| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 9 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 14 | | tagDensity | 0.643 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1141 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1141 | | totalAiIsms | 32 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | word | "carried the weight" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "whisper" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "quickened" | | 3 | "unreadable" | | 4 | "silk" | | 5 | "carried the weight" | | 6 | "stomach" | | 7 | "loomed" | | 8 | "etched" | | 9 | "pulsed" | | 10 | "echoed" | | 11 | "gleaming" | | 12 | "flickered" | | 13 | "trembled" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 94 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 51.67% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 6 | | narrationSentences | 94 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 99 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 27 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 77.88% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 13 | | markdownWords | 69 | | totalWords | 1130 | | ratio | 0.061 | | matches | | 0 | "\"The Veil thins here.\"" | | 1 | "\"You carry the mark of Hel,\"" | | 2 | "\"And the Veil is hungry.\"" | | 3 | "\"The feast is overdue,\"" | | 4 | "\"You’re not alone,\"" | | 5 | "\"But you’re not safe here either.\"" | | 6 | "\"The path ahead is not one you’ve walked before,\"" | | 7 | "\"But the choice is yours.\"" | | 8 | "\"The feast is overdue,\"" | | 9 | "\"You’re not alone,\"" | | 10 | "\"But you’re not safe here either.\"" | | 11 | "\"The path ahead is not one you’ve walked before,\"" | | 12 | "\"But the choice is yours.\"" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 10 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 93.29% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 60 | | wordCount | 1058 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 1.13 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 12 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Fae | 12 | | Grove | 9 | | Nyx | 9 | | Shade | 1 | | Aldric | 1 | | Isolde | 6 | | Belphegor | 1 | | Veil | 4 | | Hel | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Aldric" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "Belphegor" | | 5 | "Hel" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.933 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 81 | | glossingSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "something like static, thick and alive, pres" | | 1 | "bark that seemed to whisper" | | 2 | "as if sensing the shift in the air" | | 3 | "quite exist in the mortal world" | | 4 | "something like the scent of old magic" | | 5 | "something like static, thick and alive" | | 6 | "quite exist in the mortal world" | | 7 | "something like static, thick and alive" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1130 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 99 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 36.29% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 26 | | mean | 43.46 | | std | 12.04 | | cv | 0.277 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 83 | | 1 | 54 | | 2 | 57 | | 3 | 42 | | 4 | 56 | | 5 | 49 | | 6 | 60 | | 7 | 43 | | 8 | 38 | | 9 | 33 | | 10 | 52 | | 11 | 27 | | 12 | 33 | | 13 | 48 | | 14 | 45 | | 15 | 35 | | 16 | 47 | | 17 | 43 | | 18 | 38 | | 19 | 33 | | 20 | 39 | | 21 | 43 | | 22 | 33 | | 23 | 38 | | 24 | 38 | | 25 | 23 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 94 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 13 | | totalVerbs | 174 | | matches | | 0 | "was calling" | | 1 | "was thinning" | | 2 | "was calling" | | 3 | "was thinning" | | 4 | "was standing" | | 5 | "was coming" | | 6 | "was standing" | | 7 | "was coming" | | 8 | "was thinning" | | 9 | "was calling" | | 10 | "was thinning" | | 11 | "was standing" | | 12 | "was standing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 99 | | ratio | 0.071 | | matches | | 0 | "She stepped forward, the silver chain of her Heartstone pendant catching the dim, shifting light—deep crimson now, pulsing faintly against her wrist." | | 1 | "The Fae Grove wasn’t just a place—it was a rift, a crack in the fabric of reality." | | 2 | "She didn’t need to see the rift to know it was there—just the way the world felt different, the way the air itself seemed to breathe." | | 3 | "A pair of eyes—pale, almost luminous—locked onto hers." | | 4 | "But she knew one thing—she wasn’t going to let it catch her unawares." | | 5 | "But she knew one thing—she wasn’t going to let it catch her unawares." | | 6 | "A pair of eyes—pale, almost luminous—locked onto hers." |
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| 70.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1069 | | adjectiveStacks | 5 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "alive, pressing against Aurora’s" | | 1 | "far older, far darker." | | 2 | "far older, far darker." | | 3 | "far older, far darker." | | 4 | "far older, far darker." |
| | adverbCount | 35 | | adverbRatio | 0.03274087932647334 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.00841908325537886 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 99 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 99 | | mean | 11.41 | | std | 5.64 | | cv | 0.494 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 21 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 18 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 7 | | 11 | 17 | | 12 | 17 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 18 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 26 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 17 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 20 | | 27 | 16 | | 28 | 16 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 12 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 12 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 20 | | 42 | 15 | | 43 | 24 | | 44 | 13 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 18 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 32.83% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 17 | | diversityRatio | 0.15151515151515152 | | totalSentences | 99 | | uniqueOpeners | 15 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 94 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 21 | | totalSentences | 94 | | matches | | 0 | "She stepped forward, the silver" | | 1 | "She caught herself on the" | | 2 | "They tilted their head, the" | | 3 | "She reached out, her fingers" | | 4 | "She didn’t need to see" | | 5 | "they said, and the words" | | 6 | "She turned, her gaze sweeping" | | 7 | "She didn’t need to see" | | 8 | "It was a living thing," | | 9 | "She pulled the Fae blade" | | 10 | "she said, her words weaving" | | 11 | "they said, their voice a" | | 12 | "She didn’t know what was" | | 13 | "She took a step forward," | | 14 | "She didn’t know what was" | | 15 | "She turned, her gaze sweeping" | | 16 | "She didn’t need to see" | | 17 | "It was a living thing," | | 18 | "She pulled the Fae blade" | | 19 | "she said, her words weaving" |
| | ratio | 0.223 | |
| 13.19% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 84 | | totalSentences | 94 | | matches | | 0 | "The air hummed with something" | | 1 | "She stepped forward, the silver" | | 2 | "The moment her boots touched" | | 3 | "She caught herself on the" | | 4 | "Nyx was already here, their" | | 5 | "They tilted their head, the" | | 6 | "Nyx murmured, voice a whisper" | | 7 | "Aurora’s pulse quickened." | | 8 | "Isolde’s voice slithered into the" | | 9 | "Aurora’s breath hitched" | | 10 | "The Fae Grove wasn’t just" | | 11 | "She reached out, her fingers" | | 12 | "The seer’s pale lavender eyes" | | 13 | "Isolde said, voice a thread" | | 14 | "Aurora’s grip tightened on the" | | 15 | "The blade hummed faintly, as" | | 16 | "She didn’t need to see" | | 17 | "Nyx stepped back, their form" | | 18 | "they said, and the words" | | 19 | "Aurora’s stomach twisted." |
| | ratio | 0.894 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 94 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 8.09% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 53 | | technicalSentenceCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx was already here, their form flickering between solid and shadow, a living silhouette that moved without sound." | | 1 | "Nyx stepped back, their form dissolving into shadow for a moment before reforming." | | 2 | "Wildflowers bloomed year-round, their petals shimmering in hues that didn’t quite exist in the mortal world." | | 3 | "The standing stones loomed closer, their carvings now glowing faintly, as if alive." | | 4 | "Nyx’s form flickered again, their silhouette dissolving into shadow before reforming." | | 5 | "The standing stones loomed closer, their carvings glowing faintly, as if alive." | | 6 | "The wildflowers bloomed year-round, their petals shimmering in hues that didn’t quite exist in the mortal world." | | 7 | "The standing stones loomed closer, their carvings now glowing faintly, as if alive." | | 8 | "The standing stones loomed closer, their carvings glowing faintly, as if alive." | | 9 | "The standing stones loomed closer, their carvings glowing faintly, as if alive." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 9 | | uselessAdditionCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "they said, and the words carried the weight of something older than memory" | | 1 | "Nyx said, their voice a whisper of warning" | | 2 | "she said, her words weaving between realms like smoke" | | 3 | "they said, their voice a whisper of warning" | | 4 | "Nyx said, their voice a whisper of warning" | | 5 | "she said, her words weaving between realms like smoke" |
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| 87.50% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 14 | | tagDensity | 0.571 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.125 | | effectiveRatio | 0.125 | |