Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY862MNP44T5AVR3A9DE5AE

Run Details

Duration:
2.8s
Cost:
$0.000256
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air in the Fae Grove hummed with something older than the trees, something that coiled beneath Aurora’s ribs like a living thread. She stepped over the first standing oak, its bark etched with spirals that shifted when she moved, as if breathing. The others followed—Nyx, their form flickering between solid and shadow, and Isolde, her silver hair catching the light like scattered stars. “This place isn’t just a grove,” Nyx murmured, voice a whisper that slithered around the edges of her words. “It’s a wound.” Aurora’s fingers tightened around the Fae-forged blade at her waist. The cold metal pressed against her skin, sharp and unyielding. She had expected something wild, something untamed—but this was different. The air here didn’t just carry the scent of damp earth and wildflowers. It carried *memory*. The scent of old wine, of salt and smoke, of something that had been burned and reborn. Isolde’s voice was a thread of static, her riddles weaving between the trees. “The Veil thins here,” she said, though no one had asked. “It’s where the boundary between worlds bleeds.” Nyx’s form rippled, their silhouette stretching like smoke caught in a draft. “Then we’re not just visitors. We’re trespassers.” Aurora exhaled, her breath fogging the air around her. The standing stones loomed ahead, their surfaces carved with symbols that pulsed faintly, as if alive. She reached out, her fingers brushing one of the raised runes. The stone hummed, and for a moment, the world around her *shifted*. The trees bent backward, their branches twisting into something else—vines, then faces, then mouths opening in silent screams. Isolde’s hand shot out, gripping Aurora’s wrist. “Do not touch.” Aurora yanked her hand back, the blade’s cold edge biting into her palm. The pain was sharp, but it didn’t hurt like a cut. It hurt like *remembering*. “What is that?” Nyx demanded, their voice a crack in the stillness. Aurora turned, her gaze locking onto the edge of the grove where the sky above them wasn’t sky at all. It was a void, a gaping wound in the world, the kind that shouldn’t exist. And beyond it, something moved. Not in the way of shadows—this was deeper. Something that *watched*. Isolde’s voice dropped to a whisper. “The rift. It’s been here for centuries.” Aurora’s pulse hammered in her throat. The Heartstone pendant at her neck pulsed, warm against her skin, as if it knew what she didn’t. She turned back to the standing stones, her breath coming faster. “What do you mean, centuries?” The symbols on the stones flared, casting jagged shadows that writhed like living things. Then, from the depths of the rift, a sound cut through the air—not a voice, but a *song*. A melody that wasn’t music. It was hunger. It was *longing*. Nyx’s form dissolved into shadow, their voice a whisper that slithered into Aurora’s mind. “It’s calling us.” Aurora’s grip on the blade tightened. “Then we leave.” Isolde’s fingers dug into her shoulder. “Not yet.” The ground beneath them trembled. The standing stones groaned, their carvings shifting again, this time into something that looked like a mouth opening wide. The air thickened, pressing against Aurora’s chest like a hand closing around her ribs. And then the song changed. It wasn’t hunger anymore. It was *pleasure*.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences12
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount552
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
9.42% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount552
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"etched"
count1
1
word"whisper"
count3
2
word"loomed"
count1
3
word"pulsed"
count2
4
word"pulse"
count1
5
word"depths"
count1
6
word"trembled"
count1
highlights
0"etched"
1"whisper"
2"loomed"
3"pulsed"
4"pulse"
5"depths"
6"trembled"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences46
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences46
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences55
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen23
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans7
markdownWords7
totalWords546
ratio0.013
matches
0"memory"
1"shifted"
2"remembering"
3"watched"
4"song"
5"longing"
6"pleasure"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
48.58% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions25
wordCount493
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity2.03
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Fae2
Grove1
Aurora10
Nyx5
Isolde5
Fae-forged1
Heartstone1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Nyx"
2"Isolde"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
globalScore0.486
windowScore0.667
7.14% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences35
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"as if breathing"
1"looked like a mouth opening wide"
16.85% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords1.832
wordCount546
matches
0"not a voice, but a *song*"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences55
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs20
mean27.3
std20.61
cv0.755
sampleLengths
064
122
263
331
419
566
610
728
812
951
1013
1140
1243
1317
149
158
1638
175
184
193
97.64% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences46
matches
0"been burned"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs83
matches
0"was *longing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences55
ratio0.091
matches
0"The others followed—Nyx, their form flickering between solid and shadow, and Isolde, her silver hair catching the light like scattered stars."
1"She had expected something wild, something untamed—but this was different."
2"The trees bent backward, their branches twisting into something else—vines, then faces, then mouths opening in silent screams."
3"Not in the way of shadows—this was deeper."
4"Then, from the depths of the rift, a sound cut through the air—not a voice, but a *song*."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount499
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount16
adverbRatio0.03206412825651302
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.002004008016032064
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences55
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences55
mean9.93
std5.8
cv0.584
sampleLengths
023
120
221
319
43
510
610
710
813
93
1017
1113
1211
137
1412
157
169
1716
1811
1912
2018
217
223
2313
2411
254
2612
2720
2815
295
308
313
326
337
346
3518
3611
375
3814
3918
405
413
423
4314
443
456
463
476
482
495
40.91% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.2545454545454545
totalSentences55
uniqueOpeners14
72.46% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences46
matches
0"Then, from the depths of"
ratio0.022
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount12
totalSentences46
matches
0"She stepped over the first"
1"She had expected something wild,"
2"It carried *memory*."
3"she said, though no one"
4"She reached out, her fingers"
5"It hurt like *remembering*."
6"It was a void, a"
7"She turned back to the"
8"It was hunger."
9"It was *longing*."
10"It wasn’t hunger anymore."
11"It was *pleasure*."
ratio0.261
3.48% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount42
totalSentences46
matches
0"The air in the Fae"
1"She stepped over the first"
2"The others followed—Nyx, their form"
3"Nyx murmured, voice a whisper"
4"Aurora’s fingers tightened around the"
5"The cold metal pressed against"
6"She had expected something wild,"
7"The air here didn’t just"
8"It carried *memory*."
9"The scent of old wine,"
10"Isolde’s voice was a thread"
11"she said, though no one"
12"Nyx’s form rippled, their silhouette"
13"Aurora exhaled, her breath fogging"
14"The standing stones loomed ahead,"
15"She reached out, her fingers"
16"The stone hummed, and for"
17"The trees bent backward, their"
18"Isolde’s hand shot out, gripping"
19"Aurora yanked her hand back,"
ratio0.913
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences46
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences25
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"The air in the Fae Grove hummed with something older than the trees, something that coiled beneath Aurora’s ribs like a living thread."
1"She stepped over the first standing oak, its bark etched with spirals that shifted when she moved, as if breathing."
2"The others followed—Nyx, their form flickering between solid and shadow, and Isolde, her silver hair catching the light like scattered stars."
3"The scent of old wine, of salt and smoke, of something that had been burned and reborn."
4"The trees bent backward, their branches twisting into something else—vines, then faces, then mouths opening in silent screams."
5"The Heartstone pendant at her neck pulsed, warm against her skin, as if it knew what she didn’t."
6"Nyx’s form dissolved into shadow, their voice a whisper that slithered into Aurora’s mind."
7"The standing stones groaned, their carvings shifting again, this time into something that looked like a mouth opening wide."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Nyx demanded, their voice a crack in the stillness"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Nyx murmured (murmur)"
1"Nyx demanded (demand)"
dialogueSentences12
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.333
66.5493%