| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 7 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 19 | | tagDensity | 0.368 | | leniency | 0.737 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 93.62% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 784 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 784 | | totalAiIsms | 23 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | word | "carried the weight" | | count | 1 |
| | 6 | | | 7 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "whisper" | | 1 | "loomed" | | 2 | "etched" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "flickered" | | 5 | "carried the weight" | | 6 | "pristine" | | 7 | "down her spine" | | 8 | "traced" | | 9 | "pulse" | | 10 | "quickened" | | 11 | "electric" | | 12 | "stomach" | | 13 | "tension" | | 14 | "unraveling" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "air was thick with" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "The air was thick with" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 60 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 60 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 72 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 40 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 2 | | markdownWords | 2 | | totalWords | 779 | | ratio | 0.003 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 9 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 56.74% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 37 | | wordCount | 697 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 1.87 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Isolde" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 13 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Veil | 3 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Isolde | 9 | | Wardens | 1 | | Nyx | 8 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Veil" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Nyx" |
| | places | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Fae" | | 2 | "Grove" |
| | globalScore | 0.567 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 47 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "as if breathing" | | 1 | "not quite shadow" | | 2 | "quite night" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 779 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 26 | | mean | 29.96 | | std | 19.03 | | cv | 0.635 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 75 | | 1 | 59 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 60 | | 4 | 19 | | 5 | 46 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 29 | | 8 | 18 | | 9 | 23 | | 10 | 14 | | 11 | 58 | | 12 | 16 | | 13 | 14 | | 14 | 38 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 29 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 55 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 46 | | 21 | 42 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 31 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 22 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 120 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 5 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 72 | | ratio | 0.069 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in the grove pressed against Aurora’s skin like a second breath, thick with the scent of damp earth and something older—something that clung to the roots of the ancient oaks, the whisper of leaves that never fell." | | 1 | "She hadn’t expected the Fae Grove to feel like this—like a place where the world bent just enough to reveal something else entirely." | | 2 | "No footprints marred the pristine carpet of wildflowers—only the faintest imprint of her own breath, the way the wind carried her scent without leaving a trace." | | 3 | "The trees here didn’t just grow—they *watched*." | | 4 | "The thing turned, its form shifting—once a human, once a beast, once something worse." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 702 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "over moss-strewn stones," |
| | adverbCount | 24 | | adverbRatio | 0.03418803418803419 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008547008547008548 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 72 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 72 | | mean | 10.82 | | std | 6.98 | | cv | 0.645 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 39 | | 1 | 15 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 22 | | 5 | 23 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 17 | | 9 | 17 | | 10 | 26 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 14 | | 14 | 14 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 14 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 17 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 17 | | 33 | 24 | | 34 | 14 | | 35 | 16 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 16 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 14 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 10 | | 48 | 7 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 41.67% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.20833333333333334 | | totalSentences | 72 | | uniqueOpeners | 15 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 53 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 11 | | totalSentences | 53 | | matches | | 0 | "She stepped over moss-strewn stones," | | 1 | "She hadn’t expected the Fae" | | 2 | "She hadn’t expected to find" | | 3 | "She clenched the pendant tighter." | | 4 | "She turned, her boots crunching" | | 5 | "It moved toward them, slow" | | 6 | "Its eyes were black pools," | | 7 | "She lunged forward, the dagger" | | 8 | "She sprinted, her lungs burning," | | 9 | "She skidded to a stop" | | 10 | "She had to move." |
| | ratio | 0.208 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 52 | | totalSentences | 53 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in the grove" | | 1 | "She stepped over moss-strewn stones," | | 2 | "The standing stones loomed ahead," | | 3 | "Nyx moved through the shadows" | | 4 | "Aurora’s fingers twitched toward the" | | 5 | "She hadn’t expected the Fae" | | 6 | "Nyx’s voice was a whisper," | | 7 | "Isolde stood at the edge" | | 8 | "The seer’s pale lavender eyes" | | 9 | "Isolde said, her voice a" | | 10 | "Aurora exhaled, her breath curling" | | 11 | "The moonsilver dagger hummed faintly," | | 12 | "She hadn’t expected to find" | | 13 | "The trees here didn’t just" | | 14 | "Nyx asked, their form flickering" | | 15 | "Isolde’s fingers traced the edge" | | 16 | "Aurora’s pulse quickened." | | 17 | "She clenched the pendant tighter." | | 18 | "A gust of wind howled" | | 19 | "Isolde’s gaze darkened." |
| | ratio | 0.981 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 53 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 20.41% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 35 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in the grove pressed against Aurora’s skin like a second breath, thick with the scent of damp earth and something older—something that clung to the root…" | | 1 | "The standing stones loomed ahead, their bark blackened by time, their surfaces etched with spirals that pulsed faintly, as if breathing." | | 2 | "The trees parted, revealing a clearing where the sky above was a bruise of violet and gold, the kind of twilight that didn’t fade." | | 3 | "She lunged forward, the dagger flashing as she carved through the thing’s form, severing its connection to the world." | | 4 | "Nyx was already there, their form solidifying as they grabbed Aurora’s wrist, pulling her behind a tree." | | 5 | "She sprinted, her lungs burning, the dagger clattering against her side as she dodged between the standing stones." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 7 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde said, her voice a melody of riddles" | | 1 | "Nyx asked, their form flickering between solid and shadow" | | 2 | "Aurora asked, her voice steady despite the unease coiled in her stomach" |
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| 97.37% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 5 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 19 | | tagDensity | 0.263 | | leniency | 0.526 | | rawRatio | 0.2 | | effectiveRatio | 0.105 | |