too smooth, too sure of himself, like he didn’t have a care in the world. “You’re late,” she said, voice rougher than she intended. He smirked, but it didn’t reach his eyes. “I’m always late for things that matter.” The deadbolts clicked back into place with a sharp *click*. Aurora exhaled, her fingers brushing the scar on her wrist before she could stop herself. “You shouldn’t have come.” “Shouldn’t I?” His voice dropped, just a little. “You’re the one who didn’t answer my calls.” She turned away, her gaze flicking over the cluttered shelves—scrolls, half-empty jars of herbs, a half-finished sketchbook of some kind. Ptolemy, the tabby cat, blinked up at her from his perch on the windowsill, tail flicking lazily. “You know I didn’t,” she muttered. Lucien stepped closer, the cane’s tip brushing against the floorboards. “I know you didn’t.” Aurora’s breath hitched. The space between them felt smaller than it had in years. “Why?” He didn’t answer right away. Instead, he reached into his coat and pulled out a small, leather-bound book. The kind of book she’d seen him carry before—one that looked like it had been well-loved, its edges slightly worn. “This isn’t a warning,” he said, flipping it open. “It’s an invitation.” Aurora’s pulse jumped. She’d seen him with this book before, in the dim light of a back-alley deal, the way his fingers traced the pages like they were maps of something dangerous. Something she’d once wanted too much. “You’re not here to scare me,” she said, though she knew he was. “No,” he said, voice low. “I’m here to remind you.” The door swung shut behind him, cutting off the sound of the street outside. Aurora’s fingers curled into the scar on her wrist, the memory of Evan’s hands—rough, possessive—flashing through her mind. Lucien’s gaze locked onto hers, unblinking. “You were always good at running.” She didn’t answer. Instead, she turned away, her back to him, and reached for the book. The pages were thick, filled with sketches of faces—some familiar, some not. She flipped through them, her fingers brushing the ink. “What are you doing?” Lucien asked, stepping closer. Aurora didn’t look at him. “Looking for something.” “Like what?” She exhaled sharply. “Like answers.” Lucien’s cane tapped against the floor again, slow and deliberate. “You’re not the only one who’s been looking.” The book slipped from her hands. It landed on the floor with a soft *thud*, the pages fluttering open to a sketch of a woman with bright blue eyes—her own. Lucien’s expression darkened. “You shouldn’t have come back.” Aurora’s breath came faster. The air between them was thick, charged with something older than words. She reached for the book again, but Lucien’s hand shot out, gripping her wrist. “Let me go,” she hissed. He didn’t. Instead, he pulled her closer, his voice a whisper against her ear. “You don’t get to decide what happens next.” Aurora’s fingers dug into his coat, her nails biting into the fabric. “I don’t have to take it.” Lucien’s grip loosened just enough for her to pull away, but not before she saw the fire in his eyes. “You always did.” The door creaked open again, the sound of footsteps echoing down the hall. Aurora’s blood ran cold. Lucien’s voice dropped to a growl. “You’re not leaving.” Aurora’s gaze snapped to the door. The footsteps stopped. Then, a voice—Eva’s, sharp and amused. “Well, well. If it isn’t the two of you.” Lucien’s cane tapped against the floor, slow and steady. “Eva.” Aurora’s breath hitched. She’d forgotten how sharp Eva’s eyes were, how she could cut through lies like a knife. “You’re late,” Eva said, stepping into the flat. “Again.” Lucien’s gaze flicked to Aurora, then back to Eva. “I’m not here for you.” Eva’s smile didn’t reach her eyes. “Oh, I know that. But you’re here for her.” Aurora’s stomach twisted. “I’m not.” Lucien’s voice was a low rumble. “You were always good at lying.” Eva’s fingers twitched, as if she wanted to reach for something—her knife, maybe, or a book, or something to keep them at bay. But she didn’t. Instead, she crossed her arms, her gaze never leaving Lucien. “You’re not the only one who’s been looking,” Aurora said, her voice steady despite the tremor in her hands. Lucien’s cane tapped against the floor once more. “I know.” Eva’s eyes narrowed. “What’s going on?” Aurora’s fingers curled around the book, her thumb brushing the ink. “Nothing.” Lucien’s voice was a whisper. “You’re not the only one who’s been looking.” The door swung shut behind them, the sound of footsteps retreating down the hall. Aurora’s breath came in shallow gasps, her fingers still wrapped around the book. Lucien’s gaze locked onto hers, unblinking. “You should have come back sooner.” Aurora’s pulse roared in her ears. The air between them was thick, charged with something older than words. She reached for the book again, but Lucien’s hand shot out, gripping her wrist. “Let me go,” she hissed. He didn’t. Instead, he pulled her closer, his voice a whisper against her ear. “You don’t get to decide what happens next.” Aurora’s fingers dug into his coat, her nails biting into the fabric. “I don’t have to take it.” Lucien’s grip loosened just enough for her to pull away, but not before she saw the fire in his eyes. “You always did.” The book slipped from her hands, landing on the floor with a soft *thud*. The pages fluttered open to a sketch of a woman with bright blue eyes—her own. Eva’s voice cut through the tension, sharp and amused. “Well, well. If it isn’t the two of you.” Aurora’s gaze snapped to the door. The footsteps stopped. Then, a voice—Eva’s, sharp and amused. “You’re late,” Eva said, stepping into the flat. Aurora’s breath hitched. She’d forgotten how sharp Eva’s eyes were, how she could cut through lies like a knife. Lucien’s cane tapped against the floor, slow and steady. “I’m not here for you.” Eva’s smile didn’t reach her eyes. “Oh, I know that. But you’re here for her.” Aurora’s stomach twisted. “I’m not.” Lucien’s voice was a low rumble. “You were always good at lying.” Eva’s fingers twitched, as if she wanted to reach for something—her knife, maybe, or a book, or something to keep them at bay. But she didn’t. Instead, she crossed her arms, her gaze never leaving Lucien. “You’re not the only one who’s been looking,” Aurora said, her voice steady despite the tremor in her hands. Lucien’s cane tapped against the floor once more. “I know.” Aurora’s fingers curled around the book, her thumb brushing the ink. “Nothing.” Lucien’s voice dropped to a growl. “You’re not leaving.” The door swung shut behind them, the footsteps retreating down the hall. Aurora’s gaze locked onto the book, the pages fluttering open to a sketch of a woman with bright blue eyes—her own. Lucien’s gaze locked onto hers, unblinking. “You should have come back sooner.” Aurora exhaled sharply, her fingers tightening around the book. The air between them was thick, charged with something she’d never felt before—something dangerous, something that burned. “You shouldn’t have come,” she said, her voice barely above a whisper. Lucien’s cane tapped against the floor, slow and deliberate. “I know.” Aurora’s breath came faster, her pulse roaring in her ears. The book lay open on the floor, the ink of the sketch glowing faintly in the dim light. Eva’s voice cut through the tension, sharp and amused. “Well, well. If it isn’t the two of you.” Aurora’s gaze snapped to the door, the footsteps lingering just outside. She could hear the faint sound of Eva’s footsteps retreating, but the door remained shut. Lucien’s voice was a low rumble, his gaze never leaving hers. “You don’t get to decide what happens next.” Aurora’s fingers curled around the book, her thumb brushing the ink. The sketch of the woman with bright blue eyes stared back at her, unblinking. She exhaled, her breath coming in shallow gasps. The air between them was charged, thick with something she’d never felt before. Lucien’s cane tapped against the floor once more. “You always did.” Aurora’s gaze locked onto the book, the pages fluttering open to the sketch. She reached for it, her fingers trembling. “Let me go,” she whispered. Lucien’s hand closed around her wrist, his grip firm. “You don’t get to decide.” Aurora’s breath hitched, her fingers digging into his coat. “I don’t have to take it.” Lucien’s voice was a growl, his grip tightening just enough to make her wince. “You always did.” The book slipped from her grasp, landing on the floor with a soft *thud*. The sketch of the woman with bright blue eyes stared back at her, unblinking. Aurora’s gaze snapped to Lucien’s, her pulse roaring in her ears. The air between them was thick, charged with something she couldn’t name. Eva’s voice echoed down the hall, sharp and amused. “You’re late.” Aurora’s fingers curled around the book, her thumb brushing the ink. The sketch of the woman with bright blue eyes stared back at her, unblinking. Lucien’s cane tapped against the floor, slow and steady. “I’m not here for you.” Aurora exhaled sharply, her gaze locked onto the book. The air between them was charged, thick with something she couldn’t ignore. “You shouldn’t have come,” she said, her voice barely above a whisper. Lucien’s gaze locked onto hers, unblinking. “I know.” Aurora’s breath came in shallow gasps, her fingers tightening around the book. The sketch of the woman with bright blue eyes stared back at her, unblinking. The door swung open again, Eva’s voice cutting through the tension. “Well, well. If it isn’t the two of you.” Aurora’s gaze snapped to the door, the footsteps lingering just outside. The book lay open on the floor, the sketch of the woman with bright blue eyes glowing faintly in the dim light. Lucien’s voice was a low rumble, his gaze never leaving hers. “You don’t get to decide what happens next.” Aurora’s fingers curled around the book, her thumb brushing the ink. The sketch stared back at her, unblinking. Eva’s footsteps retreated down the hall, the door shutting behind them. Aurora’s breath came in shallow gasps, her gaze fixed on the book. Lucien’s cane tapped against the floor, slow and deliberate. “You should have come back sooner.” Aurora exhaled, her fingers trembling. The air between them was charged, thick with something she couldn’t name. “You shouldn’t have come,” she said, her voice barely above a whisper. Lucien’s gaze locked onto hers, unblinking. The book lay open on the floor, the sketch of the woman with bright blue eyes staring back at her.
created_at"2026-02-20T19:19:17.473Z" 2/20/2026, 7:19:17 PM
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num_input_audio_prompt(null)
num_media_completion0
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"His voice dropped just [just]"
dialogueSentences71
tagDensity0.239
leniency0.479
rawRatio0.059
effectiveRatio0.028
78.71% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1879
totalAiIsmAdverbs8
found
0
adverb"lazily"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"sharply"
count3
3
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count3
highlights
0"lazily"
1"slightly"
2"sharply"
3"barely above a whisper"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1879
totalAiIsms39
found
0
word"pulse"
count4
1
word"traced"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count1
3
word"charged"
count7
4
word"whisper"
count6
5
word"footsteps"
count9
6
word"echoing"
count1
7
word"flicked"
count1
8
word"stomach"
count2
9
word"fluttered"
count1
10
word"tension"
count3
11
word"roaring"
count2
12
word"echoed"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"traced"
2"familiar"
3"charged"
4"whisper"
5"footsteps"
6"echoing"
7"flicked"
8"stomach"
9"fluttered"
10"tension"
11"roaring"
12"echoed"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"blood ran cold"
count1
1
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"blood ran cold"
1"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences154
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences154
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences208
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans4
markdownWords4
totalWords1860
ratio0.002
matches
0"click"
1"thud"
2"thud"
3"thud"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions27
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
16.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions94
wordCount1537
uniqueNames4
maxNameDensity2.54
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora39
Eva19
Lucien35
Evan1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Eva"
2"Lucien"
3"Evan"
places(empty)
globalScore0.231
windowScore0.167
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences124
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"quite healed"
1"looked like it had been well-loved, its e"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1860
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences208
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs104
mean17.88
std9.56
cv0.535
sampleLengths
033
18
255
39
415
529
616
737
86
914
1015
1138
1212
1338
1413
1510
1632
1712
1837
198
208
212
225
2318
2430
258
2630
275
2822
2918
3023
3117
329
3315
349
3510
3619
379
3814
3915
405
4112
4236
4319
4410
456
4612
4713
4827
4912
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences154
matches
0"was relaxed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs276
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount15
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences14
totalSentences208
ratio0.067
matches
0"The air inside Eva’s flat smelled of old paper and something faintly metallic—like the scent of a wound that hadn’t quite healed."
1"She remembered the way he’d always been—too smooth, too sure of himself, like he didn’t have a care in the world."
2"She turned away, her gaze flicking over the cluttered shelves—scrolls, half-empty jars of herbs, a half-finished sketchbook of some kind."
3"The kind of book she’d seen him carry before—one that looked like it had been well-loved, its edges slightly worn."
4"Aurora’s fingers curled into the scar on her wrist, the memory of Evan’s hands—rough, possessive—flashing through her mind."
5"The pages were thick, filled with sketches of faces—some familiar, some not."
6"It landed on the floor with a soft *thud*, the pages fluttering open to a sketch of a woman with bright blue eyes—her own."
7"Then, a voice—Eva’s, sharp and amused."
8"Eva’s fingers twitched, as if she wanted to reach for something—her knife, maybe, or a book, or something to keep them at bay."
9"The pages fluttered open to a sketch of a woman with bright blue eyes—her own."
10"Then, a voice—Eva’s, sharp and amused."
11"Eva’s fingers twitched, as if she wanted to reach for something—her knife, maybe, or a book, or something to keep them at bay."
12"Aurora’s gaze locked onto the book, the pages fluttering open to a sketch of a woman with bright blue eyes—her own."
13"The air between them was thick, charged with something she’d never felt before—something dangerous, something that burned."
82.89% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1556
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small, leather-bound book."
adverbCount82
adverbRatio0.05269922879177378
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.007069408740359897
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences208
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences208
mean8.94
std5.38
cv0.602
sampleLengths
011
122
22
36
420
514
621
79
88
97
1010
1115
124
138
148
1520
1617
176
1810
194
203
2111
221
235
2413
2520
269
273
283
2929
306
3113
325
335
3414
3518
366
376
383
3913
4012
419
428
435
443
452
463
472
4810
498
48.08% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.125
totalSentences208
uniqueOpeners26
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount8
totalSentences147
matches
0"Instead, he reached into his"
1"Instead, she turned away, her"
2"Instead, he pulled her closer,"
3"Then, a voice—Eva’s, sharp and"
4"Instead, she crossed her arms,"
5"Instead, he pulled her closer,"
6"Then, a voice—Eva’s, sharp and"
7"Instead, she crossed her arms,"
ratio0.054
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount24
totalSentences147
matches
0"She remembered the way he’d"
1"she said, voice rougher than"
2"He smirked, but it didn’t"
3"His voice dropped, just a"
4"She turned away, her gaze"
5"He didn’t answer right away."
6"he said, flipping it open"
7"She’d seen him with this"
8"she said, though she knew"
9"he said, voice low"
10"She didn’t answer."
11"She flipped through them, her"
12"She exhaled sharply."
13"It landed on the floor"
14"She reached for the book"
15"She’d forgotten how sharp Eva’s"
16"She reached for the book"
17"She’d forgotten how sharp Eva’s"
18"she said, her voice barely"
19"She could hear the faint"
ratio0.163
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount137
totalSentences147
matches
0"The door creaked open before"
1"The air inside Eva’s flat"
2"The scar on her wrist"
3"Lucien stood there, his cane"
4"The suit he wore was"
5"She remembered the way he’d"
6"she said, voice rougher than"
7"He smirked, but it didn’t"
8"The deadbolts clicked back into"
9"Aurora exhaled, her fingers brushing"
10"His voice dropped, just a"
11"She turned away, her gaze"
12"Ptolemy, the tabby cat, blinked"
13"Lucien stepped closer, the cane’s"
14"Aurora’s breath hitched."
15"The space between them felt"
16"He didn’t answer right away."
17"The kind of book she’d"
18"he said, flipping it open"
19"Aurora’s pulse jumped."
ratio0.932
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences147
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences74
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The air inside Eva’s flat smelled of old paper and something faintly metallic—like the scent of a wound that hadn’t quite healed."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount7
matches
0"she said, voice rougher than she intended"
1"he said, voice low"
2"Aurora said, her voice steady despite the tremor in her hands"
3"Aurora said, her voice steady despite the tremor in her hands"
4"she said, her voice barely above a whisper"
5"she said, her voice barely above a whisper"
6"she said, her voice barely above a whisper"
93.66% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags16
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"she hissed (hiss)"
2"she hissed (hiss)"
3"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences71
tagDensity0.225
leniency0.451
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.113
76.2224%