Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY83H55ZFCV2ZJG6D9M0NZQ

Run Details

Duration:
1m 17s
Cost:
$0.000456
Provider:
Novita

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Rain lashed against Detective Harlow Quinn’s face, plastering strands of salt-and-pepper hair to her forehead. Each drop felt like a tiny, icy needle. She hadn’t bothered with a coat, hadn’t bothered with anything beyond function. Just the weight of her service weapon, the slick grip molded to her hand, and the dull throb of annoyance settling in her jaw. Herrera. Tomás Herrera. She’d been watching him for a week, tailing him from discreet distances, compiling a dossier that was rapidly filling with questions and very few answers. He moved with a quiet efficiency, a knack for disappearing into crowds, blending into the London drizzle. A former paramedic, the records said. Stripped of his license. She’d dug deeper. Unauthorized treatments. Rumors of patients with… unusual ailments. He’d just exited The Raven’s Nest, the green neon sign bleeding across the slick pavement. Silas’ bar. A known haunt for the city’s underbelly, a place she’d spent enough late nights nursing lukewarm coffee and chasing shadows. She’d been about to move in when he’d glanced back, a flicker of something sharp in his warm brown eyes, and bolted. Now she was sprinting, boots splashing through puddles, the scent of exhaust fumes and wet asphalt filling her lungs. He was fast, surprisingly so for a man who spent his days patching up cuts and broken bones. He cut a sharp angle down a side street, towards Camden, the music from a nearby club thumping a hollow rhythm against her ribs. “Police! Stop!” she shouted, her voice swallowed by the rain and the city’s white noise. He didn’t even bother to look back. He disappeared into a grimy alleyway, a narrow chasm between two brick buildings. Quinn followed, the alley shrinking around her, the air thick with the smell of refuse. At the end, instead of a street, was a steel door, seemingly bolted into the earth. An almost imperceptible green glow emanated from the crack beneath it. She drew closer, her hand hovering over her weapon. The door wasn’t locked. It swung inward with a groan of rusted hinges, revealing a steep set of concrete steps leading down into darkness. A blast of warm, stale air rose from the opening, carrying with it the scent of incense, something metallic, and… something else. Something ancient and vaguely unsettling. She hesitated. The radio on her hip crackled, spitting out static and fragments of a dispatch call. Ignore it. This was her case. This *felt* like her case, a thread she hadn’t encountered since Morris… since everything fell apart. She descended, her hand brushing against the rough concrete wall for balance. The air grew heavier with each step, the sounds of the city fading until all she could hear was the drip, drip, drip of water and the pounding of her own heart. The stairs opened into a vast, cavernous space. Flickering gas lamps cast long, dancing shadows on the walls, revealing a sprawling, chaotic market. Stalls crammed together, overflowing with strange and unsettling wares. Dried herbs, shimmering powders, strangely carved wooden figures, and cages containing creatures she couldn’t immediately identify. This wasn't just a black market. This was something else entirely. She recognized the architecture: the vaulted ceilings, the ornate tiling, the remnants of elaborate mosaics. It was an abandoned Tube station, all right, but repurposed. Remade. A secret world built beneath a world. The Veil Market. She’d heard whispers of it over the years, dismissed them as rumors, the ramblings of drug-addled informants. Herrera was weaving through the crowd, his short curly hair dark against the pale faces around him. He wasn’t slowing down. He was headed towards the center of the market, a particularly crowded section near a stall draped in black velvet. Quinn scanned the faces around her. A motley collection of individuals: pierced and tattooed figures, men in expensive suits, women with eyes that seemed to see too much. They glanced at her with a mixture of curiosity and hostility, their expressions unreadable. She stood out like a floodlight in a darkened room; her sharp jaw, her military precision, her utter lack of affectation. She adjusted her grip on her weapon, her eyes locking onto Herrera. He was talking to a man with a pale, gaunt face and eyes like chips of obsidian. The man handed Herrera a small, bone-white token. A bone token. The entry requirement. She could call it in. Request backup. But reinforcements would take time, and alerting the Met would risk exposing the Market, unraveling whatever delicate balance existed here. She’d lose Herrera, and she had a feeling that losing him now would be a disastrous mistake. Her gut—a well-honed instinct developed over eighteen years of decorated service—told her this wasn't a simple matter of smuggled goods or black-market pharmaceuticals. This was something… deeper. Something connected to the unsettling pattern of cases she'd been seeing lately, cases that didn't quite make sense, cases that left a lingering feeling of wrongness in the air. Morris. The case that took Morris. The one she hadn’t been able to solve. The one where the official explanation simply didn't sit right. She took a deep breath, the metallic tang in the air stinging her nostrils. She could turn back now. Walk away. Write it off as a dead end. But she didn't. She hadn’t come this far to walk away. She hadn’t come this far to let another case slip through her fingers. She straightened her shoulders, tightened her grip on her weapon, and stepped into the Market. The crowd parted slightly, as if acknowledging her arrival. Eyes followed her, assessing, measuring. She could feel their scrutiny like a physical weight. She focused on Herrera, pushing through the throng, ignoring the whispers and the sidelong glances. She was a predator in unfamiliar territory, but a predator nonetheless. He was disappearing into the shadows, headed towards a section of the market she hadn't noticed before—a series of narrow, winding corridors that seemed to burrow into the earth itself. She broke into a run, following him, the flickering gas lamps casting grotesque, elongated shadows that danced around her. The corridors were claustrophobic, the walls damp and slick with moisture. She could hear voices, hushed and secretive, echoing from unseen alcoves. She passed stalls selling strange artifacts: glass jars containing swirling, luminous fluids; ancient-looking books bound in human skin; and bizarre, unsettling sculptures carved from bone. Herrera was gaining speed, his lithe frame moving effortlessly through the maze. She pushed herself harder, her lungs burning, her muscles screaming in protest. He turned a corner abruptly, vanishing from sight. Quinn followed, rounding the bend, and found herself facing a solid wall of wood. A bookshelf. A remarkably ordinary bookshelf, given its location. But something felt off. The wood seemed too smooth, the books too neatly arranged. She reached out and ran her hand along the spine of a leather-bound volume. It felt… loose. She pressed against it, and with a soft click, a section of the bookshelf swung inward, revealing a hidden doorway. A dark, narrow passage. Herrera had vanished inside. She stood there for a moment, her breath coming in ragged gasps, the rain still clinging to her clothes. This was it. The point of no return. She could turn back now. Report what she’d found. Let the proper channels handle it. But she knew, with a chilling certainty, that the proper channels wouldn’t understand. They wouldn't believe her. And she had a feeling, a cold, hard knot in her stomach, that whatever Herrera was involved in, whatever secrets this Market held, were far more dangerous than anything she’d ever encountered before. She stepped through the doorway, into the darkness. The bookshelf swung shut behind her with a soft, final click. She was alone. And she had a feeling she was stepping into a world from which she might never return. Her worn leather watch ticked on her left wrist, a small, steady rhythm in the suffocating silence. Time, she thought, was rapidly running out.
created_at"2026-02-20T19:23:25.235Z" 2/20/2026, 7:23:25 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences1
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
92.54% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1340
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
32.84% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1340
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"weight"
count2
1
word"throb"
count1
2
word"flicker"
count1
3
word"pounding"
count1
4
word"dancing"
count1
5
word"chaotic"
count1
6
word"velvet"
count1
7
word"scanned"
count1
8
word"unreadable"
count1
9
word"unraveling"
count1
10
word"could feel"
count1
11
word"predator"
count2
12
word"echoing"
count1
13
word"chilling"
count1
14
word"stomach"
count1
15
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"throb"
2"flicker"
3"pounding"
4"dancing"
5"chaotic"
6"velvet"
7"scanned"
8"unreadable"
9"unraveling"
10"could feel"
11"predator"
12"echoing"
13"chilling"
14"stomach"
15"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences123
matches(empty)
96.40% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences123
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences124
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1329
ratio0.001
matches
0"felt"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions30
wordCount1325
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity0.75
worstName"Herrera"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Herrera"
discoveredNames
Detective1
Harlow1
Quinn4
Herrera10
London1
Raven1
Nest1
Camden1
Morris3
Tube1
Veil1
Market4
Met1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Herrera"
3"Raven"
4"Morris"
5"Market"
6"Met"
places
0"London"
1"Camden"
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences81
glossingSentenceCount6
matches
0"felt like a tiny, icy needle"
1"a steel door, seemingly bolted into the ear"
2"eyes that seemed to see too much"
3"quite make sense, cases that left a lingering feeling of wrongness in the air"
4"as if acknowledging her arrival"
5"corridors that seemed to burrow into the earth itself"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1329
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences124
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs40
mean33.23
std18.02
cv0.542
sampleLengths
059
166
259
361
422
555
633
727
839
944
1048
1111
1253
1341
1463
1537
166
1744
1856
1924
2028
2124
2215
2323
2426
2530
2619
2747
2824
2931
3014
3137
324
334
3419
358
3615
3717
3833
3963
99.56% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences123
matches
0"was headed"
1"was involved"
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount7
totalVerbs218
matches
0"was sprinting"
1"was weaving"
2"wasn’t slowing"
3"was talking"
4"was disappearing"
5"was gaining"
6"was stepping"
50.69% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount3
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences124
ratio0.032
matches
0"She stood out like a floodlight in a darkened room; her sharp jaw, her military precision, her utter lack of affectation."
1"Her gut—a well-honed instinct developed over eighteen years of decorated service—told her this wasn't a simple matter of smuggled goods or black-market pharmaceuticals."
2"He was disappearing into the shadows, headed towards a section of the market she hadn't noticed before—a series of narrow, winding corridors that seemed to burrow into the earth itself."
3"She passed stalls selling strange artifacts: glass jars containing swirling, luminous fluids; ancient-looking books bound in human skin; and bizarre, unsettling sculptures carved from bone."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount142
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount5
adverbRatio0.035211267605633804
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.007042253521126761
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences124
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences124
mean10.72
std7.53
cv0.703
sampleLengths
015
18
212
324
41
52
625
717
86
94
103
112
124
132
1415
152
1620
1722
1819
1918
2024
2115
227
2313
2415
2516
2611
279
284
2920
3020
312
325
332
3415
352
364
3712
384
3912
4032
418
4215
439
4416
456
465
4715
4810
491
42.74% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats17
diversityRatio0.3387096774193548
totalSentences124
uniqueOpeners42
30.86% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences108
matches
0"Just the weight of her"
ratio0.009
42.22% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount48
totalSentences108
matches
0"She hadn’t bothered with a"
1"She’d been watching him for"
2"He moved with a quiet"
3"She’d dug deeper."
4"He’d just exited The Raven’s"
5"She’d been about to move"
6"He was fast, surprisingly so"
7"He cut a sharp angle"
8"she shouted, her voice swallowed"
9"He didn’t even bother to"
10"He disappeared into a grimy"
11"She drew closer, her hand"
12"It swung inward with a"
13"She descended, her hand brushing"
14"She recognized the architecture: the"
15"It was an abandoned Tube"
16"She’d heard whispers of it"
17"He wasn’t slowing down."
18"He was headed towards the"
19"They glanced at her with"
ratio0.444
38.70% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount91
totalSentences108
matches
0"Rain lashed against Detective Harlow"
1"Each drop felt like a"
2"She hadn’t bothered with a"
3"She’d been watching him for"
4"He moved with a quiet"
5"A former paramedic, the records"
6"She’d dug deeper."
7"Rumors of patients with…"
8"He’d just exited The Raven’s"
9"A known haunt for the"
10"She’d been about to move"
11"He was fast, surprisingly so"
12"He cut a sharp angle"
13"she shouted, her voice swallowed"
14"He didn’t even bother to"
15"He disappeared into a grimy"
16"Quinn followed, the alley shrinking"
17"An almost imperceptible green glow"
18"She drew closer, her hand"
19"The door wasn’t locked."
ratio0.843
46.30% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences108
matches
0"Now she was sprinting, boots"
ratio0.009
59.52% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences60
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"She’d been watching him for a week, tailing him from discreet distances, compiling a dossier that was rapidly filling with questions and very few answers."
1"He was fast, surprisingly so for a man who spent his days patching up cuts and broken bones."
2"A motley collection of individuals: pierced and tattooed figures, men in expensive suits, women with eyes that seemed to see too much."
3"Something connected to the unsettling pattern of cases she'd been seeing lately, cases that didn't quite make sense, cases that left a lingering feeling of wron…"
4"He was disappearing into the shadows, headed towards a section of the market she hadn't noticed before—a series of narrow, winding corridors that seemed to burr…"
5"She broke into a run, following him, the flickering gas lamps casting grotesque, elongated shadows that danced around her."
6"She stood there for a moment, her breath coming in ragged gasps, the rain still clinging to her clothes."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she shouted (shout)"
dialogueSentences1
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio1
74.4125%