| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 6 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 14 | | tagDensity | 0.429 | | leniency | 0.857 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 94.90% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 981 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 981 | | totalAiIsms | 29 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "chill" | | 3 | "stark" | | 4 | "reminder" | | 5 | "familiar" | | 6 | "oppressive" | | 7 | "perfect" | | 8 | "gloom" | | 9 | "pulsed" | | 10 | "resonance" | | 11 | "silence" | | 12 | "pulse" | | 13 | "flicker" | | 14 | "trembled" | | 15 | "could feel" | | 16 | "shimmered" | | 17 | "whisper" | | 18 | "scanned" | | 19 | "echoing" | | 20 | "rhythmic" | | 21 | "complex" | | 22 | "beacon" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 126 | | matches | | |
| 97.51% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 126 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 133 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 26 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 2 | | markdownWords | 15 | | totalWords | 980 | | ratio | 0.015 | | matches | | 0 | "Follow the old deer trail, past the Isabella Plantation, until you feel the shift" | | 1 | "knows" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 30 | | wordCount | 934 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 0.86 | | worstName | "Heartstone" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Heartstone" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Heartstone | 8 | | Pendant | 1 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Rory | 5 | | Isabella | 2 | | Plantation | 2 | | Eva | 2 | | Like | 4 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Isabella" | | 3 | "Plantation" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 65 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "quite place" | | 1 | "quite shapes, but felt…aware" | | 2 | "looked like woven vines and leaves" | | 3 | "clicking that seemed to vibrate within her bones" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 980 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 133 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 45 | | mean | 21.78 | | std | 15.68 | | cv | 0.72 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 57 | | 1 | 46 | | 2 | 76 | | 3 | 44 | | 4 | 30 | | 5 | 37 | | 6 | 22 | | 7 | 19 | | 8 | 22 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 43 | | 11 | 48 | | 12 | 15 | | 13 | 27 | | 14 | 1 | | 15 | 10 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 15 | | 18 | 37 | | 19 | 19 | | 20 | 20 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 32 | | 24 | 19 | | 25 | 12 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 14 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 17 | | 30 | 17 | | 31 | 15 | | 32 | 24 | | 33 | 15 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 41 | | 38 | 15 | | 39 | 22 | | 40 | 32 | | 41 | 10 | | 42 | 20 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 10 |
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| 99.69% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 126 | | matches | | 0 | "was deserted" | | 1 | "been drawn" |
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| 74.21% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 159 | | matches | | 0 | "was singing" | | 1 | "were clicking" | | 2 | "were circling" |
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| 35.45% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 133 | | ratio | 0.038 | | matches | | 0 | "She pushed the gates open—a groan of rusted hinges—and stepped onto the gravel path." | | 1 | "She consulted the vague instructions scribbled on a scrap of paper—*Follow the old deer trail, past the Isabella Plantation, until you feel the shift*." | | 2 | "She passed the Isabella Plantation, its manicured beauty seeming grotesque under the oppressive sky – its usual riot of color muted, shadowed." | | 3 | "Their size defied sense – each one easily thirty feet tall, their crowns lost in the encroaching darkness." | | 4 | "She could feel it, now—the shift." |
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| 91.95% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 935 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 46 | | adverbRatio | 0.04919786096256684 | | lyAdverbCount | 16 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.017112299465240642 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 133 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 133 | | mean | 7.37 | | std | 5.62 | | cv | 0.763 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 14 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 26 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 1 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 23 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 1 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 24 | | 13 | 14 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 22 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 18 | | 22 | 19 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 1 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 1 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 14 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 14 | | 44 | 9 | | 45 | 18 | | 46 | 12 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 2 |
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| 56.89% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 11 | | diversityRatio | 0.39097744360902253 | | totalSentences | 133 | | uniqueOpeners | 52 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 100 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the park settling in" | | 1 | "Only the frantic hammering of" | | 2 | "Just shadows playing tricks in" | | 3 | "Directly behind her." | | 4 | "Then, a voice." | | 5 | "Of course not." |
| | ratio | 0.06 | |
| 68.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 38 | | totalSentences | 100 | | matches | | 0 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 1 | "She pushed the gates open—a" | | 2 | "She consulted the vague instructions" | | 3 | "She’d dismissed it as the" | | 4 | "She told herself it was" | | 5 | "She passed the Isabella Plantation," | | 6 | "She resisted the urge to" | | 7 | "She stopped, every muscle coiled." | | 8 | "she called out, her voice" | | 9 | "She pressed on, the Heartstone" | | 10 | "She found them then." | | 11 | "They weren’t marked on any" | | 12 | "Their size defied sense –" | | 13 | "She was close." | | 14 | "She spun around, heart leaping" | | 15 | "Her breath hitched." | | 16 | "She didn’t turn." | | 17 | "Her voice trembled despite her" | | 18 | "It was a thin, brittle" | | 19 | "She could feel it, now—the" |
| | ratio | 0.38 | |
| 65.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 79 | | totalSentences | 100 | | matches | | 0 | "The wrought iron gates of" | | 1 | "Rory gripped the Heartstone Pendant" | | 2 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 3 | "She pushed the gates open—a" | | 4 | "The park was deserted." | | 5 | "That’s what she wanted." | | 6 | "Silas had grumbled about her" | | 7 | "The air thickened immediately, a" | | 8 | "Something ripe and unsettling." | | 9 | "She consulted the vague instructions" | | 10 | "She’d dismissed it as the" | | 11 | "Eva had always been drawn" | | 12 | "The path wound deeper, swallowed" | | 13 | "Every rustle of leaves, every" | | 14 | "She told herself it was" | | 15 | "She passed the Isabella Plantation," | | 16 | "Something about its stillness felt" | | 17 | "The deer trail became less" | | 18 | "Rory pushed through, ignoring the" | | 19 | "The Heartstone pulsed against her" |
| | ratio | 0.79 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 100 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 83.33% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 36 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "She adjusted the strap of her delivery bag, the Golden Empress logo a stark reminder of her daytime life, a life that felt impossibly distant now." | | 1 | "The air thickened immediately, a heavy, floral sweetness that clung to the back of her throat." | | 2 | "The Heartstone pulsed against her chest, a subtle thrumming that grew stronger with each step." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 6 | | uselessAdditionCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "she called out, her voice a breathless croak" | | 1 | "she managed, her voice stronger this time, laced with a defiant edge" | | 2 | "the figures said, its voice a dry rustling of leaves" | | 3 | "she whispered, her voice barely audible" |
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| 7.14% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she called out (call out)" | | 1 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 14 | | tagDensity | 0.286 | | leniency | 0.571 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.286 | |