Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY859RCJ20BW9DQP1HH401Q

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Duration:
56.2s
Cost:
$0.000429
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
“You have the wrong flat.” The words tasted like ash, dry and unwelcome on my tongue. He hadn’t changed. Still that slow, deliberate drawl, the precise way he articulated each syllable, as if performing for an audience. Lucien Moreau. Standing on my doorstep, immaculate in a tailored charcoal suit that somehow managed to look both expensive and effortlessly dishevelled. He didn’t blink. Those mismatched eyes—one amber, one black—didn’t flicker with surprise or apology. Just… assessment. The amber one – his demon eye – seemed to burrow into me, charting every flicker of emotion. “I rather think not,” he said, tilting his head slightly. A silver glint of a watchband caught the light. “Silas' signage is quite distinctive. Particularly the chipped ‘Good Beer, Bad Company’.” A faint smile tugged at the corner of his lips. My grip tightened on the delivery bag from the Golden Empress. General Tso’s chicken. Some poor sod was going to be late for their dinner. “I don’t know what you’re talking about.” Dodge. Lie. A familiar routine, dusted off and put into practice. He ignored the denial. Pushed past me with a casual disregard for personal space that still prickled my skin. The smell of him – sandalwood and something subtly feral – flooded my tiny hallway. A scent I’d spent years trying to purge from my memory. “Rather cozy,” he observed, glancing around the cluttered space. Books overflowed from shelves, spilling onto the floor. Dried herbs hung from the ceiling, swaying gently. Even the faint aroma of simmering ginger and garlic couldn't mask the pervasive scent of old paper and unused potential. “Though I suspect Silas wouldn’t approve of the botanical décor.” I bristled. Silas, perpetually aggrieved landlord and champion of all things bland, would hate anything that wasn’t beige. “He’s at the pub. Probably complaining about the price of hops.” He didn’t acknowledge my attempt at deflection. Instead, his gaze landed on a small, crescent-shaped scar on my left wrist, barely visible beneath the cuff of my delivery jacket. A flicker of something unreadable crossed his features. Pain? Regret? “A rather unfortunate incident in your childhood, wasn’t it?” he remarked, his voice soft, almost a whisper. “Laila used to worry herself sick about it.” Laila. My old name. A ghost of a life I’d tried to bury. The mention of it sent a jolt through me. Years of careful construction, of carefully cultivated anonymity, threatened to crumble around me. “Don’t,” I snapped, my voice sharper than I intended. “Don’t call me that.” He raised an eyebrow, that infuriatingly graceful arch that used to make my stomach flip. "A name. It's just a name, Rory." "It's *not* just a name," I retorted, stepping closer, heedless of the proximity. The air between us crackled with a tension thick enough to choke on. "It's a past I'm trying to leave behind." The amusement vanished from his eyes, replaced by a hard, unyielding gaze. It mirrored back at me the raw, defensive anger I felt churning inside. “Some pasts are rather difficult to shake off, wouldn't you agree?” “What do you want, Lucien?” The question, when it came, was devoid of all pretense. Just a blunt, desperate plea for clarity. He didn't answer immediately. Instead, he moved further into the flat, his gaze sweeping over the room as if searching for something. He paused, his fingers tracing the spine of a particularly ancient-looking tome on a shelf. “I need a favour.” A favour. From the man who’d once held my heart in the palm of his hand, and then shattered it with a casual cruelty. The irony wasn't lost on me. "And why would I do anything for you?" He finally met my gaze, and for a fleeting moment, I saw a vulnerability there that I hadn’t seen in years. A flicker of the Lucien who’d once whispered poetry in my ear, who’d held me close during thunderstorms. A ghost of a memory that made my chest ache. “Because,” he said, his voice low and resonant, “you’re the only one who can.” I loathed the way my pulse quickened at his words. Loathed the way his presence seemed to unravel the tightly wound ball of my defenses. Loathed the fact that, despite everything, a foolish part of me still wanted to believe him. “What kind of favour?” He turned away, walking towards the small, threadbare sofa that dominated the living room. He ran a hand through his platinum blond hair, the gesture oddly nervous. “It concerns Avaros.” The word hit me like a physical blow. Avaros. His home. The demon realm from which his father hailed. The place I'd sworn to avoid at all costs. The thing that had driven us apart in the first place. "Avaros?" I repeated, my voice barely a whisper. "What does Avaros have to do with anything?" He didn’t look at me. "There's been a… disruption. Something's crossed over.” “Crossed over? What are you talking about?” “A ritual. It shouldn’t have been possible, but it was. And now… something has come through” “And you need me to… what? Exorcise a demon?” Sarcasm dripped from my tone. He finally turned back, his expression grim. “Not exactly. You have… a particular aptitude for unraveling things. Seeing patterns others miss. You used to be remarkably good at it.” My blood ran cold. He was talking about my gift. The ability to perceive the subtle, often invisible, threads of magic that connected our world to the supernatural. The ability I’d spent years suppressing, burying under layers of cynicism and practicality. “I don’t do that anymore,” I said, my voice firm despite the tremor in my hands. He took a step closer. “Avaros doesn’t forgive. And it doesn't forget. If this… thing… isn’t contained, it won't stay confined to London. It will spread.” His amber eye locked onto mine, the intensity of his gaze almost unbearable. “This isn't a request, Rory. It’s a necessity.” “And what makes you think I’d just jump back into that world?” I challenged, my voice trembling slightly. “You left me to deal with the fallout the last time! You vanished without a word! What makes you think I’d trust you again?” He flinched, a brief, almost imperceptible movement. It was the first crack in his carefully constructed facade. “I know I hurt you. I’m not asking for your forgiveness.” He paused, his gaze dropping to the floor. "I wouldn't expect it." "Then what *are* you asking for?" He looked up, his eyes filled with a desperate plea. "A chance to fix my mistakes." A beat of silence hung in the air, thick with unspoken history and unresolved feelings. The penthouse across the street cast a long shadow across the room, turning the already cramped space into a suffocating prison. Suddenly, a frantic scratching at the door interrupted the tense standoff. Silas, his face red and blotchy, shoved his way inside, his arms laden with discarded pizza boxes and empty beer bottles. “Right, Rory, you haven’t paid the rent for three months—" he started, then stopped abruptly, his eyes widening as he took in Lucien’s presence. "Well, look who it is. The Frenchman himself. What brings you to this neck of the woods?” Lucien’s expression remained impassive, but I saw a flicker of annoyance cross his face. “Just visiting,” he said smoothly. “Old friend.” Silas snorted. "Old friend, eh? You two always were a volatile mix." I glared at Silas, desperate to divert attention from the awkwardness of the situation. “He’s just here for a chat, Silas. Now, if you don’t mind—” Before I could finish, the scratching at the door grew more insistent. A low growl rumbled from the other side, a sound that sent a shiver crawling down my spine. It was no tabby cat. Lucien’s eyes narrowed, his hand instinctively moving to his cane. "What was that?" he asked, his voice low and dangerous. The doorknob began to rattle violently. Silas let out a yelp, dropping a pizza box with a resounding thud. "What in God's name...?" The door splintered, bursting inward with a deafening crash, revealing a hulking silhouette framed in the entranceway. It wasn't human. And it was definitely not friendly.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"he started then [then]"
1"he said smoothly [smoothly]"
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.378
leniency0.756
rawRatio0.118
effectiveRatio0.089
74.30% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1362
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
1
adverb"gently"
count1
2
adverb"carefully"
count2
3
adverb"tightly"
count1
4
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"gently"
2"carefully"
3"tightly"
4"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1362
totalAiIsms31
found
0
word"flicker"
count5
1
word"glint"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count1
3
word"simmering"
count1
4
word"potential"
count1
5
word"unreadable"
count1
6
word"whisper"
count2
7
word"eyebrow"
count1
8
word"stomach"
count1
9
word"tension"
count1
10
word"churning"
count1
11
word"tracing"
count1
12
word"shattered"
count1
13
word"fleeting"
count1
14
word"pulse"
count1
15
word"quickened"
count1
16
word"unravel"
count1
17
word"unraveling"
count1
18
word"intensity"
count1
19
word"constructed"
count1
20
word"facade"
count1
21
word"silence"
count1
22
word"unspoken"
count1
23
word"long shadow"
count1
24
word"down my spine"
count1
25
word"hulking"
count1
highlights
0"flicker"
1"glint"
2"familiar"
3"simmering"
4"potential"
5"unreadable"
6"whisper"
7"eyebrow"
8"stomach"
9"tension"
10"churning"
11"tracing"
12"shattered"
13"fleeting"
14"pulse"
15"quickened"
16"unravel"
17"unraveling"
18"intensity"
19"constructed"
20"facade"
21"silence"
22"unspoken"
23"long shadow"
24"down my spine"
25"hulking"
33.33% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches4
maxInWindow3
found
0
label"blood ran cold"
count1
1
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
2
label"hung in the air"
count1
3
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"blood ran cold"
1"eyes narrowed"
2"hung in the air"
3"sent a jolt through"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences104
matches
0"r with surprise"
74.18% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences104
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"managed to"
1"seemed to"
2"tried to"
3"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences131
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords2
totalWords1362
ratio0.001
matches
0"not"
1"are"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions19
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions17
wordCount1000
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.5
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
Golden1
Empress1
Tso1
Lie1
Books1
Laila1
Lucien5
Silas5
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Tso"
2"Books"
3"Laila"
4"Lucien"
5"Silas"
places
0"Golden"
globalScore1
windowScore1
53.85% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences78
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"tasted like ash, dry and unwelcome on my"
1"as if performing for an audience"
2"as if searching for something"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1362
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences131
matches(empty)
96.21% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs48
mean28.38
std13.81
cv0.487
sampleLengths
05
154
234
341
443
545
655
729
839
925
1035
1113
1222
1334
1436
1522
1641
1738
1849
1914
2041
214
2230
2339
2416
2512
267
2716
2814
2929
3041
3116
3247
3342
3440
356
3616
3736
3832
3941
4021
4112
4226
4335
4420
4519
464
4726
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences104
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs163
matches
0"was talking"
77.43% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences131
ratio0.023
matches
0"Those mismatched eyes—one amber, one black—didn’t flicker with surprise or apology."
1"The amber one – his demon eye – seemed to burrow into me, charting every flicker of emotion."
2"The smell of him – sandalwood and something subtly feral – flooded my tiny hallway."
81.04% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1000
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small, crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount51
adverbRatio0.051
lyAdverbCount24
lyAdverbRatio0.024
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences131
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences131
mean10.4
std6.25
cv0.601
sampleLengths
05
111
23
318
42
520
63
711
81
91
1018
1110
129
1322
1411
153
1611
178
181
199
204
2115
2215
2311
249
258
268
2720
2810
292
3016
3111
327
3322
348
351
361
3717
388
391
403
419
429
4313
449
454
4615
477
4813
4913
50.13% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.3511450381679389
totalSentences131
uniqueOpeners46
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences91
matches
0"Even the faint aroma of"
1"Instead, his gaze landed on"
2"Just a blunt, desperate plea"
3"Instead, he moved further into"
4"Suddenly, a frantic scratching at"
ratio0.055
48.57% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount39
totalSentences91
matches
0"He hadn’t changed."
1"He didn’t blink."
2"he said, tilting his head"
3"My grip tightened on the"
4"He ignored the denial."
5"he observed, glancing around the"
6"He didn’t acknowledge my attempt"
7"he remarked, his voice soft,"
8"My old name."
9"I snapped, my voice sharper"
10"He raised an eyebrow, that"
11"I retorted, stepping closer, heedless"
12"It mirrored back at me"
13"He didn't answer immediately."
14"He paused, his fingers tracing"
15"He finally met my gaze,"
16"he said, his voice low"
17"I loathed the way my"
18"He turned away, walking towards"
19"He ran a hand through"
ratio0.429
31.43% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount78
totalSentences91
matches
0"The words tasted like ash,"
1"He hadn’t changed."
2"He didn’t blink."
3"Those mismatched eyes—one amber, one"
4"The amber one – his"
5"he said, tilting his head"
6"A silver glint of a"
7"A faint smile tugged at"
8"My grip tightened on the"
9"Some poor sod was going"
10"A familiar routine, dusted off"
11"He ignored the denial."
12"The smell of him –"
13"A scent I’d spent years"
14"he observed, glancing around the"
15"Books overflowed from shelves, spilling"
16"Silas, perpetually aggrieved landlord and"
17"He didn’t acknowledge my attempt"
18"A flicker of something unreadable"
19"he remarked, his voice soft,"
ratio0.857
54.95% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences91
matches
0"Before I could finish, the"
ratio0.011
47.62% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences45
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"Still that slow, deliberate drawl, the precise way he articulated each syllable, as if performing for an audience."
1"Silas, perpetually aggrieved landlord and champion of all things bland, would hate anything that wasn’t beige."
2"Instead, he moved further into the flat, his gaze sweeping over the room as if searching for something."
3"A ghost of a memory that made my chest ache."
4"He turned away, walking towards the small, threadbare sofa that dominated the living room."
5"The ability to perceive the subtle, often invisible, threads of magic that connected our world to the supernatural."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount8
matches
0"he remarked, his voice soft, almost a whisper"
1"I snapped, my voice sharper than I intended"
2"he said, his voice low and resonant,"
3"I repeated, my voice barely a whisper"
4"His amber eye locked, the intensity of his gaze almost unbearable"
5"I challenged, my voice trembling slightly"
6"He paused, his gaze dropping to the floor"
7"he asked, his voice low and dangerous"
38.89% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"he observed (observe)"
1"I snapped (snap)"
2"I retorted (retort)"
3"I repeated (repeat)"
4"I challenged (challenge)"
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.222
leniency0.444
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.222
75.3971%