Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY7WWRGEX213FY37NYMBBDY

Run Details

Duration:
43.9s
Cost:
$0.000252
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Rain lashed at Harlow Quinn’s face, blurring the neon smear of the Raven’s Nest as she burst from its door. The suspect, a nervous man in a tweed coat she’d been tailing for three blocks, didn’t even glance back, just lengthened his stride against the downpour. He moved with a desperate intensity that contradicted his unassuming appearance. "Hold it!" she called, her voice swallowed by the city’s relentless rhythm. He didn’t slow. Harlow adjusted her grip on her service weapon, the familiar weight a cold comfort. Eighteen years with the Met, and the chase still hit her like a physical blow. The rain slicked the pavement, making each footfall treacherous. She risked a glance at her watch – worn leather, a gift from her late partner, DS Morris – 11:47 PM. Too late for this sort of thing, even in Soho. He veered sharply right, cutting into a narrow alleyway reeking of damp brick and stale refuse. Harlow followed, her boots splashing in puddles. The alley opened onto a wider street, and the man was already disappearing into the crowd spilling out of a late-night pub. She pushed through the throng, ignoring the annoyed grumbles and sidelong glances. He was weaving through the chaos, heading towards the Camden Lock area. Harlow’s gut tightened. Camden. That couldn’t be a coincidence. He ducked under a low-hanging railway arch, and Harlow scrambled after him. The air immediately grew colder, the rain somehow more insistent. She expected a dead end, another typical London backstreet. Instead, she saw a descending staircase, swallowed by impenetrable darkness. A flicker of movement at the bottom. A single, bare bulb cast a weak circle of light, revealing a metal door reinforced with thick steel bands. It was an oddity, jarringly out of place in the Victorian grime of the railway viaduct. The man in tweed fumbled with something at the door - a small, intricately carved token. It was bone, she realized, a milky white against the rusted metal. He pressed it into a slot beside the handle, and with a groan of ancient gears, the door swung inward. Harlow hesitated. The air spilling from the opening was different – dry, almost stale, with an undertone she couldn’t quite place. Something… unfamiliar. Instinct, a honed sense cultivated over years of navigating London's underbelly, screamed at her to turn back. But she’d come too far. She approached cautiously, leveling her weapon. “Police! Open up!” Silence. The man disappeared inside. Harlow took a breath, the damp chill seeping into her bones. Her hand tightened on the grip of her weapon. She could radio for backup, wait for reinforcements. That was standard procedure. But procedure didn’t always catch the ones who slipped through the cracks. And something about this felt… urgent. She moved through the doorway. The darkness swallowed her. The air thickened, smelled of incense and something metallic. The single bulb from the landing disappeared behind her, leaving her in almost total blackness. Then, a constellation of lights bloomed into existence, revealing a cavernous space far larger than the railway arch above could possibly contain. It was a market. But not like any market she’d ever seen. Stalls lined the rough-hewn walls, overflowing with bizarre and unsettling wares. Gleaming vials filled with swirling liquids. Strange, woven tapestries depicting scenes that defied logical explanation. Petrified roots that pulsed with a faint, inner light. The ground beneath her feet wasn’t pavement, but packed earth, damp and uneven. People moved through the throng, draped in shadows and cloaks, their faces obscured. Some haggled in hushed tones, others simply stared, their eyes unnaturally bright. The sheer density of humanity was overwhelming, yet the place felt… empty. Lifeless. This had to be the Veil Market. Whispers of it had circulated within the Met’s intelligence division, dismissed as urban legends. A black market for… things better left undisturbed. A place where the unthinkable became commerce. Her watch face glinted in the dim light – 12:03 AM. A figure materialized from the shadows, blocking her path. A man, tall and lean, with warm brown eyes that assessed her with unnerving calm. He wore a simple white shirt and loose trousers, and a Saint Christopher medallion hung around his neck. "Detective Quinn, isn't it?" he said, his voice smooth, almost melodic. He had a slight accent, something European, possibly Spanish. Harlow didn’t lower her weapon. “Who are you?” "Tomás Herrera. I assist those who require… specialized care." He gestured around the market with a subtle nod. “This is a place for those who operate outside the usual channels. Perhaps I can be of assistance to you, Detective.” His gaze flickered past her, searching. "You seem… out of place.” “I’m looking for someone,” she said, keeping her voice neutral. “A man in a tweed coat.” Tomás smiled, a flash of white teeth in the gloom. “This place attracts all sorts. It moves, you see. It is not always here.” “Moves? What are you talking about?” “Tonight, it resides beneath this abandoned Tube station. Next full moon… elsewhere.” He shrugged, a gesture of casual indifference. “The gentleman you seek may have already departed.” “You know who I’m looking for?” Harlow pressed, narrowing her eyes. He raised an eyebrow. “Let's just say I observe. This market attracts those with… unique needs. And those who exploit them.” Suddenly, a muffled shout cut through the market’s low hum. A scuffle nearby. Harlow’s gaze darted towards it, her weapon raised. “Caution, Detective,” Tomás said, his voice laced with warning. “This is not a place for displays of authority.” Harlow ignored him. She needed to find her suspect, find out what he was doing here. She took a step forward, pushing past a cloaked figure who recoiled at her touch. The crowd seemed to part before her, a silent current guiding her deeper into the market’s labyrinthine heart. She caught glimpses of strange transactions, whispered deals, and furtive glances. But the man in the tweed coat was gone. She stopped, scanning the faces in the crowd, feeling the weight of a hundred unseen eyes upon her. She was a predator dropped into an alien ecosystem. A single, solitary force of order in a place built on chaos. “He went that way,” a raspy voice whispered, startling her. An old woman, her face obscured by a deep cowl, pointed with a gnarled finger towards a narrow passage between two stalls. “Towards the alchemist’s district.” Harlow nodded curtly, thanking the woman with a brief inclination of her head. She started to move, but paused, turning back to Tomás, who was still watching her with those unsettlingly calm eyes. “You seem to know a lot about this place,” she said, her voice low and hard. He offered a small, enigmatic smile. “Knowledge is a currency, Detective. And here, it’s worth more than gold.” She didn't believe him. Not for a second. She turned and plunged into the passage, the smell of exotic herbs and strange chemicals assaulting her senses. The decision had been made. She was going deeper. Even if it meant stepping into a world she didn’t understand, a world that might very well consume her. She was a detective. She followed leads. And this lead—this terrifying, improbable lead—led straight into the heart of the darkness.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"He gestured around [around]"
dialogueSentences21
tagDensity0.429
leniency0.857
rawRatio0.111
effectiveRatio0.095
83.44% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1208
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count1
1
adverb"cautiously"
count1
2
adverb"suddenly"
count1
3
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"sharply"
1"cautiously"
2"suddenly"
3"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
13.08% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1208
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"intensity"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count1
2
word"weight"
count2
3
word"footfall"
count1
4
word"treacherous"
count1
5
word"flicker"
count1
6
word"navigating"
count1
7
word"silence"
count1
8
word"chill"
count1
9
word"standard"
count1
10
word"gleaming"
count1
11
word"pulsed"
count1
12
word"flickered"
count1
13
word"gloom"
count1
14
word"casual indifference"
count1
15
word"eyebrow"
count1
16
word"scanning"
count1
17
word"predator"
count1
18
word"solitary"
count1
19
word"enigmatic"
count1
highlights
0"intensity"
1"familiar"
2"weight"
3"footfall"
4"treacherous"
5"flicker"
6"navigating"
7"silence"
8"chill"
9"standard"
10"gleaming"
11"pulsed"
12"flickered"
13"gloom"
14"casual indifference"
15"eyebrow"
16"scanning"
17"predator"
18"solitary"
19"enigmatic"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences108
matches(empty)
89.95% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences108
filterMatches
0"watch –"
1"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"started to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences120
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen26
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1208
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
92.75% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions34
wordCount1048
uniqueNames18
maxNameDensity1.15
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Harlow12
Quinn1
Raven1
Nest1
Met2
Morris1
Soho1
Camden2
Lock1
London2
Victorian1
Veil1
Market1
Saint1
Christopher1
European1
Spanish1
Tomás3
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Raven"
3"Morris"
4"Saint"
5"Christopher"
6"Tomás"
places
0"Met"
1"Soho"
2"Camden"
3"London"
4"Victorian"
5"Market"
globalScore0.927
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences77
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"quite place"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1208
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences120
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs47
mean25.7
std17.98
cv0.699
sampleLengths
057
112
23
369
445
533
641
742
848
940
105
119
121
134
1450
155
164
1746
184
198
2048
2138
2236
2311
2442
2520
268
2739
2811
2916
3024
316
3227
3311
3421
3521
3618
3731
3829
399
4039
4136
4233
4316
4418
458
4666
98.77% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences108
matches
0"was gone"
1"been made"
88.27% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs179
matches
0"was weaving"
1"was doing"
2"was going"
23.81% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences120
ratio0.042
matches
0"She risked a glance at her watch – worn leather, a gift from her late partner, DS Morris – 11:47 PM."
1"The man in tweed fumbled with something at the door - a small, intricately carved token."
2"The air spilling from the opening was different – dry, almost stale, with an undertone she couldn’t quite place."
3"Her watch face glinted in the dim light – 12:03 AM."
4"And this lead—this terrifying, improbable lead—led straight into the heart of the darkness."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1048
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount35
adverbRatio0.033396946564885496
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.012404580152671756
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences120
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences120
mean10.07
std5.84
cv0.58
sampleLengths
020
126
211
312
43
514
615
79
821
910
1016
117
1222
1312
1412
153
161
175
1812
1910
209
2110
227
2319
2416
2516
2612
2720
282
2919
301
311
3217
335
346
353
361
374
3811
399
408
414
4212
435
441
455
464
479
4815
4922
63.61% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.4166666666666667
totalSentences120
uniqueOpeners50
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences100
matches
0"Too late for this sort"
1"Instead, she saw a descending"
2"Then, a constellation of lights"
3"Suddenly, a muffled shout cut"
ratio0.04
64.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount39
totalSentences100
matches
0"He moved with a desperate"
1"she called, her voice swallowed"
2"He didn’t slow."
3"She risked a glance at"
4"He veered sharply right, cutting"
5"She pushed through the throng,"
6"He was weaving through the"
7"He ducked under a low-hanging"
8"She expected a dead end,"
9"It was an oddity, jarringly"
10"It was bone, she realized,"
11"He pressed it into a"
12"She approached cautiously, leveling her"
13"Her hand tightened on the"
14"She could radio for backup,"
15"She moved through the doorway."
16"It was a market."
17"Her watch face glinted in"
18"He wore a simple white"
19"he said, his voice smooth,"
ratio0.39
40.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount84
totalSentences100
matches
0"Rain lashed at Harlow Quinn’s"
1"The suspect, a nervous man"
2"He moved with a desperate"
3"she called, her voice swallowed"
4"He didn’t slow."
5"Harlow adjusted her grip on"
6"The rain slicked the pavement,"
7"She risked a glance at"
8"He veered sharply right, cutting"
9"Harlow followed, her boots splashing"
10"The alley opened onto a"
11"She pushed through the throng,"
12"He was weaving through the"
13"Harlow’s gut tightened."
14"That couldn’t be a coincidence."
15"He ducked under a low-hanging"
16"The air immediately grew colder,"
17"She expected a dead end,"
18"A flicker of movement at"
19"A single, bare bulb cast"
ratio0.84
50.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences100
matches
0"Even if it meant stepping"
ratio0.01
98.21% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences48
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"He moved with a desperate intensity that contradicted his unassuming appearance."
1"A man, tall and lean, with warm brown eyes that assessed her with unnerving calm."
2"She took a step forward, pushing past a cloaked figure who recoiled at her touch."
13.89% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"He shrugged, a gesture of casual indifference"
1"she said, her voice low and hard"
54.76% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Harlow pressed (press)"
1"a raspy voice whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences21
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0.286
effectiveRatio0.19
82.4846%