Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY81F6E7STC7AH6PC5S6G2J

Run Details

Duration:
2m 45s
Cost:
$0.013717
Provider:
Seed

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Raven’s Nest’s green neon sign bleeded into the Soho dusk as Aurora Carter pushed through its creaking oak door. She brushed rain from her straight shoulder-length black hair, her delivery bag—emblazoned with the Golden Empress restaurant’s red dragon logo—slipping a fraction down her left arm to expose the small crescent scar on her wrist, a memento from the childhood bike crash that had left her crying on a Cardiff sidewalk for an hour before her mum found her, Welsh teacher voice soft as she wiped mud from her daughter’s cheeks. The bar’s dim light gilded the old maps plastered to its walls, each crease a story she couldn’t read—maps of Prague, Berlin, Cardiff’s waterfront—and the black-and-white photographs pinned between them caught her bright blue eyes for a split second: a man in a MI6 uniform, a woman laughing on a Cardiff bench, a kid with black hair riding a bike. She scanned for an empty stool, her legs aching from the last delivery to a Mayfair penthouse where the doorman had refused her lift access, forcing her to carry three large takeout containers up six flights of stairs. A man with grey-streaked auburn hair and a neatly trimmed matching beard leaned against the bar’s polished mahogany edge, his left leg shifting slightly to ease the weight of his slight limp. He twisted a silver signet ring on his right hand, his hazel eyes locked on the scar on her wrist—he’d seen that scar a hundred times before, when she’d shown it to him after the crash, when she’d picked at it during their coffee shop talks in Cardiff, when she’d hidden it under her sleeve after her dad yelled at her for stealing his wig. He pushed off the bar, his boot thudding softly on the worn wooden floor—scratched from decades of customers’ shoes, from his own limping steps—and moved toward her. You still pick at the scar when you’re nervous. She tugs her sleeve over the scar, her shoulders tensing, her delivery bag digging into her hip. I don’t know you. Cardiff, 2010. You snuck into your dad’s office and stole his barrister’s wig to use as a ghost costume for Halloween. I caught you hiding in the broom closet, covered in dust, and lied to Brendan when he asked where it went—told him I’d borrowed it for a work presentation. She freezes, her breath catching in her throat. She studies his face, the way his auburn hair now held threads of grey that hadn’t been there when he’d laughed at her ghost costume all those years ago, the neat beard she didn’t remember, the slight hunch to his shoulders that hadn’t been there when he’d helped her fix her bike after that crash, his hands steady as he tightened the brakes. Silas. He gestures to the empty stool beside her, his left leg dragging a fraction as he shifts his weight, his boot scuffing a scratch into the floor. Sit. I’ll get you a cup of tea. You always hated beer—said it tasted like burnt bread. She sits, her delivery bag thudding to the floor, the Golden Empress logo glinting in the bar’s light. She watches him move to the bar, his hands steady as he pours boiling water into a chipped ceramic mug—its side painted with a Welsh dragon, a memento from his last trip to Cardiff before he vanished. He sets the mug before her, the heat seeping into the cold wood of the bar. Why did you leave? His ring clinks against the mug’s edge as he leans against the bar, his gaze fixing on a map of Prague taped to the wall—its center marked with a silver pin, a memento from the botched operation that had left him with his limp. A job went wrong. I couldn’t go back to Cardiff. Couldn’t risk anyone getting hurt. My contacts were compromised. Any line to Brendan—any line to you—would have led them straight to the people who wanted to kill me. She curls her fingers around the mug, the Welsh dragon pressing into her palm. She thinks about the years between then and now: her Pre-Law degree she quit after her dad told her she’d never be as good as him, her abusive ex Evan who’d slapped her across the face when she tried to leave him, her flight to London at Eva’s behest, her part-time delivery job at Golden Empress that barely paid the rent for her tiny flat above a downtown bar. She hasn’t thought about Silas since he vanished from her dad’s life one day, no note, no explanation—just an empty coffee cup on the kitchen table, the Welsh dragon mug he’d left behind. I thought you’d abandoned me. I waited for you at the coffee shop for three weeks. You never showed up. He turns back, his hazel eyes softening—an expression she hasn’t seen since he’d helped her fix her bike after that crash, his hands steady as he tightened the brakes. I thought I was protecting you. I thought if I stayed away, you’d be safe. She nods at his left leg, her gaze sharp—her cool-headed, quick-thinking self kicking in, the same self that had hidden from Evan in a Cardiff alley for two hours until the police arrived. What happened to you? He shifts his weight again, his boot scuffing the same scratch into the floor. Prague. I was undercover, trying to get a list of compromised agents. The target found me. I ran. My knee gave out mid-escape. I fell down a flight of stairs. Retired from MI6 after that. Opened this bar as a front for my old contacts—clandestine meetings in the back room, accessible through that bookshelf tucked in the corner. The shelves are lined with leather-bound books; pull the one with the dragon on its spine, and the shelf swings open. She scans the bookshelf, its shelves lined with leather-bound books—one of them has a small Welsh dragon embossed on its spine. She’s always known he was involved in something secret—her dad had never talked about it, but she’d seen the coded notes he’d left on the kitchen table, the maps of foreign cities tucked in his briefcase. You’re still playing spy games. He taps the signet ring on his right hand, a habit he’d had even when she was a kid—tapping the ring when he was nervous, when he was thinking, when he was hiding something. Old habits die hard. Unlike some things. That line hangs in the air, thick with regret—regret that he lost touch, regret that he couldn’t protect her, regret that the kid he’d known is now a woman with a delivery bag and a scar and a past she’s trying to run from. Rory thinks about her own regrets: quitting Pre-Law, leaving her parents, not standing up to Evan sooner, not calling Eva back after she’d helped her move to London. I quit Pre-Law. Fled Cardiff. Evan—my ex—he was abusive. He’d hit me when he was drunk, when he was angry, when he thought I was hiding something from him. I left him after he broke my phone so I couldn’t call for help. Eva got me a ticket to London. I’ve been here for six months. His posture stiffens, his hands curling into fists on the bar—his knuckles white, his signet ring glinting in the dim light. I would have stopped him. If I’d known. I would have tracked him down. I would have made him pay for hurting you. She shakes her head, her hair falling in front of her eyes. She brushes it away, her bright blue eyes locking with his hazel ones. You weren’t there. No one was, except Eva. You vanished. You left me alone. He pours another cup of tea, his hands steady now, his gaze fixing on the scar peeking out from her sleeve—she’d tugged it down earlier, but it slipped again when she brushed her hair away. You still haven’t stopped picking at it. She tugs her sleeve over the scar again, her cheeks flushing. She’s always picked at it when she’s nervous—when she’s thinking about Evan, when she’s thinking about her dad, when she’s thinking about Silas. Old habits die hard. A customer pushes through the door, rain dripping from his coat. He orders a whiskey, his voice loud enough to cut through the silence between Rory and Silas. Silas turns to serve him, his limp more noticeable as he moves to the bar’s whiskey shelf. Rory watches him, her mind racing—she’s found an old friend, a friend she thought she’d lost forever, but he’s not the same man he was in Cardiff. He’s got a limp, grey streaks in his hair, a bar that’s a front for spy games. She’s not the same kid she was either—she’s got a scar, a delivery bag, a past she’s trying to forget. You’re living above a bar downtown. He turns back, his hazel eyes locking with hers. He’s heard about her—his contacts have told him about the delivery person from Golden Empress who lives above a downtown bar. My contacts told me. I’ve been trying to find you. She blinks, surprised. She didn’t think he’d care enough to look for her. Why? He taps the Welsh dragon mug on the bar, his signet ring clinking against the ceramic. I owe you an apology. I owe you a chance to know the truth. I owe you the friend I used to be. She takes a sip of tea, the warmth spreading through her chest. She thinks about the years they’ve lost, the things they can’t undo. She thinks about the secret back room, the spy games, the delivery bag. She thinks about the possibility of being friends again—of having someone who understands her, someone who can help her. I’m working a double shift tomorrow. I can stop by after my last delivery. He smirks, a faint lift of his beard—an echo of the man he’d been in Cardiff. I’ll have the Welsh dragon mug ready. I’ll show you the back room. I’ll tell you everything.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences0
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
94.19% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1721
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
65.14% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1721
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"scanned"
count1
1
word"weight"
count3
2
word"glinting"
count2
3
word"clandestine"
count1
4
word"coded"
count1
5
word"silence"
count1
6
word"racing"
count1
7
word"warmth"
count1
8
word"echo"
count1
highlights
0"scanned"
1"weight"
2"glinting"
3"clandestine"
4"coded"
5"silence"
6"racing"
7"warmth"
8"echo"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells3
narrationSentences110
matches
0"was nervous"
1"k with regret"
2"was angry"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences110
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
1"happened to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences110
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen74
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1681
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions72
wordCount1671
uniqueNames21
maxNameDensity0.66
worstName"Cardiff"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Cardiff"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Soho1
Aurora1
Carter1
Golden4
Empress4
Cardiff11
Welsh7
Prague3
Berlin1
Mayfair1
You10
Halloween1
Brendan2
Pre-Law3
Evan5
London3
Eva4
Silas5
Rory3
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Aurora"
3"Carter"
4"You"
5"Brendan"
6"Evan"
7"Eva"
8"Silas"
9"Rory"
places
0"Soho"
1"Golden"
2"Cardiff"
3"Prague"
4"Berlin"
5"Mayfair"
6"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences76
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"tasted like burnt bread"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1681
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences110
matches
0"regret that he regret that the"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs48
mean35.02
std37.32
cv1.066
sampleLengths
0189
1124
29
317
44
550
671
71
827
917
1071
114
1244
1338
14116
1520
1629
1715
1833
194
2014
2179
2257
235
2434
257
2672
2756
2821
2923
3025
3114
3235
337
3434
354
36109
376
3830
3910
4013
411
4216
4323
4456
4514
4616
4717
95.69% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences110
matches
0"were compromised"
1"are lined"
2"was involved"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs284
matches
0"was protecting"
1"was thinking, was hiding"
2"was hiding"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount30
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences27
totalSentences110
ratio0.245
matches
0"She brushed rain from her straight shoulder-length black hair, her delivery bag—emblazoned with the Golden Empress restaurant’s red dragon logo—slipping a fraction down her left arm to expose the small crescent scar on her wrist, a memento from the childhood bike crash that had left her crying on a Cardiff sidewalk for an hour before her mum found her, Welsh teacher voice soft as she wiped mud from her daughter’s cheeks."
1"The bar’s dim light gilded the old maps plastered to its walls, each crease a story she couldn’t read—maps of Prague, Berlin, Cardiff’s waterfront—and the black-and-white photographs pinned between them caught her bright blue eyes for a split second: a man in a MI6 uniform, a woman laughing on a Cardiff bench, a kid with black hair riding a bike."
2"He twisted a silver signet ring on his right hand, his hazel eyes locked on the scar on her wrist—he’d seen that scar a hundred times before, when she’d shown it to him after the crash, when she’d picked at it during their coffee shop talks in Cardiff, when she’d hidden it under her sleeve after her dad yelled at her for stealing his wig."
3"He pushed off the bar, his boot thudding softly on the worn wooden floor—scratched from decades of customers’ shoes, from his own limping steps—and moved toward her."
4"I caught you hiding in the broom closet, covered in dust, and lied to Brendan when he asked where it went—told him I’d borrowed it for a work presentation."
5"You always hated beer—said it tasted like burnt bread."
6"She watches him move to the bar, his hands steady as he pours boiling water into a chipped ceramic mug—its side painted with a Welsh dragon, a memento from his last trip to Cardiff before he vanished."
7"His ring clinks against the mug’s edge as he leans against the bar, his gaze fixing on a map of Prague taped to the wall—its center marked with a silver pin, a memento from the botched operation that had left him with his limp."
8"Any line to Brendan—any line to you—would have led them straight to the people who wanted to kill me."
9"She hasn’t thought about Silas since he vanished from her dad’s life one day, no note, no explanation—just an empty coffee cup on the kitchen table, the Welsh dragon mug he’d left behind."
10"He turns back, his hazel eyes softening—an expression she hasn’t seen since he’d helped her fix her bike after that crash, his hands steady as he tightened the brakes."
11"She nods at his left leg, her gaze sharp—her cool-headed, quick-thinking self kicking in, the same self that had hidden from Evan in a Cardiff alley for two hours until the police arrived."
12"Opened this bar as a front for my old contacts—clandestine meetings in the back room, accessible through that bookshelf tucked in the corner."
13"The shelves are lined with leather-bound books; pull the one with the dragon on its spine, and the shelf swings open."
14"She scans the bookshelf, its shelves lined with leather-bound books—one of them has a small Welsh dragon embossed on its spine."
15"She’s always known he was involved in something secret—her dad had never talked about it, but she’d seen the coded notes he’d left on the kitchen table, the maps of foreign cities tucked in his briefcase."
16"He taps the signet ring on his right hand, a habit he’d had even when she was a kid—tapping the ring when he was nervous, when he was thinking, when he was hiding something."
17"That line hangs in the air, thick with regret—regret that he lost touch, regret that he couldn’t protect her, regret that the kid he’d known is now a woman with a delivery bag and a scar and a past she’s trying to run from."
18"Evan—my ex—he was abusive."
19"His posture stiffens, his hands curling into fists on the bar—his knuckles white, his signet ring glinting in the dim light."
20"He pours another cup of tea, his hands steady now, his gaze fixing on the scar peeking out from her sleeve—she’d tugged it down earlier, but it slipped again when she brushed her hair away."
21"She’s always picked at it when she’s nervous—when she’s thinking about Evan, when she’s thinking about her dad, when she’s thinking about Silas."
22"Rory watches him, her mind racing—she’s found an old friend, a friend she thought she’d lost forever, but he’s not the same man he was in Cardiff."
23"She’s not the same kid she was either—she’s got a scar, a delivery bag, a past she’s trying to forget."
24"He’s heard about her—his contacts have told him about the delivery person from Golden Empress who lives above a downtown bar."
25"She thinks about the possibility of being friends again—of having someone who understands her, someone who can help her."
26"He smirks, a faint lift of his beard—an echo of the man he’d been in Cardiff."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount313
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount4
adverbRatio0.012779552715654952
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.009584664536741214
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences110
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences110
mean15.28
std15.11
cv0.989
sampleLengths
020
171
260
338
432
565
627
79
817
94
102
1119
1229
138
1463
151
1627
171
187
199
2018
2137
2216
234
2444
254
266
275
284
2919
3014
3169
3233
335
3411
354
3629
376
389
3933
404
4114
421
4311
444
452
465
477
485
4923
30.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats22
diversityRatio0.24545454545454545
totalSentences110
uniqueOpeners27
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences102
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount78
totalSentences102
matches
0"She brushed rain from her"
1"She scanned for an empty"
2"He twisted a silver signet"
3"He pushed off the bar,"
4"You still pick at the"
5"She tugs her sleeve over"
6"I don’t know you."
7"You snuck into your dad’s"
8"I caught you hiding in"
9"She freezes, her breath catching"
10"She studies his face, the"
11"He gestures to the empty"
12"I’ll get you a cup"
13"You always hated beer—said it"
14"She sits, her delivery bag"
15"She watches him move to"
16"He sets the mug before"
17"His ring clinks against the"
18"I couldn’t go back to"
19"My contacts were compromised."
ratio0.765
9.02% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount92
totalSentences102
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest’s green neon"
1"She brushed rain from her"
2"The bar’s dim light gilded"
3"She scanned for an empty"
4"A man with grey-streaked auburn"
5"He twisted a silver signet"
6"He pushed off the bar,"
7"You still pick at the"
8"She tugs her sleeve over"
9"I don’t know you."
10"You snuck into your dad’s"
11"I caught you hiding in"
12"She freezes, her breath catching"
13"She studies his face, the"
14"He gestures to the empty"
15"I’ll get you a cup"
16"You always hated beer—said it"
17"She sits, her delivery bag"
18"She watches him move to"
19"He sets the mug before"
ratio0.902
49.02% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences102
matches
0"If I’d known."
ratio0.01
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences54
technicalSentenceCount11
matches
0"She brushed rain from her straight shoulder-length black hair, her delivery bag—emblazoned with the Golden Empress restaurant’s red dragon logo—slipping a fract…"
1"She scanned for an empty stool, her legs aching from the last delivery to a Mayfair penthouse where the doorman had refused her lift access, forcing her to carr…"
2"She tugs her sleeve over the scar, her shoulders tensing, her delivery bag digging into her hip."
3"She studies his face, the way his auburn hair now held threads of grey that hadn’t been there when he’d laughed at her ghost costume all those years ago, the ne…"
4"He gestures to the empty stool beside her, his left leg dragging a fraction as he shifts his weight, his boot scuffing a scratch into the floor."
5"His ring clinks against the mug’s edge as he leans against the bar, his gaze fixing on a map of Prague taped to the wall—its center marked with a silver pin, a …"
6"She thinks about the years between then and now: her Pre-Law degree she quit after her dad told her she’d never be as good as him, her abusive ex Evan who’d sla…"
7"She nods at his left leg, her gaze sharp—her cool-headed, quick-thinking self kicking in, the same self that had hidden from Evan in a Cardiff alley for two hou…"
8"He pours another cup of tea, his hands steady now, his gaze fixing on the scar peeking out from her sleeve—she’d tugged it down earlier, but it slipped again wh…"
9"He’s got a limp, grey streaks in his hair, a bar that’s a front for spy games."
10"He’s heard about her—his contacts have told him about the delivery person from Golden Empress who lives above a downtown bar."
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