Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY80C7JRJHYVK9W9D79HASV

Run Details

Duration:
9.4s
Cost:
$0.000417
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign of *The Raven’s Nest* flickered weakly against the London drizzle, its glow bleeding into the pavement like a bruise. Inside, the air smelled of aged whiskey and something older—dust, maybe, or the faint metallic tang of secrets left too long in the dark. Rory Carter paused on the threshold, her breath fogging the glass of the door. The place looked the same as it had years ago: low ceilings, the hum of a jukebox playing something slow and smoky, the usual cluster of regulars hunched over pints. But then she saw him. Silas Blackwood sat in his usual corner booth, the one by the window where the light never quite reached. His auburn hair was streaked with silver now, his beard trimmed tighter than she remembered, as if he’d spent years shaving against the weight of something. He didn’t look up when she stepped inside, just swirled the amber liquid in his glass with deliberate slowness. The signet ring on his right hand caught the dim light, catching her eye before she could look away. She hesitated. The last time she’d been here, she’d been twenty-one, drunk on the thrill of escape, not the kind. That girl had been reckless, quick to laugh, quick to leave. This one—she wasn’t sure what this one was yet. “Rory.” The voice was rougher than she expected. Not just from age, but like it had been worn down by something sharper. She turned. Silas’ hazel eyes locked onto hers, unreadable. “Took you long enough.” She slid into the booth across from him, the leather groaning under her weight. “Thought you’d moved on by now.” “Moved on?” He chuckled, low and dry. “This place is my retirement. Or what’s left of it.” His fingers tightened around the glass. “You?” “Delivery work.” She gestured vaguely at the door. “Yu-Fei’s restaurant. Keeps me busy.” “Busy enough to come back?” His gaze flicked to the scar on her wrist, the one she’d tried to hide under her sleeve. She hadn’t noticed him seeing it until now. She pulled her arm back instinctively. “Just passing through.” “Liar.” The word wasn’t accusatory. It was just… there. Between them. The silence stretched. Outside, a car horn blared. Somewhere, a glass shattered. “You look different,” she said finally. Silas didn’t answer right away. When he did, his voice was quieter. “So do you.” She wanted to ask him what he meant. *How?* But the words stuck in her throat. Instead, she reached for the menu on the table, though she knew by heart which dishes Yu-Fei’s chefs made best. “Still doing the same old thing, then.” “Same old thing.” He took a slow sip. “You ever think about what happens when you stop?” She didn’t look up. “I’m not stopping.” “No.” He set his glass down. “You’re just… going.” The way he said it made her skin prickle. She remembered the way he’d used to talk like that—like he knew things before they happened. Like he could see the threads of a life before they were spun. That had been the thing about Silas. He’d always been the one who saw too much. “You always were good at reading people,” she said, keeping her voice light. “Still at it?” He didn’t smile. “Depends on who you are.” She exhaled through her nose, a sharp sound. “I’m not here to be read.” “No?” He leaned forward slightly, just enough to make the table creak. “Then why are you here?” She opened her mouth, then closed it. The truth was, she hadn’t planned on coming. But the moment she’d seen the sign, she’d known. Like her body had remembered something her mind had tried to forget. “Just… missed the place,” she said at last. “Missed you.” Silas studied her for a long moment. Then, slowly, he reached into his jacket and pulled out a folded piece of paper. He slid it across the table toward her. She didn’t touch it. “What’s this?” “A job.” His voice was steady. “If you’re still interested.” She looked down at the paper. The ink was faded, like it had been handled too many times already. The words were simple: *Contact me. Tonight. Midnight. The back room.* No name. No explanation. “You’re retired,” she said. “Retired doesn’t mean I stop knowing things.” His gaze never wavered. “And it doesn’t mean I stop offering them.” She wanted to ask what kind of things. What kind of job. But the question died on her lips. Because she already knew. She’d always known. The back room of *The Raven’s Nest* was exactly as she remembered it—dark, the air thick with the scent of old wood and something sharper, like ozone before a storm. The bookshelf along the wall looked the same, the spines worn smooth by years of use. But when she pressed her palm to the middle shelf, the wood gave way with a soft click, and the door swung open. Silas stood just inside, his silhouette sharp against the dim light from the hallway. He didn’t turn around immediately. Just waited. She stepped inside, the door sealing shut behind her with a quiet *thud*. “You always were good at following orders,” he said, still not looking at her. She crossed her arms. “And you were always good at giving them.” He finally turned, his hazel eyes reflecting the faint glow of the hallway. “Things change.” She wanted to argue. To tell him that some things didn’t. That she hadn’t. But the words felt heavy in her throat. Instead, she asked the question that had been burning in her since she’d seen him. “What happened to you?” Silas exhaled, slow and measured. “I got older.” “No.” She shook her head. “Not that. The job. The one that broke you.” He didn’t answer right away. When he did, his voice was quieter, rougher. “Prague. A man named Veles. Thought I could handle him. Thought I could walk away.” She remembered the stories. The ones she’d heard from other operatives, the ones that slithered through the bars like whispers. “He got to you.” “He got to *her*.” Silas’ jaw tightened. “And I let him.” The air between them thickened. She could feel the weight of it pressing down, like the moment before a storm breaks. “You don’t have to tell me,” she said softly. He looked at her then, really looked at her. “I know.” She wanted to reach out. To touch his arm, his shoulder, anything to bridge the distance between them. But she didn’t. Because some things couldn’t be fixed with words or touch. Instead, she asked the question that had been gnawing at her since she’d walked in. “What do you want from me?” Silas studied her for a long moment. Then, slowly, he reached into his pocket and pulled out a small, worn photograph. He held it out to her. She took it. The picture was yellowed with age, the edges frayed. In it, a younger Silas stood beside a woman—tall, dark-haired, her smile sharp and knowing. The date on the back read *1998*. “Her name was Elara,” Silas said quietly. “She was my partner. My best friend.” Rory’s fingers tightened around the photo. “I’m sorry.” Silas didn’t look at her. “She was the one who got away.” The words hung between them, heavy and unspoken. She could feel the past pressing down on them, the weight of years, of choices, of things that couldn’t be undone. “You still have that scar,” she said suddenly. He glanced at his left knee, where the limp had always been more pronounced. “Reminder.” She wanted to ask him more. To dig deeper. But the question died on her lips. Because some wounds didn’t heal. And some stories weren’t meant to be finished.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount6
adverbTags
0"His fingers tightened around [around]"
1"She gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
2"she said finally [finally]"
3"she said softly [softly]"
4"Silas said quietly [quietly]"
5"she said suddenly [suddenly]"
dialogueSentences53
tagDensity0.302
leniency0.604
rawRatio0.375
effectiveRatio0.226
76.94% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1301
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count2
2
adverb"softly"
count1
3
adverb"really"
count1
4
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"slowly"
2"softly"
3"really"
4"suddenly"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found
0"Elara"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
42.35% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1301
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"weight"
count4
2
word"unreadable"
count1
3
word"flicked"
count1
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"shattered"
count1
6
word"wavered"
count1
7
word"measured"
count1
8
word"could feel"
count2
9
word"unspoken"
count1
10
word"reminder"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"weight"
2"unreadable"
3"flicked"
4"silence"
5"shattered"
6"wavered"
7"measured"
8"could feel"
9"unspoken"
10"reminder"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences122
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences122
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences157
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans7
markdownWords17
totalWords1294
ratio0.013
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest"
1"How?"
2"Contact me. Tonight. Midnight. The back room."
3"The Raven’s Nest"
4"thud"
5"her"
6"1998"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions18
wordCount1053
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.95
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven2
London1
Carter1
Blackwood1
Silas10
Yu-Fei1
Rory2
persons
0"Raven"
1"Carter"
2"Blackwood"
3"Silas"
4"Yu-Fei"
5"Rory"
places
0"London"
globalScore1
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences73
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.773
wordCount1294
matches
0"Not just from age, but like it had been worn down by something sharper"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences157
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs65
mean19.91
std17.44
cv0.876
sampleLengths
096
183
240
31
423
511
620
724
813
931
109
1111
1212
136
1415
1543
1617
177
189
1954
2016
218
2214
2317
2436
2510
2630
274
282
2910
3030
314
324
3319
3423
353
3669
3721
3813
3914
4012
4115
4222
4319
448
4514
4628
4724
4811
4921
93.76% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences122
matches
0"was streaked"
1"been worn"
2"were spun"
3"been handled"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs200
matches(empty)
51.87% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences157
ratio0.032
matches
0"Inside, the air smelled of aged whiskey and something older—dust, maybe, or the faint metallic tang of secrets left too long in the dark."
1"This one—she wasn’t sure what this one was yet."
2"She remembered the way he’d used to talk like that—like he knew things before they happened."
3"The back room of *The Raven’s Nest* was exactly as she remembered it—dark, the air thick with the scent of old wood and something sharper, like ozone before a storm."
4"In it, a younger Silas stood beside a woman—tall, dark-haired, her smile sharp and knowing."
97.86% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount377
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount16
adverbRatio0.042440318302387266
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.002652519893899204
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences157
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences157
mean8.24
std5.92
cv0.719
sampleLengths
023
124
214
330
45
519
626
719
819
92
1018
1111
129
131
147
1514
162
177
184
1914
206
217
2216
231
248
255
2623
278
286
293
305
313
321
332
343
355
364
376
385
397
403
418
428
4320
447
458
469
474
483
496
50.96% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.3248407643312102
totalSentences157
uniqueOpeners51
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount6
totalSentences112
matches
0"Somewhere, a glass shattered."
1"Instead, she reached for the"
2"Then, slowly, he reached into"
3"Instead, she asked the question"
4"Instead, she asked the question"
5"Then, slowly, he reached into"
ratio0.054
45.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount49
totalSentences112
matches
0"His auburn hair was streaked"
1"He didn’t look up when"
2"She slid into the booth"
3"He chuckled, low and dry"
4"His fingers tightened around the"
5"She gestured vaguely at the"
6"His gaze flicked to the"
7"She hadn’t noticed him seeing"
8"She pulled her arm back"
9"It was just…"
10"she said finally"
11"She wanted to ask him"
12"He took a slow sip"
13"She didn’t look up."
14"He set his glass down"
15"She remembered the way he’d"
16"He’d always been the one"
17"she said, keeping her voice"
18"He didn’t smile."
19"She exhaled through her nose,"
ratio0.438
93.93% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount82
totalSentences112
matches
0"The green neon sign of"
1"Rory Carter paused on the"
2"The place looked the same"
3"Silas Blackwood sat in his"
4"His auburn hair was streaked"
5"He didn’t look up when"
6"The signet ring on his"
7"The last time she’d been"
8"That girl had been reckless,"
9"This one—she wasn’t sure what"
10"The voice was rougher than"
11"She slid into the booth"
12"He chuckled, low and dry"
13"His fingers tightened around the"
14"She gestured vaguely at the"
15"His gaze flicked to the"
16"She hadn’t noticed him seeing"
17"She pulled her arm back"
18"The word wasn’t accusatory"
19"It was just…"
ratio0.732
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount6
totalSentences112
matches
0"Because she already knew."
1"To tell him that some"
2"To touch his arm, his"
3"Because some things couldn’t be"
4"To dig deeper."
5"Because some wounds didn’t heal."
ratio0.054
81.63% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences35
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"His auburn hair was streaked with silver now, his beard trimmed tighter than she remembered, as if he’d spent years shaving against the weight of something."
1"Instead, she reached for the menu on the table, though she knew by heart which dishes Yu-Fei’s chefs made best."
2"She could feel the past pressing down on them, the weight of years, of choices, of things that couldn’t be undone."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"He chuckled (chuckle)"
dialogueSentences53
tagDensity0.17
leniency0.34
rawRatio0.111
effectiveRatio0.038
86.5877%