| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 12 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 31 | | tagDensity | 0.387 | | leniency | 0.774 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 90.97% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1107 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | 0 | | adverb | "deliberately" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 14.18% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1107 | | totalAiIsms | 19 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "scanning" | | 1 | "cascading" | | 2 | "fascinating" | | 3 | "weight" | | 4 | "tracing" | | 5 | "whisper" | | 6 | "pulse" | | 7 | "echoed" | | 8 | "footsteps" | | 9 | "pulsed" | | 10 | "flickered" | | 11 | "shimmered" | | 12 | "constructed" | | 13 | "scanned" | | 14 | "chilling" | | 15 | "sense of" | | 16 | "searing" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 66 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 99.57% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 66 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 85 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 28 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 6 | | markdownWords | 6 | | totalWords | 1099 | | ratio | 0.005 | | matches | | 0 | "allowed" | | 1 | "is" | | 2 | "danger" | | 3 | "Needs" | | 4 | "passes" | | 5 | "want" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 14 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 40.46% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 46 | | wordCount | 776 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 2.19 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Park | 1 | | Rory | 17 | | Half-Fae | 2 | | Nyx | 7 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 2 | | Isolde | 8 | | People | 1 | | Fae | 4 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Half-Fae" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Pendant" | | 4 | "Isolde" | | 5 | "People" | | 6 | "Fae" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.405 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 18.42% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 57 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "whisper that seemed to snake around the trees" | | 1 | "seemed muted here, replaced by the metallic tang of ozone" | | 2 | "looked like spun sugar and gilded pastrie" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1099 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 95.19% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 31 | | mean | 35.45 | | std | 17.13 | | cv | 0.483 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 80 | | 1 | 54 | | 2 | 35 | | 3 | 52 | | 4 | 27 | | 5 | 32 | | 6 | 69 | | 7 | 50 | | 8 | 14 | | 9 | 30 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 33 | | 12 | 41 | | 13 | 20 | | 14 | 26 | | 15 | 21 | | 16 | 41 | | 17 | 70 | | 18 | 16 | | 19 | 56 | | 20 | 25 | | 21 | 40 | | 22 | 21 | | 23 | 17 | | 24 | 41 | | 25 | 17 | | 26 | 32 | | 27 | 20 | | 28 | 40 | | 29 | 32 | | 30 | 37 |
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| 94.63% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "were draped" | | 1 | "were attended" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 135 | | matches | | |
| 75.63% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 85 | | ratio | 0.024 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde’s grove wasn’t a place you stumbled into; it *allowed* you to enter." | | 1 | "People—or beings resembling people—moved among the vines and orchards." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 784 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 19 | | adverbRatio | 0.02423469387755102 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.012755102040816327 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 85 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 85 | | mean | 12.93 | | std | 6.12 | | cv | 0.473 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 13 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 21 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 15 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 13 | | 11 | 20 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 20 | | 17 | 26 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 18 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 21 | | 22 | 21 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 27 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 19 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 24 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 14 | | 36 | 14 | | 37 | 13 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 16 | | 41 | 15 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 16 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 19 | | 48 | 16 | | 49 | 17 |
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| 89.41% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.5647058823529412 | | totalSentences | 85 | | uniqueOpeners | 48 | |
| 52.08% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.016 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 17 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | | 0 | "They stretched, joints clicking like" | | 1 | "She glanced down at her" | | 2 | "It hadn’t itched in days," | | 3 | "She hadn’t told them about" | | 4 | "It had appeared on her" | | 5 | "It had practically screamed *danger*" | | 6 | "She gestured towards a circle" | | 7 | "She followed, Nyx flanking her," | | 8 | "It pulsed with a soft," | | 9 | "Their form flickered, deepening in" | | 10 | "They stood on the edge" | | 11 | "They were draped in silks" | | 12 | "he drawled, his voice thick" | | 13 | "He gestured towards a table" | | 14 | "They’d stepped into a gilded" | | 15 | "He took a step closer," | | 16 | "It pulsed faster, frantic now," |
| | ratio | 0.266 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 59 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | | 0 | "The air hung thick and" | | 1 | "Rory pushed a stray strand" | | 2 | "Richmond Park had dissolved behind" | | 3 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in" | | 4 | "Isolde’s grove wasn’t a place" | | 5 | "Isolde murmured, her voice barely" | | 6 | "The Half-Fae floated rather than" | | 7 | "They stretched, joints clicking like" | | 8 | "Rory adjusted the strap of" | | 9 | "She glanced down at her" | | 10 | "It hadn’t itched in days," | | 11 | "Isolde’s pale lavender eyes sparkled" | | 12 | "Nyx clarified, their voice a" | | 13 | "The Heartstone Pendant warmed against" | | 14 | "She hadn’t told them about" | | 15 | "It had appeared on her" | | 16 | "It had practically screamed *danger*" | | 17 | "Isolde continued, ignoring the exchange" | | 18 | "She gestured towards a circle" | | 19 | "Isolde’s gaze drifted past Rory," |
| | ratio | 0.922 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 37 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone Pendant warmed against Rory’s skin, a faint pulse that echoed the thrumming energy of the grove." | | 1 | "He took a step closer, and the Heartstone Pendant burned against Rory’s chest, a searing heat that threatened to blister her skin." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 12 | | uselessAdditionCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde’s gaze drifted, unfocused" | | 1 | "Nyx breathed, their voice losing some of its usual composure" | | 2 | "Isolde observed, her voice devoid of emotion" | | 3 | "he drawled, his voice thick with wine" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 9 | | fancyCount | 7 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Isolde murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Nyx clarified (clarify)" | | 2 | "Isolde continued (continue)" | | 3 | "Nyx breathed (breathe)" | | 4 | "Isolde observed (observe)" | | 5 | "he drawled (drawl)" | | 6 | "the man continued (continue)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 31 | | tagDensity | 0.29 | | leniency | 0.581 | | rawRatio | 0.778 | | effectiveRatio | 0.452 | |