| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Her voice sounded too [too]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 2 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.333 | |
| 93.59% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 780 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 780 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "throb" | | 3 | "stomach" | | 4 | "scanning" | | 5 | "oppressive" | | 6 | "silence" | | 7 | "whisper" | | 8 | "pulse" | | 9 | "pounding" | | 10 | "loomed" | | 11 | "roaring" | | 12 | "trembled" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 96 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 96 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 96 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 31 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 6 | | markdownWords | 6 | | totalWords | 775 | | ratio | 0.008 | | matches | | 0 | "pulled" | | 1 | "would" | | 2 | "else" | | 3 | "shifted" | | 4 | "hungry" | | 5 | "teeth" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 90.32% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 17 | | wordCount | 754 | | uniqueNames | 5 | | maxNameDensity | 1.19 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Grove | 5 | | Hel | 1 | | Silence | 1 | | God | 1 | | Rory | 9 |
| | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 0.903 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 95.65% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 46 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like it was pressing in on her, th" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 775 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 41 | | mean | 18.9 | | std | 17.66 | | cv | 0.934 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 4 | | 1 | 62 | | 2 | 5 | | 3 | 55 | | 4 | 61 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 35 | | 7 | 9 | | 8 | 1 | | 9 | 51 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 27 | | 13 | 25 | | 14 | 29 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 28 | | 17 | 24 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 31 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 30 | | 25 | 27 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 32 | | 28 | 18 | | 29 | 49 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 27 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 33 | | 35 | 25 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 4 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 6 | | totalVerbs | 133 | | matches | | 0 | "were hiding" | | 1 | "weren’t swaying" | | 2 | "was watching" | | 3 | "were closing were reaching" | | 4 | "weren’t trying" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 8 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 96 | | ratio | 0.073 | | matches | | 0 | "The air was thick, heavy with the scent of damp moss and something else—something metallic, like old blood." | | 1 | "The pendant had led her here, after all—hadn’t it?" | | 2 | "But the air—God, the air—felt like it was pressing in on her, thick and suffocating." | | 3 | "She lunged forward, her fingers brushing the rough bark of the first tree—" | | 4 | "—and the world *shifted*." | | 5 | "And then—" | | 6 | "The park’s normal night sounds rushed back in—the distant hum of traffic, the occasional owl’s call, the rustle of leaves that weren’t trying to strangle her." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 166 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 5 | | adverbRatio | 0.030120481927710843 | | lyAdverbCount | 3 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.018072289156626505 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 96 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 96 | | mean | 8.07 | | std | 6.25 | | cv | 0.775 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 4 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 20 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 1 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 18 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 31 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 2 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 1 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 16 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 16 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 15 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 18 | | 41 | 11 | | 42 | 2 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 15 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 35.42% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 14 | | diversityRatio | 0.2708333333333333 | | totalSentences | 96 | | uniqueOpeners | 26 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the oppressive stillness." | | 1 | "Probably just an animal." | | 2 | "Just the whisper again, closer" |
| | ratio | 0.035 | |
| 85.12% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 29 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | 0 | "She should’ve brought a torch." | | 1 | "Their bark blackened at the" | | 2 | "She’d come for answers." | | 3 | "She couldn’t ignore it anymore." | | 4 | "She turned slowly, scanning the" | | 5 | "Her voice sounded too loud" | | 6 | "She exhaled, forcing her shoulders" | | 7 | "It was a whisper." | | 8 | "She took a step back," | | 9 | "Her pulse jumped." | | 10 | "Her voice was steadier this" | | 11 | "She backed up another step," | | 12 | "She could make it." | | 13 | "She *would* make it." | | 14 | "She broke into a run," | | 15 | "She didn’t dare look back." | | 16 | "It slithered through the trees," | | 17 | "It coiled around her ankles," | | 18 | "She stumbled, caught herself, kept" | | 19 | "She lunged forward, her fingers" |
| | ratio | 0.337 | |
| 41.40% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 72 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | 0 | "The Grove smelled wrong." | | 1 | "Rory stepped through the standing" | | 2 | "The air was thick, heavy" | | 3 | "The pendant at her throat" | | 4 | "She should’ve brought a torch." | | 5 | "The trees here were different." | | 6 | "Their bark blackened at the" | | 7 | "The wildflowers that usually carpeted" | | 8 | "The moon barely pierced the" | | 9 | "Rory adjusted the strap of" | | 10 | "She’d come for answers." | | 11 | "The pendant had led her" | | 12 | "The way it had reacted" | | 13 | "She couldn’t ignore it anymore." | | 14 | "A twig snapped." | | 15 | "The sound came from the" | | 16 | "She turned slowly, scanning the" | | 17 | "Her voice sounded too loud" | | 18 | "She exhaled, forcing her shoulders" | | 19 | "A fox, maybe." |
| | ratio | 0.837 | |
| 58.14% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | 0 | "—and the world *shifted*." |
| | ratio | 0.012 | |
| 19.70% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 29 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "The moon barely pierced the canopy, casting long, skeletal shadows that stretched and twisted unnaturally." | | 1 | "The whispers sharpened into words, a chorus of voices that weren’t voices at all, but something older, something *hungry*." | | 2 | "The trees were closing in, their branches lowering like they were reaching for her." | | 3 | "The whispers became laughter, high and sharp, the sound of something that had been waiting for her." | | 4 | "The park’s normal night sounds rushed back in—the distant hum of traffic, the occasional owl’s call, the rustle of leaves that weren’t trying to strangle her." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |