| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 5 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 7 | | tagDensity | 0.714 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 95.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1001 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1001 | | totalAiIsms | 23 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulse" | | 1 | "comfortable" | | 2 | "weight" | | 3 | "throbbed" | | 4 | "familiar" | | 5 | "otherworldly" | | 6 | "gloom" | | 7 | "silence" | | 8 | "traced" | | 9 | "reminder" | | 10 | "vibrated" | | 11 | "flicker" | | 12 | "scanned" | | 13 | "chill" | | 14 | "predator" | | 15 | "whisper" | | 16 | "desire" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 112 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 112 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 114 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 25 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 5 | | markdownWords | 12 | | totalWords | 990 | | ratio | 0.012 | | matches | | 0 | "“Just in case, Rory, lass. Just in case.”" | | 1 | "shifted" | | 2 | "should" | | 3 | "empty" | | 4 | "why" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 22 | | wordCount | 967 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 0.52 | | worstName | "Heartstone" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Hemlock" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 5 | | Hemlock | 5 | | Richmond | 3 | | Park | 3 | | Grove | 1 | | London | 1 | | November | 1 | | Stupid | 2 | | Hel | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Grove" | | 3 | "London" | | 4 | "November" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 50.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 75 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "as if observing" | | 1 | "felt like it was on fire" | | 2 | "whisper that seemed to slither into my ear" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 4 | | per1kWords | 4.04 | | wordCount | 990 | | matches | | 0 | "not in my ears but in my bones" | | 1 | "Not burning, but feverish" | | 2 | "Not the cloying lilies, but something else" | | 3 | "Not a dry, brittle snap, but a wet, splintering sound" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 114 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 38 | | mean | 26.05 | | std | 20.13 | | cv | 0.773 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 65 | | 1 | 51 | | 2 | 53 | | 3 | 47 | | 4 | 62 | | 5 | 64 | | 6 | 39 | | 7 | 41 | | 8 | 1 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 46 | | 11 | 61 | | 12 | 46 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 36 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 20 | | 17 | 26 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 22 | | 20 | 18 | | 21 | 30 | | 22 | 45 | | 23 | 13 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 1 | | 26 | 15 | | 27 | 39 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 1 | | 33 | 22 | | 34 | 15 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 25 | | 37 | 19 |
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| 99.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 112 | | matches | | 0 | "was gone" | | 1 | "was muddied" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 157 | | matches | | |
| 17.54% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 114 | | ratio | 0.044 | | matches | | 0 | "They weren’t impressive—just weathered oak posts sunk into the earth, overgrown with ivy." | | 1 | "But the familiar scent of London—exhaust fumes and takeaway food—vanished, replaced by that overwhelming sweetness." | | 2 | "Hemlock—with his whispered warnings about weaknesses in the fabric of reality—had said one was opening near the grove." | | 3 | "He’d given me coordinates—scribbled on the back of a betting slip—and the Heartstone." | | 4 | "Hands—cold, skeletal—reached out and steadied me." |
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| 91.42% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 978 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "beneath paper-thin skin." |
| | adverbCount | 42 | | adverbRatio | 0.04294478527607362 | | lyAdverbCount | 16 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.016359918200409 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 114 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 114 | | mean | 8.68 | | std | 5.57 | | cv | 0.642 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 2 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 25 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 18 | | 11 | 18 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 9 | | 24 | 13 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 15 | | 28 | 18 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 12 | | 32 | 18 | | 33 | 15 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 1 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 23 | | 42 | 14 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 8 | | 46 | 18 | | 47 | 15 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 13 |
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| 57.89% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.3684210526315789 | | totalSentences | 114 | | uniqueOpeners | 42 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the skeletal branches of" | | 1 | "Just a deer, startled by" | | 2 | "More a prickling on the" | | 3 | "Just the impression of bone" | | 4 | "Dark, fathomless eyes that glittered" |
| | ratio | 0.052 | |
| 75.67% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 35 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | | 0 | "I’d timed it to coincide" | | 1 | "I honestly hadn’t asked what" | | 2 | "I’d been to Richmond Park" | | 3 | "I hadn’t needed the pendant" | | 4 | "I told myself it was" | | 5 | "They weren’t impressive—just weathered oak" | | 6 | "It wasn’t a visual shift," | | 7 | "They weren’t the kind of" | | 8 | "I hadn’t noticed before how" | | 9 | "I called out, my voice" | | 10 | "I traced the familiar curve" | | 11 | "I’d come here looking for" | | 12 | "He’d been vague about *why*" | | 13 | "He always was." | | 14 | "He’d given me coordinates—scribbled on" | | 15 | "I pulled out the small" | | 16 | "I marked the approximate spot" | | 17 | "It vibrated up through my" | | 18 | "I froze, listening." | | 19 | "My hand tightened around the" |
| | ratio | 0.361 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 68 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone warmed against my" | | 1 | "Richmond Park had emptied quickly." | | 2 | "Dusk bled into a black" | | 3 | "I’d timed it to coincide" | | 4 | "I honestly hadn’t asked what" | | 5 | "The air tasted of damp" | | 6 | "I’d been to Richmond Park" | | 7 | "I hadn’t needed the pendant" | | 8 | "Each step on the overgrown" | | 9 | "A twig snapped behind me," | | 10 | "I told myself it was" | | 11 | "The standing stones marked the" | | 12 | "Isolde’s Grove, Hemlock called it." | | 13 | "The name, like everything about" | | 14 | "They weren’t impressive—just weathered oak" | | 15 | "The weight on my chest" | | 16 | "It wasn’t a visual shift," | | 17 | "The wildflowers, usually scattered and" | | 18 | "They weren’t the kind of" | | 19 | "The grove itself wasn’t large," |
| | ratio | 0.701 | |
| 51.55% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | | 0 | "As if a polished crimson" |
| | ratio | 0.01 | |
| 51.28% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 39 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone warmed against my sternum, a subtle pulse that had nothing to do with my own heartbeat." | | 1 | "A small clearing surrounded by trees that leaned inward, as if observing." | | 2 | "I shifted my weight, trying to appear casual, as if I were simply admiring the scenery." | | 3 | "A soft, rasping whisper that seemed to slither into my ear." | | 4 | "Dark, fathomless eyes that glittered with an ancient, malevolent intelligence." |
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| 25.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 5 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "I muttered, but my voice lacked conviction" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "I called out (call out)" | | 1 | "I muttered (mutter)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 7 | | tagDensity | 0.286 | | leniency | 0.571 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.571 | |