| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 12 | | tagDensity | 0.25 | | leniency | 0.5 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 552 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 9.42% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 552 | | totalAiIsms | 10 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "etched" | | 1 | "whisper" | | 2 | "loomed" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "pulse" | | 5 | "depths" | | 6 | "trembled" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 46 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 46 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 55 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 23 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 7 | | markdownWords | 7 | | totalWords | 546 | | ratio | 0.013 | | matches | | 0 | "memory" | | 1 | "shifted" | | 2 | "remembering" | | 3 | "watched" | | 4 | "song" | | 5 | "longing" | | 6 | "pleasure" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 48.58% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 25 | | wordCount | 493 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 2.03 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Fae | 2 | | Grove | 1 | | Aurora | 10 | | Nyx | 5 | | Isolde | 5 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 0.486 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 7.14% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 35 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "as if breathing" | | 1 | "looked like a mouth opening wide" |
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| 16.85% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 1.832 | | wordCount | 546 | | matches | | 0 | "not a voice, but a *song*" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 55 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 20 | | mean | 27.3 | | std | 20.61 | | cv | 0.755 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 64 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 63 | | 3 | 31 | | 4 | 19 | | 5 | 66 | | 6 | 10 | | 7 | 28 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 51 | | 10 | 13 | | 11 | 40 | | 12 | 43 | | 13 | 17 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 38 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 3 |
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| 97.64% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 46 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 83 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 5 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 55 | | ratio | 0.091 | | matches | | 0 | "The others followed—Nyx, their form flickering between solid and shadow, and Isolde, her silver hair catching the light like scattered stars." | | 1 | "She had expected something wild, something untamed—but this was different." | | 2 | "The trees bent backward, their branches twisting into something else—vines, then faces, then mouths opening in silent screams." | | 3 | "Not in the way of shadows—this was deeper." | | 4 | "Then, from the depths of the rift, a sound cut through the air—not a voice, but a *song*." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 499 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 16 | | adverbRatio | 0.03206412825651302 | | lyAdverbCount | 1 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.002004008016032064 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 55 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 55 | | mean | 9.93 | | std | 5.8 | | cv | 0.584 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 23 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 10 | | 6 | 10 | | 7 | 10 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 17 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 11 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 12 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 16 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 12 | | 20 | 18 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 13 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 12 | | 27 | 20 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 18 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 18 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 14 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 40.91% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.2545454545454545 | | totalSentences | 55 | | uniqueOpeners | 14 | |
| 72.46% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 46 | | matches | | 0 | "Then, from the depths of" |
| | ratio | 0.022 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 12 | | totalSentences | 46 | | matches | | 0 | "She stepped over the first" | | 1 | "She had expected something wild," | | 2 | "It carried *memory*." | | 3 | "she said, though no one" | | 4 | "She reached out, her fingers" | | 5 | "It hurt like *remembering*." | | 6 | "It was a void, a" | | 7 | "She turned back to the" | | 8 | "It was hunger." | | 9 | "It was *longing*." | | 10 | "It wasn’t hunger anymore." | | 11 | "It was *pleasure*." |
| | ratio | 0.261 | |
| 3.48% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 42 | | totalSentences | 46 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in the Fae" | | 1 | "She stepped over the first" | | 2 | "The others followed—Nyx, their form" | | 3 | "Nyx murmured, voice a whisper" | | 4 | "Aurora’s fingers tightened around the" | | 5 | "The cold metal pressed against" | | 6 | "She had expected something wild," | | 7 | "The air here didn’t just" | | 8 | "It carried *memory*." | | 9 | "The scent of old wine," | | 10 | "Isolde’s voice was a thread" | | 11 | "she said, though no one" | | 12 | "Nyx’s form rippled, their silhouette" | | 13 | "Aurora exhaled, her breath fogging" | | 14 | "The standing stones loomed ahead," | | 15 | "She reached out, her fingers" | | 16 | "The stone hummed, and for" | | 17 | "The trees bent backward, their" | | 18 | "Isolde’s hand shot out, gripping" | | 19 | "Aurora yanked her hand back," |
| | ratio | 0.913 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 46 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 25 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in the Fae Grove hummed with something older than the trees, something that coiled beneath Aurora’s ribs like a living thread." | | 1 | "She stepped over the first standing oak, its bark etched with spirals that shifted when she moved, as if breathing." | | 2 | "The others followed—Nyx, their form flickering between solid and shadow, and Isolde, her silver hair catching the light like scattered stars." | | 3 | "The scent of old wine, of salt and smoke, of something that had been burned and reborn." | | 4 | "The trees bent backward, their branches twisting into something else—vines, then faces, then mouths opening in silent screams." | | 5 | "The Heartstone pendant at her neck pulsed, warm against her skin, as if it knew what she didn’t." | | 6 | "Nyx’s form dissolved into shadow, their voice a whisper that slithered into Aurora’s mind." | | 7 | "The standing stones groaned, their carvings shifting again, this time into something that looked like a mouth opening wide." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx demanded, their voice a crack in the stillness" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Nyx demanded (demand)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 12 | | tagDensity | 0.25 | | leniency | 0.5 | | rawRatio | 0.667 | | effectiveRatio | 0.333 | |