Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY7YRS56SGQQY01VFCQA7J7

Run Details

Duration:
26.3s
Cost:
$0.001553
Provider:
xAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora twisted the top deadbolt, the third one clicking into place with a satisfying thud. Ptolemy, the tabby cat, weaved between her ankles, his tail flicking against her jeans. The flat smelled of turmeric from the curry house below, mingling with the faint must of old books stacked on every shelf. She had crashed here after a double shift at the Golden Empress, Eva out chasing some lead on a missing artifact. Sleep tugged at her eyelids, but the knock—sharp, insistent—had yanked her upright on the lumpy sofa. She yanked the door open, expecting Eva's sheepish grin or maybe a neighbor complaining about the cat's midnight yowls. Instead, Lucien Moreau stood there, his platinum hair slicked back under the dim hallway light, one amber eye catching the glow while the black one swallowed it whole. His charcoal suit hung perfect on his frame, the ivory-handled cane hooked over his arm like an afterthought. He didn't smile. Didn't blink. "Rory." His voice rolled out low, that French lilt wrapping around her name like smoke. He leaned forward, just enough to test the threshold. Her hand tightened on the doorframe, nails digging into the chipped paint. The crescent scar on her wrist itched, an old echo. "Lucien. How the hell did you find me here?" He glanced past her shoulder, eyes scanning the chaos of scrolls and half-empty tea mugs. "Eva's not subtle with her addresses. Brick Lane. Three deadbolts. A cat that scratches like a demon's claw." He shifted his weight, the cane tapping once against the floorboards. "May I come in?" She blocked the doorway, crossing her arms. Heat flushed her cheeks, not from the draft snaking up the stairs, but from the way his gaze lingered—on her tangled black hair, the oversized jumper slipping off one shoulder. Months had passed since Paris, since that hotel room where words had twisted into accusations and touches had burned too hot. He had vanished after, left her with a bruised heart and questions that clawed at night. "Why? You made it clear last time—business only. No strings." Her voice cracked on the last word, sharper than she meant. Lucien's jaw tightened, the amber eye flickering like embers. He uncrossed his arms, letting the cane dangle. "This isn't business. Not entirely." He stepped closer, the scent of his cologne—sandalwood and something darker, infernal—cutting through the curry spice. "I need to talk. About us. About what I left unsaid." Ptolemy hissed from the floor, arching his back. Aurora's pulse hammered in her ears. She should slam the door. Send him back to the shadows of London's underbelly, where half-demons like him brokered deals with things that went bump in the night. But her feet didn't move. Instead, she stepped aside, the door creaking wide. "Fine. But if Eva walks in and finds you here, you're explaining the mess yourself." He entered, the flat shrinking around his presence. The door clicked shut behind him, the deadbolts left undone. Lucien surveyed the room, his fingers trailing over a stack of yellowed scrolls on the coffee table. Dust motes danced in the light from the single bulb overhead. "Charming. Fits you—cluttered, full of secrets." She snatched a mug from the table, dumping cold tea into the sink. Water splashed, cold against her skin. "Sit if you're sitting. Don't touch anything." He lowered himself onto the armchair, the cane leaning against his knee. His eyes followed her as she paced the narrow space between kitchenette and sofa, bright blue meeting mismatched ones. Silence stretched, thick as fog off the Thames. "You look tired," he said finally, voice soft. "The delivery routes wearing you down?" Aurora stopped, hands gripping the counter's edge. "Don't. Don't pretend you care now. You ghosted me after that night. Left me to wake up alone, wondering if it meant anything or if I was just another mark in your ledger." Lucien's fingers drummed the cane's handle, a slow rhythm. He leaned forward, elbows on knees. "It meant everything. That's why I left. My world—it's poison. Demons don't do clean breaks, Rory. And you... you deserve clean." She laughed, bitter, turning to face him. Her hair fell across her face; she shoved it back. "Clean? Coming from the man who pulls strings in the supernatural black market? You think I can't handle your shadows? I fled Cardiff for this—for London, for the mess. Evan's fists were cleaner than your lies." His amber eye narrowed, the black one unreadable. He rose, crossing the room in two strides, stopping inches from her. Heat radiated from him, unnatural, like a furnace banked low. "Evan was a fool who hit what he couldn't control. I'm not him. But I am half of what he feared—half of what you should fear." His hand lifted, hovering near her cheek, but he didn't touch. "That night in Paris, when I traced the scar on your wrist, I saw it all. Your strength. Your fire. I wanted more. Still do." Aurora's breath hitched. She could feel the pull, that magnetic draw from their first meeting in Silas' bar, when his information on her ex had come with a wink and a warning. Attraction had sparked then, fed by stolen glances and late-night calls in four languages she half-understood. Then Paris—the gala, the hotel, bodies tangled in silk sheets, whispers of futures neither believed in. Hurt followed when he pulled away, citing dangers from Avaros his father's realm dragged behind him. "You left without a word," she whispered, voice raw. "I waited. Checked my phone like an idiot. Thought maybe you'd call, explain why you bolted after saying you couldn't stay away." Lucien's hand dropped, curling into a fist at his side. He turned, pacing to the window overlooking Brick Lane's neon haze. Streetlights buzzed below, vendors hawking late-night samosas. "I watched you. From afar. Made sure Evan stayed gone, that your routes at the Golden Empress stayed safe. But getting close? It invites the wrong eyes. My father's kin—they sense weakness. And you, Rory, you're mine." The word hung between them, possessive, electric. She stepped closer, the floorboards groaning. Ptolemy jumped onto the windowsill, tail lashing as he eyed the intruder. "Yours? Like a deal you brokered? Or something real?" He spun, closing the gap again. This time, his fingers brushed her arm, light as a feather, sending sparks up her skin. "Real. Too real. That's the complication." His voice dropped, laced with that lilt. "I came because I can't stay away anymore. The underworld's shifting—artifacts moving like the ones Eva chases. But that's excuse enough to knock. Truth is, I miss you. The way you challenge every shadow I cast." Aurora's heart thudded, a drumbeat echoing the distant tube rumble. She searched his face, the sharp lines softened in the lamplight, the heterochromatic eyes holding storms she wanted to weather. Hurt lingered, a knot in her chest, but so did the pull—the unfinished sentences from Paris, the touches cut short. "You hurt me," she said, stepping into his space, their breaths mingling. "Made me doubt everything. But damn if seeing you here doesn't make me want to forget it all." Lucien's hand cupped her jaw, thumb tracing her lower lip. His touch ignited, warm and insistent. "Then forget. Or don't. Yell at me. Throw the cat at me. But let me stay. Just tonight." She tilted her head, lips brushing his thumb. The flat faded—the books, the scrolls, the deadbolts—leaving only him, the half-demon with secrets in his veins and longing in his gaze. Ptolemy meowed, breaking the spell, leaping down to rub against her leg. "Not so fast," she murmured, pulling back just enough to hold his eyes. "We talk first. All of it. No vanishing acts." He nodded, a rare vulnerability cracking his polish. "Agreed. Start with Paris. I never told you how your laugh haunted me—sharp, cutting through the gala's noise like a blade." Aurora sank onto the sofa, patting the cushion beside her. He joined, the armchair abandoned, their knees touching. Words spilled then, cautious at first, then freer. She described the emptiness after he left, the way deliveries blurred into numbness, Eva's flat a temporary refuge from her own above Silas'. He confessed the pull of Avaros, whispers from his father's realm tempting him back, but her face anchoring him to Earth. "Why now?" she asked, voice steady as she leaned into his shoulder. His suit jacket scratched her cheek, familiar. Lucien draped an arm around her, fingers weaving into her hair. "A lead on Eva's artifact crossed my desk. Brought me to Brick Lane. But the flat? That was me, choosing." She lifted her head, meeting his amber eye, the one that burned. Attraction reignited, a slow burn. "And if I choose to kiss you? Erase the hurt with something better?" His black eye darkened, lips curving. "Try me." She did. Leaned in, captured his mouth—soft at first, testing. He responded, hand sliding to her neck, pulling her closer. The kiss deepened, tongues tangling with months of unsaid hunger. Hurt melted into heat, the flat's clutter forgotten as bodies shifted, her jumper tugged aside, his cane clattering to the floor. Ptolemy retreated to the bedroom, tail high. Outside, Brick Lane pulsed with life—taxis honking, laughter from the curry house—but inside, time slowed. Lucien's hands explored, mapping scars and curves like territory reclaimed. "Rory," he breathed against her collarbone, "you're my weakness. My strength." She arched into him, fingers undoing his shirt buttons, revealing skin marked by infernal lines faint as whispers. "Then stay weak. With me." They moved together, the sofa creaking under weight, breaths ragged. Dialogue fractured into gasps—promises murmured, hurts aired in the spaces between. "I should've fought for this," he said, pausing to trace her wrist scar. "You are now," she replied, pulling him back. The night unfolded in layers, attraction weaving through old wounds, things left unsaid pouring out with every touch. Dawn crept closer, but they lingered, entangled, the deadbolts forgotten, the world outside irrelevant. Eva's key turned in the lock hours later, but that was another complication. For now, the flat held only them—two souls, complicated and complete.
created_at"2026-02-20T19:20:49.2Z" 2/20/2026, 7:20:49 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"he said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.432
leniency0.865
rawRatio0.063
effectiveRatio0.054
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1717
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
41.76% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1717
totalAiIsms20
found
0
word"perfect"
count1
1
word"lilt"
count2
2
word"echo"
count1
3
word"scanning"
count1
4
word"weight"
count2
5
word"pulse"
count1
6
word"silence"
count1
7
word"unreadable"
count1
8
word"traced"
count1
9
word"could feel"
count1
10
word"magnetic"
count1
11
word"silk"
count1
12
word"electric"
count1
13
word"echoing"
count1
14
word"tracing"
count1
15
word"familiar"
count1
16
word"pulsed"
count1
17
word"fractured"
count1
highlights
0"perfect"
1"lilt"
2"echo"
3"scanning"
4"weight"
5"pulse"
6"silence"
7"unreadable"
8"traced"
9"could feel"
10"magnetic"
11"silk"
12"electric"
13"echoing"
14"tracing"
15"familiar"
16"pulsed"
17"fractured"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences104
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences104
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences127
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1688
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions44
wordCount1192
uniqueNames17
maxNameDensity0.67
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Golden1
Empress1
Eva4
Lucien8
Moreau1
French1
Paris3
Ptolemy5
London1
Thames1
Aurora6
Attraction2
Avaros2
Brick2
Lane2
Earth1
Hurt3
persons
0"Eva"
1"Lucien"
2"Moreau"
3"Ptolemy"
4"Aurora"
5"Attraction"
6"Hurt"
places
0"Golden"
1"Paris"
2"London"
3"Thames"
4"Avaros"
5"Brick"
6"Lane"
7"Earth"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences93
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.592
wordCount1688
matches
0"not from the draft snaking up the stairs, but from the way his gaze lingered"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences127
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs41
mean41.17
std21.09
cv0.512
sampleLengths
088
170
224
331
448
574
621
749
855
915
1052
1126
1239
1314
1440
1536
1653
1792
1880
1931
2065
2134
2271
2350
2430
2534
2642
2722
2829
2970
3019
3131
3230
338
3451
3543
3623
3734
388
3932
4024
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences104
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs242
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount14
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences11
totalSentences127
ratio0.087
matches
0"Sleep tugged at her eyelids, but the knock—sharp, insistent—had yanked her upright on the lumpy sofa."
1"Heat flushed her cheeks, not from the draft snaking up the stairs, but from the way his gaze lingered—on her tangled black hair, the oversized jumper slipping off one shoulder."
2"\"This isn't business. Not entirely.\" He stepped closer, the scent of his cologne—sandalwood and something darker, infernal—cutting through the curry spice."
3"Her hair fell across her face; she shoved it back."
4"Then Paris—the gala, the hotel, bodies tangled in silk sheets, whispers of futures neither believed in."
5"Hurt lingered, a knot in her chest, but so did the pull—the unfinished sentences from Paris, the touches cut short."
6"The flat faded—the books, the scrolls, the deadbolts—leaving only him, the half-demon with secrets in his veins and longing in his gaze."
7"Leaned in, captured his mouth—soft at first, testing."
8"Outside, Brick Lane pulsed with life—taxis honking, laughter from the curry house—but inside, time slowed."
9"Dialogue fractured into gasps—promises murmured, hurts aired in the spaces between."
10"For now, the flat held only them—two souls, complicated and complete."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount820
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount19
adverbRatio0.023170731707317073
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0024390243902439024
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences127
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences127
mean13.29
std7.62
cv0.573
sampleLengths
015
114
222
321
416
519
628
718
83
92
1015
119
1212
1310
149
1515
1629
174
187
1930
2021
2116
2221
239
248
2521
2611
278
286
295
3023
315
328
3315
348
3510
3617
3711
386
3913
406
417
4212
4319
448
458
466
477
4833
499
69.55% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.41732283464566927
totalSentences127
uniqueOpeners53
98.04% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences102
matches
0"Instead, Lucien Moreau stood there,"
1"Instead, she stepped aside, the"
2"Then Paris—the gala, the hotel,"
ratio0.029
20.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount51
totalSentences102
matches
0"She had crashed here after"
1"She yanked the door open,"
2"His charcoal suit hung perfect"
3"He didn't smile."
4"His voice rolled out low,"
5"He leaned forward, just enough"
6"Her hand tightened on the"
7"He glanced past her shoulder,"
8"He shifted his weight, the"
9"She blocked the doorway, crossing"
10"He had vanished after, left"
11"Her voice cracked on the"
12"He uncrossed his arms, letting"
13"He stepped closer, the scent"
14"She should slam the door."
15"He entered, the flat shrinking"
16"She snatched a mug from"
17"He lowered himself onto the"
18"His eyes followed her as"
19"he said finally, voice soft"
ratio0.5
13.92% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount91
totalSentences102
matches
0"Aurora twisted the top deadbolt,"
1"Ptolemy, the tabby cat, weaved"
2"The flat smelled of turmeric"
3"She had crashed here after"
4"Sleep tugged at her eyelids,"
5"She yanked the door open,"
6"His charcoal suit hung perfect"
7"He didn't smile."
8"His voice rolled out low,"
9"He leaned forward, just enough"
10"Her hand tightened on the"
11"The crescent scar on her"
12"He glanced past her shoulder,"
13"He shifted his weight, the"
14"She blocked the doorway, crossing"
15"Heat flushed her cheeks, not"
16"Months had passed since Paris,"
17"He had vanished after, left"
18"Her voice cracked on the"
19"Lucien's jaw tightened, the amber"
ratio0.892
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences102
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences53
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Send him back to the shadows of London's underbelly, where half-demons like him brokered deals with things that went bump in the night."
1"He confessed the pull of Avaros, whispers from his father's realm tempting him back, but her face anchoring him to Earth."
2"He responded, hand sliding to her neck, pulling her closer."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"He shifted, the cane tapping once against the floorboards"
1"he said finally, voice soft"
2"she whispered, voice raw"
3"she asked, voice steady as she leaned into his shoulder"
41.89% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
1"she murmured (murmur)"
2"She described (describe)"
3"he breathed (breathe)"
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.243
leniency0.486
rawRatio0.444
effectiveRatio0.216
79.5055%