Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY864BPYDD4Q81FSJWWHJJT

Run Details

Duration:
11.5s
Cost:
$0.000434
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The door to Eva’s flat creaked open before Aurora could even reach for the deadbolt, the hinges protesting like an old man’s joints. She froze, her fingers hovering over the brass knob, the scent of damp wool and something sharper—like ozone after a storm—wafting through the narrow gap. The air in the hallway thickened, pressing against her ribs. She knew that smell. Knew the way it curled around her like a promise, then a threat. “You’re late,” a voice drawled from the darkness, smooth as whiskey poured over ice. Aurora exhaled, her breath fogging the air between them. “Lucien.” His cane tapped against the linoleum floor as he stepped into the dim glow of the hallway lamp, the amber eye of his heterochromatic gaze locking onto hers. The other one—black as a void—seemed to drink her in, slow and deliberate. He wore the same tailored charcoal suit as always, the fabric clinging to his broad shoulders, the platinum blond hair slicked back with an effortless precision that made her fingers itch to mess it up. The cane in his hand was ivory, elegant, but she knew better. She’d seen the blade once, glinting in the firelight of some back-alley deal gone wrong. “You look like hell,” he said, tilting his head. “Or maybe that’s just how you always look.” Aurora rolled her eyes, but her pulse jumped. “And you look like you’ve been sleeping in a brothel.” A ghost of a smile touched his lips. “Flattery will get you everywhere, *ma chérie*.” She stepped back, pressing her shoulder against the doorframe, and the deadbolt clicked shut behind her. The flat was a maze of books and scrolls, the kind of place where Eva could lose herself for hours without ever leaving the room. Ptolemy, the tabby cat, lifted his head from his perch on the windowsill, tail flicking in disapproval. He didn’t like visitors. Lucien didn’t seem to notice. His gaze swept over the cluttered space, landing on the half-empty bottle of whiskey on the coffee table. “You’re drinking alone again.” “It’s not alone if you’re here,” she said, though her voice was lighter than she felt. He chuckled, low and rich, and Aurora’s stomach twisted. She hated how much she still remembered the sound of it. “You’re not here for the whiskey,” she said, crossing her arms. “What do you want?” Lucien leaned against the doorframe, his cane resting against the wall beside him. “I want to know why you’re running from me.” Aurora’s breath hitched. “I’m not running.” “Then why haven’t you answered my messages?” “Because I don’t owe you an explanation.” His smile faded, just slightly. “You always did have a sharp tongue.” “And you always did have a way of making me forget how to use it.” A beat of silence. The air between them crackled, charged with something neither of them named. Then Lucien pushed off the doorframe, his cane clicking against the floor as he moved deeper into the flat. “Sit down.” Aurora didn’t move. “I’d rather stand.” “Suit yourself.” He dropped into Eva’s armchair, the fabric groaning under his weight. “So. Tell me about this job you’ve taken.” Her fingers twitched at her sides. “What job?” “The one that’s keeping you so busy you can’t spare five minutes to return my calls.” Aurora’s jaw tightened. “I don’t work for anyone.” “Bullshit.” Lucien steepled his fingers, his amber eye gleaming in the lamplight. “You’ve been slipping into that warehouse district at night. I’ve seen you. You’re not delivering takeout anymore.” She should have known. Lucien had eyes everywhere, especially when he wanted something. And he always wanted something. “It’s nothing,” she said, though her voice lacked conviction. “It’s something,” he countered. “And I know you. You don’t get involved in things unless you’re either desperate or stupid.” Aurora exhaled through her nose. “I’m neither.” “Then why are you lying to me?” Because lying to you is easier than telling you the truth. Because the truth is messy, and you’ve always had a way of making it worse. She opened her mouth, then closed it again. Lucien watched her, unblinking, his black eye fixed on her like a laser. “Fine,” she said at last. “I’m working with someone. But it’s not what you think.” “What do I think?” His voice was dangerously calm. “That you’re playing with fire again? That you’re going to get yourself burned?” Aurora bristled. “I know what I’m doing.” “Do you?” Lucien pushed himself up from the chair, the movement fluid, predatory. “Or are you just running from the last time you got burned?” The words hit her like a slap. She stepped back, her shoulder brushing against the bookshelf. “That’s not fair.” “Isn’t it?” He took a step closer, the cane tapping against the floor. “You left me, Rory. Just like that. No warning. No goodbye. And now you show up in my city, playing heroine in some back-alley scheme, and you expect me to just… what? Forgive you?” Aurora’s chest ached. “It wasn’t like that.” “Wasn’t it?” Lucien’s voice dropped, rough with something she couldn’t name. “You were supposed to be my anchor. My safe place. And then you just… disappeared.” “I had reasons.” “Bullshit.” He reached out, his fingers brushing against her wrist, just above the scar. The one from the childhood accident she’d never told him about. “You always had reasons. But you never told me.” Aurora pulled away, her skin tingling where his fingers had touched her. “You didn’t want to hear them.” “Maybe not,” he admitted, his voice low. “But I want to now.” She looked away, her gaze landing on the half-empty whiskey bottle. “You know, this is a terrible idea.” “Is it?” Lucien’s hand closed around hers, his grip firm but not unkind. “Because I think we both know it’s not.” Aurora’s breath hitched. She could feel the heat of his body, the way it called to hers like a siren’s song. She could remember the way he used to kiss her, the way his hands had felt against her skin, the way he’d made her feel alive in a way no one else ever had. But then there was the hurt, the way he’d walked away when she’d needed him most. The way he’d let her go without a fight. “You’re playing with fire,” she said again, her voice barely above a whisper. Lucien’s thumb traced the inside of her wrist, just above the scar. “I’ve always been a sucker for fire.” Aurora’s pulse roared in her ears. She should have walked away. She should have told him to leave, to go back to whatever game he was playing. But the way he looked at her, the way his fingers traced patterns on her skin—it was like a drug, one she’d never been able to resist. “What do you want from me, Lucien?” she asked, her voice trembling. He didn’t answer right away. Instead, he leaned in, his breath warm against her ear. “I want you to stop running.” Aurora closed her eyes. She could feel the weight of his words, the way they settled into her bones. She could feel the pull between them, the way it had always been, the way it would always be. When she opened her eyes again, Lucien was closer, his face mere inches from hers. His amber eye burned into hers, his black one dark with something she couldn’t name. “Tell me,” he murmured, his lips brushing against her temple. “Tell me what you’re really doing.” Aurora’s heart pounded against her ribs. She could lie. She could tell him anything. But she knew him. She knew that if she lied, he would see right through it. So she didn’t. Instead, she reached up and pulled him down, her lips crashing against his in a kiss that was desperate and hungry and full of all the things they’d never said. Lucien groaned, his hands tangling in her hair as he pulled her closer, his body pressing against hers. She could feel the heat of him, the way he burned through her like a wildfire. When they finally broke apart, Aurora’s breath came in ragged gasps. Lucien’s chest rose and fell with his own, his gaze locked onto hers. “You’re still running,” he said, his voice rough. Aurora’s fingers trembled against his jacket. “I’m not running from you.” “No,” Lucien agreed, his thumb brushing away a tear she hadn’t even realized had fallen. “But you’re running from something else.” Aurora looked away, her gaze landing on the bookshelf. She could feel his eyes on her, see the way they searched her face, trying to find the truth in her eyes. “What is it?” he asked, his voice gentle now. Aurora swallowed hard. “I’m afraid.” “Of what?” She looked back at him, her eyes burning with unshed tears. “Of losing you again.” Lucien’s expression softened, his hand cupping her face. “You won’t.” Aurora’s breath hitched. She could feel the weight of his words, the way they settled into her soul. She could feel the way he held her, the way he made her feel safe, even when she knew she wasn’t. “Promise me,” she whispered. Lucien’s lips brushed against hers, his voice a whisper against her skin. “I promise.” And for the first time in a long time, Aurora believed him.
created_at"2026-02-20T19:24:50.434Z" 2/20/2026, 7:24:50 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags22
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Lucien’s hand closed around [around]"
1"she said again [again]"
dialogueSentences69
tagDensity0.319
leniency0.638
rawRatio0.091
effectiveRatio0.058
90.39% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1561
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
2
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"barely above a whisper"
2"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
26.33% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1561
totalAiIsms23
found
0
word"effortless"
count1
1
word"glinting"
count1
2
word"pulse"
count2
3
word"stomach"
count1
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"charged"
count1
6
word"weight"
count3
7
word"gleaming"
count1
8
word"could feel"
count7
9
word"whisper"
count2
10
word"traced"
count2
11
word"trembled"
count1
highlights
0"effortless"
1"glinting"
2"pulse"
3"stomach"
4"silence"
5"charged"
6"weight"
7"gleaming"
8"could feel"
9"whisper"
10"traced"
11"trembled"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"weight of words/silence"
count2
highlights
0"the weight of his words"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences107
matches
0"was desperate"
76.10% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences107
filterMatches
0"feel"
1"see"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"seem to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences153
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords2
totalWords1553
ratio0.001
matches
0"ma chérie"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions28
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
59.01% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions40
wordCount1154
uniqueNames3
maxNameDensity1.82
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Eva3
Aurora21
Lucien16
persons
0"Eva"
1"Aurora"
2"Lucien"
places(empty)
globalScore0.59
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences75
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1553
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences153
matches
0"knew that smell"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs73
mean21.27
std17.63
cv0.829
sampleLengths
075
114
210
3103
417
518
615
762
827
916
1020
1115
1222
136
147
157
1612
1715
1837
196
2021
218
2216
238
2429
2518
269
2720
287
297
3026
3121
3215
3322
347
3525
3619
3747
387
3926
403
4134
4218
4312
4418
4521
4655
4725
4813
4919
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences107
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs211
matches
0"was playing"
86.83% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences153
ratio0.02
matches
0"She froze, her fingers hovering over the brass knob, the scent of damp wool and something sharper—like ozone after a storm—wafting through the narrow gap."
1"The other one—black as a void—seemed to drink her in, slow and deliberate."
2"But the way he looked at her, the way his fingers traced patterns on her skin—it was like a drug, one she’d never been able to resist."
99.58% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1161
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount47
adverbRatio0.040482342807924204
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.004306632213608958
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences153
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences153
mean10.15
std6.76
cv0.666
sampleLengths
023
125
210
34
413
514
69
71
828
913
1035
1112
1215
139
148
158
1610
178
187
1916
2025
2117
224
235
2418
254
2616
279
2811
2911
304
3113
329
333
343
357
367
375
387
3915
404
4112
4219
432
443
453
4613
478
486
492
44.77% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.24183006535947713
totalSentences153
uniqueOpeners37
96.15% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences104
matches
0"Then Lucien pushed off the"
1"Instead, he leaned in, his"
2"Instead, she reached up and"
ratio0.029
39.23% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount47
totalSentences104
matches
0"She froze, her fingers hovering"
1"She knew that smell."
2"His cane tapped against the"
3"He wore the same tailored"
4"She’d seen the blade once,"
5"he said, tilting his head"
6"She stepped back, pressing her"
7"He didn’t like visitors."
8"His gaze swept over the"
9"she said, though her voice"
10"He chuckled, low and rich,"
11"She hated how much she"
12"she said, crossing her arms"
13"His smile faded, just slightly."
14"He dropped into Eva’s armchair,"
15"Her fingers twitched at her"
16"She should have known."
17"she said, though her voice"
18"She opened her mouth, then"
19"she said at last"
ratio0.452
27.31% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount90
totalSentences104
matches
0"The door to Eva’s flat"
1"She froze, her fingers hovering"
2"The air in the hallway"
3"She knew that smell."
4"a voice drawled from the"
5"Aurora exhaled, her breath fogging"
6"His cane tapped against the"
7"The other one—black as a"
8"He wore the same tailored"
9"The cane in his hand"
10"She’d seen the blade once,"
11"he said, tilting his head"
12"Aurora rolled her eyes, but"
13"A ghost of a smile"
14"She stepped back, pressing her"
15"The flat was a maze"
16"Ptolemy, the tabby cat, lifted"
17"He didn’t like visitors."
18"Lucien didn’t seem to notice."
19"His gaze swept over the"
ratio0.865
96.15% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences104
matches
0"Because lying to you is"
1"Because the truth is messy,"
ratio0.019
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences46
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"He wore the same tailored charcoal suit as always, the fabric clinging to his broad shoulders, the platinum blond hair slicked back with an effortless precision…"
1"Instead, she reached up and pulled him down, her lips crashing against his in a kiss that was desperate and hungry and full of all the things they’d never said."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags22
uselessAdditionCount14
matches
0"she said, though her voice was lighter than she felt"
1"He dropped, the fabric groaning under his weight"
2"Lucien steepled, his amber eye gleaming in the lamplight"
3"she said, though her voice lacked conviction"
4"Lucien pushed, the movement fluid, predatory"
5"He took, the cane tapping against the floor"
6"He reached out, his fingers brushing against her wrist, just above the scar"
7"he admitted, his voice low"
8"Lucien’s hand closed around, his grip firm but not unkind"
9"she said again, her voice barely above a whisper"
10"she asked, her voice trembling"
11"he murmured, his lips brushing against her temple"
12"he said, his voice rough"
13"he asked, his voice gentle now"
77.54% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags14
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"a voice drawled (drawl)"
1"he admitted (admit)"
2"he murmured (murmur)"
3"Lucien agreed (agree)"
4"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences69
tagDensity0.203
leniency0.406
rawRatio0.357
effectiveRatio0.145
82.8689%