Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY7ZXJ9VW496K7DHA9MR4ZY

Run Details

Duration:
3.9s
Cost:
$0.000290
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air in the grove pressed against Aurora’s skin like a second breath, thick with the scent of damp earth and something older—something that clung to the roots of the ancient oaks, the whisper of leaves that never fell. She stepped over moss-strewn stones, her boots sinking slightly into the soft carpet of ferns. The standing stones loomed ahead, their bark blackened by time, their surfaces etched with spirals that pulsed faintly, as if breathing. Nyx moved through the shadows like smoke, their form shifting between solid and translucent. Aurora’s fingers twitched toward the Heartstone pendant at her throat, its crimson glow dimming as the Veil’s shimmering distortion flickered around them. She hadn’t expected the Fae Grove to feel like this—like a place where the world bent just enough to reveal something else entirely. “It’s…” Nyx’s voice was a whisper, but the words carried the weight of a thousand unseen things. “It’s not just here.” Isolde stood at the edge of the clearing, her silver hair catching the light like scattered stars. The seer’s pale lavender eyes locked onto Aurora, and for a moment, the air between them thickened. No footprints marred the pristine carpet of wildflowers—only the faintest imprint of her own breath, the way the wind carried her scent without leaving a trace. “You’ve come,” Isolde said, her voice a melody of riddles. “The Veil thins here. The winter solstice is near.” Aurora exhaled, her breath curling around the blade of Isolde’s gift in her palm. The moonsilver dagger hummed faintly, its cold touch sending a shiver down her spine. She hadn’t expected to find this place so soon, so *alive*. The trees here didn’t just grow—they *watched*. “What do you see?” Nyx asked, their form flickering between solid and shadow. Isolde’s fingers traced the edge of a standing stone, her touch leaving no mark. “The path splits. One leads to the Fae Courts, the other to the Veil’s heart.” Aurora’s pulse quickened. The Veil. The rifts. The Wardens. She clenched the pendant tighter. “What’s at the heart?” A gust of wind howled through the trees, and the standing stones groaned, their spirals glowing brighter. Isolde’s gaze darkened. “The hunger waits.” Nyx’s silhouette stretched unnaturally long, their voice a whisper of dread. “We should go.” Aurora didn’t hesitate. She turned, her boots crunching over the brittle underbrush as she followed the path Isolde had indicated. The trees parted, revealing a clearing where the sky above was a bruise of violet and gold, the kind of twilight that didn’t fade. The air hummed with energy, thick and electric, like the moment before a storm. “Where’s the other way?” Aurora asked, her voice steady despite the unease coiled in her stomach. Isolde’s laughter was dry, like dry leaves skittering across stone. “The hunger doesn’t ask.” A shadow detached itself from the trees, a form that wasn’t quite solid, not quite shadow. It moved toward them, slow and deliberate, its edges bleeding into the darkness. Nyx’s form flickered, their voice a whisper of warning. Aurora’s fingers tightened around the dagger. “What is it?” The thing turned, its form shifting—once a human, once a beast, once something worse. Its eyes were black pools, hungry. “You’ve come too late,” it rasped. “The feast begins.” Isolde’s voice cut through the tension, sharp as a blade. “The Veil is weak. The rift opens.” Aurora didn’t wait to see what came next. She lunged forward, the dagger flashing as she carved through the thing’s form, severing its connection to the world. The creature shrieked, its form unraveling like smoke in the wind. Nyx was already there, their form solidifying as they grabbed Aurora’s wrist, pulling her behind a tree. “Run,” Nyx hissed. Aurora didn’t argue. She sprinted, her lungs burning, the dagger clattering against her side as she dodged between the standing stones. The clearing dissolved behind her, the trees closing in like living walls. The wind carried the scent of iron and something sweet, like rotting fruit. She skidded to a stop at the edge of the path, her breath ragged. The standing stones loomed ahead, their spirals now glowing a deep crimson, pulsing like a heartbeat. Isolde stood there, her form shimmering, her voice a whisper of warning. “You’ve crossed the Veil,” she said. “The hunger is real.” Aurora turned, her gaze fixed on the path ahead. The trees parted, revealing a darkness that wasn’t quite night. The air was thick with the scent of something old and hungry. Nyx’s form flickered, their voice a whisper of dread. “We’re not alone.” Aurora’s fingers tightened around the pendant. She had to move. Now. The Veil was thinning, and whatever waited beyond was already watching.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences19
tagDensity0.368
leniency0.737
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
93.62% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount784
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount784
totalAiIsms23
found
0
word"whisper"
count6
1
word"loomed"
count2
2
word"etched"
count1
3
word"pulsed"
count1
4
word"flickered"
count3
5
word"carried the weight"
count1
6
word"pristine"
count1
7
word"down her spine"
count1
8
word"traced"
count1
9
word"pulse"
count1
10
word"quickened"
count1
11
word"electric"
count1
12
word"stomach"
count1
13
word"tension"
count1
14
word"unraveling"
count1
highlights
0"whisper"
1"loomed"
2"etched"
3"pulsed"
4"flickered"
5"carried the weight"
6"pristine"
7"down her spine"
8"traced"
9"pulse"
10"quickened"
11"electric"
12"stomach"
13"tension"
14"unraveling"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"air was thick with"
count1
highlights
0"The air was thick with"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences60
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences60
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences72
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen40
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords2
totalWords779
ratio0.003
matches
0"alive"
1"watched"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
56.74% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions37
wordCount697
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.87
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Isolde"
discoveredNames
Aurora13
Heartstone1
Veil3
Fae1
Grove1
Isolde9
Wardens1
Nyx8
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Veil"
2"Isolde"
3"Nyx"
places
0"Heartstone"
1"Fae"
2"Grove"
globalScore0.567
windowScore0.667
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences47
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"as if breathing"
1"not quite shadow"
2"quite night"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount779
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences72
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs26
mean29.96
std19.03
cv0.635
sampleLengths
075
159
221
360
419
546
613
729
818
923
1014
1158
1216
1314
1438
159
1629
1717
1855
193
2046
2142
2210
2331
2412
2522
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences60
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs120
matches
0"was thinning"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences72
ratio0.069
matches
0"The air in the grove pressed against Aurora’s skin like a second breath, thick with the scent of damp earth and something older—something that clung to the roots of the ancient oaks, the whisper of leaves that never fell."
1"She hadn’t expected the Fae Grove to feel like this—like a place where the world bent just enough to reveal something else entirely."
2"No footprints marred the pristine carpet of wildflowers—only the faintest imprint of her own breath, the way the wind carried her scent without leaving a trace."
3"The trees here didn’t just grow—they *watched*."
4"The thing turned, its form shifting—once a human, once a beast, once something worse."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount702
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"over moss-strewn stones,"
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.03418803418803419
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.008547008547008548
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences72
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences72
mean10.82
std6.98
cv0.645
sampleLengths
039
115
221
314
422
523
617
74
817
917
1026
1110
129
1314
1414
1511
167
1713
1814
1915
203
212
222
232
245
254
2617
273
283
2911
303
313
3217
3324
3414
3516
3610
374
3816
3913
409
416
423
4314
446
456
463
4710
487
498
41.67% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.20833333333333334
totalSentences72
uniqueOpeners15
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences53
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount11
totalSentences53
matches
0"She stepped over moss-strewn stones,"
1"She hadn’t expected the Fae"
2"She hadn’t expected to find"
3"She clenched the pendant tighter."
4"She turned, her boots crunching"
5"It moved toward them, slow"
6"Its eyes were black pools,"
7"She lunged forward, the dagger"
8"She sprinted, her lungs burning,"
9"She skidded to a stop"
10"She had to move."
ratio0.208
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount52
totalSentences53
matches
0"The air in the grove"
1"She stepped over moss-strewn stones,"
2"The standing stones loomed ahead,"
3"Nyx moved through the shadows"
4"Aurora’s fingers twitched toward the"
5"She hadn’t expected the Fae"
6"Nyx’s voice was a whisper,"
7"Isolde stood at the edge"
8"The seer’s pale lavender eyes"
9"Isolde said, her voice a"
10"Aurora exhaled, her breath curling"
11"The moonsilver dagger hummed faintly,"
12"She hadn’t expected to find"
13"The trees here didn’t just"
14"Nyx asked, their form flickering"
15"Isolde’s fingers traced the edge"
16"Aurora’s pulse quickened."
17"She clenched the pendant tighter."
18"A gust of wind howled"
19"Isolde’s gaze darkened."
ratio0.981
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences53
matches(empty)
ratio0
20.41% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences35
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"The air in the grove pressed against Aurora’s skin like a second breath, thick with the scent of damp earth and something older—something that clung to the root…"
1"The standing stones loomed ahead, their bark blackened by time, their surfaces etched with spirals that pulsed faintly, as if breathing."
2"The trees parted, revealing a clearing where the sky above was a bruise of violet and gold, the kind of twilight that didn’t fade."
3"She lunged forward, the dagger flashing as she carved through the thing’s form, severing its connection to the world."
4"Nyx was already there, their form solidifying as they grabbed Aurora’s wrist, pulling her behind a tree."
5"She sprinted, her lungs burning, the dagger clattering against her side as she dodged between the standing stones."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Isolde said, her voice a melody of riddles"
1"Nyx asked, their form flickering between solid and shadow"
2"Aurora asked, her voice steady despite the unease coiled in her stomach"
97.37% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Nyx hissed (hiss)"
dialogueSentences19
tagDensity0.263
leniency0.526
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.105
70.1270%