Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY86CBKXZE2RRHV5Y25SYR5

Run Details

Duration:
24.2s
Cost:
$0.001440
Provider:
xAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Detective Harlow Quinn descended the rusted metal stairs into the bowels of the abandoned Tube station beneath Camden. Her worn leather watch ticked against her wrist as she gripped the railing, flashlight beam cutting through the damp gloom. The air thickened with the scent of mold and something sharper—ozone, like a storm trapped underground. Footsteps echoed ahead, sharp and deliberate, not the shuffle of uniforms she'd expected. She pushed through a chain-link barrier, warped as if something heavy had rammed it aside. The platform stretched out, littered with crates stamped in languages she didn't recognize—runes, maybe, or just faded export marks. Shadows clung to the walls, where flickering lanterns hung from hooks, their flames unnaturally steady. This wasn't just any derelict station; whispers in the precinct had called it the Veil Market, a myth for occult nuts. But bodies didn't lie, and the report on her phone described one: male, mid-thirties, throat slashed, found amid stalls of what looked like junk—vials, amulets, brass contraptions. Uniforms milled near the center, their radios crackling static. Harlow's boots scraped against cracked tiles as she approached the taped-off area. The victim lay sprawled beside an overturned table, blood pooled in a perfect arc, soaking into the grit. No weapon in sight. His eyes stared up, wide and glassy, fingers curled around... nothing. Empty. "Quinn." A voice cut through the murmur, familiar but laced with tension. Eva Kowalski stepped from behind a stack of crates, her curly red hair tucked behind one ear in that nervous tic Harlow had clocked during their one prior interview. Round glasses perched on her freckled nose, and her worn leather satchel bulged with books, slung over one shoulder. "You made good time. Underground's a beast this late." Harlow's sharp jaw tightened. Eva worked the British Museum's archives, not forensics. Last time they'd crossed paths, she'd been digging into that clique— the one with the girl, Aurora, and their shady dealings. "Kowalski. What the hell are you doing here? This is a crime scene, not a field trip." Eva adjusted her satchel, green eyes flicking to the body. "Consulting. Museum got a tip about artifacts down here. Your lot called me in when they found... this." She gestured at the victim, voice steady but fingers twisting a loose thread on her sleeve. "Looks like a robbery gone wrong. See the smashed vials? Probably after the goods." Harlow crouched beside the tape, her brown eyes scanning the scene. The blood arc gleamed under the lanterns, edges crisp, no spatter on the nearby crates. Unusual. Slashing throats usually sent red everywhere—walls, floor, the killer's shoes. Here, it contained itself, like poured from a bucket. She pulled on gloves, leaned closer. The victim's collar bore faint etchings, sigils maybe, glowing faintly under her light before fading. Trick of the beam? Her military bearing kept her steady, but the watch on her wrist felt heavier, a reminder of Morris, gone three years in shadows she couldn't explain. "Robbery," Harlow repeated, standing. She circled the body, boot nudging a brass casing half-buried in dust. Small, like a pocket watch, face etched with markings that matched the sigils on the man's neck. Patina of verdigris clung to it, old but not rusted through. "No forced entry on those crates. And the stalls—look at them. Organized chaos, but nothing rifled. Killer didn't take much." Eva knelt opposite, pulling a notebook from her satchel. "Maybe he got what he came for. This market... it's not your standard flea. People trade in things that don't play by rules. Enchanted bits, alchemicals. That brass thing? Could be a Veil Compass. Points to rifts, portals. Rare. Worth a fortune." Harlow shot her a look, salt-and-pepper hair catching the lantern light. "Portals. Right. And I'm the Queen. Stick to history books, Kowalski." But she pocketed the compass anyway, feeling its cool weight. The needle inside spun lazily, not north, but toward a shadowed alcove at the platform's edge. She ignored it, focused on the body. Wounds shallow, precise, but the throat gash—clean, almost surgical. No hesitation marks. Defensive wounds? His hands clean, nails unbroken. A uniform approached, notepad in hand. "Ma'am, witnesses scarce. Couple of vendors bolted when we showed. Said the market moves every full moon, bone token to enter. Victim's ID says Marcus Hale, small-time dealer in antiquities. No priors, but ties to occult circles." Harlow nodded, eyes narrowing on the blood pool. She traced its edge with her finger, gloved tip coming away dry beyond the tape. "Blood's not soaking in right. Too contained. And the temp—feels colder here than up top." She glanced at Eva, who scribbled furiously. "You buy this supernatural bollocks?" Eva stood, tucking hair again. "Hale traded here. If someone's after the Compass, it explains the hit. That thing's attuned to energy—supernatural hotspots. Steal it, you control access to places like this." Harlow paced, flashlight sweeping the alcove the needle pointed to. Bricks there bulged, mortar loose, as if pushed inward recently. She pressed a palm against one—cold, vibrating faintly. "Colleague of yours? Or just convenient timing?" The words hung, accusation sharp. Eva's research, Aurora's crew—Harlow's gut screamed connection. "Not a colleague." Eva's voice dropped, green eyes meeting brown. "But I've been here before. Research. Hale... he sourced items for the archives. This isn't random. Look at the sigils on his neck—they're protective. Meant to ward off shades, entities from the other side. If he was wearing them, someone bypassed them clean." Harlow grunted, wedging a boot against the loose brick. It shifted, revealing a narrow gap, darkness beyond yawning like a throat. Dust motes swirled, carrying that ozone tang stronger now. She shone her light inside—empty, save for scuff marks in the silt, leading deeper. No blood trail. Killer vanished? Or never came from that direction? "See?" Eva pressed closer, peering over her shoulder. "Rift. The Compass would've led him here. Maybe Hale activated it, pulled something through. Or someone used it to slip in." Harlow's jaw clenched. Morris's case flashed— unexplained shadows, partner gone without a trace. She pulled the compass from her pocket, needle steady on the gap. It ticked, almost audible, syncing with her watch. "Evidence says blade work. No entity footprints, no spectral residue." But the vibration under her palm hummed, syncing with her pulse. She stepped back, mind racing. Blood arc: not slashed, displaced. Like the body shifted post-mortem. Hands empty— but the compass was on the ground nearby. Hale grabbed for it? No, clutched nothing. "Quinn." Eva's tone sharpened, notebook forgotten. "The pool—it's not drying. Check the edges." Harlow knelt again, scraping a sample into a vial from her kit. The blood clung, viscous, no clotting. Fresh, but the body's rigor suggested hours old. Timeline off. She stood, facing Eva. "You interpret this as magic. I see staging. Killer drains him elsewhere, dumps here to throw us off the market angle. But why leave the compass?" Eva's freckles stood out under the lanterns. "Because it's bait. Or cursed. Hale knew risks—trading with shades. That artisan who made it? Not human. Points true, but draws trouble. Opens doors." Harlow's eyes flicked to the uniforms, their faces pale in the glow. One coughed, muttering about bad air. She waved him off. "Get samples from every stall. Kowalski, walk me through this market. What's Hale's angle?" Eva hesitated, then nodded, leading her past crates of vials bubbling without heat, amulets pulsing faint light. "Veil Market's hidden. Bone token gets you in—carved from something old, alive once. Sells info, potions, tools like the Compass. Hale dealt in rifts—locations where worlds thin. Competitors? Plenty. Or buyers who don't like loose ends." They reached a stall draped in black cloth, symbols matching the compass face. Harlow lifted the fabric—empty, but residue shimmered on the wood, like oil on water. Her light caught it: iridescent, shifting. Not paint. "What is this?" "Essence." Eva's voice whispered. "From a rift. Touch it, you see things." Harlow's gloved finger brushed it. The platform blurred— shadows detached, forms slinking between crates, eyes like coals. She yanked back, breath sharp. Illusion? Or real? The compass in her pocket warmed, needle spinning wild. "See?" Eva gripped her arm. "Not robbery. Summoning gone wrong. Hale tried closing a rift, someone—or something—stopped him." Harlow shook her off, bearing rigid. Visions of Morris returned, swallowed by dark. Evidence piled: contained blood, displaced body, vanishing killer, humming walls. Mundane killer wouldn't leave traces that defied physics. She drew her sidearm, aimed at the alcove gap. "If this is your world bleeding in, Kowalski, it ends here. Call your friends—Aurora's lot. They know this place." Eva's eyes widened behind glasses. "Quinn, you don't—" A low rumble echoed from the gap, dust cascading. The needle locked south, toward the sound. Harlow's watch stopped ticking.
created_at"2026-02-20T19:24:58.628Z" 2/20/2026, 7:24:58 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences32
tagDensity0.344
leniency0.688
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.63% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1485
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"lazily"
count1
highlights
0"lazily"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Marcus"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
32.66% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1485
totalAiIsms20
found
0
word"gloom"
count1
1
word"footsteps"
count1
2
word"echoed"
count2
3
word"perfect"
count1
4
word"familiar"
count1
5
word"tension"
count1
6
word"scanning"
count1
7
word"reminder"
count1
8
word"etched"
count1
9
word"standard"
count1
10
word"weight"
count1
11
word"traced"
count1
12
word"jaw clenched"
count1
13
word"spectral"
count1
14
word"pulse"
count1
15
word"racing"
count1
16
word"flicked"
count1
17
word"shimmered"
count1
18
word"cascading"
count1
highlights
0"gloom"
1"footsteps"
2"echoed"
3"perfect"
4"familiar"
5"tension"
6"scanning"
7"reminder"
8"etched"
9"standard"
10"weight"
11"traced"
12"jaw clenched"
13"spectral"
14"pulse"
15"racing"
16"flicked"
17"shimmered"
18"cascading"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
1"jaw clenched"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences108
matches(empty)
89.95% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount4
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences108
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences128
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen44
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1457
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions47
wordCount999
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.8
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Harlow18
Quinn1
Tube1
Camden1
Veil1
Market1
Eva16
Kowalski1
British1
Museum1
Aurora2
Morris3
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Eva"
3"Kowalski"
4"Museum"
5"Aurora"
6"Morris"
places(empty)
globalScore0.599
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences75
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like junk—vials, amulets, brass co"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.686
wordCount1457
matches
0"not north, but toward a shadowed alcove at the platform's edge"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences128
matches
0"carrying that ozone"
91.44% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs30
mean48.57
std22.83
cv0.47
sampleLengths
067
197
255
369
450
558
697
764
851
974
1043
1150
1232
1347
1453
1555
1629
1786
1813
1958
2031
2136
2253
2338
2412
2534
2618
2759
288
2920
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences108
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs202
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount13
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences14
totalSentences128
ratio0.109
matches
0"The air thickened with the scent of mold and something sharper—ozone, like a storm trapped underground."
1"The platform stretched out, littered with crates stamped in languages she didn't recognize—runes, maybe, or just faded export marks."
2"This wasn't just any derelict station; whispers in the precinct had called it the Veil Market, a myth for occult nuts."
3"But bodies didn't lie, and the report on her phone described one: male, mid-thirties, throat slashed, found amid stalls of what looked like junk—vials, amulets, brass contraptions."
4"Last time they'd crossed paths, she'd been digging into that clique— the one with the girl, Aurora, and their shady dealings."
5"Slashing throats usually sent red everywhere—walls, floor, the killer's shoes."
6"Wounds shallow, precise, but the throat gash—clean, almost surgical."
7"She pressed a palm against one—cold, vibrating faintly."
8"Eva's research, Aurora's crew—Harlow's gut screamed connection."
9"She shone her light inside—empty, save for scuff marks in the silt, leading deeper."
10"Morris's case flashed— unexplained shadows, partner gone without a trace."
11"Hands empty— but the compass was on the ground nearby."
12"Harlow lifted the fabric—empty, but residue shimmered on the wood, like oil on water."
13"The platform blurred— shadows detached, forms slinking between crates, eyes like coals."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1015
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.023645320197044337
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.007881773399014778
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences128
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences128
mean11.38
std8.4
cv0.738
sampleLengths
018
120
216
313
415
519
615
721
827
99
1012
1118
124
1310
141
151
1612
1729
1819
199
204
218
2221
2317
2410
2534
2614
2711
2815
291
3010
319
326
3315
344
3526
364
3712
3817
3911
4020
419
4242
4311
4421
4516
467
479
483
492
83.33% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.5
totalSentences128
uniqueOpeners64
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences99
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount23
totalSentences99
matches
0"Her worn leather watch ticked"
1"She pushed through a chain-link"
2"His eyes stared up, wide"
3"She gestured at the victim,"
4"She pulled on gloves, leaned"
5"Her military bearing kept her"
6"She circled the body, boot"
7"She ignored it, focused on"
8"His hands clean, nails unbroken."
9"She traced its edge with"
10"She glanced at Eva, who"
11"She pressed a palm against"
12"It shifted, revealing a narrow"
13"She shone her light inside—empty,"
14"She pulled the compass from"
15"It ticked, almost audible, syncing"
16"She stepped back, mind racing."
17"She stood, facing Eva."
18"She waved him off."
19"They reached a stall draped"
ratio0.232
40.81% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount83
totalSentences99
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn descended the"
1"Her worn leather watch ticked"
2"The air thickened with the"
3"Footsteps echoed ahead, sharp and"
4"She pushed through a chain-link"
5"The platform stretched out, littered"
6"Shadows clung to the walls,"
7"This wasn't just any derelict"
8"Uniforms milled near the center,"
9"Harlow's boots scraped against cracked"
10"The victim lay sprawled beside"
11"His eyes stared up, wide"
12"A voice cut through the"
13"Eva Kowalski stepped from behind"
14"Harlow's sharp jaw tightened."
15"Eva worked the British Museum's"
16"Eva adjusted her satchel, green"
17"She gestured at the victim,"
18"Harlow crouched beside the tape,"
19"The blood arc gleamed under"
ratio0.838
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences99
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences42
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"She pushed through a chain-link barrier, warped as if something heavy had rammed it aside."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
56.25% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Harlow repeated (repeat)"
1"Eva pressed (press)"
2"Eva's voice whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences32
tagDensity0.094
leniency0.188
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.188
79.5912%