| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she tried again [again]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 5 | | tagDensity | 0.6 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.333 | |
| 86.72% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 753 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 26.96% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 753 | | totalAiIsms | 11 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "loomed" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "flickered" | | 4 | "searing" | | 5 | "whisper" | | 6 | "stomach" | | 7 | "weight" | | 8 | "shattered" | | 9 | "pounding" | | 10 | "throbbed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 83 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 83 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 85 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 29 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 90.52% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 17 | | markdownWords | 41 | | totalWords | 749 | | ratio | 0.055 | | matches | | 0 | "meet me at the grove, midnight, bring the pendant" | | 1 | "I" | | 2 | "Stupid. Stupid." | | 3 | "No one else. Not yet." | | 4 | "wrong" | | 5 | "pulled" | | 6 | "“You shouldn’t have come.”" | | 7 | "inside" | | 8 | "moved" | | 9 | "“You shouldn’t have come,”" | | 10 | "Around" | | 11 | "run" | | 12 | "thing" | | 13 | "shattered" | | 14 | "You’re not supposed to be here." | | 15 | "known" | | 16 | "door" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 0 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 82.07% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 14 | | wordCount | 736 | | uniqueNames | 5 | | maxNameDensity | 1.36 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Eva | 1 | | Aurora | 10 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Eva" | | 3 | "Aurora" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.821 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 53.85% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 52 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "as if reaching for something just beyond sight" | | 1 | "as if reacting to her movement" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 749 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 33 | | mean | 22.7 | | std | 26.56 | | cv | 1.17 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 1 | | 1 | 6 | | 2 | 86 | | 3 | 8 | | 4 | 90 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 47 | | 7 | 9 | | 8 | 18 | | 9 | 68 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 38 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 69 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 61 | | 18 | 15 | | 19 | 52 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 1 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 55 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 29 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 6 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | | |
| 3.92% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 136 | | matches | | 0 | "was watching" | | 1 | "wasn’t coming" | | 2 | "wasn’t coming" | | 3 | "was closing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 85 | | ratio | 0.059 | | matches | | 0 | "Should’ve ignored the note tucked into her delivery bag—*meet me at the grove, midnight, bring the pendant*—signed only with a single, looping *I*." | | 1 | "But here, the air hummed with something else—too many insects, too many branches whispering." | | 2 | "The wood was warm—too warm." | | 3 | "The air smelled wrong—like copper and something older, something that made her stomach clench." | | 4 | "A hand—no, a *thing* with fingers like twisted roots—grabbed her ankle." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 742 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 26 | | adverbRatio | 0.03504043126684636 | | lyAdverbCount | 4 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.005390835579514825 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 85 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 85 | | mean | 8.79 | | std | 5.94 | | cv | 0.676 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 6 | | 1 | 15 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 7 | | 4 | 23 | | 5 | 21 | | 6 | 8 | | 7 | 22 | | 8 | 14 | | 9 | 29 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 1 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 2 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 18 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 1 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 16 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 14 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 14 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 8 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 15 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 9 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 15 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 14 | | 49 | 14 |
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| 41.76% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.2823529411764706 | | totalSentences | 85 | | uniqueOpeners | 24 | |
| 45.05% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the wind, or something" |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 84.86% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 25 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | 0 | "She should’ve left it in" | | 1 | "She’d come alone." | | 2 | "She turned slowly, her boots" | | 3 | "Her voice cracked" | | 4 | "She cleared her throat." | | 5 | "She stepped forward, her fingers" | | 6 | "Her breath hitched." | | 7 | "She pulled it free, holding" | | 8 | "They *pulled*, like fingers dragging" | | 9 | "she tried again, her voice" | | 10 | "It wasn’t coming from anywhere." | | 11 | "It was *inside* her head," | | 12 | "She stumbled back, her heel" | | 13 | "She fell, her hands scrambling" | | 14 | "It clattered against the stone," | | 15 | "She had to get out." | | 16 | "She had to *run*." | | 17 | "Her fingers twitched toward the" | | 18 | "She was on her back," | | 19 | "Her wrist throbbed where she’d" |
| | ratio | 0.338 | |
| 34.32% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 63 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | 0 | "The pendant burned against her" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter yanked her hand" | | 2 | "The Heartstone’s crimson glow pulsed" | | 3 | "She should’ve left it in" | | 4 | "The grove wasn’t supposed to" | | 5 | "Richmond Park at night was" | | 6 | "The standing stones, those ancient" | | 7 | "Aurora’s breath came shallow, her" | | 8 | "She’d come alone." | | 9 | "A twig snapped." | | 10 | "The sound had come from" | | 11 | "She turned slowly, her boots" | | 12 | "The pendant’s glow flickered, as" | | 13 | "Her voice cracked" | | 14 | "She cleared her throat." | | 15 | "She stepped forward, her fingers" | | 16 | "The wood was warm—too warm." | | 17 | "Her breath hitched." | | 18 | "The pendant burned again, this" | | 19 | "She pulled it free, holding" |
| | ratio | 0.851 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 32 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter yanked her hand back as if scalded, fingers curling into the damp earth." | | 1 | "But the note had smelled of damp earth and something older, something that made her skin prickle even through the paper." | | 2 | "The standing stones, those ancient oaks with their bark like cracked leather, loomed too close, their gnarled fingers brushing the treeline as if reaching for s…" | | 3 | "The silver chain was slick with something dark, something that didn’t look like sweat." | | 4 | "It was *inside* her head, a whisper that slithered along her nerves like a serpent." | | 5 | "The air smelled wrong—like copper and something older, something that made her stomach clench." | | 6 | "The pendant lay just out of reach, its glow dimming, flickering like a dying ember." | | 7 | "The grove was closing in, the trees leaning in, their branches forming a canopy that pressed down like a suffocating weight." | | 8 | "She was on her back, her head pounding, the flat’s thin mattress creaking beneath her." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she tried again, her voice smaller this time" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "the voice repeated (repeat)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 5 | | tagDensity | 0.2 | | leniency | 0.4 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.4 | |