Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY82EA4ND0E35Y1X9SB8F8K

Run Details

Duration:
9.7s
Cost:
$0.001064
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door swung open before the knocker could finish its second rap. Rory stood there, one hand still on the deadbolt, the other gripping a butcher’s knife that had seen better decades. The blade gleamed under the flickering bulb of the hallway light, catching the sharp angle of her jaw. Her dark hair was tied back in a messy knot, strands escaping to frame her face like a warning. Lucien Moreau leaned against the frame, his tailored charcoal suit rumpled at the shoulders, one cuff rolled up to reveal a watch that cost more than her flat’s monthly rent. The amber eye flicked over her, lingering on the knife before meeting her gaze—cool, assessing. “You’re late,” he said. Rory didn’t lower the blade. “You’re not supposed to be here.” “Neither are you.” His voice was smooth, but there was an edge to it, something that made the hairs on her arms prickle. “Not if you’re avoiding me.” She exhaled through her nose, the knife still steady. “I’m not avoiding you. I’m avoiding *this*.” Lucien pushed off the doorframe, stepping inside before she could slam it shut. The flat was small, cramped with the scent of takeaway containers and old books. Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby, wound between his ankles with deliberate slowness, tail lashing. Lucien didn’t flinch. “You’ve got a cat now?” he observed. “It’s Eva’s. And it hates you.” “Mutual.” He glanced around—the cluttered desk piled with legal pads, the half-empty bottle of whisky on the counter, the single framed photo of Rory and Eva at university, both grinning like idiots. “You’ve been busy.” “Not like you.” She tilted her head. “What do you want, Lucien?” He reached into his jacket, slow and deliberate. Rory’s grip tightened on the knife. But it wasn’t a weapon he pulled out—just a folded piece of paper, creased at the edges. He held it out. “You dropped this at the club last week.” She didn’t take it. “I don’t remember.” “Liar.” His lips quirked, just slightly. “You remember *me*.” The air between them thickened. Rory’s pulse jumped. She remembered the way his hands had felt on her waist, the way his voice had dropped when he’d whispered her name like a secret. She remembered the way he’d left without a word. She remembered the way it had hurt. “What do you want?” she repeated, voice low. Lucien stepped closer. The heat of him rolled off in waves, expensive cologne and something darker beneath. “Same thing I always wanted.” Her breath hitched. The knife wavered. He didn’t touch her. Not yet. “You.” The word hung there, raw. Rory’s fingers trembled. The knife clattered to the floor. Lucien didn’t move to catch it. His gaze locked onto hers, unblinking. “You’re still running, Rory.” She swallowed. “I’m not running from you.” “No?” He reached out, his fingers brushing the scar on her wrist—the crescent moon left from that childhood accident, the one she’d never told him about. “Then why won’t you look at me?” Her breath came faster. The flat felt too small, too hot. She wanted to step back, but his hand was there, warm against her skin. “Because I don’t trust you,” she whispered. Lucien’s smile was slow, dangerous. “Good. That makes two of us.” The door creaked open behind them. Eva stood there, Ptolemy curled in her arms, eyes narrowed. “You two are *insufferable*.” Rory didn’t look away from Lucien. “Get out.” He didn’t move. “Not yet.” Eva sighed, shaking her head. “I swear to God, if you break her again—” “Eva,” Rory warned. Lucien finally stepped back, but only to pick up the knife from the floor. He turned it over in his fingers, examining the blade. “You always did have a flair for the dramatic.” “And you always had a knack for showing up uninvited,” she shot back. He slid the knife back into her hand, palm up. “Consider this an invitation.” Rory’s grip tightened. “To what?” “To stop running.” His voice was quiet now, almost gentle. “From me. From *this*.” She wanted to hate him. She wanted to throw the knife at him. She wanted to kiss him. Instead, she said, “Get out.” Lucien didn’t argue. He just held her gaze for one more heartbeat before turning toward the door. Eva stepped aside, but not before shooting Rory a look that said *this isn’t over*. The moment the door clicked shut behind him, Rory exhaled sharply. The flat felt too quiet. Too empty. Ptolemy meowed, jumping onto the counter. Rory ignored him, staring at the spot where Lucien had been standing. She should’ve known he wouldn’t stay away forever. The knife in her hand felt heavier than before. She didn’t put it down.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
88.89% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"He glanced around [around]"
1"His lips quirked just [just]"
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.306
leniency0.611
rawRatio0.182
effectiveRatio0.111
87.26% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount785
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"sharply"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"sharply"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
74.52% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount785
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"flicked"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count1
2
word"wavered"
count1
3
word"trembled"
count1
highlights
0"flicked"
1"pulse"
2"wavered"
3"trembled"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences74
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences74
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences97
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans5
markdownWords7
totalWords781
ratio0.009
matches
0"this"
1"me"
2"insufferable"
3"this"
4"this isn’t over"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
54.76% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions31
wordCount630
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity1.9
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
Rory12
Eva5
Lucien10
Ptolemy3
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Rory"
2"Eva"
3"Lucien"
4"Ptolemy"
places(empty)
globalScore0.548
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences40
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount781
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences97
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs47
mean16.62
std13.72
cv0.826
sampleLengths
069
145
24
311
428
516
642
77
86
935
1012
1135
128
137
149
1542
167
178
1822
196
207
2114
2216
237
2433
2525
267
2711
286
2914
308
315
3214
333
3433
3513
3614
375
3814
3918
405
4132
4218
4318
448
459
465
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences74
matches
0"was tied"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs127
matches(empty)
25.04% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences97
ratio0.041
matches
0"The amber eye flicked over her, lingering on the knife before meeting her gaze—cool, assessing."
1"“Mutual.” He glanced around—the cluttered desk piled with legal pads, the half-empty bottle of whisky on the counter, the single framed photo of Rory and Eva at university, both grinning like idiots."
2"But it wasn’t a weapon he pulled out—just a folded piece of paper, creased at the edges."
3"“No?” He reached out, his fingers brushing the scar on her wrist—the crescent moon left from that childhood accident, the one she’d never told him about."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount634
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.03943217665615142
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.007886435331230283
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences97
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences97
mean8.05
std6.14
cv0.763
sampleLengths
012
120
218
319
430
515
64
75
86
923
105
119
127
1313
1414
1512
163
177
186
1932
203
217
225
238
246
2517
264
278
284
293
306
313
325
333
3425
359
367
378
383
3914
405
413
423
434
442
451
465
473
486
496
45.36% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.30927835051546393
totalSentences97
uniqueOpeners30
49.75% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences67
matches
0"Instead, she said,"
ratio0.015
40.90% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount30
totalSentences67
matches
0"Her dark hair was tied"
1"His voice was smooth, but"
2"She exhaled through her nose,"
3"He glanced around—the cluttered desk"
4"She tilted her head"
5"He reached into his jacket,"
6"He held it out."
7"She didn’t take it."
8"His lips quirked, just slightly"
9"She remembered the way his"
10"She remembered the way he’d"
11"She remembered the way it"
12"she repeated, voice low"
13"Her breath hitched."
14"He didn’t touch her."
15"His gaze locked onto hers,"
16"He reached out, his fingers"
17"Her breath came faster."
18"She wanted to step back,"
19"He didn’t move."
ratio0.448
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount65
totalSentences67
matches
0"The door swung open before"
1"Rory stood there, one hand"
2"The blade gleamed under the"
3"Her dark hair was tied"
4"Lucien Moreau leaned against the"
5"The amber eye flicked over"
6"Rory didn’t lower the blade."
7"His voice was smooth, but"
8"She exhaled through her nose,"
9"Lucien pushed off the doorframe,"
10"The flat was small, cramped"
11"Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby, wound between"
12"Lucien didn’t flinch."
13"He glanced around—the cluttered desk"
14"She tilted her head"
15"He reached into his jacket,"
16"Rory’s grip tightened on the"
17"He held it out."
18"She didn’t take it."
19"His lips quirked, just slightly"
ratio0.97
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences67
matches(empty)
ratio0
74.83% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences21
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Rory stood there, one hand still on the deadbolt, the other gripping a butcher’s knife that had seen better decades."
1"Lucien Moreau leaned against the frame, his tailored charcoal suit rumpled at the shoulders, one cuff rolled up to reveal a watch that cost more than her flat’s…"
79.55% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she repeated, voice low"
38.89% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"he observed (observe)"
1"she repeated (repeat)"
2"she whispered (whisper)"
3"Rory warned (warn)"
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.167
leniency0.333
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.222
78.6581%