Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY8633PHHYHVZA7CB0C2569

Run Details

Duration:
35.4s
Cost:
$0.000573
Provider:
Nebius

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Rain lashed at Harlow’s face, plastering strands of salt-and-pepper hair to her forehead. Each gust off the West End felt like a slap. She angled her jaw, a reflex honed over eighteen years on the force, and kept her eyes glued to the slick black leather of Herrera’s jacket. He moved with a deceptive grace, weaving through the dwindling crowds like a phantom. She’d been tailing him for three weeks, a slow burn of surveillance fueled by something more than instinct. The whispers around Silas, the vague anxieties of informants, and the sheer unnatural neatness of the clique’s alibis had all pointed to Herrera. He was the connector, the one who smoothed things over, who made problems disappear. She hadn’t been able to pin anything concrete on him, not yet, but tonight felt different. He’d met with a known fence in a shadowed alley, a transaction too quick to fully observe, but enough to trigger the prickle of certainty at the back of her neck. He cut sharply left, disappearing into the web of streets around Soho Square. Harlow followed, the worn leather of her watch strap cold against her skin. Her boots splashed through puddles reflecting the neon glow of a strip club, the garish pink light momentarily staining her vision. She risked a glance at her comms. Static. Perfect. Herrera was good, or he had help. He turned again, and she almost lost him. He wasn’t running, not exactly, but moving with a determined, almost urgent stride. He crossed Charing Cross Road and headed for a less savoury stretch of Brewer Street, the air thickening with the scent of stale beer and desperation. Then he stopped, abruptly, in front of a bar. The Raven’s Nest. A distinctive green neon sign above the entrance pulsed weakly in the rain, casting an eerie glow on the grimy brickwork. Harlow slowed, taking a moment to scan the scene. The bar wasn’t busy, just a handful of figures hunched over drinks in the dim interior. Nothing overtly suspicious. But she knew the place. It was a known haunt for… people who preferred to stay out of the light. Herrera didn’t go inside. He paused, glanced over his shoulder—not at her, thankfully—then walked straight *past* the entrance, towards a seemingly blank section of the wall beside it. He pressed a hand against the brick, and a section of the wall swung inward, revealing a dark opening. A doorway. Harlow’s jaw tightened. That wasn’t on any architectural plans she’d ever seen. She’d pulled every favor she could to get detailed layouts of buildings in this area, and there was no record of a hidden passage. This was new. This was *interesting*. She waited, letting a full five seconds tick by before approaching the bar. Silas, the owner, was wiping down the counter, his face impassive. He didn’t acknowledge her presence, didn’t even meet her gaze. “Silas,” she said, her voice crisp and authoritative. He finally looked up, his eyes flat and unreadable. “Detective Quinn. A late night for the Met.” “Just passing through,” she said, her tone carefully neutral. “See anything… unusual?” Silas shrugged, a carefully practiced gesture of indifference. "Soho's full of unusual, Detective. It's the charm." She glanced at the section of wall where Herrera had disappeared. “That wall. Always been there?” Silas’s eyes flickered towards the opening, then back to hers. “Structural. Part of the original building. Old place, this.” He resumed wiping the counter. “Now, if you’ll excuse me, I have customers.” Harlow didn’t push it. She knew when she was hitting a wall of deliberate obfuscation. Silas wasn’t going to tell her anything he didn’t want to. She reached the hidden doorway and hesitated. The air emanating from it was cold and damp, carrying a faint smell of mildew and something else… something metallic and strangely sweet. It wasn’t a smell she recognized. Her gut twisted. She pulled out her service weapon, checking the magazine. Standard procedure. But this wasn’t a standard operation. This wasn't a drug bust or a protection racket. This felt… different. The silence from her comms was unnerving. HQ wasn’t responding. She was on her own. Taking a deep breath, she stepped through the opening. The wall swung shut behind her with a soft click, plunging her into near darkness. She flicked on her tactical flashlight, the beam cutting through the gloom. She found herself in a narrow, stone-lined corridor, descending steeply into the earth. The air grew colder, the strange scent stronger. The walls were slick with moisture, and the silence was oppressive, broken only by the drip, drip, drip of water. She followed the corridor downwards, her flashlight revealing a series of turning passages. The architecture was ancient, predating anything she’d encountered in London. The stone felt wrong, cool and strangely porous. Then, she heard voices. Murmured conversations, the clinking of glass, and a low, rhythmic hum that resonated in her chest. She slowed, pressing herself against the damp stone wall. The corridor opened into a vast cavern, illuminated by a flickering array of gas lamps and strange, glowing crystals embedded in the walls. It was a marketplace, but unlike anything she’d ever imagined. Stalls were crammed with bizarre objects: intricately carved masks, antique weapons, bottles filled with luminescent liquids, and boxes overflowing with dried herbs and powders. People moved through the cavern, a motley assortment of faces and attire. Some were dressed in modern clothes, but others wore garments that seemed plucked from another era. She spotted a man with elaborate silver rings on every finger, haggling over a small, obsidian box. A woman with eyes that shimmered with an unnatural gold was examining a collection of antique daggers. This wasn't just unusual; it was impossible. And then she saw him. Herrera was at a stall near the center of the cavern, speaking with a vendor shrouded in dark robes. He was handing over a small package, accepting something in return. The vendor’s face was hidden within the folds of his hood, but Harlow could make out the glint of something metallic in his hand. A bone token. The entry requirement. She'd read about this place in a discredited occult case file. The Veil Market. A black market for the supernatural. Harlow felt a surge of adrenaline. She’d walked into a nest of vipers. A dangerous, hidden world operating beneath the streets of London. Her hand tightened around her weapon. She had a choice to make. She could turn back, report what she’d seen, and call in backup. But that would take time, and Herrera could be long gone. And something told her that the people in this market wouldn’t take kindly to a police investigation. The sweet, metallic scent hit her again, and she realized it wasn't just a smell. It was a warning. She was no longer hunting a suspect. She was an intruder. She took another deep breath, steeling her resolve. No going back now. She had to follow Herrera, to find out what he was buying, what he was involved in. She had to understand the truth, no matter how dangerous it might be. She moved forward, her flashlight beam cutting through the shadowy cavern, her boots echoing on the stone floor. She disappeared into the heart of the Veil Market, deeper into a world she wasn’t prepared for, but determined to expose.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences8
tagDensity0.375
leniency0.75
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
87.80% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1230
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count1
1
adverb"carefully"
count2
highlights
0"sharply"
1"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
18.70% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1230
totalAiIsms20
found
0
word"perfect"
count1
1
word"determined"
count2
2
word"pulsed"
count1
3
word"unreadable"
count1
4
word"charm"
count1
5
word"flickered"
count1
6
word"standard"
count2
7
word"silence"
count2
8
word"flicked"
count1
9
word"gloom"
count1
10
word"oppressive"
count1
11
word"rhythmic"
count1
12
word"resonated"
count1
13
word"shimmered"
count1
14
word"glint"
count1
15
word"resolve"
count1
16
word"echoing"
count1
highlights
0"perfect"
1"determined"
2"pulsed"
3"unreadable"
4"charm"
5"flickered"
6"standard"
7"silence"
8"flicked"
9"gloom"
10"oppressive"
11"rhythmic"
12"resonated"
13"shimmered"
14"glint"
15"resolve"
16"echoing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences111
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences111
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences116
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords2
totalWords1225
ratio0.002
matches
0"past"
1"interesting"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions37
wordCount1180
uniqueNames17
maxNameDensity0.68
worstName"Herrera"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Harlow7
West1
End1
Herrera8
Silas5
Soho1
Square1
Charing1
Cross1
Road1
Brewer1
Street1
Raven1
Nest1
London2
Veil2
Market2
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Herrera"
2"Silas"
3"Raven"
4"Market"
places
0"West"
1"End"
2"Soho"
3"Charing"
4"Cross"
5"Road"
6"Brewer"
7"Street"
8"Nest"
9"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
60.71% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences84
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"felt like a slap"
1"nce, towards a seemingly blank section of th"
2"seemed plucked from another era"
36.73% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.633
wordCount1225
matches
0"not yet, but tonight felt different"
1"not exactly, but moving with a determined, almost urgent stride"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences116
matches(empty)
94.76% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs30
mean40.83
std19.67
cv0.482
sampleLengths
063
1102
263
359
469
549
642
734
88
917
1012
1116
1216
1332
1426
1539
1644
1736
1841
1931
2029
2157
2262
2342
2450
2523
2652
2730
2842
2939
92.62% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences111
matches
0"were crammed"
1"were dressed"
2"was hidden"
3"was involved"
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount7
totalVerbs195
matches
0"wasn’t running"
1"was wiping"
2"was hitting"
3"wasn’t responding"
4"was examining"
5"was handing"
6"was buying"
93.60% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences116
ratio0.017
matches
0"He paused, glanced over his shoulder—not at her, thankfully—then walked straight *past* the entrance, towards a seemingly blank section of the wall beside it."
1"This wasn't just unusual; it was impossible."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1185
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"narrow, stone-lined corridor,"
adverbCount42
adverbRatio0.035443037974683546
lyAdverbCount18
lyAdverbRatio0.015189873417721518
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences116
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences116
mean10.56
std6.51
cv0.617
sampleLengths
013
110
226
314
418
523
614
716
831
913
1013
1121
127
131
141
157
168
1713
1826
199
203
2121
229
2316
243
255
266
279
284
2924
3019
312
323
339
3424
353
363
3713
3811
3910
408
419
428
439
443
458
468
4711
485
4910
37.36% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats15
diversityRatio0.3017241379310345
totalSentences116
uniqueOpeners35
63.49% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences105
matches
0"Then he stopped, abruptly, in"
1"Then, she heard voices."
ratio0.019
33.33% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount49
totalSentences105
matches
0"She angled her jaw, a"
1"He moved with a deceptive"
2"She’d been tailing him for"
3"He was the connector, the"
4"She hadn’t been able to"
5"He’d met with a known"
6"He cut sharply left, disappearing"
7"Her boots splashed through puddles"
8"She risked a glance at"
9"He turned again, and she"
10"He wasn’t running, not exactly,"
11"He crossed Charing Cross Road"
12"It was a known haunt"
13"He paused, glanced over his"
14"He pressed a hand against"
15"She’d pulled every favor she"
16"She waited, letting a full"
17"He didn’t acknowledge her presence,"
18"she said, her voice crisp"
19"He finally looked up, his"
ratio0.467
7.62% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount95
totalSentences105
matches
0"Rain lashed at Harlow’s face,"
1"Each gust off the West"
2"She angled her jaw, a"
3"He moved with a deceptive"
4"She’d been tailing him for"
5"The whispers around Silas, the"
6"He was the connector, the"
7"She hadn’t been able to"
8"He’d met with a known"
9"He cut sharply left, disappearing"
10"Harlow followed, the worn leather"
11"Her boots splashed through puddles"
12"She risked a glance at"
13"Herrera was good, or he"
14"He turned again, and she"
15"He wasn’t running, not exactly,"
16"He crossed Charing Cross Road"
17"The Raven’s Nest."
18"A distinctive green neon sign"
19"Harlow slowed, taking a moment"
ratio0.905
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences105
matches(empty)
ratio0
89.95% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences54
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"She followed the corridor downwards, her flashlight revealing a series of turning passages."
1"Murmured conversations, the clinking of glass, and a low, rhythmic hum that resonated in her chest."
2"A woman with eyes that shimmered with an unnatural gold was examining a collection of antique daggers."
3"She moved forward, her flashlight beam cutting through the shadowy cavern, her boots echoing on the stone floor."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"she said, her voice crisp and authoritative"
1"she said, her tone carefully neutral"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences8
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
73.6891%