| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 17 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Rourke offered helpfully [helpfully]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 45 | | tagDensity | 0.378 | | leniency | 0.756 | | rawRatio | 0.059 | | effectiveRatio | 0.044 | |
| 91.20% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1136 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 38.38% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1136 | | totalAiIsms | 14 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "throbbed" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "echoing" | | 4 | "weight" | | 5 | "etched" | | 6 | "traced" | | 7 | "unwavering" | | 8 | "silence" | | 9 | "gloom" | | 10 | "gleaming" | | 11 | "flicker" | | 12 | "unreadable" | | 13 | "eyebrow" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 102 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 102 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 130 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 31 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 4 | | markdownWords | 4 | | totalWords | 1134 | | ratio | 0.004 | | matches | | 0 | "missing" | | 1 | "below" | | 2 | "above" | | 3 | "brought" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 11 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 44 | | wordCount | 749 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 2.4 | | worstName | "Harlow" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 5 | | worstWindowName | "Harlow" | | discoveredNames | | Tube | 1 | | Town | 1 | | Saturday | 1 | | Rourke | 8 | | Veil | 2 | | Market | 4 | | Camden | 2 | | Harlow | 18 | | Quinn | 6 | | Compass | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rourke" | | 1 | "Market" | | 2 | "Harlow" | | 3 | "Quinn" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.298 | | windowScore | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 58 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "colours that seemed to absorb the light" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1134 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 130 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 49 | | mean | 23.14 | | std | 15.69 | | cv | 0.678 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 69 | | 1 | 37 | | 2 | 63 | | 3 | 38 | | 4 | 54 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 33 | | 7 | 19 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 41 | | 11 | 35 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 36 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 15 | | 18 | 41 | | 19 | 20 | | 20 | 24 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 39 | | 23 | 27 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 25 | | 27 | 45 | | 28 | 13 | | 29 | 21 | | 30 | 22 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 28 | | 33 | 36 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 36 | | 37 | 21 | | 38 | 35 | | 39 | 12 | | 40 | 22 | | 41 | 12 | | 42 | 20 | | 43 | 2 | | 44 | 18 | | 45 | 26 | | 46 | 30 | | 47 | 11 | | 48 | 16 |
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| 98.38% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 102 | | matches | | 0 | "was etched" | | 1 | "been brought" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 127 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 1 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 1 | | totalSentences | 130 | | ratio | 0.008 | | matches | | 0 | "A single, bare bulb cast a sickly yellow glow across the scene – a small circle of unnerving clarity in a vast, echoing darkness." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 750 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 25 | | adverbRatio | 0.03333333333333333 | | lyAdverbCount | 12 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.016 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 130 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 130 | | mean | 8.72 | | std | 5.96 | | cv | 0.684 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 13 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 16 | | 3 | 24 | | 4 | 15 | | 5 | 9 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 8 | | 8 | 31 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 7 | | 11 | 1 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 2 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 12 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 20 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 26 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 16 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 8 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 1 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 1 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 7 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 77.95% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.47692307692307695 | | totalSentences | 130 | | uniqueOpeners | 62 | |
| 37.88% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "Suddenly, a voice, sharp and" |
| | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 92.73% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 28 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "He gestured with a gloved" | | 1 | "Her gaze swept the platform," | | 2 | "she stated, her voice clipped" | | 3 | "She approached the body, a" | | 4 | "He wouldn’t have been down" | | 5 | "She crouched, ignoring the crunch" | | 6 | "He wanted this closed, neat," | | 7 | "He shifted his weight." | | 8 | "He indicated a small, tarnished" | | 9 | "It looked ancient, the casing" | | 10 | "She felt a faint thrum" | | 11 | "It had been three hours" | | 12 | "she said, her voice low" | | 13 | "She knew the look." | | 14 | "She’d learned long ago not" | | 15 | "She opened the compass." | | 16 | "she murmured, more to herself" | | 17 | "She examined the platform again" | | 18 | "He hesitated, then nodded, pulling" | | 19 | "He hadn’t walked through here." |
| | ratio | 0.318 | |
| 33.86% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 75 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "The air tasted of dust" | | 1 | "Harlow adjusted the collar of" | | 2 | "Camden Town, above, throbbed with" | | 3 | "A single, bare bulb cast" | | 4 | "DS Rourke stood near the" | | 5 | "He gestured with a gloved" | | 6 | "Harlow didn’t bother looking at" | | 7 | "Her gaze swept the platform," | | 8 | "The Veil Market." | | 9 | "A prickle ran up her" | | 10 | "This wasn’t a random mugging." | | 11 | "she stated, her voice clipped" | | 12 | "She approached the body, a" | | 13 | "He wouldn’t have been down" | | 14 | "She crouched, ignoring the crunch" | | 15 | "The defensive wounds were superficial," | | 16 | "A clean strike to the" | | 17 | "Rourke’s voice held a note" | | 18 | "He wanted this closed, neat," | | 19 | "Harlow ran a gloved finger" |
| | ratio | 0.852 | |
| 56.82% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "Even knowing it existed didn't" |
| | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 22 | | technicalSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Her gaze swept the platform, taking in the chipped tiles, the faded advertisements clinging to the walls like ghosts, the elaborate graffiti swirling with colou…" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 17 | | uselessAdditionCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "she stated, her voice clipped" | | 1 | "she said, her voice low" | | 2 | "she murmured, more to herself than to Rourke" | | 3 | "she said, her voice raspy" | | 4 | "Quinn asked, her sharp jaw tight" | | 5 | "Harlow met, refusing to back down" | | 6 | "Harlow said, her fingers tightening around the Veil Compass," |
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| 83.33% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she stated (state)" | | 1 | "she murmured (murmur)" | | 2 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 45 | | tagDensity | 0.178 | | leniency | 0.356 | | rawRatio | 0.375 | | effectiveRatio | 0.133 | |