| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 18 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she asked finally [finally]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 54 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 0.056 | | effectiveRatio | 0.037 | |
| 71.48% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1052 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "quickly" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "carefully" | | 3 | "perfectly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 28.71% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1052 | | totalAiIsms | 15 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "echoed" | | 1 | "trembled" | | 2 | "flicker" | | 3 | "unreadable" | | 4 | "chill" | | 5 | "facade" | | 6 | "glint" | | 7 | "silence" | | 8 | "unspoken" | | 9 | "warmth" | | 10 | "disrupting" | | 11 | "flawless" | | 12 | "constructed" | | 13 | "whisper" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 71 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 71 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 106 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 27 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 2 | | markdownWords | 3 | | totalWords | 1045 | | ratio | 0.003 | | matches | | 0 | "House Beautiful" | | 1 | "think" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 12 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 9 | | wordCount | 618 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 0.32 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Lucien" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 2 | | Evan | 1 | | Tuesday | 1 | | Eva | 1 | | Books | 1 | | Lucien | 2 | | London | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Evan" | | 2 | "Eva" | | 3 | "Books" | | 4 | "Lucien" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 50 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1045 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 106 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 52 | | mean | 20.1 | | std | 12.17 | | cv | 0.605 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 45 | | 1 | 1 | | 2 | 34 | | 3 | 22 | | 4 | 41 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 33 | | 7 | 8 | | 8 | 37 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 27 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 22 | | 13 | 17 | | 14 | 25 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 26 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 16 | | 20 | 39 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 38 | | 23 | 17 | | 24 | 23 | | 25 | 20 | | 26 | 16 | | 27 | 36 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 19 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 41 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 24 | | 34 | 43 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 16 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 16 | | 39 | 21 | | 40 | 27 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 10 | | 43 | 16 | | 44 | 24 | | 45 | 29 | | 46 | 25 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 24 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 108 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 1 | | totalSentences | 106 | | ratio | 0.009 | | matches | | 0 | "Just swept his gaze over her—a slow, assessing burn—before his eyes snagged on the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist." |
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| 73.39% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 623 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small crescent-shaped scar" | | 1 | "faint crescent-shaped scar." |
| | adverbCount | 31 | | adverbRatio | 0.04975922953451043 | | lyAdverbCount | 17 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.027287319422150885 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 106 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 106 | | mean | 9.86 | | std | 5.55 | | cv | 0.563 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 11 | | 1 | 2 | | 2 | 2 | | 3 | 9 | | 4 | 7 | | 5 | 8 | | 6 | 1 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 1 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 2 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 21 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 16 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 21 | | 28 | 16 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 13 | | 32 | 14 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 8 | | 40 | 11 | | 41 | 14 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 12 | | 44 | 14 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 12 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 7 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 69.50% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.4339622641509434 | | totalSentences | 106 | | uniqueOpeners | 46 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | | 0 | "Then the second." | | 1 | "Just swept his gaze over" | | 2 | "More a statement of fact." |
| | ratio | 0.046 | |
| 0.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 41 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | | 0 | "She peered through the peephole." | | 1 | "Her breath hitched." | | 2 | "He hadn’t changed." | | 3 | "Her hand trembled on the" | | 4 | "It slid open with a" | | 5 | "He didn’t bother with a" | | 6 | "She stepped back, granting him" | | 7 | "she managed, her voice tight" | | 8 | "he observed, his gaze drifting" | | 9 | "she retorted, crossing her arms" | | 10 | "He moved further inside, cane" | | 11 | "She scoffed, walking past him" | | 12 | "He followed, leaning against the" | | 13 | "She busied herself with a" | | 14 | "She turned, a sardonic smile" | | 15 | "He winced, the first chink" | | 16 | "She gripped the mug tighter," | | 17 | "He’d worry himself sick if" | | 18 | "He pushed off the doorframe" | | 19 | "His voice, usually smooth and" |
| | ratio | 0.631 | |
| 21.54% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 57 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | | 0 | "The chipped paint around the" | | 1 | "A hard rap echoed through" | | 2 | "She peered through the peephole." | | 3 | "Her breath hitched." | | 4 | "He hadn’t changed." | | 5 | "Charcoal suit, slicked-back platinum hair" | | 6 | "Her hand trembled on the" | | 7 | "It slid open with a" | | 8 | "He didn’t bother with a" | | 9 | "A flicker of something unreadable" | | 10 | "She stepped back, granting him" | | 11 | "The scent of rain and" | | 12 | "Ptolemy, her tabby, arched his" | | 13 | "she managed, her voice tight" | | 14 | "he observed, his gaze drifting" | | 15 | "Books littered every surface, scrolls" | | 16 | "she retorted, crossing her arms" | | 17 | "He moved further inside, cane" | | 18 | "Ptolemy, having decided Lucien wasn’t" | | 19 | "The words weren’t a request." |
| | ratio | 0.877 | |
| 76.92% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | | 0 | "Though after everything with Evan," |
| | ratio | 0.015 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 19 | | technicalSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 18 | | uselessAdditionCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "she managed, her voice tight" | | 1 | "he said, a glint of stubbornness in his eyes" | | 2 | "she asked finally, her voice carefully neutral" | | 3 | "he said, his tone flat" | | 4 | "She set, the ceramic clinking against the counter" | | 5 | "he conceded, his voice barely a whisper" | | 6 | "she said, her voice shaky" |
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| 75.93% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "he observed (observe)" | | 1 | "she retorted (retort)" | | 2 | "She laughed (laugh)" | | 3 | "he conceded (concede)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 54 | | tagDensity | 0.148 | | leniency | 0.296 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.148 | |