| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 17 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "He gestured around [around]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 29 | | tagDensity | 0.586 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.059 | | effectiveRatio | 0.059 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1043 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 80.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 13.71% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1043 | | totalAiIsms | 18 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pristine" | | 1 | "flickered" | | 2 | "silence" | | 3 | "gloom" | | 4 | "palpable" | | 5 | "sense of" | | 6 | "echoing" | | 7 | "pulsed" | | 8 | "chaotic" | | 9 | "throbbed" | | 10 | "scanned" | | 11 | "surreal" | | 12 | "potential" | | 13 | "etched" | | 14 | "gleaming" | | 15 | "familiar" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 76 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 86.47% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 76 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 88 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 28 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1039 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 17 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 29 | | wordCount | 829 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 1.57 | | worstName | "Blackwood" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Blackwood" | | discoveredNames | | Quinn | 1 | | Thames | 1 | | Silas | 1 | | Blackwood | 13 | | Metropolitan | 1 | | Police | 1 | | Harlow | 10 | | Morris | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Quinn" | | 1 | "Silas" | | 2 | "Blackwood" | | 3 | "Police" | | 4 | "Harlow" | | 5 | "Morris" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.716 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 59 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "bookshelf that seemed to blend seamlessly into the cavern wall" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1039 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 43 | | mean | 24.16 | | std | 13.15 | | cv | 0.544 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 51 | | 1 | 47 | | 2 | 10 | | 3 | 24 | | 4 | 34 | | 5 | 25 | | 6 | 35 | | 7 | 32 | | 8 | 19 | | 9 | 50 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 31 | | 12 | 30 | | 13 | 26 | | 14 | 32 | | 15 | 40 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 43 | | 18 | 30 | | 19 | 28 | | 20 | 23 | | 21 | 12 | | 22 | 35 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 27 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 16 | | 28 | 19 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 20 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 34 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 47 | | 35 | 31 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 12 | | 38 | 28 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 38 | | 42 | 3 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 147 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 88 | | ratio | 0.057 | | matches | | 0 | "Ahead, a figure—Silas Blackwood—cut a sharp angle through the crowded street, his tailored coat somehow managing to remain pristine despite the downpour." | | 1 | "The air throbbed with a low, constant murmur of voices speaking in a dozen different languages—some she recognized, others she didn’t." | | 2 | "Cages held creatures she couldn’t immediately identify – feathered things with too many eyes, scaled beasts coiled around shimmering stones." | | 3 | "They passed a stall piled high with bone tokens—small, intricately carved pieces of bone, each etched with glowing runes." | | 4 | "But something— a nagging persistence, the memory of DS Morris and the unsolved case that haunted her—kept her rooted to the spot." |
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| 99.66% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 833 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 26 | | adverbRatio | 0.031212484993997598 | | lyAdverbCount | 17 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.02040816326530612 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 88 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 88 | | mean | 11.81 | | std | 6.19 | | cv | 0.524 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 14 | | 1 | 15 | | 2 | 22 | | 3 | 16 | | 4 | 24 | | 5 | 7 | | 6 | 10 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 15 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 17 | | 11 | 17 | | 12 | 13 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 15 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 28 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 14 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 22 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 26 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 16 | | 37 | 19 | | 38 | 21 | | 39 | 7 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 20 | | 42 | 23 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 13 | | 45 | 12 | | 46 | 14 | | 47 | 14 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 13 |
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| 88.64% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.5454545454545454 | | totalSentences | 88 | | uniqueOpeners | 48 | |
| 91.32% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | | 0 | "Just lengthened his stride, disappearing" | | 1 | "Then, she followed." |
| | ratio | 0.027 | |
| 83.01% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 25 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | | 0 | "She pumped her legs, the" | | 1 | "she bellowed, her voice swallowed" | | 2 | "He didn't even glance back." | | 3 | "It groaned in protest as" | | 4 | "she asked, her breath misting" | | 5 | "He paused at the bottom" | | 6 | "She drew her weapon, the" | | 7 | "He shrugged, a gesture both" | | 8 | "She hesitated at the foot" | | 9 | "She started down the stairs" | | 10 | "She found herself in a" | | 11 | "He gestured around with a" | | 12 | "she asked, keeping her weapon" | | 13 | "She ignored him." | | 14 | "He began to move through" | | 15 | "she asked, her voice hard" | | 16 | "They passed a stall piled" | | 17 | "He pressed a hidden latch," | | 18 | "he asked, gesturing into the" | | 19 | "Her training screamed at her" |
| | ratio | 0.342 | |
| 49.04% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 60 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | | 0 | "Harlow Quinn’s leather jacket offered" | | 1 | "She pumped her legs, the" | | 2 | "Something she was only beginning" | | 3 | "she bellowed, her voice swallowed" | | 4 | "He didn't even glance back." | | 5 | "Harlow followed without hesitation." | | 6 | "The alley opened into a" | | 7 | "It groaned in protest as" | | 8 | "Harlow reached the gate just" | | 9 | "she asked, her breath misting" | | 10 | "He paused at the bottom" | | 11 | "Amusement flickered in his eyes." | | 12 | "She drew her weapon, the" | | 13 | "He shrugged, a gesture both" | | 14 | "The stairs spiraled downwards, the" | | 15 | "A faint, almost sickly sweetness" | | 16 | "Harlow’s hand tightened on her" | | 17 | "Something felt wrong, profoundly so." | | 18 | "Blackwood started down the stairs," | | 19 | "She hesitated at the foot" |
| | ratio | 0.822 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 40.82% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 35 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "She pumped her legs, the soles of her boots slapping against the slick asphalt, gaining ground." | | 1 | "Just lengthened his stride, disappearing into a narrow alleyway reeking of stale beer and desperation." | | 2 | "Blackwood stopped abruptly in front of a towering bookshelf that seemed to blend seamlessly into the cavern wall." | | 3 | "But something— a nagging persistence, the memory of DS Morris and the unsolved case that haunted her—kept her rooted to the spot." | | 4 | "This could be a break in Blackwood’s activities, a chance to uncover the truth behind the strange occurrences that had plagued her for months." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 17 | | uselessAdditionCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "she asked, her breath misting in the cold air" | | 1 | "She drew, the metallic click sharp in the damp silence" | | 2 | "Blackwood started, his movements surprisingly graceful despite the narrow space" | | 3 | "She started, her boots echoing on the stone steps" | | 4 | "Blackwood said, his voice casually loud over the din" | | 5 | "she asked, her voice hard" | | 6 | "she asked, her voice low" | | 7 | "he responded, his eyes gleaming in the dim light" |
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| 46.55% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 12 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she bellowed (bellow)" | | 1 | "Blackwood explained (explain)" | | 2 | "he responded (respond)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 29 | | tagDensity | 0.414 | | leniency | 0.828 | | rawRatio | 0.25 | | effectiveRatio | 0.207 | |