| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 11 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 22 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 90.21% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1021 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1021 | | totalAiIsms | 25 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "remarkable" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "whisper" | | 3 | "silk" | | 4 | "desire" | | 5 | "structure" | | 6 | "testament" | | 7 | "pulsed" | | 8 | "rhythmic" | | 9 | "glistening" | | 10 | "traced" | | 11 | "cascading" | | 12 | "shimmered" | | 13 | "echoed" | | 14 | "trembled" | | 15 | "velvet" | | 16 | "profound" | | 17 | "tangible" | | 18 | "sense of" | | 19 | "disrupting" | | 20 | "depths" | | 21 | "shattered" | | 22 | "chilling" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "sent a shiver through" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 59 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 94.43% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 59 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 70 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 47 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 1 | | totalWords | 1027 | | ratio | 0.001 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 13 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Suddenly, Isolde laughed – a brittle, unsettling sound." |
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| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 29 | | wordCount | 836 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 0.96 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Nyx | 6 | | Fae-Forged | 2 | | Blade | 2 | | Rory | 8 | | Isolde | 6 | | Prince | 1 | | Belphegor | 3 | | Veil | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Nyx" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Prince" | | 4 | "Belphegor" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 50 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.974 | | wordCount | 1027 | | matches | | 0 | "not in his indulgence, but in the opening he's creating" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 97.45% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 22 | | mean | 46.68 | | std | 22.92 | | cv | 0.491 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 86 | | 1 | 83 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 43 | | 4 | 34 | | 5 | 90 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 53 | | 8 | 61 | | 9 | 38 | | 10 | 67 | | 11 | 31 | | 12 | 22 | | 13 | 72 | | 14 | 27 | | 15 | 32 | | 16 | 27 | | 17 | 45 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 62 | | 20 | 55 | | 21 | 54 |
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| 99.32% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | | 0 | "was disturbed" | | 1 | "being sculpted" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 137 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 8 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 70 | | ratio | 0.114 | | matches | | 0 | "Giant, grotesque fruit – peaches the size of puppies, plums the size of shields – dripped with juices, attracting swarms of iridescent flies." | | 1 | "The scent intensified – the sweet rot mixed with a sharp, almost painful tang." | | 2 | "“Dymas feeds on desire. The souls trapped here don’t suffer, not exactly. They simply... become part of the abundance.” She gestured towards a structure in the distance – a palace crafted entirely from candied fruit and sculpted sugar." | | 3 | "As they walked deeper, the vineyards gave way to orchards – groves of trees bearing fruit of every imaginable color and texture." | | 4 | "They emerged into a vast, open courtyard dominated by a colossal fountain – a waterfall of liquid gold cascading into a pool that shimmered with an oily iridescence." | | 5 | "From the shadows beneath the fountain rose Prince Belphegor – a being of impossible proportions, draped in a velvet robe the color of dried blood." | | 6 | "He wasn't formidable in the traditional sense; rather, it was an aura of profound, aching satiety that radiated from him, a tangible sense of having tasted everything and desired nothing more." | | 7 | "Suddenly, Isolde laughed – a brittle, unsettling sound." |
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| 93.60% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 830 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "strange, beautiful, terrifying kingdom" |
| | adverbCount | 28 | | adverbRatio | 0.033734939759036145 | | lyAdverbCount | 17 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.020481927710843374 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 70 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 70 | | mean | 14.67 | | std | 8.26 | | cv | 0.563 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 10 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 23 | | 3 | 20 | | 4 | 15 | | 5 | 8 | | 6 | 9 | | 7 | 24 | | 8 | 23 | | 9 | 19 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 11 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 2 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 16 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 18 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 24 | | 24 | 14 | | 25 | 20 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 38 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 22 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 26 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 22 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 23 | | 38 | 28 | | 39 | 16 | | 40 | 18 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 16 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 25 | | 47 | 13 | | 48 | 31 | | 49 | 11 |
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| 75.24% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.4857142857142857 | | totalSentences | 70 | | uniqueOpeners | 34 | |
| 57.47% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | | 0 | "Suddenly, Isolde laughed – a" |
| | ratio | 0.017 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 17 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | | 0 | "It wasn’t a violent shift," | | 1 | "It wasn’t a landscape so" | | 2 | "It wasn’t a pleasant warmth." | | 3 | "she muttered, glancing at the" | | 4 | "they said, their voice a" | | 5 | "They followed a path paved" | | 6 | "They passed a group of" | | 7 | "She gestured towards a structure" | | 8 | "They extended a hand, their" | | 9 | "They emerged into a vast," | | 10 | "It was identical to the" | | 11 | "She reached for it, instinctively." | | 12 | "His eyes were black pits," | | 13 | "He wasn't formidable in the" | | 14 | "he rumbled, his voice like" | | 15 | "she said, her voice flat" | | 16 | "She channeled her fear, her" |
| | ratio | 0.293 | |
| 46.21% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 48 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | | 0 | "The air thickened the moment" | | 1 | "It wasn’t a violent shift," | | 2 | "Rory blinked, the scent of" | | 3 | "Isolde, unnervingly serene, simply adjusted" | | 4 | "Dymas unfolded around them with" | | 5 | "It wasn’t a landscape so" | | 6 | "The amber sky, a bruised" | | 7 | "The ground wasn’t soil, but" | | 8 | "Isolde murmured, her voice a" | | 9 | "Rory shivered, despite the unusual" | | 10 | "It wasn’t a pleasant warmth." | | 11 | "she muttered, glancing at the" | | 12 | "Isolde’s lavender eyes held a" | | 13 | "Nyx moved ahead, their shadow" | | 14 | "they said, their voice a" | | 15 | "They followed a path paved" | | 16 | "The scent intensified – the" | | 17 | "They passed a group of" | | 18 | "Each wore elaborate silk robes" | | 19 | "A rotund man, his face" |
| | ratio | 0.828 | |
| 86.21% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | | 0 | "Before her hand could touch" |
| | ratio | 0.017 | |
| 7.72% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 37 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "Beside her, Nyx shifted, their shadow deepening until it almost swallowed the already dim light beneath the willow’s weeping branches." | | 1 | "The amber sky, a bruised peach color, hung low, almost touching the sprawling vineyards that sloped down towards a river of shimmering, viscous wine." | | 2 | "They emerged into a vast, open courtyard dominated by a colossal fountain – a waterfall of liquid gold cascading into a pool that shimmered with an oily iridesc…" | | 3 | "The pool’s surface was disturbed by swirling patterns, as if constantly being sculpted by unseen hands." | | 4 | "He wasn't formidable in the traditional sense; rather, it was an aura of profound, aching satiety that radiated from him, a tangible sense of having tasted ever…" | | 5 | "Belphegor chuckled, a sound that sent a shiver down Rory’s spine." | | 6 | "As he spoke, the liquid gold in the fountain began to swirl faster, forming a vortex that pulled at their clothes, trying to drag them into the shimmering depth…" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 11 | | uselessAdditionCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde murmured, her voice a dry rustle of leaves" | | 1 | "they said, their voice a whisper against the drone of the flies" | | 2 | "she said, her voice flat" | | 3 | "Nyx hissed, their voice strained" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 9 | | fancyCount | 5 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Isolde murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 2 | "Rory observed (observe)" | | 3 | "Rory breathed (breathe)" | | 4 | "Nyx hissed (hiss)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 22 | | tagDensity | 0.409 | | leniency | 0.818 | | rawRatio | 0.556 | | effectiveRatio | 0.455 | |