| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 17 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "he started then [then]" | | 1 | "he said smoothly [smoothly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 45 | | tagDensity | 0.378 | | leniency | 0.756 | | rawRatio | 0.118 | | effectiveRatio | 0.089 | |
| 74.30% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1362 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 7 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "gently" | | 2 | "carefully" | | 3 | "tightly" | | 4 | "suddenly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1362 | | totalAiIsms | 31 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | | | 24 | | word | "down my spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "flicker" | | 1 | "glint" | | 2 | "familiar" | | 3 | "simmering" | | 4 | "potential" | | 5 | "unreadable" | | 6 | "whisper" | | 7 | "eyebrow" | | 8 | "stomach" | | 9 | "tension" | | 10 | "churning" | | 11 | "tracing" | | 12 | "shattered" | | 13 | "fleeting" | | 14 | "pulse" | | 15 | "quickened" | | 16 | "unravel" | | 17 | "unraveling" | | 18 | "intensity" | | 19 | "constructed" | | 20 | "facade" | | 21 | "silence" | | 22 | "unspoken" | | 23 | "long shadow" | | 24 | "down my spine" | | 25 | "hulking" |
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| 33.33% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 4 | | maxInWindow | 3 | | found | | 0 | | label | "blood ran cold" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
| | 2 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
| | 3 | | label | "sent a shiver through" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "blood ran cold" | | 1 | "eyes narrowed" | | 2 | "hung in the air" | | 3 | "sent a jolt through" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 104 | | matches | | |
| 74.18% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 5 | | narrationSentences | 104 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "managed to" | | 1 | "seemed to" | | 2 | "tried to" | | 3 | "began to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 131 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 34 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 2 | | markdownWords | 2 | | totalWords | 1362 | | ratio | 0.001 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 19 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 17 | | wordCount | 1000 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 0.5 | | worstName | "Lucien" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Silas" | | discoveredNames | | Moreau | 1 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Tso | 1 | | Lie | 1 | | Books | 1 | | Laila | 1 | | Lucien | 5 | | Silas | 5 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Moreau" | | 1 | "Tso" | | 2 | "Books" | | 3 | "Laila" | | 4 | "Lucien" | | 5 | "Silas" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 53.85% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 78 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "tasted like ash, dry and unwelcome on my" | | 1 | "as if performing for an audience" | | 2 | "as if searching for something" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1362 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 131 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 96.21% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 48 | | mean | 28.38 | | std | 13.81 | | cv | 0.487 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 5 | | 1 | 54 | | 2 | 34 | | 3 | 41 | | 4 | 43 | | 5 | 45 | | 6 | 55 | | 7 | 29 | | 8 | 39 | | 9 | 25 | | 10 | 35 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 22 | | 13 | 34 | | 14 | 36 | | 15 | 22 | | 16 | 41 | | 17 | 38 | | 18 | 49 | | 19 | 14 | | 20 | 41 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 30 | | 23 | 39 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 12 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 16 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 29 | | 30 | 41 | | 31 | 16 | | 32 | 47 | | 33 | 42 | | 34 | 40 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 16 | | 37 | 36 | | 38 | 32 | | 39 | 41 | | 40 | 21 | | 41 | 12 | | 42 | 26 | | 43 | 35 | | 44 | 20 | | 45 | 19 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 26 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 104 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 163 | | matches | | |
| 77.43% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 131 | | ratio | 0.023 | | matches | | 0 | "Those mismatched eyes—one amber, one black—didn’t flicker with surprise or apology." | | 1 | "The amber one – his demon eye – seemed to burrow into me, charting every flicker of emotion." | | 2 | "The smell of him – sandalwood and something subtly feral – flooded my tiny hallway." |
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| 81.04% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1000 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small, crescent-shaped scar" |
| | adverbCount | 51 | | adverbRatio | 0.051 | | lyAdverbCount | 24 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.024 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 131 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 131 | | mean | 10.4 | | std | 6.25 | | cv | 0.601 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 5 | | 1 | 11 | | 2 | 3 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 2 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 1 | | 9 | 1 | | 10 | 18 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 22 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 1 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 15 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 20 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 16 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 22 | | 34 | 8 | | 35 | 1 | | 36 | 1 | | 37 | 17 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 1 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 9 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 13 | | 44 | 9 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 15 | | 47 | 7 | | 48 | 13 | | 49 | 13 |
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| 50.13% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 11 | | diversityRatio | 0.3511450381679389 | | totalSentences | 131 | | uniqueOpeners | 46 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | 0 | "Even the faint aroma of" | | 1 | "Instead, his gaze landed on" | | 2 | "Just a blunt, desperate plea" | | 3 | "Instead, he moved further into" | | 4 | "Suddenly, a frantic scratching at" |
| | ratio | 0.055 | |
| 48.57% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 39 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | 0 | "He hadn’t changed." | | 1 | "He didn’t blink." | | 2 | "he said, tilting his head" | | 3 | "My grip tightened on the" | | 4 | "He ignored the denial." | | 5 | "he observed, glancing around the" | | 6 | "He didn’t acknowledge my attempt" | | 7 | "he remarked, his voice soft," | | 8 | "My old name." | | 9 | "I snapped, my voice sharper" | | 10 | "He raised an eyebrow, that" | | 11 | "I retorted, stepping closer, heedless" | | 12 | "It mirrored back at me" | | 13 | "He didn't answer immediately." | | 14 | "He paused, his fingers tracing" | | 15 | "He finally met my gaze," | | 16 | "he said, his voice low" | | 17 | "I loathed the way my" | | 18 | "He turned away, walking towards" | | 19 | "He ran a hand through" |
| | ratio | 0.429 | |
| 31.43% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 78 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | 0 | "The words tasted like ash," | | 1 | "He hadn’t changed." | | 2 | "He didn’t blink." | | 3 | "Those mismatched eyes—one amber, one" | | 4 | "The amber one – his" | | 5 | "he said, tilting his head" | | 6 | "A silver glint of a" | | 7 | "A faint smile tugged at" | | 8 | "My grip tightened on the" | | 9 | "Some poor sod was going" | | 10 | "A familiar routine, dusted off" | | 11 | "He ignored the denial." | | 12 | "The smell of him –" | | 13 | "A scent I’d spent years" | | 14 | "he observed, glancing around the" | | 15 | "Books overflowed from shelves, spilling" | | 16 | "Silas, perpetually aggrieved landlord and" | | 17 | "He didn’t acknowledge my attempt" | | 18 | "A flicker of something unreadable" | | 19 | "he remarked, his voice soft," |
| | ratio | 0.857 | |
| 54.95% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | 0 | "Before I could finish, the" |
| | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 47.62% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 45 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "Still that slow, deliberate drawl, the precise way he articulated each syllable, as if performing for an audience." | | 1 | "Silas, perpetually aggrieved landlord and champion of all things bland, would hate anything that wasn’t beige." | | 2 | "Instead, he moved further into the flat, his gaze sweeping over the room as if searching for something." | | 3 | "A ghost of a memory that made my chest ache." | | 4 | "He turned away, walking towards the small, threadbare sofa that dominated the living room." | | 5 | "The ability to perceive the subtle, often invisible, threads of magic that connected our world to the supernatural." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 17 | | uselessAdditionCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "he remarked, his voice soft, almost a whisper" | | 1 | "I snapped, my voice sharper than I intended" | | 2 | "he said, his voice low and resonant," | | 3 | "I repeated, my voice barely a whisper" | | 4 | "His amber eye locked, the intensity of his gaze almost unbearable" | | 5 | "I challenged, my voice trembling slightly" | | 6 | "He paused, his gaze dropping to the floor" | | 7 | "he asked, his voice low and dangerous" |
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| 38.89% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 10 | | fancyCount | 5 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "he observed (observe)" | | 1 | "I snapped (snap)" | | 2 | "I retorted (retort)" | | 3 | "I repeated (repeat)" | | 4 | "I challenged (challenge)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 45 | | tagDensity | 0.222 | | leniency | 0.444 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.222 | |