"At twenty-five, she'd fled worse than riddles—abusive exes, dead-end jobs slinging dim sum for Yu-Fei—but realms beyond the Veil?"
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"Nyx slipped beside Rory, their shadowy form brushing her arm—a cool, insubstantial touch that sent a shiver racing down her spine."
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"Isolde stepped through gracefully, her Fae-forged blade— that slender, leaf-shaped dagger of moonsilver—glinting coldly at her belt, a gift she'd pressed into Rory's hand earlier but now reclaimed for the crossing."
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"The land unfolded before them like a fever dream of indulgence. Sprawling vineyards rolled out in endless waves, grapes swollen to the size of fists, hanging heavy from trellises that twisted like living serpents. Orchards dotted the landscape, trees laden with fruits Rory couldn't name—pear-shaped orbs pulsing with inner light, berries that wept crimson juice at the slightest breeze. The air hummed with life, but not the comforting kind; it buzzed with excess, a cloying sweetness that coated her tongue unbidden. Distant laughter echoed, mingled with the clatter of platters and the sizzle of fats on hot stones. Feasts, endless and grand, she thought, her stomach twisting despite the allure."
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"The vineyards gave way to manicured gardens where exotic herbs writhed in planters of polished bone—wait, bone?"
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"But her lavender eyes darted to the horizon, where grand pavilions rose like mirages—tents of silken gauze billowing in a breeze that carried moans of pleasure and pain intertwined."
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"A cluster of trees ahead bore fruits that sang—soft, melodic chimes emanating from their skins as wind rustled the leaves."
8
"Pies overflowed with fillings that shifted colors—emerald custards swirling to sapphire creams."
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"Rory's mouth watered involuntarily, the scents assaulting her—cinnamon and brimstone, honey and ash."
10
"The man's eyes rolled back, body convulsing in ecstasy or torment; she couldn't tell."
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"\"Gluttony devours the devourer, in circles unending.\" No footprints marked her passage, even on the tiled mosaic floor depicting Belphegor's sigil—a bloated figure lounging amid vines."
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"Rory felt the pull then, a subtle hunger gnawing at her edges, not for food but for more—more sights, more secrets."
13
"\"Demonic bindings, thick as chains.\" The Shade extended a tendril, testing the edge; it recoiled with a sizzle, like water on hot iron."
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"This place was wondrous, yes— a paradise of flavors and forms Earth could only dream of—but laced with horror."
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"She thought of her flat above Silas' bar, the simple deliveries for Golden Empress; this excess mocked such normalcy."
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"Tucked in a alcove of orchard trees, Rory spotted a pedestal of twisted ivory, atop which rested a cluster of orbs not unlike the singing fruits—but these pulsed with the same crimson glow as her pendant."
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"She reached out, but Isolde's hand—cool and firm—stayed her."
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"Thousands of figures—demons with horned crowns, souls in silken rags—reclined on cushions of living moss, devouring platters that refilled themselves."
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"Wonder warred with dread; Rory's scar itched fiercely now, a reminder of fragility in this realm of excess."
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"They'd come for answers—about the pendant, about rifts tearing the Veil—but Dymas clawed at her resolve, promising delights that masked chains."
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"Nyx's hand—shadowy, reassuring—grazed her shoulder."
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"This place was a labyrinth of temptation, but somewhere in its glut lay the key to sealing the rifts—or unleashing worse."
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"Aurora's fingers tightened around the Heartstone Pendant as the faint shimmer of the Veil tore open before them, a rip in the fabric of reality that hummed like…"
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"The air in the Fae Grove had already felt charged, thicker than London's fog, laced with the perpetual bloom of wildflowers that defied the autumn chill outside…"
2
"Rory stepped forward first, her boots crunching on the mossy ground marked by those ancient oak standing stones."
3
"The Half-Fae seer glided forward without a sound, her long silver hair trailing like a comet's tail, leaving no imprint on the dew-kissed grass."
4
"Nyx slipped beside Rory, their shadowy form brushing her arm—a cool, insubstantial touch that sent a shiver racing down her spine."
5
"She blinked, steadying herself on a vine-choked archway that hadn't been there moments ago."
6
"The land unfolded before them like a fever dream of indulgence. Sprawling vineyards rolled out in endless waves, grapes swollen to the size of fists, hanging he…"
7
"She yanked her hand back, the small crescent scar on her left wrist itching as if remembering its own origin."
8
"But her lavender eyes darted to the horizon, where grand pavilions rose like mirages—tents of silken gauze billowing in a breeze that carried moans of pleasure …"
9
"A cluster of trees ahead bore fruits that sang—soft, melodic chimes emanating from their skins as wind rustled the leaves."
10
"The nearest orb, a swollen mango-like thing veined with gold, vibrated under her palm, its song a haunting lullaby that tugged at memories of her mother's Welsh…"
11
"Nyx paused, their shadowy form rippling as if absorbing the sound."
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"Further on, they stumbled upon a clearing dominated by a colossal banquet table, stretching fifty feet if it was an inch, heaped with delicacies that defied log…"
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"Pies overflowed with fillings that shifted colors—emerald custards swirling to sapphire creams."
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"One, a helbound soul Rory guessed, contracted from some earthly kitchen, plated a dish of wriggling tendrils that steamed with infernal heat."
15
"Vines parted like welcoming arms, but thorns pricked Rory's skin, drawing beads of blood that the plants seemed to drink with greedy rustles."
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"They crested a hill overlooking a vast amphitheater, where a feast unfolded on a scale that stole Rory's breath."
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"Thousands of figures—demons with horned crowns, souls in silken rags—reclined on cushions of living moss, devouring platters that refilled themselves."
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"Music swelled, flutes carved from thighbones piping tunes that burrowed into the mind, urging indulgence."