Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY83F0XHRBE4EYK57CQYWA0

Run Details

Duration:
8.5s
Cost:
$0.000399
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Grove smelled wrong. Rory stepped through the standing stones, her boots sinking into damp earth that clung to her soles like it didn’t want to let go. The air was thick, heavy with the scent of damp moss and something else—something metallic, like old blood. The pendant at her throat pulsed once, a faint warmth against her skin, before settling into its usual dull throb. She should’ve brought a torch. The trees here were different. Older. Their bark blackened at the edges, their branches twisting into shapes that made her stomach clench. The wildflowers that usually carpeted the Grove’s floor were sparse, their petals curled inward like they were hiding. The moon barely pierced the canopy, casting long, skeletal shadows that stretched and twisted unnaturally. Rory adjusted the strap of her bag, fingers brushing the worn leather. She’d come for answers. The pendant had led her here, after all—hadn’t it? The way it had reacted to the Hel portal in the alley behind Silas’ bar, the way it had *pulled* her toward the Grove when she’d passed it earlier that evening. She couldn’t ignore it anymore. A twig snapped. Rory froze. The sound came from the left, near the edge of the clearing. She turned slowly, scanning the undergrowth. Nothing moved. No rustle of leaves, no shift in the shadows. Just the oppressive stillness. “Hello?” Her voice sounded too loud in the quiet. Silence. She exhaled, forcing her shoulders to relax. Probably just an animal. A fox, maybe. Or one of the park’s stray cats, though they usually kept their distance from the Grove. Still, she should keep moving. The standing stones marked the boundary, and she didn’t want to get lost in this place. Another sound. This time, it wasn’t a snap. It was a whisper. Rory’s breath hitched. The wind hadn’t picked up. The trees weren’t swaying. And yet, the air itself seemed to hum, like a voice just out of reach. She took a step back, her heel catching on a root. The pendant flared against her skin, a sharp prickle of heat. Her pulse jumped. “Who’s there?” Her voice was steadier this time, but her fingers dug into the strap of her bag. The knife inside was small, useless against whatever was watching her. No answer. Just the whisper again, closer now. A breath against her ear. Rory spun, her heart hammering. The trees were still. The shadows didn’t move. But the air—God, the air—felt like it was pressing in on her, thick and suffocating. She backed up another step, then another. The standing stones were just ahead, the way out. She could make it. She *would* make it. A branch creaked. Not from the wind. Not from an animal. From something *else*. Rory didn’t wait. She broke into a run, her boots pounding against the uneven ground. The pendant burned now, a steady, insistent heat against her collarbone. She didn’t dare look back. The whisper followed her. It slithered through the trees, a voice without a mouth, a breath without a body. It coiled around her ankles, tried to trip her. She stumbled, caught herself, kept running. The standing stones loomed ahead, their gnarled roots twisting like fingers reaching for her. She lunged forward, her fingers brushing the rough bark of the first tree— —and the world *shifted*. The Grove blurred. The whispers sharpened into words, a chorus of voices that weren’t voices at all, but something older, something *hungry*. The standing stones groaned, their bark splitting open like mouths. Rory skidded to a halt, her breath ragged. The boundary wasn’t just a line. It was a *teeth*. She didn’t think. She turned and ran back the way she’d come, her pulse roaring in her ears. The trees were closing in, their branches lowering like they were reaching for her. The whispers became laughter, high and sharp, the sound of something that had been waiting for her. The pendant seared against her skin. Rory didn’t stop. She didn’t look back. She ran until her lungs burned, until her legs ached, until the standing stones were just a blur behind her. And then— She crashed through the boundary. Cold air hit her like a slap. The park’s normal night sounds rushed back in—the distant hum of traffic, the occasional owl’s call, the rustle of leaves that weren’t trying to strangle her. Rory collapsed onto her knees, gasping. Her hands trembled as she pressed them to her thighs, her fingers digging into the fabric of her jeans. The pendant was cold now. Dead. She didn’t move. Didn’t breathe. Just listened. The Grove was silent. But she knew. It was still watching.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Her voice sounded too [too]"
dialogueSentences2
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.333
93.59% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount780
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount780
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"pulsed"
count1
1
word"warmth"
count1
2
word"throb"
count1
3
word"stomach"
count1
4
word"scanning"
count1
5
word"oppressive"
count1
6
word"silence"
count1
7
word"whisper"
count3
8
word"pulse"
count2
9
word"pounding"
count1
10
word"loomed"
count1
11
word"roaring"
count1
12
word"trembled"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"warmth"
2"throb"
3"stomach"
4"scanning"
5"oppressive"
6"silence"
7"whisper"
8"pulse"
9"pounding"
10"loomed"
11"roaring"
12"trembled"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences96
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences96
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences96
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans6
markdownWords6
totalWords775
ratio0.008
matches
0"pulled"
1"would"
2"else"
3"shifted"
4"hungry"
5"teeth"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
90.32% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions17
wordCount754
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity1.19
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Grove5
Hel1
Silence1
God1
Rory9
persons
0"Grove"
1"Rory"
places
0"Hel"
globalScore0.903
windowScore1
95.65% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences46
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like it was pressing in on her, th"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount775
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences96
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs41
mean18.9
std17.66
cv0.934
sampleLengths
04
162
25
355
461
53
635
79
81
951
102
1110
1227
1325
1429
1513
1628
1724
183
194
204
213
2231
234
2430
2527
264
2732
2818
2949
306
3127
322
335
3433
3525
366
377
384
393
404
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences96
matches
0"get lost"
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount6
totalVerbs133
matches
0"were hiding"
1"weren’t swaying"
2"was watching"
3"were closing were reaching"
4"weren’t trying"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences96
ratio0.073
matches
0"The air was thick, heavy with the scent of damp moss and something else—something metallic, like old blood."
1"The pendant had led her here, after all—hadn’t it?"
2"But the air—God, the air—felt like it was pressing in on her, thick and suffocating."
3"She lunged forward, her fingers brushing the rough bark of the first tree—"
4"—and the world *shifted*."
5"And then—"
6"The park’s normal night sounds rushed back in—the distant hum of traffic, the occasional owl’s call, the rustle of leaves that weren’t trying to strangle her."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount166
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount5
adverbRatio0.030120481927710843
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.018072289156626505
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences96
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences96
mean8.07
std6.25
cv0.775
sampleLengths
04
124
218
320
45
55
61
716
818
915
1012
114
129
1331
145
153
162
1712
186
192
209
214
229
231
247
254
263
2716
285
2916
302
316
324
333
345
354
3615
3711
3811
393
4018
4111
422
436
445
455
464
474
4815
497
35.42% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats14
diversityRatio0.2708333333333333
totalSentences96
uniqueOpeners26
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences86
matches
0"Just the oppressive stillness."
1"Probably just an animal."
2"Just the whisper again, closer"
ratio0.035
85.12% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount29
totalSentences86
matches
0"She should’ve brought a torch."
1"Their bark blackened at the"
2"She’d come for answers."
3"She couldn’t ignore it anymore."
4"She turned slowly, scanning the"
5"Her voice sounded too loud"
6"She exhaled, forcing her shoulders"
7"It was a whisper."
8"She took a step back,"
9"Her pulse jumped."
10"Her voice was steadier this"
11"She backed up another step,"
12"She could make it."
13"She *would* make it."
14"She broke into a run,"
15"She didn’t dare look back."
16"It slithered through the trees,"
17"It coiled around her ankles,"
18"She stumbled, caught herself, kept"
19"She lunged forward, her fingers"
ratio0.337
41.40% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount72
totalSentences86
matches
0"The Grove smelled wrong."
1"Rory stepped through the standing"
2"The air was thick, heavy"
3"The pendant at her throat"
4"She should’ve brought a torch."
5"The trees here were different."
6"Their bark blackened at the"
7"The wildflowers that usually carpeted"
8"The moon barely pierced the"
9"Rory adjusted the strap of"
10"She’d come for answers."
11"The pendant had led her"
12"The way it had reacted"
13"She couldn’t ignore it anymore."
14"A twig snapped."
15"The sound came from the"
16"She turned slowly, scanning the"
17"Her voice sounded too loud"
18"She exhaled, forcing her shoulders"
19"A fox, maybe."
ratio0.837
58.14% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences86
matches
0"—and the world *shifted*."
ratio0.012
19.70% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences29
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"The moon barely pierced the canopy, casting long, skeletal shadows that stretched and twisted unnaturally."
1"The whispers sharpened into words, a chorus of voices that weren’t voices at all, but something older, something *hungry*."
2"The trees were closing in, their branches lowering like they were reaching for her."
3"The whispers became laughter, high and sharp, the sound of something that had been waiting for her."
4"The park’s normal night sounds rushed back in—the distant hum of traffic, the occasional owl’s call, the rustle of leaves that weren’t trying to strangle her."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
77.3111%