Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY85ZRA98ZW11P55QYSSP3D

Run Details

Duration:
37.6s
Cost:
$0.000219
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The wrought iron gates of Richmond Park loomed, skeletal against the bruised twilight sky. Rory gripped the Heartstone Pendant beneath her jacket, its warmth a fragile comfort against the rising chill. She adjusted the strap of her delivery bag, the Golden Empress logo a stark reminder of her daytime life, a life that felt impossibly distant now. She pushed the gates open—a groan of rusted hinges—and stepped onto the gravel path. The park was deserted. Good. That’s what she wanted. Silas had grumbled about her going out so late, about needing to be sensible, but Rory hadn't the patience for his concern tonight. The air thickened immediately, a heavy, floral sweetness that clung to the back of her throat. Not the familiar scent of Richmond Park. Something…else. Something ripe and unsettling. She consulted the vague instructions scribbled on a scrap of paper—*Follow the old deer trail, past the Isabella Plantation, until you feel the shift*. She’d dismissed it as the ravings of a desperate old woman, but Eva insisted. Eva had always been drawn to the unusual, the forgotten. The path wound deeper, swallowed by ancient trees whose branches clawed at the fading light. Every rustle of leaves, every snap of a twig underfoot, felt amplified, deliberate. She told herself it was just the wind. Just the park settling in for the night. She passed the Isabella Plantation, its manicured beauty seeming grotesque under the oppressive sky – its usual riot of color muted, shadowed. Something about its stillness felt wrong, too perfect. The deer trail became less a path and more a suggestion, overgrown with thorny bushes and gnarled roots. Rory pushed through, ignoring the snag of branches against her skin, her gaze fixed on the deepening gloom ahead. The Heartstone pulsed against her chest, a subtle thrumming that grew stronger with each step. She resisted the urge to glance back. A sound. High pitched. Like wind chimes, maybe. But…wrong. Metal on metal, stretched thin, vibrating with an unnatural resonance. She stopped, every muscle coiled. Silence. Only the frantic hammering of her own blood in her ears. Then, again. Closer this time. “Hello?” she called out, her voice a breathless croak. The sound died immediately, absorbed by the suffocating quiet. She pressed on, the Heartstone now radiating a noticeable warmth. The trees grew denser, their trunks impossibly thick, their branches intertwined like grasping fingers. The sweet floral smell intensified, laced with a musky undertone she couldn’t quite place. Like wet earth and something…briny. She found them then. The standing stones. Ancient oaks, arranged in a ragged circle, their bark twisted and scarred with age. They weren’t marked on any map she’d ever seen. Their size defied sense – each one easily thirty feet tall, their crowns lost in the encroaching darkness. The Heartstone was singing now, a sustained, vibrant pulse against her skin. She was close. A movement at the periphery of her vision. A flicker. She spun around, heart leaping into her throat. Nothing. Just shadows playing tricks in the dim light. “Rory?” Her breath hitched. The voice. Childlike, whispery. Directly behind her. She didn’t turn. Didn’t dare. "Who's there?" Her voice trembled despite her best efforts. The voice giggled. It was a thin, brittle sound, like ice cracking. "Lost, little bird?" The hairs on her arms prickled. The Heartstone pulsed fiercely, almost burning against her skin. She could feel it, now—the shift. The air itself shimmered, distorting the shapes of the trees, bending the light into impossible angles. “I’m not lost,” she managed, her voice stronger this time, laced with a defiant edge. “I’m looking for something.” “Are you?” The voice was closer now, right beside her. She could feel a faint breath on her neck. Cold. She forced herself to turn. Slowly. There was nothing there. But the stones... they seemed different. The bark writhed with patterns, shifting and reforming like living things. The shadows around them deepened, coalescing into shapes that weren’t quite shapes, but felt…aware. Watching. Another sound. This time, not wind chimes. A shuffling. A dragging sound. Coming from within the circle of stones. She took a step back, her hand instinctively reaching for the Heartstone. The shuffling stopped. Then, a voice. Deep and resonant, unlike the childlike whisper. “She seeks the Weaver.” Rory scanned the darkness. Couldn’t see anything. “Who—who said that?” “We all did,” the voice replied, echoing from everywhere and nowhere. “The Grove remembers. The Grove *knows*.” Something brushed against her leg. She recoiled, stumbling backwards. It was soft. Like moss. But too… deliberate. She fumbled for her phone, her fingers clumsy with fear. No signal. Of course not. The floral scent intensified, almost overpowering now. She felt dizzy, nauseous. The ground beneath her feet seemed to warp, tilting at an unnatural angle. She heard a new sound, then. A rhythmic clicking. Like insects, but larger. Much larger. She turned, her gaze darting from shadow to shadow. And saw them. Not insects. Not exactly. They were…figures. Tall and gaunt, coalesced from the shadows. Their limbs were long and slender, their bodies draped in what looked like woven vines and leaves. They had no discernible faces, only smooth, featureless planes where eyes and mouths should be. And they were clicking. A complex, rhythmic clicking that seemed to vibrate within her bones. “The Weaver is patient,” one of the figures said, its voice a dry rustling of leaves. "But she grows weary of waiting.” Rory backed away, her breath catching in her throat. She stared at the figures, paralyzed by a cold, primal fear. The Heartstone pulsed frantically, a beacon of warmth in the encroaching darkness. “What do you want?” she whispered, her voice barely audible. The figures didn’t answer. They simply began to move, gliding silently through the shadows, their clicking growing louder, more insistent. They were circling her. Closing in. She closed her eyes, clutching the Heartstone tight, and waited.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences14
tagDensity0.429
leniency0.857
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
94.90% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount981
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount981
totalAiIsms29
found
0
word"loomed"
count1
1
word"warmth"
count3
2
word"chill"
count1
3
word"stark"
count1
4
word"reminder"
count1
5
word"familiar"
count1
6
word"oppressive"
count1
7
word"perfect"
count1
8
word"gloom"
count1
9
word"pulsed"
count3
10
word"resonance"
count1
11
word"silence"
count1
12
word"pulse"
count1
13
word"flicker"
count1
14
word"trembled"
count1
15
word"could feel"
count2
16
word"shimmered"
count1
17
word"whisper"
count1
18
word"scanned"
count1
19
word"echoing"
count1
20
word"rhythmic"
count2
21
word"complex"
count1
22
word"beacon"
count1
highlights
0"loomed"
1"warmth"
2"chill"
3"stark"
4"reminder"
5"familiar"
6"oppressive"
7"perfect"
8"gloom"
9"pulsed"
10"resonance"
11"silence"
12"pulse"
13"flicker"
14"trembled"
15"could feel"
16"shimmered"
17"whisper"
18"scanned"
19"echoing"
20"rhythmic"
21"complex"
22"beacon"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences126
matches
0"y with fear"
97.51% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences126
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences133
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen26
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords15
totalWords980
ratio0.015
matches
0"Follow the old deer trail, past the Isabella Plantation, until you feel the shift"
1"knows"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions30
wordCount934
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.86
worstName"Heartstone"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Heartstone"
discoveredNames
Richmond2
Park2
Heartstone8
Pendant1
Golden1
Empress1
Rory5
Isabella2
Plantation2
Eva2
Like4
persons
0"Rory"
1"Eva"
2"Like"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Isabella"
3"Plantation"
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences65
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"quite place"
1"quite shapes, but felt…aware"
2"looked like woven vines and leaves"
3"clicking that seemed to vibrate within her bones"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount980
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences133
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs45
mean21.78
std15.68
cv0.72
sampleLengths
057
146
276
344
430
537
622
719
822
918
1043
1148
1215
1327
141
1510
1614
1715
1837
1919
2020
216
224
2332
2419
2512
263
2714
2810
2917
3017
3115
3224
3315
349
353
364
3741
3815
3922
4032
4110
4220
436
4410
99.69% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences126
matches
0"was deserted"
1"been drawn"
74.21% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs159
matches
0"was singing"
1"were clicking"
2"were circling"
35.45% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences133
ratio0.038
matches
0"She pushed the gates open—a groan of rusted hinges—and stepped onto the gravel path."
1"She consulted the vague instructions scribbled on a scrap of paper—*Follow the old deer trail, past the Isabella Plantation, until you feel the shift*."
2"She passed the Isabella Plantation, its manicured beauty seeming grotesque under the oppressive sky – its usual riot of color muted, shadowed."
3"Their size defied sense – each one easily thirty feet tall, their crowns lost in the encroaching darkness."
4"She could feel it, now—the shift."
91.95% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount935
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount46
adverbRatio0.04919786096256684
lyAdverbCount16
lyAdverbRatio0.017112299465240642
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences133
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences133
mean7.37
std5.62
cv0.763
sampleLengths
014
117
226
314
44
51
64
723
816
97
101
114
1224
1314
1410
1515
1613
178
188
1922
208
2118
2219
2315
247
252
262
274
281
2910
305
311
3211
332
343
359
369
3710
3814
3914
405
414
423
4314
449
4518
4612
473
488
492
56.89% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.39097744360902253
totalSentences133
uniqueOpeners52
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount6
totalSentences100
matches
0"Just the park settling in"
1"Only the frantic hammering of"
2"Just shadows playing tricks in"
3"Directly behind her."
4"Then, a voice."
5"Of course not."
ratio0.06
68.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount38
totalSentences100
matches
0"She adjusted the strap of"
1"She pushed the gates open—a"
2"She consulted the vague instructions"
3"She’d dismissed it as the"
4"She told herself it was"
5"She passed the Isabella Plantation,"
6"She resisted the urge to"
7"She stopped, every muscle coiled."
8"she called out, her voice"
9"She pressed on, the Heartstone"
10"She found them then."
11"They weren’t marked on any"
12"Their size defied sense –"
13"She was close."
14"She spun around, heart leaping"
15"Her breath hitched."
16"She didn’t turn."
17"Her voice trembled despite her"
18"It was a thin, brittle"
19"She could feel it, now—the"
ratio0.38
65.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount79
totalSentences100
matches
0"The wrought iron gates of"
1"Rory gripped the Heartstone Pendant"
2"She adjusted the strap of"
3"She pushed the gates open—a"
4"The park was deserted."
5"That’s what she wanted."
6"Silas had grumbled about her"
7"The air thickened immediately, a"
8"Something ripe and unsettling."
9"She consulted the vague instructions"
10"She’d dismissed it as the"
11"Eva had always been drawn"
12"The path wound deeper, swallowed"
13"Every rustle of leaves, every"
14"She told herself it was"
15"She passed the Isabella Plantation,"
16"Something about its stillness felt"
17"The deer trail became less"
18"Rory pushed through, ignoring the"
19"The Heartstone pulsed against her"
ratio0.79
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences100
matches(empty)
ratio0
83.33% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences36
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"She adjusted the strap of her delivery bag, the Golden Empress logo a stark reminder of her daytime life, a life that felt impossibly distant now."
1"The air thickened immediately, a heavy, floral sweetness that clung to the back of her throat."
2"The Heartstone pulsed against her chest, a subtle thrumming that grew stronger with each step."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"she called out, her voice a breathless croak"
1"she managed, her voice stronger this time, laced with a defiant edge"
2"the figures said, its voice a dry rustling of leaves"
3"she whispered, her voice barely audible"
7.14% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she called out (call out)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences14
tagDensity0.286
leniency0.571
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.286
75.8027%